(共26张PPT)
Reading for Writing
B2U2
What do you think about the animals when you see these pictures
Graceful
Lovely
Attractive
Warming-up
Ugly
Frightening
Unttractive
Suppose you are asked to protect one of them, which one would you like to choose And why
Warming-up
The alarming situation of wildlife
illegal hunting
wildlife species loss
unreasonable eating habit
appearance prejudice
habitat destruction
Lead-in
Which emotions do the photos communicate
I think it’s….
surprising
frightening
sad
…
funny
Pre-reading
images
titles
contents
While-reading
Activ.1 Skimming
image
title
body
simple
theme-related
eye-catching
easy-understanding
interesting
attractive
What are the characteristics of the image, title and content
personification;
exclamatory sentence(感叹句);
attractive
unusual
powerful
Activ.2 Scanning
When it comes to wildlife protection, all species-the good, the bad, and the ugly-should be treated equally. Pandas, dolphins and other cute wildlife are important, but we must pay attention to less cute animals, too The world needs all kinds-without variety our planet cannot survive. So if you want the future to be beautiful, you have to give ugly a chance.
2.What is the main idea of Poster 1
topic sentence
conclusion
Billions of trees are being cut down every year to make paper for humans. Every tree that is cut down is a part of the habitat of animals such as these koalas. In this way a lot of animal homes are being destroyed! Is it right to make animals homeless so that humans can have more paper
topic sentence
3.What is the main idea of Poster 2
How do posters stir up emotions
image
title
body
simple
theme- related
eye-catching
easy-understanding
interesting
attractive
attractive
personification
exclamatory sentence
brief
clear
easy-understanding
powerful
convincing
thought-provoking
rhetorical question
unusual
powerful
Post-reading Summary
Poster
Activ.1
Choose one of the animals below or one of your own. Do some research to add to the animal fact sheet.
Pre-writing
South China Tiger
Why is it endangered Hunted for its skin and fur.
What is being done A plan is being carried out to increase the number of wild tigers.
What can we do Do not buy fur or other tiger products!
Yangtze River Dolphin
Why is it endangered Habitat loss and pollution.
What is being done Reserves are being built for them, and they are being searched for in the wild.
What can we do Clean up the rivers!
Write a title that is simple, interesting, powerful and easy-understanding, and then collect the information you need.
Write the name of the species and why it is endangered.
Use a powerful image to attract the readers’ attention to the facts and problems
Tell the readers what you want to think and do.
1
2
4
3
Pre-writing
Activ.2
Follow these steps to organise your poster.
Write a title that is simple, interesting, powerful and easy-understanding, and then collect the information you need.
1
Stop ________ fur, start _____________ tigers!
While-writing
buying
protecting
Write the name of the species and why it is endangered.
2
When it comes to tigers, people ________________________.
(称之为“森林之王) But now they are in danger! Particularly, the South China Tiger _______________________________.(被捕获以获取其皮毛) There is no South China Tiger in the wild. ______________________________. (地球上仅剩30-80只)
regard it as “the King of forest”
was often hunted for its skin and fur
There are 30-80 tigers living on the earth.
Use a powerful image to attract the readers’ attention to the facts and problems
3
Luckily, a plan is being carried out to increase the number of wild tigers. __________________________________________
_____________ (每个人都应该为保护华南虎做贡献) _________________(不要购买)fur or other products!
4
Tell the readers what you want to think and do.
As for individuals, everyone can make contributions
Please do not buy
to protecting it!
Stop buying fur, start protecting tigers!
When it comes to tigers, people regard it as “the King of forest”. But now they are in danger! Particularly, the South China Tiger was often hunted for its skin and fur. There is no South China Tiger in the wild. There are 30-80 tigers living on the earth.
Luckily, a plan is being carried out to increase the number of wild tigers. As for individuals, everyone can make contributions to protecting it! Please do not buy fur or other products!
eye-catching, theme-realted
exclamatory sentence; easy-understanding; attractive
powerful;
thought-provoking
Write a poster about Yangtze River Dolphin
by yourself!
Activ.3
While-writing
While-writing
Yangtze River Dolphin
Why is it endangered Habitat loss and pollution.
What is being done Reserves are being built for them, and they are being searched for in the wild.
What can we do Clean up the rivers!
①The title:______________________________
②The image:Use a powerful image of a dolphin to attract the readers’ attention.
③The body:Make a brief introduction of dolphin and tell the readers ________________________________________.
GROUP DISCUSSION
英语书面表达评分标准
第五档(很好) 1.覆盖所有内容要点;2.语法或词汇方面有些许错误;3.有效地使用了语句间的成分,使全文结构紧凑。
第四档(好) 1.漏掉一个要点,但覆盖所有内容;2.语法词汇基本正确,些许错误;3.应用句间连接紧凑,句子表达顺畅。
第三档(适当) 1.漏掉一些内容,但覆盖主要内容;2.语法词汇单调,但不影响理解;3.句子间较连贯性。
第二档(较差) 1.漏掉或没描述清楚主要内容;2.语法词汇单调,错误影响理解;3.句子间缺乏连贯性。
第一档(差) 1.明显漏要点,写无关内容;2.未理解题目要求,缺连贯性。
Post-writing
Show and evaluate your work
Activ.4
Activ.5
Exchange posters with another pair. Use this checklist to give them helpful feedback.
Post-writing
□1.Does the poster include key information about the animal
□2.Does the poster explain why the animal is endangered
□3.Does the poster support its information with facts
□4.Is the message of the poster clear, i.e. can you tell clearly what the designer wants the reader to think or do
□5.Is the image on the poster effective?
Post-writing
Do You Want to See Us Again
We are called Yangtze River dolphins and mainly live in the middle and lower reaches of the Yangtze River and Dongting Lake, Poyang Lake, Qiantang River waters, etc. Our habitats are becoming smaller and smaller due to pollution, so our population is reducing rapidly now and we haven't been seen for nearly 20 years. Fortunately, reserves are being built for us and we are being searched for in the wild. Do you want to see usagain Clean up the rivers now!
Sample Writing
Watch a video
We established the “Wildlife Conservation Society”.
We stand for wildlife!
学校学生会将于下周五举行一场关于野生动植物保护的英文讲座,假设你是学生会主席李华,请你根据以下信息写一份英文通知。
1)讲座时间:下周五晚上7:00-9:00; 讲座地点:学校报告厅school lecture hall
讲座内容:学校将邀请Professor David讲解野生动植物保护的知识、方法及重要性。
2)要求:请想要参加的学生于讲座开始前半小时到报告厅签到;
讲座期间请保持安静。
注意:可适当增加细节;词数80左右,注意格式;多用本学期的用词用句。
body part
requirements
polite language
structure
Assignment
thank
you!