Unit 4 Section Ⅲ Developing ideas & Presenting ideas
【学习目标】
1.了解课文大意,培养略读和查读等阅读能力。(语言能力,思维品质)
2.理解并能够自主运用重要语言点。(语言能力)
3.通过阅读教材熟悉英语演讲稿的写作特征,并掌握其写作方法及策略。(语言能力,学习能力)
【合作探究】
语篇研读
Step 1 文本整体理解,关注布局谋篇
Skim the passage on Pages 44-45 and fill in the blanks.
答案 1.background 2.divided 3.brought forth 4.gave their lives
Step 2 细读课文,明确教材细节
Read the passage on Pages 44-45 carefully and choose the best answers.
1.Why did Lincoln give this speech
A.To help shape a nation.
B.In memory of the soldiers who had died.
C.To help people in Gettysburg, Pennsylvania.
D.In memory of the people who had died in his hometown.
2.How long did the American Civil War last
A.For two years. B.For three days.
C.For a year. D.For two months.
3.What was the main point of Lincoln's speech
A.Helping the living.
B.The reason why the soldiers died.
C.The gradual realization of human equality.
D.The suffering people are undergoing.
4.What was the purpose of the Civil War according to Lincoln
A.To see if we're right.
B.To see if a nation can last.
C.To bury the dead soldiers.
D.To meet on the battlefield.
5.What did Lincoln call on people to do at last
A.To forget the dead soldiers.
B.To remember what he said.
C.To give their lives for the country.
D.To finish the unfinished business of the dead soldiers.
答案 1~5 BACBD
核 心 单 词
知识点1 mount v.走上;登上;骑上(马、自行车等);逐步增加;组织开展
(P44)On a grey afternoon on 19 November 1863, a tall, thin man mounted a platform in a field in Gettysburg, Pennsylvania and began to speak.1863年11月19日,一个天空灰蒙蒙的下午,在宾夕法尼亚州葛底斯堡的一块空地上,一个高大瘦削的男人登上了讲台,开始演说。
知识拓展
mount stairs 走上台阶
mount the stage 登上舞台
mount a horse 骑上马
mount a protest/campaign 发起抗议/运动
mount an exhibition 举办展览
经典佳句
When I first mounted the Great Wall, I could hardly find words to express how beautiful the scenery was.当我第一次登上长城的时候,我几乎找不到任何语言来表达风景有多美。
融会应用 写出下列句子中mount的含义
(1)The professor mounted the stage and began to make a speech.
(2)Pressure is mounting on the government to deal with the rise of unemployment.
(3)The gallery has mounted an exhibition of art by a famous female painter.
答案 (1)走上;登上 (2)逐步增加 (3)组织开展
知识点2 engage v.参与;从事;吸引 *engagement n.约会;约定;订婚;聘用
(P45)Now we are engaged in a great civil war, testing whether that nation, or any nation, so conceived, and so dedicated, can long endure.当下我们正深陷于一场大规模的内战之中,它考验着这个国家,或者任何一个生于自由、对上述理想深信不疑的国家,能否长久生存下去。
知识拓展
engage sb in sth 使某人参与某事
engage in 从事;参加
be engaged in (doing) sth 忙于(做)某事
engage sb as 聘任某人做……
get/be engaged to sb 与某人订婚
Anna is engaged in practicing Chinese calligraphy.安娜正忙着练习中国书法。
融会应用 单句填空
(1)He had an (engage) at a restaurant at eight.
(2)Phili got engaged the girl when travelling last winter.
(3)According to the results of the survey, only 15% of people would engage regular exercise.
答案 (1) engagement (2)to (3)in
知识点3 dedicate v.致力于;献身于 *dedicated adj. 献身的;专心致志的 *dedication n. 献身;奉献
(P45)We have come to dedicate a portion of it as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live.我们来到这里,是要把这个战场的一部分土地献给那些为了这个国家存续而献出自己生命的人,作为他们最后的安息之所。
知识拓展
dedicate...to... 致力于……;献身于……
be dedicated to 致力于;献身于;热爱……;专注于
经典佳句
The most honorable thing that I can do is to dedicate myself to my country and strive for my ideal.能够为自己的国家而献身,为实现自己的理想而奋斗,这是我能做的最光荣的事情了。
名师点拨
表示“专心于; 致力于”的短语还有be devoted to、 be lost/engaged/absorbed in、 focus/concentrate on、 fix/concentrate one's attention on等。
融会应用
Ⅰ.用dedicate的正确形式填空
(1)He is highly thought of because of his to education.
(2)His life is to the people.
Ⅱ.同义句改写
He dedicated himself to community activities and was praised by the people around.
(3) (用动词-ing形式作状语改写)
(4) (用动词-ed形式作状语改写)
答案 (1)dedication (2)dedicated (3)Dedicating himself to community activities,he was praised by the people around. (4)Dedicated to community activities,he was praised by the people around.
短 语 句 式
知识点4 bring forth 使产生;使出现
(P45)Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth, upon this continent, a new nation, conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.87年前,我们的先辈在这块大陆上创立了一个新的国家,它孕育于自由之中,献身于人人生而平等的理想。
知识拓展
bring about 造成;引起;带来
bring forward 提出;将……提前
bring down 使……降低;减少;打垮;击败
bring in 介绍;引进;赚得;挣
bring out 生产(新产品);(尤指)出版;使显现;激发
bring up 提出(议题等);抚养;呕吐
经典佳句
These efforts will surely bring forth good fruits.这些努力必将产生良好的结果。
融会应用 单句填空
(1)The government is taking effective measures to bring house prices.
(2)The invention and the use of the computer brought great changes in society.
(3)His job brings 1,000 dollars a month for him.
(4)His father died when he was young, and he was brought by his mother.
(5)I hope to bring my new book in the spring of next year.
答案 (1)down (2)about (3)in (4)up (5)out
知识点5 in particular特别地;尤其是
(P47)For me, Snow's writing, and in particular Red Star over China, is a must-read for anyone with an interest in that period.对我来说,斯诺的作品,尤其是《红星照耀中国》,是任何对那个时期感兴趣的人的必读书目。
知识拓展
be particular about... 对……讲究/挑剔
in general总的说来
in brief简而言之
经典佳句
We need a particular person to help solve the problem. He can't be particular about daily life, food in particular.我们需要一个特别的人来帮忙解决这个问题。他不能对日常生活挑剔, 尤其是食物。
融会应用 单句填空
(1)She loves this song particular.
(2)More local employment will be created, (particular) in service industry.
答案 (1)in (2)particularly
写作探究
介绍人物的演讲稿
本单元写作主题是介绍人物的演讲稿。该类演讲稿属于宣讲辞的一种,主要是向听众介绍一位人物并发表自己的看法。语言应准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
课文范例
素材积累
1.Today, I would like to introduce my teacher, the person I respect most. 今天, 我要介绍我的老师, 我最尊敬的人。
2.As for the person who plays an important role in my life, there is no doubt that he is my beloved teacher.至于在我生命中扮演重要角色的人, 无疑是我敬爱的老师。
3.My teacher, in her 40s, is a senior teacher. She has won many honorary titles.我的老师, 40多岁, 是一名高级教师, 她已获得许多荣誉称号。
4.In her work, she realized that it was important to equip herself with more knowledge.在她的工作中, 她意识到用更多的知识充实自己是很重要的。
5.Therefore, she always finds time to study every day. She gets up early and goes to bed late every day.因此, 她每天总是抽时间学习。她每天起得很早, 睡得很晚。
6.She works hard and instructs her students patiently without complaining.她努力工作, 耐心指导学生, 毫无怨言。
7.Whenever people around are in trouble, they are willing to ask her for help, which makes her respected by all our teachers and students.每当周围的人遇到麻烦时, 他们都愿意向她求助, 这使她受到我们所有老师和学生的尊敬。
8.This is my teacher, a kind, hard-working and aspiring woman. I will always respect her.这就是我的老师, 一个善良、勤劳且上进的女士。我将永远尊重她。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
请根据下表中的信息写一篇演讲稿,介绍一下诺贝尔奖获得者——中国女科学家屠呦呦。
姓名 屠呦呦
主要 经历 1.1930年12月30日出生于浙江宁波; 2.1951年被北京大学录取,主修生药学,于1955年毕业;毕业后一直研究中医; 3.1972年成功发现并制成青蒿素——一种治疗疟疾的药物,并获得多种奖项; 4.2015年10月5日,她被授予诺贝尔生理学或医学奖,成为中国第一位获得诺贝尔奖的女性科学家
总结 我们要向她学习,投身于科学研究
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:生药学 pharmacognosy;中医Traditional Chinese Medicine;青蒿素 artemisinin;疟疾 malaria;诺贝尔生理学或医学奖 the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine
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分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
Step 2 要点翻译
1.词汇翻译
(1) 被录取
(2) 主修
(3) 在……方面取得成功
(4) 致力于
答案 (1)be admitted into (2)major in
(3)succeed in (4)devote oneself to
2.句子翻译
(1)著名的女科学家屠呦呦,1930年12月30日生于浙江宁波。
Tu Youyou, , was born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province on December 30th, 1930.
(2)1951年,她被北京大学录取,主修生药学。
She was admitted into Peking University in 1951, .
(3)1972年,她成功发现并制成青蒿素来治疗疟疾。
In 1972, she succeeded artemisinin to treat malaria.
(4)这使她获得许多奖项。
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(5)我们应该向她学习,投身于科学研究。
We should learn from her and .
答案 (1)a famous female scientist (2)majoring in pharmacognosy (3)in discovering and developing
(4)This made her win many awards. (5)devote ourselves to scientific research
Step 3 句式升级
用定语从句合并上题中的句(3)和句(4)
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答案 In 1972, she succeeded in discovering and developing artemisinin to treat malaria, which made her win many awards.
Step 4 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
Hi, everyone.
Today, I am going to introduce Tu Youyou, a famous female scientist, who was born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province on December 30th, 1930.
In 1951, she was admitted into Peking University, majoring in pharmacognosy. She graduated in 1955. After graduation she has been studying Traditional Chinese Medicine.In 1972, she succeeded in discovering and developing artemisinin to treat malaria, which made her win many awards.She was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine on October 5th, 2015, becoming the first female Chinese scientist to win the Nobel Prize.
We should learn from her and devote ourselves to scientific research.
【随堂检测】
夯实基础
主题写作
假定你是李华,你校将在母亲节这天举办以“感恩父母”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:
1.陈述感恩的原因和方式;
2.提出感恩倡议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:《感恩的心》 Indebted Heart
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua and I'm very honored today to stand here to give my speech.
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Thank you for your listening.
参考范文
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua and I'm very honored today to stand here to give my speech.
Last week our music teacher taught us a song, named Indebted Heart. It tells that we should live with a thankful heart. At that time, I thought of my parents. It's they who give me life, teach me knowledge and make me live happily. I should thank my parents for giving me so much. So how should I pay back the love my parents give me I think the best way is to study well and then be a useful person in society when I grow up.
Thank you for your listening.
【课外拓展】
视野拓展
1.Students should involve themselves in community activities where they can gain experience and grow.学生应该参加社区活动,在活动中他们能够获得经验并成长。
2.To preserve a friend, three things are required:to honor him present, praise him absent, and assist him in his necessities.维持友谊需要三点:当面尊重他,背后赞扬他,需要时帮助他。
3.At this challenging time, we believe this political consensus is vital for Chinese businesses to build confidence to recover and stay strong in the European market.在这个充满挑战的时刻, 我们相信, 这种政治共识对于中国企业重建信心、恢复并保持在欧洲市场的强大地位至关重要。
4.As time went on, the division between the two countries have healed over.随着时间的流逝,两国之间的分歧已经弥合了。
英美文化
美篇导读
《鲁滨逊漂流记》是由丹尼尔·笛福所著的一部长篇小说。该书首次出版于1719年4月25日。这本小说被认为是第一本用英文以日记形式写成的小说,享有英国第一部现实主义长篇小说的头衔。
美篇呈现
CHAPTER 5 Learning to live alone
I still needed a lot of things.“Well,” I said,“I'm going to have to make them.” So,every day,I worked.
First of all, I wanted to make my cave bigger.I carried out stone from the cave,and after many days' hard work I had a large cave in the side of the hill.Then I needed a table and a chair,and that was my next job.I had to work on them for a long time.I also wanted to make places to put all my food,and all my tools and guns.But every time I wanted a piece of wood,I had to cut down a tree.It was long,slow,difficult work,and during the next months I learnt to be very clever with my tools.There was no hurry.I had all the time in the world.
I also went out every day,and I always had my gun with me.Sometimes I killed a wild animal,and then I had meat to eat.
But when it got dark,I had to go to bed because I had no light.I couldn't read or write because I couldn't see.For a long time,I didn't know what to do.But in the end, I learnt how to use the fat of dead animals to make a light.
The weather on my island was usually very hot,and there were often storms and heavy rain.The next June, it rained all the time, and I couldn't go out very often.I was also ill for some weeks, but slowly, I got better.When I was stronger, I began to go out again.The first time I killed a wild animal,and the second time I caught a big turtle.
I was on the island for ten months before I visited other parts of it.During those months I worked hard on my cave and my house and my fence.Now I was ready to find out more about the rest of the island.
First, I walked along the side of a little river.There, I found open ground without trees.Later,I came to more trees with many different fruits.I decided to take a lot of the fruit,and to put it to dry in the sun for a time.Then I could keep it for many months.
That night I went to sleep in a tree for the second time, and the next day I went on with my journey.Soon I came to an opening in the hills.In front of me, everything was green, and there were flowers everywhere.There were also a lot of different birds and animals.I saw that my house was on the worst side of the island.But I didn't want to move from there.It was my home now.I stayed away for three days,and then I came home.But I often went back to the other, greener side of the island.
And so my life went on.Every month I learnt to do or to make something new.But I had troubles and accidents too.Once there was a terrible storm with very heavy rain.The roof of my cave fell in,and nearly killed me!I had to build it up again with many pieces of wood.
第五章 学会独自生活
我仍需要很多东西。“好吧,”我说,“我只能去做出来。”于是,每天,我都工作着。
首先,我想把我的山洞扩大。我从洞里运出石头,经过许多天的艰苦劳动,我在小山的一侧有了一个大的山洞。然后,我需要一张桌子和一把椅子,这便是我接下来的工作。为此,我不得不长时间地干。我还想要找些地方存放我所有的食物,以及我全部的工具和枪支。但是每次我需要一块木板时都不得不砍倒一棵树。这是一项漫长而艰难的工作,在接下来的几个月里我学会熟练地使用工具了。无须焦急。我拥有世界上全部的时间。
我依然每天出去,而且总是随身带枪。有时我杀死一只野兽,然后,我就有肉吃了。
但每到天黑,因为没有灯,我就只好睡觉。由于看不清,我不能读书也没法写字。好长一段时间我不知道做什么。但最终我学会了如何使用死兽的脂肪来点灯。
岛上的天气通常很热,经常有暴风雨。第二年的六月一直在下雨,我经常出不去。我也病了几个星期,但慢慢地我好转了。当我身体更强健时,我又开始外出。第一次我杀了一只野兽,第二次我捕获了一只大海龟。
当我去参观该岛的其他地方时,我在岛上已待了10个月。在那期间,我一直在忙活我的洞穴、我的房子还有我的篱笆。现在我可以进一步了解该岛其他地方的情况了。
首先,我沿着一条小河边前行。在那儿,我发现了
一片没有树木的开阔地。随后,我来到了一片结着各种水果的树林。我决定摘很多果子,把它们放在太阳下晒干一阵。然后我就可以把它们保存很多个月了。
那个晚上,我再一次睡在了树上,第二天便又继续我的旅行。不久,我来到了一个小山洞。在我面前,一片郁郁葱葱,鲜花遍野。还有很多各种各样的鸟类和动物。我明白我的房子是在这个岛的最糟的一侧。但我并不想从那儿搬走。现在那是我的家。我在外待了三天,然后回了家。但我经常回到这岛上更绿的另一边。
我的生活还在继续。每个月我学着制造点新的东西,但总有麻烦,也会出现事故。一次,一场夹着大雨的风暴来临,我山洞的屋顶塌了下来,差点就要了我的命!我不得不用很多块木材把它重新建好。
知识积累
make places 腾出地方
素养链接
丹尼尔·笛福(Daniel Defoe),英国作家,英国启蒙时期现实主义小说的奠基人。其作品主要以个人通过努力,靠自己的智慧和勇敢战胜困难为构架。情节曲折,采用自述方式,可读性强,并表现了当时追求冒险,倡导个人奋斗的社会风气。其代表作《鲁滨逊漂流记》闻名于世,鲁滨逊也成为与困难抗争的典型模范。
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Unit 4 Breaking boundaries
Section Ⅲ Developing ideas & Presenting ideas
1.了解课文大意，培养略读和查读等阅读能力。（语言能力，思维品质）
2.理解并能够自主运用重要语言点。（语言能力）
3.通过阅读教材熟悉英语演讲稿的写作特征，并掌握其写作方法及策略。（语言能力，学习能力）
Step 1 文本整体理解，关注布局谋篇
Skim the passage on Pages 44-45 and fill in the blanks.
background
divided
brought forth
gave their lives
Step 2 细读课文，明确教材细节
Read the passage on Pages 44-45 carefully and choose the best answers.
1.Why did Lincoln give this speech ( )
B
A.To help shape a nation.
B.In memory of the soldiers who had died.
C.To help people in Gettysburg， Pennsylvania.
D.In memory of the people who had died in his hometown.
2.How long did the American Civil War last ( )
A
A.For two years. B.For three days. C.For a year. D.For two months.
3.What was the main point of Lincoln's speech ( )
C
A.Helping the living. B.The reason why the soldiers died.
C.The gradual realization of human equality. D.The suffering people are undergoing.
4.What was the purpose of the Civil War according to Lincoln ( )
B
A.To see if we're right. B.To see if a nation can last.
C.To bury the dead soldiers. D.To meet on the battlefield.
5.What did Lincoln call on people to do at last ( )
D
A.To forget the dead soldiers.
B.To remember what he said.
C.To give their lives for the country.
D.To finish the unfinished business of the dead soldiers.
核心单词
知识点1 mount v.走上；登上；骑上（马、自行车等）；逐步增加；组织开展
（P44）On a grey afternoon on 19 November 1863， a tall， thin man mounted a platform in a field in Gettysburg， Pennsylvania and began to speak.1863年11月19日，一个天空灰蒙蒙的下午，在宾夕法尼亚州葛底斯堡的一块空地上，一个高大瘦削的男人登上了讲台，开始演说。
知识拓展
mount stairs 走上台阶
mount the stage 登上舞台
mount a horse 骑上马
mount a protest/campaign 发起抗议/运动
mount an exhibition 举办展览
经典佳句
When I first mounted the Great Wall， I could hardly find words to express how beautiful the scenery was.当我第一次登上长城的时候，我几乎找不到任何语言来表达风景有多美。
融会应用 写出下列句子中mount的含义
（1）The professor mounted the stage and began to make a speech.____________
走上；登上
（2）Pressure is mounting on the government to deal with the rise of
unemployment.__________
逐步增加
（3）The gallery has mounted an exhibition of art by a famous female
painter.__________
组织开展
知识点2 engage v.参与；从事；吸引 ＊engagement n.约会；约定；订婚；聘用
（P45）Now we are engaged in a great civil war， testing whether that nation， or any nation， so conceived， and so dedicated， can long endure.当下我们正深陷于一场大规模的内战之中，它考验着这个国家，或者任何一个生于自由、对上述理想深信不疑的国家，能否长久生存下去。
知识拓展
engage sb in sth 使某人参与某事
engage in 从事；参加
be engaged in （doing） sth 忙于（做）某事
engage sb as 聘任某人做……
get/be engaged to sb 与某人订婚
图解释义
Anna is engaged in practicing Chinese calligraphy.安娜正忙着练习中国书法。
融会应用 单句填空
（1）He had an___________（engage） at a restaurant at eight.
engagement
（2）Phili got engaged ___the girl when travelling last winter.
to
（3）According to the results of the survey， only 15% of people would engage___
regular exercise.
in
知识点3 dedicate v.致力于；献身于 ＊dedicated adj.献身的；专心致志的 ＊dedication n.献身；奉献
（P45）We have come to dedicate a portion of it as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live.我们来到这里，是要把这个战场的一部分土地献给那些为了这个国家存续而献出自己生命的人，作为他们最后的安息之所。
知识拓展
dedicate...to... 致力于……；献身于……
be dedicated to 致力于；献身于；热爱……；专注于
经典佳句
The most honorable thing that I can do is to dedicate myself to my country and strive for my ideal.能够为自己的国家而献身，为实现自己的理想而奋斗，这是我能做的最光荣的事情了。
名师点拨
表示“专心于； 致力于”的短语还有be devoted to、 be lost/engaged/absorbed in、 focus/concentrate on、 fix/concentrate one's attention on等。
融会应用
Ⅰ.用dedicate的正确形式填空
（1）He is highly thought of because of his __________to education.
dedication
（2）His life is _________to the people.
dedicated
Ⅱ.同义句改写
He dedicated himself to community activities and was praised by the people around.
（3）______________________________________________________________________
_______（用动词-ing形式作状语改写）
Dedicating himself to community activities，he was praised by the people around.
（4）_________________________________________________________________（用
动词-ed形式作状语改写）
Dedicated to community activities，he was praised by the people around.
短语句式
知识点4 bring forth 使产生；使出现
（P45）Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth， upon this continent， a new nation， conceived in Liberty， and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.87年前，我们的先辈在这块大陆上创立了一个新的国家，它孕育于自由之中，献身于人人生而平等的理想。
知识拓展
bring about 造成；引起；带来
bring forward 提出；将……提前
bring down 使……降低；减少；打垮；击败
bring in 介绍；引进；赚得；挣
bring out 生产（新产品）；（尤指）出版；使显现；激发
bring up 提出（议题等）；抚养；呕吐
经典佳句
These efforts will surely bring forth good fruits.这些努力必将产生良好的结果。
融会应用 单句填空
（1）The government is taking effective measures to bring ______ house prices.
down
（2）The invention and the use of the computer brought ______great changes in
society.
about
（3）His job brings___1，000 dollars a month for him.
in
（4）His father died when he was young， and he was brought ____by his mother.
up
（5）I hope to bring ____my new book in the spring of next year.
out
知识点5 in particular 特别地；尤其是
（P47）For me, Snow's writing, and in particular Red Star over China, is a must-read for anyone with an interest in that period.对我来说，斯诺的作品，尤其是《红星照耀中国》，是任何对那个时期感兴趣的人的必读书目。
知识拓展
be particular about... 对……讲究/挑剔
in general总的说来
in brief简而言之
经典佳句
We need a particular person to help solve the problem. He can't be particular about daily life, food in particular.我们需要一个特别的人来帮忙解决这个问题。他不能对日常生活挑剔, 尤其是食物。
融会应用 单句填空
（1）She loves this song___ particular.
in
（2）More local employment will be created, ___________（particular） in service
industry.
particularly
介绍人物的演讲稿
本单元写作主题是介绍人物的演讲稿。该类演讲稿属于宣讲辞的一种，主要是向听众介绍一位人物并发表自己的看法。语言应准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
课文范例
素材积累
1.Today， I would like to introduce my teacher， the person I respect most. 今天， 我要介绍我的老师， 我最尊敬的人。
2.As for the person who plays an important role in my life， there is no doubt that he is my beloved teacher.至于在我生命中扮演重要角色的人， 无疑是我敬爱的老师。
3.My teacher， in her 40s， is a senior teacher. She has won many honorary titles.我的老师， 40多岁， 是一名高级教师， 她已获得许多荣誉称号。
4.In her work， she realized that it was important to equip herself with more knowledge.在她的工作中， 她意识到用更多的知识充实自己是很重要的。
5.Therefore， she always finds time to study every day. She gets up early and goes to bed late every day.因此， 她每天总是抽时间学习。她每天起得很早， 睡得很晚。
6.She works hard and instructs her students patiently without complaining.她努力工作， 耐心指导学生， 毫无怨言。
7.Whenever people around are in trouble， they are willing to ask her for help， which makes her respected by all our teachers and students.每当周围的人遇到麻烦时， 他们都愿意向她求助， 这使她受到我们所有老师和学生的尊敬。
8.This is my teacher， a kind， hard-working and aspiring woman. I will always respect her.这就是我的老师， 一个善良、勤劳且上进的女士。我将永远尊重她。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
请根据下表中的信息写一篇演讲稿，介绍一下诺贝尔奖获得者——中国女科学家屠呦呦。
姓名 屠呦呦
主要 经历 1.1930年12月30日出生于浙江宁波；
2．1951年被北京大学录取，主修生药学，于1955年毕业；毕业后一直研究中
医；
3．1972年成功发现并制成青蒿素——一种治疗疟疾的药物，并获得多种奖
项；
4．2015年10月5日，她被授予诺贝尔生理学或医学奖，成为中国第一位获得诺
贝尔奖的女性科学家
总结 我们要向她学习，投身于科学研究
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：生药学 pharmacognosy；中医Traditional Chinese Medicine；青蒿素
artemisinin；疟疾 malaria；诺贝尔生理学或医学奖 the Nobel Prize in Physiology or
Medicine______________________
分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
Step 2 要点翻译
1.词汇翻译
（1）________________被录取
be admitted into
（2）_________主修
major in
（3）___________在……方面取得成功
succeed in
（4）________________致力于
devote oneself to
2.句子翻译
（1）著名的女科学家屠呦呦，1930年12月30日生于浙江宁波。
Tu Youyou，_______________________， was born in Ningbo， Zhejiang Province
on December 30th， 1930.
a famous female scientist
（2）1951年，她被北京大学录取，主修生药学。
She was admitted into Peking University in 1951， _________________________.
majoring in pharmacognosy
（3）1972年，她成功发现并制成青蒿素来治疗疟疾。
In 1972， she succeeded ___________________________artemisinin to treat malaria.
in discovering and developing
（4）这使她获得许多奖项。
_______________________________
This made her win many awards.
（5）我们应该向她学习，投身于科学研究。
We should learn from her and __________________________________.
devote ourselves to scientific research
Step 3 句式升级
用定语从句合并上题中的句（3）和句（4）
___________________________________________________________________________
________________________________
In 1972， she succeeded in discovering and developing artemisinin to treat malaria， which made her win many awards.
Step 4 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子，加上恰当的连接词和过渡句，必要时可以改变句式，使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
Hi， everyone.
Today， I am going to introduce Tu Youyou， a famous female scientist， who was born in Ningbo， Zhejiang Province on December 30th， 1930.
In 1951， she was admitted into Peking University， majoring in pharmacognosy. She graduated in 1955. After graduation she has been studying Traditional Chinese Medicine. In 1972， she succeeded in discovering and developing artemisinin to treat malaria， which made her win many awards. She was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine on October 5th， 2015， becoming the first female Chinese scientist to win the Nobel Prize.
We should learn from her and devote ourselves to scientific research.
主题写作
假定你是李华，你校将在母亲节这天举办以“感恩父母”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容包括:
1.陈述感恩的原因和方式；
2.提出感恩倡议。
注意:1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:《感恩的心》 Indebted Heart
Good morning， everyone!
My name is Li Hua and I'm very honored today to stand here to give my speech.
___
Thank you for your listening.
参考范文
Good morning， everyone!
My name is Li Hua and I'm very honored today to stand here to give my speech.
Last week our music teacher taught us a song， named Indebted Heart. It tells that we should live with a thankful heart. At that time， I thought of my parents. It's they who give me life， teach me knowledge and make me live happily. I should thank my parents for giving me so much. So how should I pay back the love my parents give me I think the best way is to study well and then be a useful person in society when I grow up.
Thank you for your listening.
1.Students should involve themselves in community activities where they can gain experience and grow.学生应该参加社区活动，在活动中他们能够获得经验并成长。
2.To preserve a friend， three things are required：to honor him present， praise him absent， and assist him in his necessities.维持友谊需要三点：当面尊重他，背后赞扬他，需要时帮助他。
3.At this challenging time， we believe this political consensus is vital for Chinese businesses to build confidence to recover and stay strong in the European market.在这个充满挑战的时刻， 我们相信， 这种政治共识对于中国企业重建信心、恢复并保持在欧洲市场的强大地位至关重要。
4.As time went on, the division between the two countries have healed over.随着时间的流逝，两国之间的分歧已经弥合了。
美篇导读
《鲁滨逊漂流记》是由丹尼尔·笛福所著的一部长篇小说。该书首次出版于1719年4月25日。这本小说被认为是第一本用英文以日记形式写成的小说，享有英国第一部现实主义长篇小说的头衔。
美篇呈现
CHAPTER 5 Learning to live alone
I still needed a lot of things.“Well，” I said，“I'm going to have to make them.” So，every day，I worked.
First of all， I wanted to make my cave bigger. I carried out stone from the cave，and after many days' hard work I had a large cave in the side of the hill. Then I needed a table and a chair，and that was my next job. I had to work on them for a long time. I also wanted to make places to put all my food，and all my tools and guns. But every time I wanted a piece of wood，I had to cut down a tree.
It was long，slow，difficult work，and during the next months I learnt to be very clever with my tools. There was no hurry. I had all the time in the world.
I also went out every day，and I always had my gun with me. Sometimes I killed a wild animal，and then I had meat to eat.
But when it got dark，I had to go to bed because I had no light. I couldn't read or write because I couldn't see. For a long time，I didn't know what to do. But in the end， I learnt how to use the fat of dead animals to make a light.
The weather on my island was usually very hot，and there were often storms and heavy rain. The next June， it rained all the time， and I couldn't go out very
often. I was also ill for some weeks， but slowly， I got better. When I was stronger， I began to go out again. The first time I killed a wild animal，and the second time I caught a big turtle.
I was on the island for ten months before I visited other parts of it. During those months I worked hard on my cave and my house and my fence. Now I was ready to find out more about the rest of the island.
First， I walked along the side of a little river. There， I found open ground without trees. Later，I came to more trees with many different fruits. I decided to take a lot of the fruit，and to put it to dry in the sun for a time. Then I could keep it for many months.
That night I went to sleep in a tree for the second time， and the next day I went on with my journey. Soon I came to an opening in the hills. In front of me， everything was green， and there were flowers everywhere. There were also a lot of different birds and animals. I saw that my house was on the worst side of the island. But I didn't want to move from there. It was my home now. I stayed away for three days，and then I came home. But I often went back to the other， greener side of the island.
And so my life went on. Every month I learnt to do or to make something new. But I had troubles and accidents too. Once there was a terrible storm with very heavy rain. The roof of my cave fell in，and nearly killed me!I had to build it up again with many pieces of wood.
第五章 学会独自生活
我仍需要很多东西。“好吧，”我说，“我只能去做出来。”于是，每天，我都工作着。
首先，我想把我的山洞扩大。我从洞里运出石头，经过许多天的艰苦劳动，我在小山的一侧有了一个大的山洞。然后，我需要一张桌子和一把椅子，这便是我接下来的工作。为此，我不得不长时间地干。我还想要找些地方存放我所有的食物，以及我全部的工具和枪支。但是每次我需要一块木板时都不得不砍倒一棵树。这是一项漫长而艰难的工作，在接下来的几个月里我学会熟练地使用工具了。无须焦急。我拥有世界上全部的时间。
我依然每天出去，而且总是随身带枪。有时我杀死一只野兽，然后，我就有肉吃了。
但每到天黑，因为没有灯，我就只好睡觉。由于看不清，我不能读书也没法写字。好长一段时间我不知道做什么。但最终我学会了如何使用死兽的脂肪来点灯。
岛上的天气通常很热，经常有暴风雨。第二年的六月一直在下雨，我经常出不去。我也病了几个星期，但慢慢地我好转了。当我身体更强健时，我又开始外出。第一次我杀了一只野兽，第二次我捕获了一只大海龟。
当我去参观该岛的其他地方时，我在岛上已待了10个月。在那期间，我一直在忙活我的洞穴、我的房子还有我的篱笆。现在我可以进一步了解该岛其他地方的情况了。
首先，我沿着一条小河边前行。在那儿，我发现了
一片没有树木的开阔地。随后，我来到了一片结着各种水果的树林。我决定摘很多果子，把它们放在太阳下晒干一阵。然后我就可以把它们保存很多个月了。
那个晚上，我再一次睡在了树上，第二天便又继续我的旅行。不久，我来到了一个小山洞。在我面前，一片郁郁葱葱，鲜花遍野。还有很多各种各样的鸟类和动物。我明白我的房子是在这个岛的最糟的一侧。但我并不想从那儿搬走。现在那是我的家。我在外待了三天，然后回了家。但我经常回到这岛上更绿的另一边。
我的生活还在继续。每个月我学着制造点新的东西，但总有麻烦，也会出现事故。一次，一场夹着大雨的风暴来临，我山洞的屋顶塌了下来，差点就要了我的命！我不得不用很多块木材把它重新建好。
知识积累
make places 腾出地方
素养链接
丹尼尔·笛福（Daniel Defoe），英国作家，英国启蒙时期现实主义小说的奠基人。其作品主要以个人通过努力，靠自己的智慧和勇敢战胜困难为构架。情节曲折，采用自述方式，可读性强，并表现了当时追求冒险，倡导个人奋斗的社会风气。其代表作《鲁滨逊漂流记》闻名于世，鲁滨逊也成为与困难抗争的典型模范。
