Unit 1 Section Ⅴ Writing
【学习目标】
1.通过阅读熟悉英语电子邮件的文体特征,并掌握其写作方法及策略。(语言能力,学习能力)
2.能够借助已知的关键信息,适当补充辅助信息,写好电子邮件。(语言能力)
【合作探究】
写作探究
电 子 邮 件
英文电子邮件和书信的写法大致相同,但略有差异。一般来说,英文电子邮件包括以下五个部分:
(1)标题栏
一般写在左上角,包括发件人姓名、邮箱地址,发件日期、收件人姓名、邮箱地址以及邮件主题。排列格式:
FROM:发件人姓名、邮箱地址;
DATE:发件日期;
TO:收件人姓名、邮箱地址;
SUBJECT:简明扼要地介绍邮件的内容。通常是单词、短语,偶尔用句子。
(2)称呼
位于正文的开头。如何称呼要视发件人与收件人的关系而定。若是同学、朋友,可以直呼其名;若是长辈或上级,要在姓氏前加上Mr、 Miss、 Mrs、 Dr、 Professor等表示称谓的词。
(3)正文
正文要简洁明了。简单问候之后,就要开门见山地说明写电子邮件的目的。这部分内容的写作相对自由,但对于电子邮件的回复,必须紧扣“回复”这一字眼,要“问有所答,疑有所解”。在高考中,要按照试题要求的内容来写,最重要的是表达要清楚、有条理,语言要准确、流畅。
(4)结尾客套话
结尾的客套话通常很简洁,如Yours、 Thanks等,一般写在左下角。
(5)签名
一般写在左下角,有时也写在右下角。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
课文范例
素材积累
话题句式
1.How nice to hear from you again!
很高兴再次收到你的来信!
2.Let me tell you something about the activity.
让我告诉你一些关于这次活动的情况。
3.At school, all the teachers work very hard. They encourage us to build up our confidence and inspire us to improve our study.
在学校,所有的老师工作都非常努力。他们鼓励我们树立信心并且激励我们提高学习成绩。
4.I'd appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
如果您能尽早回复我会十分感激。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
假定你是李华,你在新学校学习已一个多月,请根据下列提示,用英语给你的朋友Alice写封电子邮件,谈一谈你的高中生活。
1.介绍你的学校和班级;
2.你的作息时间;
3.你的同学;
4.你最喜欢的老师。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I've been at senior high school for more than one month.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
体裁 应用文 时态 以一般现在时为主
主题 学校生活 人称 以第一人称为主
结构 第一段:提出写邮件的目的; 第二段:学校具体生活安排; 第三段:邮件结尾
Step 2 要点翻译
1.翻译词汇
(1)一所著名的学校
(2)与某人相处得好
(3)教学风格
(4)课外活动
答案 (1)a well-known/famous school (2)get on/along well with sb (3)teaching style (4)after-class activities
2.翻译句子
(1)我班上有60名学生,他们都很用功。
There are sixty students in my class, .
(2)我认为上她的课不会厌倦。
be bored in her class.
答案 (1)who are all hard-working (2)I don't think I will
Step 3 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
Dear Alice,
I've been at senior high school for more than one month. I'm writing to share my thoughts about my new school life.
My new school is a well-known school with a long history.There are 50 classes,more than 300 teachers and over 3,000 students in my school. And there are sixty students in my class,who are all hard-working.I'm getting on very well with my classmates.My favorite teacher is my Chinese teacher,Ms Wang. She is very enthusiastic,whose teaching style is unique. She usually tells us something in an interesting way.I don't think I will be bored in her class.
We usually get up at 6:30 am and our class starts at 8:00 am.I often take part in colorful after-class activities and we go to bed at 10:00 pm.
How about your school life I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【随堂检测】
主题写作
假定你是学生会主席李华,下学期有一名美国学生Jack要来你们学校学习。为了让他尽快适应新学校,请你写一封电子邮件给他提一些建议,内容包括:
1.帮助同学学习英语;
2.积极参加学校的活动,比如运动会、歌唱比赛;
3.其他建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jack,
I'm glad to know you will come to our school next term. In order to help you adapt to our school, I'd like to give you some advice.
When you come to our school,firstly,I think in your spare time, you could help your classmates learn English when they have difficulty with it. At the same time they are willing to help you learn Chinese.Secondly, you can join in all kinds of activities,such as sports meet and singing competition.By doing this,you will get along well with your classmates.Last but not least, you should treat your friends as you want them to treat you.
I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
视野拓展
1.London, the capital city of the UK ,is the largest and most international city of Europe,and its transportation is very convenient.
英国首都伦敦是欧洲最大和最具国际特色的城市,交通很便利。
2.As for me, I'm interested in playing basketball since it has been giving me strength to face the challenges in my life.
对我来说,我对打篮球很感兴趣,因为它一直给予我力量去面对生活中的挑战。
英美文化
美篇导读
《芒果街上的小屋》是一本优美纯净的小说,一本“诗小说”。故事发生在一条叫芒果街的芝加哥小街上。居住在这条街上的女孩埃斯佩朗莎生来就有对弱者的同情心和对美的感知力;她用清澈的眼睛打量周围的世界;她用美丽稚嫩的语言讲述成长,讲述沧桑,讲述生命的美好与不易,讲述年轻的希望与失望。她梦想有一所自己的房子,梦想在写作中追寻自我,获得自由,获得帮助别人的能力。
美篇呈现
The House on Mango Street(Excerpt)
In English my name means hope. In Spanish it means too many letters. It means sadness,and it means waiting. It is like the number nine. A muddy color. It is the Mexican records my father plays on Sunday mornings when he is shaving,songs like sobbing.
It was my great-grandmother's name and now it is mine.She was a horse woman too,born like me in the Chinese year of horse—which is supposed to be bad luck if you're born female.
My great-grandmother,I would have liked to have known her,a wild horse of a woman,so wild she wouldn't marry. Until my great-grandfather threw a sack over her head and carried her off. Just like that,as if she were a fancy① chandelier.That's the way he did it.
And the story goes she never forgave him. She looked out the window her whole life,the way so many women sit their sadness on an elbow②. I wonder if she made the best with what she got or she was sorry because she couldn't be all the things she wanted to be. Esperanza. I have inherited③her name,but I don't want to inherit her place by the window.
At school they said that my name was funny as if the syllables④were made out of tin and hurt the roof of your mouth. But in Spanish my name is made out of a softer something,like silver,not quite as thick as sister's name—Magdalena—which is uglier than mine. Magdalena who at least can come home and become Nenny. But I am always Esperanza.
I would like to baptize⑤myself under a new name,a name more like the real me,the one nobody sees. Esperanza as Lasiandra or Maritza or Zeze the X.Yes, something like Zeze the X will do.
芒果街上的小屋(节选)
在英语里,我的名字的意思是希望。在西班牙语里,它意味着太多的字母。它意味着哀伤,意味着等待。它就像数字“九”。它是一种泥泞的色彩。它是每个星期天早晨,爸爸刮胡子时播放的墨西哥唱片,呜咽的歌。
它过去是我曾祖母的名字,现在是我的。她也是一个属马的女人,和我一样,出生于中国的马年——如果你生为女人,这会被认为是霉运。
要是我见过我的曾祖母该多好,她是像野马一样的女人,野得不想嫁人。直到我的曾祖父用麻袋套住她的头把她扛走。就那样扛着,好像她是一盏华贵的枝形吊灯。那就是他的办法。
后来,她从没有原谅他。她用一生向窗外凝望,像许多女人那样凝望,胳膊肘支起忧伤。我想知道她是否随遇而安,是否会为做不成她想做的人而伤怀。埃斯佩朗莎。我继承了她的名字,可我不想继承她在窗边的位置。
在学校里,他们说我的名字很滑稽,音节好像是铁皮做的,会碰痛上颚。可是在西班牙语里,我的名字是更柔和的东西做的,像银子,没有妹妹的名字那么浑厚。妹妹叫玛格达蕾娜,这名字没我的美。玛格达蕾娜回到家里可以叫蕾妮。可我总是埃斯佩朗莎。
我想给自己起一个新名字,一个和真实的自我更像的名字,一个没有人见过的真实的我。埃斯佩朗莎,就像拉山德拉或者玛丽察或者某泽泽。是的,我会起一个就像某泽泽的名字。
知识积累
①fancy adj.华贵的;别致的 ②elbow n.肘部
③inherit v.继承 ④syllable n.音节
⑤baptize v.命名
素养链接
1848年美国与墨西哥之战后随着大量的墨西哥人迁入美国,墨西哥式的思维与美国本土传统不断发生碰撞后逐渐产生了一种新的文学形式——奇卡诺文学。《芒果街上的小屋》的诞生,标志着奇卡诺文学史上盛开出一朵绮丽且带着诗意的花朵。
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UNIT 1 LIFE CHOICES
Section Ⅴ Writing
1.通过阅读熟悉英语电子邮件的文体特征,并掌握其写作方法及策略。（语言能力，学习能力）
2.能够借助已知的关键信息,适当补充辅助信息,写好电子邮件。（语言能力）
电 子 邮 件
英文电子邮件和书信的写法大致相同，但略有差异。一般来说，英文电子邮件包括以下五个部分：
（1）标题栏
一般写在左上角，包括发件人姓名、邮箱地址，发件日期、收件人姓名、邮箱地址以及邮件主题。排列格式：
FROM：发件人姓名、邮箱地址；
DATE：发件日期；
TO：收件人姓名、邮箱地址；
SUBJECT：简明扼要地介绍邮件的内容。通常是单词、短语，偶尔用句子。
（2）称呼
位于正文的开头。如何称呼要视发件人与收件人的关系而定。若是同学、朋友，可以直呼其名；若是长辈或上级，要在姓氏前加上Mr、 Miss、 Mrs、 Dr、 Professor等表示称谓的词。
（3）正文
正文要简洁明了。简单问候之后，就要开门见山地说明写电子邮件的目的。这部分内容的写作相对自由，但对于电子邮件的回复，必须紧扣“回复”这一字眼，要“问有所答，疑有所解”。在高考中，要按照试题要求的内容来写，最重要的是表达要清楚、有条理，语言要准确、流畅。
（4）结尾客套话
结尾的客套话通常很简洁，如Yours、 Thanks等，一般写在左下角。
（5）签名
一般写在左下角，有时也写在右下角。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
课文范例
素材积累
话题句式
1.How nice to hear from you again！
很高兴再次收到你的来信！
2.Let me tell you something about the activity.
让我告诉你一些关于这次活动的情况。
4.I'd appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
如果您能尽早回复我会十分感激。
3.At school, all the teachers work very hard. They encourage us to build up our confidence and inspire us to improve our study.
在学校，所有的老师工作都非常努力。他们鼓励我们树立信心并且激励我们提高学习成绩。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
假定你是李华，你在新学校学习已一个多月，请根据下列提示，用英语给你的朋友Alice写封电子邮件，谈一谈你的高中生活。
1.介绍你的学校和班级；
2.你的作息时间；
3.你的同学；
4.你最喜欢的老师。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alice，
I've been at senior high school for more than one month. ____________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
体裁 应用文 时态 以一般现在时为主
主题 学校生活 人称 以第一人称为主
结构 第一段:提出写邮件的目的； 第二段:学校具体生活安排； 第三段:邮件结尾 Step 2 要点翻译
1.翻译词汇
（1）一所著名的学校__________________________
a well-known/famous school
（2）与某人相处得好________________________
get on/along well with sb
（3）教学风格_____________
teaching style
（4）课外活动__________________
after-class activities
2.翻译句子
（1）我班上有60名学生，他们都很用功。
There are sixty students in my class,_______________________.
who are all hard-working
（2）我认为上她的课不会厌倦。
__________________ be bored in her class.
I don't think I will
Step 3 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
Dear Alice，
I've been at senior high school for more than one month. I'm writing to share my thoughts about my new school life.
My new school is a well-known school with a long history. There are 50 classes，more than 300 teachers and over 3,000 students in my school. And there are sixty
students in my class，who are all hard-working. I'm getting on very well with my classmates. My favorite teacher is my Chinese teacher,Ms Wang. She is very enthusiastic，whose teaching style is unique. She usually tells us something in an interesting way. I don't think I will be bored in her class.
We usually get up at 6：30 am and our class starts at 8：00 am. I often take part in colorful after-class activities and we go to bed at 10:00 pm.
How about your school life？ I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
主题写作
假定你是学生会主席李华，下学期有一名美国学生Jack要来你们学校学习。为了让他尽快适应新学校，请你写一封电子邮件给他提一些建议，内容包括：
1.帮助同学学习英语；
2.积极参加学校的活动，比如运动会、歌唱比赛；
3.其他建议。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack，
I'm glad to know you will come to our school next term.____________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jack，
I'm glad to know you will come to our school next term.In order to help you adapt to our school, I'd like to give you some advice.
When you come to our school，firstly，I think in your spare time, you could help your classmates learn English when they have difficulty with it. At the same time they are willing to help you learn Chinese. Secondly, you can join in all kinds of activities，such as sports meet and singing competition. By doing this，you will get along well with your classmates. Last but not least, you should treat your friends as you want them to treat you.
I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
1.London， the capital city of the UK ，is the largest and most international city of Europe，and its transportation is very convenient.
英国首都伦敦是欧洲最大和最具国际特色的城市，交通很便利。
2.As for me, I'm interested in playing basketball since it has been giving me strength to face the challenges in my life.
对我来说，我对打篮球很感兴趣，因为它一直给予我力量去面对生活中的挑战。
美篇导读
《芒果街上的小屋》是一本优美纯净的小说，一本“诗小说”。故事发生在一条叫芒果街的芝加哥小街上。居住在这条街上的女孩埃斯佩朗莎生来就有对弱者的同情心和对美的感知力；她用清澈的眼睛打量周围的世界；她用美丽稚嫩的语言讲述成长，讲述沧桑，讲述生命的美好与不易，讲述年轻的希望与失望。她梦想有一所自己的房子，梦想在写作中追寻自我，获得自由，获得帮助别人的能力。
美篇呈现
The House on Mango Street（Excerpt）
In English my name means hope. In Spanish it means too many letters. It means sadness，and it means waiting. It is like the number nine. A muddy color. It is the Mexican records my father plays on Sunday mornings when he is shaving，songs like sobbing.
It was my great-grandmother's name and now it is mine. She was a horse woman too，born like me in the Chinese year of horse—which is supposed to be bad luck if you're born female.
My great-grandmother，I would have liked to have known her，a wild horse of a woman，so wild she wouldn't marry. Until my great-grandfather threw a sack over
her head and carried her off. Just like that，as if she were a fancy① chandelier．That's the way he did it.
And the story goes she never forgave him. She looked out the window her whole life，the way so many women sit their sadness on an elbow②. I wonder if she made the best with what she got or she was sorry because she couldn't be all the things she wanted to be. Esperanza. I have inherited③ her name，but I don't want to inherit her place by the window.
At school they said that my name was funny as if the syllables④ were made out of tin and hurt the roof of your mouth. But in Spanish my name is made out of a
softer something，like silver，not quite as thick as sister's name—Magdalena—which is uglier than mine. Magdalena who at least can come home and become Nenny. But I am always Esperanza.
I would like to baptize⑤ myself under a new name，a name more like the real me，the one nobody sees. Esperanza as Lasiandra or Maritza or Zeze the X．Yes， something like Zeze the X will do.
芒果街上的小屋（节选）
在英语里，我的名字的意思是希望。在西班牙语里，它意味着太多的字母。它意味着哀伤，意味着等待。它就像数字“九”。它是一种泥泞的色彩。它是每个星期天早晨，爸爸刮胡子时播放的墨西哥唱片，呜咽的歌。
它过去是我曾祖母的名字，现在是我的。她也是一个属马的女人，和我一样，出生于中国的马年——如果你生为女人，这会被认为是霉运。
要是我见过我的曾祖母该多好，她是像野马一样的女人，野得不想嫁人。直到我的曾祖父用麻袋套住她的头把她扛走。就那样扛着，好像她是一盏华贵的枝形吊灯。那就是他的办法。
后来，她从没有原谅他。她用一生向窗外凝望，像许多女人那样凝望，胳膊肘支起忧伤。我想知道她是否随遇而安，是否会为做不成她想做的人而伤怀。埃斯佩朗莎。我继承了她的名字，可我不想继承她在窗边的位置。
在学校里，他们说我的名字很滑稽，音节好像是铁皮做的，会碰痛上颚。可是在西班牙语里，我的名字是更柔和的东西做的，像银子，没有妹妹的名字那么浑厚。妹妹叫玛格达蕾娜，这名字没我的美。玛格达蕾娜回到家里可以叫蕾妮。可我总是埃斯佩朗莎。
我想给自己起一个新名字，一个和真实的自我更像的名字，一个没有人见过的真实的我。埃斯佩朗莎，就像拉山德拉或者玛丽察或者某泽泽。是的，我会起一个就像某泽泽的名字。
知识积累
①fancy adj.华贵的；别致的 ②elbow n．肘部
③inherit v．继承 ④syllable n．音节
⑤baptize v.命名
素养链接
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