高三下写作语料清单(2024年4月定西一诊) 教师版
假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚网友Julia在邮件中提到,最近的一次考试打击了她的自信心,让她对自己的学习能力产生了怀疑。请你给她回一封邮件,内容包括: 1.表示理解;2.提出建议;3.给予鼓励。
【解题步骤】
①谋篇布局 ②内容要点 ③嵌套文体
开头+目的 表达感同身受的理解 【安慰开头】
正文 开导 自我调整的建议内容 【建议信】+【自我调整内容】
结尾 表达你的鼓励 期待 【建议信结尾】
Who 你和网友Julia What 说明如何改变:调整心态和行动的具体措施
When 一般现在时、一般将来时 Why 失败与成长 (结合阅读B部分表述)
Where 非正式语气 How 建议内容
【基础词块】
抱歉安慰通用开头 安慰同情 信心 期待 鼓励
1.基础的遗憾和同情型I'm truly sorry to hear about what you're going through. 2.关心和担忧型Hearing about your situation, I can't help but feel concerned. 3.同情和共鸣型I can't imagine what you're going through, but I feel your pain and want to**. 4.较正式 同情和共鸣型Sorry to hear that, but I want to extend my deepest cares to you during this difficult time. 5.支持和理解型I understand that you're facing a challenging situation, and I'm here to offer my support and fort, empathy, support, understanding, encouragement self-belief, bounce back, self-improvement, confidence motivation, inspire, expectation, dream, perseverance ambition, You can do it!, Believe in yourself. I have high hopes for you, I'm eagerly awaiting your success. I know you can do it, Keep pushing. Never give up, Keep fighting, Stay strong. Reach for the stars, Follow your dreams. Failure is the stepping stone to success. What doesn't kill you makes you stronger.
学习调整 积极心态 目标设定 压力管理
review, adapt, learn from mistakes, growth mindset(心态) positive attitude, optimism stress management, take a break, self-care, mental health, relaxation set a *** goal achievable long-term small steps, stay focused
【要点拓展】
要点1【开头安慰+感同身受】【将题干关键词进行串联翻译】
I'm so sorry to hear about your recent exam experience. Please know that everyone has setbacks, and it's completely understandable to feel disheartened. Remember,one examdoesn't define your entire learning ability. Therefore,don't worry but just keep calm.
I've heard about the tough time you've had with your recent exams, and I want you to know that I'm here for you. I can truly relate to the stress and disappointment. It's okay to feel down, but remember that one exam doesn't define your entire learning.
It is disheartening to face a setback in exams. I do understand how it feels. But I want to remind you that everyone has their ups and downs, where we can find the strength to go beyong ourselves.
要点2【开导对方+自我调整/重拾信心的建议】
作用/理由套句:You should...///I suggest that you...///Why don't you... /// It might be a good idea to...///If I were you, I would.../It would be beneficial to...+ 表格个别词块
Take some time to reflect on your study habits. Did you have a consistent study schedule Were there any concepts you didn't fully grasp 花些时间反思你的学习习惯。你是否有一个稳定的学习时间表?是否有你没有完全理解的概念?
Identifying areas for improvement can be a great starting point for your next study plan. 找出改进的领域可以是下一个学习计划的一个很好的起点。
Set achievable goals for yourself. 为自己设定可实现的目标。
Break down your study tasks into practical and manageable parts and focus on one topic at a time. 分解你的学习任务为实际的、易于管理的部分,一次专注于一个主题。
Don't hesitate to ask for help.Whether it's a teacher, a tutor, or a classmate, there are people around you who can provide guidance and support. 不要犹豫寻求帮助。无论是老师、家教还是同学,你周围都有可以提供指导和支持的人。
Get involved in sports that you enjoy is a great way to relax 参与你喜欢体育活动是一项放松的好方式
A healthy mindset can not only benefit you but also create a supportive environment for your improvement. 一个健康的心态不仅可以让你受益,还可以为你的进步创造一个支持性的环境。
What matters is that exams are just a part of life, and life is full of ups and downs. 重要的是,考试只是生活的一部分,生活充满了起起落落。
Communicating with a friend can boost your confidence and give you a refreshing break from stress. 和好友一起沟通流可以增强你的信心并从压力中获得提神醒脑的休息。
Reach out to your friends who may have experienced similar challenges, and you will not treat setbacks as a big deal. 联系可能经历过类似挑战的同龄人, 你不会把它当成什么大事。
A supportive network help you realize that you're not alone in this journey. 一个支持的人际网络会让你意识到,在这段旅程中,你并不孤单。
By engaging in social activities and using available resources, you can know yourself from different perspectives, which will not only boost your confidence but also help you succeed in your future academic and professional careers. 通过参与社会活动和利用可用资源,你可以从不同的角度了解自己,这不仅能够提升你的自信,还能帮助你在未来的学术和职业生涯中取得成功。
要点3【表达期待/鼓励】①词块 ②安慰+期盼句式
改变 鼓励 期待 坚持 信心 谚语
transform, adapt, evolve, grow from experience, learn from mistakes inspire, motivate, uplift, cheer on, stay positive look forward to/expect eagerly await... make a difference embrace the challenge and let your strength fly/soar can't wait to see persevere, stay the course, remain steadfast, keep pushing self-confidence, self-assurance, faith in oneself, believe in yourself Never give up, Keep fighting, Stay strong. Reach for the stars, Follow your dreams. Failure is the stepping stone to success. What doesn't kill you makes you stronger.
转变,适应,进化,从经验中成长,从错误中学习 激励,激励,振奋,鼓励,保持积极 期待 热切期待 产生影响 有所作为 拥抱挑战,让你的力量飞翔/翱翔 迫不及待想看 坚持,坚持到底,保持坚定,继续前进 自信,自信,相信自己,相信自己
①期待重拾信心You've always been a dedicated student, and I have no doubt that you'll bounce back stronger, eagerly awaiting your good news. 你一直是一个专注的学生,我毫不怀疑你会更坚强地振作起来,热切地等待你的好消息。
②期待改变Embrace the opportunity to transform this setback into a stepping stone for growth. Remember, we learn from our mistakes and become better versions of ourselves.抓住机会,把挫折变成成长的垫脚石.记住我们从错误中学习,成为更好的自己
③祝福鼓励Stay positive and keep moving forward. You have the power to uplift yourself. Believe in your ability to overcome challenges and achieve success.保持积极, 继续前进。你有能力提升自己。相信自己有能力克服挑战并取得成功。
④谚语鼓励I offer you the proverb, 'Failure is the stepping stone to success.///What doesn't kill you makes you stronger." and eagerly awaiting your good news.我给你推荐这句谚语:“失败是成功的垫脚石”//那些杀不死你的,只会让你更坚强”。并且热切期待你的好消息”
范例 I'm so sorry to hear about your recent exam experience. Please know that everyone has setbacks, and it's completely understandable to feel disheartened. Remember, one examdoesn't define your entire learning ability. Therefore, don't worry but just keep calm.
lt 's during these tough times that we must be kind to ourselves. You should take this asa learning opportunity and believe in your capacity to improve.Stay positive and don't let thisshake your confidence. l suggest you break down your study tasks into manageable parts andtackle them one by one.
You've always been a dedicated student, and I have no doubt that you'll bounce back stronger. I'm here for you, and I believe in you.