2024年人教版九年级英语备战中考书面表达专练
题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达:本大题共10小题,共150分。
1.假设你叫David,你的朋友Chris来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你用英语写一封回信,介绍如何学好中文。80词左右。
Dear Chris,
I m glad to receive your letter. You asked me how to learn Chinese well. ________________
____________________________________________________________________________
2.请阅读Tony从美国发来的电子邮件,并根据所给提示和要求,以李华的名义回复。
Dear Li Hua, How are you doing I’ve been busy since I came back from China. Guess what! I’m learning Chinese cooking, and I really enjoy it. One more thing, I hear you have the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. What’s the date of the festival How do you celebrate Tony
提示:
(1)Ask Tony something about his Chinese cooking.
(2)Answer his questions about the Mid-Autumn Festival.
要求:
(1)邮件须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)邮件中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)不少于80词。
参考词汇: the lunar calendar;moon cake;watch the moon;the symbol of reunion(团圆的象征)
3.假如你叫李华,3月15日下午1:00你去友谊宾馆通知Cindy去听演讲,但Cindy不在。请你给她留个便条,按活动日程简述活动内容,并根据所给路线图写明去科学宫的路线。
时间 明日上午八时
地点 科学宫(the Science Palace)
报告人 北京大学王教授(Professor Wang of Peking University)
内容 宇宙(the universe)
要求:(1)便条应包括上面所有内容要点;
(2)词数不少于60,格式已给出,不计入总词数。
1:00 p.m., March 15th
Dear Cindy,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.假如你是李华,Bob是你三年前的同学,他在电子邮件里问你这三年的变化。请根据下面的表格内容给他回一封电子邮件。
In the past Now
Personalities short, shy, quiet tall, outgoing, make friends
Abilities play computer games study hard
don t like sports good at swimming, healthier
要求:1. 参考表格内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于80词(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Dear Bob,
I m glad to hear from you and I also miss you very much. ____________________________
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I m happy I have changed a lot. How about you
Yours,
5.
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Tony对“中国红”一词很感兴趣,想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现,请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信。词数不少于60,信的格式、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表 幸福,可以带来好运
使用场所 婚礼、春节等
表达方式 剪纸、中国结、红包、灯笼
参考词汇:wedding婚礼;Chinese knot中国结;red packet红包;stand for代表
Dear Tony,
It's great to receive your letter. I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese red. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
6. 英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件app征集网友建议:
假如你是李华,在网上看到该公司的征求建议,请根据网上的征集信息,用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。
注意:
(1)内容涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥。
(2)词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)
Dear Sir or Madam,
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___________________________________________________________________________________________
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Li Hua
7.从2021年开始,许多学校禁止学生把手机带进校园。对此,人们见解不一。某英文报社就此话题征稿,请你根据提示写一篇稿件简述下列两种观点并表明你的看法。
支持 反对
方便父母和子女联系(get in touch with) 影响学习
提供多种娱乐,如听音乐、上网等 一些学生考试时用手机作弊
要求:(1) 参考表格内容,可适当发挥;
(2) 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3) 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
(4) 词数:不少于80词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Should students be allowed to use mobile phones at school
These days, more and more students have their own mobile phones.
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8.假如你是李华,你的表妹Lucy写邮件询问你如何缓解学习压力,请根据表格内容,写一封邮件给她。
听音乐 在上学前和放学后经常听一些舒缓的音乐
看电影 在周末的时候看一些有意思的电影
和朋友聊天 和好朋友聊天并且说出你的烦恼
要求:(1) 参考表格内容,可适当发挥;
(2) 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(4) 词数: 不少于80词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Dear Lucy,
How are you these days You said in your last email that you felt stressful from study and wanted me to give you some advice.
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9. 假如你是李华,你给好朋友May写邮件讲述一件发生在你的身边的出乎意料的事情,请根据表格内容,写一封邮件给她。
起因 我和我的同学准备给我们的英语老师过生日
过程 我们买了生日蛋糕 生日蛋糕被一只野猫给吃了
结局 我们感觉很遗憾但是老师却很高兴
要求:(1) 参考表格内容,可适当发挥;
(2) 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3) 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
(4) 词数:不少于80词(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Dear Mary,
How are you these days I want to tell you an unexpected thing happening around me.
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
10.初中生活即将结束了,在这个充满着快乐、阳光和关爱的人生阶段里,你一定有过许多令人终生难忘的时刻和记忆。假设你是May,你的澳大利亚朋友Cindy想了解你的一些难忘的初中生活,请你根据下面的提示给她写一封回信。
提示:(1)三个难忘的时刻:获得英语演讲比赛第一名站在领奖台上,在医院做志愿者,纠正好朋友作弊的错误;
(2)老师和父母给予我们无尽的关爱,我们要学会感恩;
(3)在学校我们不仅学到了很多的知识,也学会了如何与人相处。
要求:(1)包含以上所有提示,可适当发挥;
(2)词数不少于60,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:moment时刻;podium领奖台;give thanks感恩
Dear Cindy,
I'm glad to hear from you. You want to know my middle school life. Now let me tell you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all. I hope to know all about your middle school life.
With my best wishes!
Yours,
May
答案和解析
1.【答案】Dear Chris,
I m glad to receive your letter. You asked me how to learn Chinese well.
Here s some advice for you. I think it s important to take Chinese classes. You ll find it helpful. As we know, "Use it or lose it." So practicing in groups is pretty necessary. What s more, you could improve your Chinese by watching Chinese movies. It is also a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs. You ll learn more Chinese words by doing that. If possible, you can even make some Chinese friends. They will be pleased to help you and it s a good chance for you to learn more about Chinese culture. Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, and then it will bring something new.
Yours,
David
【解析】【思路点拨】根据题目要求可知,本文是以David的名义给Chris写一封回信,介绍学习中文的一些方法。所以本文要以提建议的口气,以第二人称为主;时态要用一般现在时态和一般将来时态为主。写作要求:1.所给出的提示信息要写全,也可适当发挥;2.句式尽量避免单一;3.书写要工整,卷面要干净、整洁。
【亮点短语】
1. As we know众所周知;
2. be pleased to do sth乐意做某事;
3. learn about 了解。
【高分句型】
1. So practicing in groups is pretty necessary. (动名词作主语)
2. It is also a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs.(It作形式主语,真正的主语是动词不定式)
2.【答案】Dear Tony,
Good to hear from you! It's amazing that you're learning Chinese cooking. Why are you interested in it How are you learning And what can you cook Hope to enjoy your dishes next time!
Yes, we really have the Mid-Autumn Festival. It's on August 15th of the lunar calendar. It's one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together for a big dinner that day. We usually eat moon cakes while watching the moon at night. We believe the full moon is the symbol of reunion.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇提纲作文,也是一篇应用文作文。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来并在书写过程中注意书信的格式。根据给出的要点展开想象,适当发挥。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言,列出简单提纲,确定主要句式,关键单词等。结合所给材料可知,本文主要用一般现在时和第一人称和第二人称结合进行描述,注意不同句式的灵活使用,同时注意语言的准确性和连贯性,也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【亮点词汇】
1.hear from…收到……的来信
2. get together for a big dinner聚餐
【高分句型】
1.We usually eat moon cakes while watching the moon at night.当我们晚上看月亮时通常吃月饼。
2. Hope to enjoy your dishes next time!希望下次享受你的美食!
3.【答案】1:00 p.m., March 15thDear Cindy,
I came to your hotel, but you were out. There will be a speech in the Science Palace at 8:00 tomorrow morning. The speech is about the universe. Professor Wang of Peking University will give the speech. I hope you will be there.
The Science Palace isn't far from the Friendship Hotel. You may take the No.8 bus and get off at the fourth stop. Then go north and walk about 300 meters along Zhongshan Road. Soon you'll find the Science Palace.
Hope to see you tomorrow.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
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4.【答案】Dear Bob,
I m glad to hear from you and I also miss you very much. I m taller than before. I used to be a shy and quiet boy, but now I m not afraid of speaking in public anymore. What s more, I m more outgoing and make lots of friends in our class. I used to play computer games in class. My parents always worried about me. Now I prefer to spend time on my study. In the past I didn t like sports at all. But now I am good at swimming and I go swimming three times a week. I am healthier than before.
I m happy I have changed a lot. How about you
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5.【答案】Dear Tony,
It's great to receive your letter. I'm writing to tell you something about Chinese red. Chinese red is one of the most popular colors for Chinese people. It usually stands for happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck.
People in our country pay more attention to Chinese red. They use many red objects in some important events. For example, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What's more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuttings, lanterns and Chinese knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red pockets for best wishes as well. So Chinese red plays an important role and is very popular in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
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6.【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for designing an app for English writing. I'd like to share my ideas here. Could its name be "Writing Made Easy"
Many of us have difficulty in writing. We don't know how to organize ideas and use proper words. I hope it can solve these problems.
Here is my advice on what the app does. First of all, I think it should provide some reading materials. ①The more we read, the better we write. ②What's more, the app is expected to have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills.③Last but not least, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions.
I hope my advice is worth taking.
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是应用文中的回信类作文,文章应以第一人称为主,主要用一般现在时。行文时要做到言表达得体,用连接词,使行文连贯,适当拓展写作内容。
【亮点词汇】
①have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难;
②correct mistakes纠错;
③ offer suggestions提供建议。
【高分句型】
①The more we read, the better we write.(本句用了“the +比较级,the+比较级”结构,表示“越……,就越……”)
②What's more, the app should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills.(so that引导目的状语从句)
③Last but not least, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions.(who引导定语从句,修饰先行词an e-teacher)
【结构布局】
引言:引出写作目的;
中心:给出自己的建议;
结尾:希望自己的建议值得采纳。
7.【答案】Should students be allowed to use mobile phones at school
These days, more and more students have their own mobile phones. Should students be allowed to use mobile phones at school
Some people believe that students can take their mobile phones to school. They think parents can get in touch with their children at any time. And students can do fun things on their mobile phones, like listening to music and surfing on the Internet.
Others don t agree with the idea. They say mobile phones can make students pay little attention to their study. Some even use mobile phones to cheat in exams.
In my opinion, it s OK to have mobile phones at school, but schools must have rules about using mobile phones, such as when and where to use them. Mobile phones can be of great help if they are used properly.
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8.【答案】Dear Lucy,
How are you these days You said in your last email that you felt stressful from study and wanted me to give you some advice.
First, listen to light and soft music before and after school. Music gives you a sense of relaxing and makes you happy. Second, watch some interesting movies on weekends. When I finish watching an interesting movie, I will be happy for a long time. Finally, communicate with your good friends and talk about your troubles. The care and communication of friends will make you less stressed and happier.
I hope my advice will help you. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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9.【答案】Dear Mary,
How are you these days I want to tell you an unexpected thing happening around me.
Last Saturday, our English teacher had her birthday. We ordered a cake and bought birthday presents. After school, we were going to celebrate her birthday. But when our monitor went to get the birthday cake, he was surprised to find that the cake had been eaten by a wild cat. We had no time to order another cake. At last we had to tell the truth to our teacher. We felt very sorry but our English teacher was very happy because she knew what we had done for her.
Looking forward to your next e-mail.
Yours,
Li Hua
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10.【答案】Dear Cindy,
I'm glad to hear from you. You want to know my middle school life. Now let me tell you.
There are three moments that I'll never forget. I stood on the podium when I won first prize in the school English speech competition. I was so excited. The second one is that I did some voluntary work in a hospital. I think it's very meaningful. Finally, my good friend once cheated in the test. I corrected him and helped him study to get good grades.
Our parents and teachers have cared about us a lot. I think we should learn to give thanks to them. They are important people in our life.
At school, we learn not only knowledge but also how to get on with others. It's an important and necessary lesson in our life.
That's all. I hope to know all about your middle school life.
With my best wishes!
Yours,
May
【解析】【思路点拨】
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