Unit 5 Section B 3a-Self check 写作课课件【人教版八下Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?】

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人教八下英语同步精品课件
人教版八年级下册
Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came
Section B 3a-Self check
写作精品课
人教版八下英语同步精品课件
1.掌握下列词汇：point out, go away
掌握句型：While I was walking home from school, I saw a strange light in the sky. But when I pointed it out to my friend, it went away.
When I heard my name, my heart beat so quickly I thought I would stop breathing.
2. 通过同桌对话在3a中把学过的语言用回答问题的形式进行梳理，再按照3b的写作框架提示完整地描写件难忘且重要的事，说明时间、地点、事件过程以及为什么自己记得这么清楚。
3.通过写作指导，能就本单元的话题进行写作。通过写过去的故事激励自己关心生活、关注社会，能辩证地积极地看待它们，形成正确的价值观。
学习目标
Events happen every day.
On April 4, 1968
Dr. Martin Luther King was killed.
Robert was eating dinner wiht his family.
They were completely shocked.
On September 11, 2001
The World Trade Center was taken down.
Kate was working.
She was so scared.
What were you doing when you heard the news
on February 6,2022
on December 19 ,2022
When I heard the news, I was________________________________.
I felt__________________________________________________.
Look at the picture and talk about what they were doing when the plane hit the World Trade Center.
What was/were sb. doing when the plane hit World Trade Center
Sandy
Twin
brothers
Sammy
father
mother
dog
the lockdown of the city of Wuhan on January 23rd
What was the event
The lockdown of the city of Wuhan.
When did it happen
It happened on January 23rd.
Where did it happen
It happened in Wuhan.
What were you doing
When/While…
What were your friends doing
My friends were …..
Why was it important
Because it brought people closer together.
Why do you remember this event
Because my mother went to Wuhan as a voulunteer.
3a
Make notes about an event you remember well.
event
time
place
activities
reasons
Facts (事实情况）
Details (细节信息）
Meaning (意义影响）
3a
Make notes about an event you remember well.
The lockdown of the city of Wuhan.
on January 23rd
in Wuhan
I was doing my homework.
My friends were playing basketball.
Because it brought people closer
together.
Because my mother went to Wuhan
as a voulunteer.
3b
Write a short article about the important event in 3a.
Try to write three paragraphs.
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
use the past progressive tense
use the past progressive tense
what event it was
the time
the reason
the reason
the place
①
②
Facts (事实情况）
Details (细节信息）
③
Meaning (意义影响）
话题分析
本单元的话题是“难忘的事件”，要求同学们学会描述自己或他人过去经历或发生的一件难忘的事。写作时，首先要点明事情发生的时间、地点、人物等；其次详写事情的发展过程；最后阐明令人难忘的原因或自己的感受及看法。写此类作文时，主要以一般过去时和过去进行时为主，写作时要注意正确使用时态。
人称时态
第一人称
一般过去时和过去进行时为主
人称
时态
1. 体裁：本文描述过去发生的事情,故应记叙文。
2. 人称：为第一人称和第三人称。
3. 时态：应以一般过去时和过去进行时为主，
一般现在时为辅。
补充要点：记叙文的六要素（when, where, who,
why, what, how.
审题（三审）
第一段：Introduction (引入)
when时间
event事件
where地点
第二段：
details of the event
(事件的详细过程)
描述当时某事正在进行 was/were doing
做了某事，结果怎样,感受如何 did
第三段：
reasons (原因)
What an unforgettable/unusual day/event!
难以忘记的/不寻常的一天/事件
it tells me that...
写作结构
谋篇布局
an event
开篇点题
具体描述
总结全文
开门见山陈述这件最令你难忘的事件(What, Where, When)
An important event that I remember well was ___________
__________________________________. It happened in/on ___________________ at/in ________________________.
描述当事件发生时你和你的一些朋友正在做什么和感受。(Where, When, What, feelings)
When I heard the news of this event/When this event happened, I was____________________________. My friends were______________.
写出这件事为什么重要的原因。(Why)
This event is very important to me because _____________
__________________________________________________. I remember this event well because _____________________.
of 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games
the opening
on February 4, 2022
Bird Nest in Beijing
having dinner with my parents
watching TV
the first time for China to have the Winter Olympic Games.
it was
we won the most gold medals.
提供素材
语块
watch movie / TV
be surprised / shocked
offer to help
be meaningful
brought people closer
understand the importance of mutual help
句型
It happened in / on ...
I got the news from / on ...
At that time, I was ...
While I was doing, ...
It’s unforgettable because...
As long as ..., we can ...
The important thing that I will never forget is that…
An important event that I remember well was…
It happened in/on…
When…, I was…
While I was doing…, … was/were doing…
He / She was… when…
It was an unforgettable day.
I will never forget… because…
The event has meaning to me because…
开头句
中间句
结尾句
重点句式
范文欣赏
The important event that I can remember well was the opening of 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games. It happened at Bird Nest-The National Stadium(鸟巢-国家体育场) in Beijing on February 4, 2022. This was an important event in Chinese history.
When the opening began, my parents and I were having dinner. My friengs were watching TV.We finished it quickly, then we sat in front of the TV to watch it. It was great.
The 2008 Olympic Games was very important for the Chinese. Because it was the first time for China to have the Winter Olympic Games. It has also made Beijing the world's first city of double Olympics. We won the most gold medals. It showed that our country was becoming stronger and stronger.
(天津中考) 假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟了英文专栏，征集发生在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏投稿。
(1)在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女孩买了面包和牛奶
(2)女孩要离开时，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他看上去又冷又饿
(3)女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。
(4)乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。（5）你很感动……
参考词汇：乞丐beggar 感动be moved
要求：（1）词数：80—100个。（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
审题 体裁 记叙文 话题 身边的感人故事
时态 一般过去时和过去进行时 人称 以第三人称为主
段落 布局 介绍时间、人物 介绍事情的经过 介绍我的感受
时间：on a cold morning
人物：a girl, an old beggar
When the girl was about to leave ...
He looked cold and hungry ...
The girl came up to the beggar ...
The beggar ...
I was moved by ...
I decided to ...
On a cold morning, while I was buying some food for my breakfast, I saw a girl standing in front of me buying some bread and milk. When she was about to leave, she found an old beggar under the tree. He looked cold and hungry. The girl came up to the beggar without thinking twice and gave the food to him. The beggar said thanks to the girl. But the girl said nothing and went away with a smile on her face.
I was moved by what the girl did. I think it was the warmest thing on that cold morning.
范文欣赏
Self Check
1. Fill in the blanks with when or while.
1. _____ I was walking home from school, I saw
a strange light in the sky. But _____ I pointed
it out to my friend, it went away.
2. ______ I told my older brother about the strange light in the sky, he just laughed and didn’t believe me.
3. ______ my brother was laughing, the television news reported that other people had seen the light as well.
While
when
When
While
消失
也 too
Self Check
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
When I ____ (be) in the sixth grade, I ______ (join) a piano competition. I ________ (practice) for four hours every day and my piano teacher _____ (come) three times a week to _____ (help) me. Then the big day finally _______ (arrive). I ____ (be) so nervous when they _____ (call) my name. I _____ (go) up and _______ (start) to play. While I _______________ (play), everyone ____ (sit) still and listened. I played the song without any mistakes. Then I ______ (wait) for them to call out the winner. When I ______ (hear) my name, my heart ____ (beat) so quickly I thought I would stop breathing. I couldn’t believe it. I ____ (win)! It ____ (be) the happiest day of my life!
was
joined
practiced
came
help
arrived
was
called
went
started
was playing
sat
waited
heard
beat
won
was
1、But when I pointed it out to my friend, it went away.
(1) Point out 是“动词+ 副词”的结构，代词作宾语时，只能放在point 与out之间。意为“指出”。
(2) Point to 意为“指向”，所指的物体比较远，point at意为“指着”，所指的物体比较近。
(3) go away 消失；走开；离开
The smell didn’t go away.气味还没消失。You should go away for a while to keep quiet.为了保持安静，你应该离开下。
2. ...the television news reported that other people had seen the light as well.
as well 意为“也”，用于肯定句中，一般放在句末。
He speaks English and French as well. 他也会说英语和法语。
as well, also, too与either的区别
As well表示“也，还”，通常位于肯定句中，多用于口语，只放在句末，其前没有逗号。also用法比too正式，多用于书面语或正式语体中，用于肯定句，放在句中，位于系动词，助动词，情态动词之后，实义动词前。too常于用口语，一般用于肯定句中，也可以用于一般疑问句，放在句末，其前有逗号与前面的句子隔开。either只能用在否定句中，表示“也不”，放在句末，其前用逗号，其后用句号。
一、用括号内单词的适当形式填空
1.Kate didn't think her friend was telling the 　 　(true) about the event.
2.What has happened in Canada 　 　(recent)
3.He had a fight with his best friend, and they walked home in 　 　 (silent).
4.I was too tired and still sleeping when my alarm 　 　(go) off. 5.We were climbing up the mountain when it began to rain 　 　(heavy).
truth
recently
silence
went
heavily
二、根据汉语意思完成下列句子,每空一词
1.昨天晚上发生火灾时你正在干什么
What 　 　 you 　 　when the fire 　 　last night
2.风逐渐变弱, 太阳出来了。
The wind was 　 　 　 　 and the sun came out.
3.这个周末将有一场大雨。
There will be 　 　 　 　 　 　 this weekend.
4. 2008年 8月 8日对中国人来说很有意义。
The date, August 8th, 2008 　 　great 　 　 to Chinese.
5.今天早上我给Tom打电话,但是没人接。
I called Tom this morning, but nobody 　 　 　 　.
were　 doing　 happened
dying　down
a　 heavy　 rain
has　 meaning
picked　up
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