(共15张PPT)
应用文写作
邀请信
“邀请信” 是用于邀约对方参加某个活动或者担任某个工作的实用文体,考点在于清楚地介绍活动或工作的内容,以及对方通过这个活动或工作会有什么样的收获。
邀请信需要注意以下几点:
① “邀请信”的时态基本包含一般现在时和一般将来时。
② “邀请信”一般由首段引入、主体段和尾段组成。
③ 邀请对象不同,语气不同:1.)平辈、朋友等:语气轻松、礼貌 2.)长辈、上级、陌生人等:语气尊敬、礼貌、正式
Para.1 首段引入:写信背景+写信目的(活动目的,邀请缘由,发出邀请)
Para.2 主体段:活动内容(时间、地点、时长、内容/流程等)
Para.3 尾段:重申主题+期待回复 (表达对方出席的重要意义/对方可能有的收获,再次发出邀请,期盼对方回复/期待对方的到来)
首段引入:写信背景+写信目的(活动目的,邀请缘由,发出邀请)
模版句式:
_________________ ..., an activity centering on... is to be held in ...._________________ that you _______________________________________________________________ … ,
I’m writing (on behalf of our school) to invite you to __________________________.
为了..., 一项围绕...的活动将会在...举行。得知你对....很感兴趣,我(谨代表...)写信来邀请你参与这次特别的活动。
Learning/Knowing
In an effort to
are interested in/are keen on/are fascinated by/are enthusiastic about
join us on this special occasion
Expression Bank:
1.“为了...”(活动目的)
to do; in order to do; in an effort to do; with the aim of ...; with the purpose of ...; aimed at...; aiming to do.
2.“得知/鉴于...”(邀请缘由)
knowing/considering that...; aware of the fact that...; hearing that...
3.“对...喜欢/感兴趣/着迷”(邀请缘由)
be keen on...; be a fan of...; be interested in...; be fascinated by...; be enthusiastic/passionate about...; have an passionate interest in...; take a keen interest in...;
4.“(作为特邀嘉宾)参与这次特别的活动/共襄盛事”(发出邀请)
join us on this grand/special occasion (as our honorable guest)
模版句式: 活动名、主题、时间、地点等
The activity, _______________…, _________________________ the lecture hall of our school from 9:00 to 17:00 on April 20th, lasting for 8 hours.
本次活动,名为.../主题为...,将于4月20日早上9点至下午5点在我校讲学厅举行,为时八个小时。
主体段:活动内容(时间、地点、时长、内容/流程等)
named/themed
will take place/be held in
Expression Bank:
1. “这次活动,其主题为...,将会在...地点...时间开始/举行(,为期...)”
The activity, ________________ is..., is _______________... on/from...to...The activity, _____________________ will be..., is scheduled to begin at...(时刻)on...(日期)in...(地点).The activity, themed..., will start at...(时刻)on...(日期)in... (地点)and last for a whole week.
As is scheduled, the activity, whose theme is..., is to be held in...from 8:00 to 17:00 every day from April 20th to 25th.
whose theme
to be held
the theme of which
模版句式:活动具体内容、流程等
During ... , there will be _________________ activities you are interested in. First, ... , ______________ you can.... Following this will be ..., which I believe will definitely … .
在…期间,将会有很多你感兴趣的活动。首先,[活动内容1],通过这个环节,你可以...。在这之后会[活动内容2], 我相信它肯定会[活动意义]。
在[活动名称]期间,你不仅可以[活动内容1],还可以[活动内容2],让你感受到[主题]的魅力。
主体段:活动内容(时间、地点、时长、内容/流程等)
a wide range of
through which
In/ During ..., not only can you ..., but you can also ..., which allows you to feel the charm of ...
Expression Bank:
1.“各种各样的”
a wide range of...; a diversity of...; a variety of...; varieties of, diverse
2.活动形式:手工活动;演讲报告;表演;展览
hand-on activities; lectures on...; performances; exhibitions of...;
3.活动内容
origin; development; history; tradition; current situation; different forms; applications(应用);...
模版句式:
I _________________ this activity an ideal opportunity for you to get close to.... Furthermore, your presence will definitely add to the charm of this activity and also promote its influence. All in all, _______________________
___________________. _________________________________________!
我真心认为本次活动是一个您近距离接触...的绝佳机会。另外,您的到场无疑将会让本次活动更具吸引力并提升其影响力。总之,如果您能莅临,我们将深感荣幸。期盼您的佳音!(适用长辈,上级和陌生人)
尾段:重申主题+期待回复 (表达对方出席的重要意义/对方可能有的收获,再次发出邀请,期盼对方回复/期待对方的到来)
sincerely consider
we will be much honored
Looking forward to your early reply
if you could come
Expression Bank:
1.“我相信/认为...”
I firmly/genuinely/truly believe that...; I’m fully convinced that...
I bet...(对象为熟悉的朋友时可用)
2.“更深入地了解...”
get/have/gain a better/deeper/more fundamental understanding of...
3.“如果您能莅临,我们将深感荣幸/万分感激。”/“期待你的到来!”
I’m looking forward to having fun together!(对象为熟悉的朋友时可用)
We’re looking forward to your coming!
We’ll be much honored if you could come;
Expression Bank:
4.“期盼你尽早回复”/“如果您能尽早回复,我们将不胜感激。”
Let me know as soon as possible if you can come!(对象为熟悉的朋友时可用)
Looking forward to your early reply!
An early reply about your final decision will be highly appreciated.
We’d appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
Kindly let us have your reply at your earliest convenience.
We shall feel obliged by a reply at your earliest convenience.
We’d be obliged if you could send us a reply at your earliest convenience.
假定你是李华,你校为弘扬中国文化,将于下周开展“地方戏剧进校园(Local Opera on Campus)” 活动,请你写一封邮件,邀请外教Dr. McLaren前来观看戏剧表演。内容包括:
1.发出邀请; 2.活动的时间、地点,主要内容; 3.期待他的回复。
注意:1.词数80词左右。2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Analyzing the writing task
1.题目/ 主旨
请明确本次任务的写作内容:________________________
2.审题
时态____________________ 人称_______________________
Structure:Beginning ____________________
Body ____________________
Ending ____________________
Invitation letter
Simple present tense, simple future tense
寒暄 +背景+目的
the first person
重申主题/目的+期待回复
时间、地点、目的+主要内容
活动内容可以从“戏剧欣赏、戏剧体验、图片展览等角度去发挥
主要问题:
1.书写糟糕,顶格写作文的现象也很普遍;书信格式
2.主要内容部分都在介绍戏剧本身或戏剧的意义,而不是戏剧表演的内容。
3.单词拼写和语法:invite写成invent/invate;look forward to后面接原形;被动语态
Based on the invitation template, write a model essay by yourselves.
1.为了弘扬中国文化的发展, 一项围绕中国传统戏剧的活动将会在我们学校举行。得知你对中国传统文化很感兴趣,我写信来邀请你参与这次特别的活动。
2.本次活动,主题为Local Opera on Campus,将于4月20日早上9点至下午5点在我校讲学厅举行。在活动期间,将会有很多你感兴趣的活动。首先,各种类型的中国戏剧将会演出,如京剧和许多其他地方戏剧。戏曲表演结束后,一些著名的戏曲艺术家将在现场向我们展示如何表演戏剧。此外,还将举办中国传统戏剧图片展。我们不仅可以欣赏精彩的戏剧表演,还可以参与到剧中并与演员互动,这让我们深深地沉浸在丰富的中国传统文化遗产中。
3.我真心认为本次活动是一个您近距离接触中国传统戏剧的绝佳机会。另外,您的到场无疑将会让本次活动更具吸引力并提升其影响力。总之,如果您能莅临,我们将深感荣幸。期盼您的佳音!
欣赏
Dear Dr. McLaren,
In an effort to promote the development of Chinese traditional culture, an activity centering on Chinese traditional opera is to be held in our school. Knowing that you are keen on traditional Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to join us on this special occasion.(背景+目的)
As is scheduled, the activity, whose theme is “Local Opera on Campus”, is to be held in the school Lecture Hall from 9 am to 5pm on April 20th. (活动时间、地点、主题) During the event , there will be a wide range of activities you are interested in.(主题句) First, various types of Chinese dramas will be performed, such as Beijing opera and many other local operas. After the opera show, some famous opera artists will show us how to perform dramas on the spot. Besides, a Chinese traditional drama photo exhibition will be on show at the same time. Not only can we appreciate/admire fantastic drama performance , but also we can get involved in the play and interact with the actors, which will allow us to be deeply immersed in the rich heritage of traditional Chinese culture. (活动内容和意义)
I sincerely consider this activity an ideal opportunity for you to get close to Chinese traditional opera. Furthermore, your presence will definitely add to the charm of this activity and also reinforce its influence. All in all we will be much honored if you could come. Looking forward to your reply.(重申主题+期待回复)
Sincerely,
Li Hua