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UNIT 2 SPORTS AND FITNESS
Section Ⅴ Writing
1.通过阅读熟悉英语记叙文的文体特征，并掌握其写作方法及策略。（语言能力，学习能力）
2.能够借助已知的关键信息，适当补充辅助信息，写好记叙文。（语言能力）
记叙文的写作
本单元的写作体裁为记叙文，其中有以介绍人物事迹为主要内容，侧重写人的记叙文；有以叙述事情的发生、发展经过和结果为重点，侧重写事的记叙文；还有以写景物为主的记叙文。 记叙文的六要素包括时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过、结果。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
课文范例
素材积累
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.在记叙文中常用到的连接词
first， then， next， finally
2.时间顺序
early in the morning/in the early morning，in the middle of the day/at noon，late in the afternoon/in the late afternoon，far/deep into the night；in the past， at present， in the future；first，second，next，then，finally；at first，in the beginning；at last，in the end；shortly afterwards，at once，immediately，all of a sudden，suddenly，soon；the moment，as soon as，the first time，not until，next time，before，after，etc.
Ⅱ.话题句式
★精彩开头
1.Last Saturday，our family went to climb the beautiful West Hill.
上周六，我们全家去爬了美丽的西山。
2.We had an unforgettable experience in the Spring Festival.
在春节我们有了一次难忘的经历。
★正文佳句
1.After a long walking，I was as hungry as a wolf and helped myself to the roast beef and chicken.
长时间的步行之后，我饿得像条狼，吃掉了烤牛肉和烤鸡肉。
2.Hardly had I done this when I realized that I had done something bad to our environment.
我刚一这样做，就意识到自己的所作所为破坏了我们的环境。
★余味结尾
1.Until late into the night，I couldn't fall asleep，thinking about the happiness I had in the day.
夜很深了，我还不能入睡，想着白天的快乐时光。
2.We all hope we can have such activities from time to time.
我们都希望我们可以偶尔有这样的活动。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
假定你是红星中学高一（1）班的学生李华，上周末你帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。
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分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
体裁一般过去时 记叙文 时态
主题以第一人称为主 安排旅行 人称
结构 “三段式”结构： 第一段：一句话统领全篇； 第二段：交代清楚时间、地点、事情经过； 第三段：感受体会
Step 2 要点翻译
1.翻译词汇
（1）火车时刻表_____________
train schedule
（2）设法完成某事_____________
manage to do
（3）长长的队列_____________
a long queue
（4）为某人送行__________
see sb off
2.翻译句子
（1）周六早上，我和爷爷奶奶一起在网上搜索火车时刻表、北戴河的天气和一些酒店
信息。
On Saturday morning， ____________________________， I searched the Internet for
the train schedule， the weather in Beidaihe and some hotel information.
together with my grandparents
（2）下午，我去了火车站，虽然排了很长的队，但我还是设法为爷爷奶奶买了两张票。
In the afternoon， I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my
grandparents ______________________________.
although there was a long queue
（3）第二天早上，我去车站为他们送行。
The next morning， I went to the station _______________.
to see them off
Step 3 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子，加上恰当的连接词和过渡句，必要时可以改变句式，使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
Last weekend， I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.
On Saturday morning， together with my grandparents， I searched the Internet for the train schedule， the weather in Beidaihe and some hotel information. In the afternoon， I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner， I packed into the
suitcase the things my grandparents needed， such as clothes， glasses， an umbrella and a map. The next morning， I went to the station to see them off.
Waving goodbye to them on the platform， I felt happy for them and wished them a safe and happy journey.
主题写作
假定你是李华，请根据下面五幅图画写一篇80词左右的短文介绍你和家人庆祝春节的经过。
参考词汇：the Spring Festival Gala春节联欢晚会
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参考范文
The Spring Festival was really full of fun.
First，we all gathered around having a big dinner. Then began the Spring Festival Gala. Many stars turned up on the stage，bringing us so much pleasure that we were all drowned in admiring their performances. The midnight saw us setting off the firecrackers to celebrate the beginning of a new year. Then we ate dumplings. The next morning，we all dressed up and paid a visit door to door.
We all hope we will have a good luck in the following new year and realize all our dreams.
1.Festivals are becoming more and more commercial，with businesses taking advantage of the celebrations. Online shopping websites and social media apps have made it much easier for the public to spend more on gifts for their loved ones.
随着商家会利用庆祝活动（进行促销），节日变得越来越商业化了。在线购物网站和社交媒体应用程序极大地方便了人们为至亲至爱花更多钱购买礼物。
2.As the plane came down through the clouds，green fields and white houses came into sight.
当飞机穿过云层下降时，绿色的田野和白色的房屋映入眼帘。
3.Not only do teachers pass on knowledge to children，but they also teach children how to behave themselves.
老师不仅把知识传授给孩子们，还教孩子们如何做人。
美篇导读
《格列佛游记》是英国作家乔纳森·斯威夫特创作的一部长篇游记体讽刺小说。作品通过描述主人公格列佛在小人国、大人国、飞岛国和慧骃国的奇遇，反映了18世纪前半期英国统治阶级的腐败和罪恶。
作者用丰富的讽刺手法和虚构的幻想写出了荒诞而离奇的情节，深刻地反映了当时的英国议会中毫无意义的党派斗争，统治集团的昏庸腐朽和唯利是图，对殖民战争的残酷暴戾进行了揭露和批判，同时它在一定程度上歌颂了殖民地人民反抗统治者的英勇斗争。
美篇呈现
Gulliver's Travels（Excerpt）
I was born in Nottinghamshire and was the third of five sons. My father was not a rich man，but he was able to send me to Cambridge University，where I studied for three years. When I left college，I continued my studies and became a doctor. But I always wanted to travel，and so I made several voyages as a ship's doctor. When I married my wife Mary，however，I planned to stay at home for a while. But after a few years I discovered I was not earning enough money from my patients. I decided to go to sea again，and this time I joined a ship sailing to the
islands in the South Pacific Ocean. We started our journey from Bristol on May 4th，1699.
At first our voyage went well. We sailed across the Atlantic，round the coast of Africa and into the Indian Ocean. But before we could reach the Pacific，a violent① storm hit us and drove us to the north-west of Tasmania. The wind drove our ship on to a rock，which broke the ship in half. Some of the sailors and I managed to get a boat into the water，and we rowed② away to look for land. But when we were too tired to row any more，a great wave hit our small boat，and we all fell into the sea. I do not know what happened to my companions③，but I suppose they were all drowned④．
《格列佛游记》（节选）
我出生在诺丁汉郡，在五个孩子中排行第三。父亲并不富裕，不过还是能送我上剑桥大学，在那儿我学习了三年。我离开大学后继续深造，成为一名医生。可是我总想去旅行，就当了船医，出海了几次。然而，我娶了妻子玛丽后，计划在家待一段时间。可几年后，我发现从病人身上赚不了多少钱。我决定再次出海，这次我登上了开往南太平洋的轮船。我们于1699年5月4日从布里斯托尔启程。
起初航行很顺利。我们穿过大西洋，绕过非洲的海岸，进入印度洋。可是在我们抵达太平洋之前，暴风雨袭击了我们，我们被刮到塔斯马尼亚的西北边。暴风使我们的船撞上了礁石，被劈成两半。我和一些水手把救生艇放下水，划去寻找陆地。我们累得再也划不动时，一个巨浪掀翻了我们的小船，我们都落入海里。我不清楚我的同伴怎么样了，不过我猜他们都淹死了。
知识积累
①violent adj.猛烈的
②row vt. 划船
③companion n. 同伴
④drown vt. 淹死；淹没
文化链接
乔纳森·斯威夫特（Jonathan Swift，1667~1745）。英裔爱尔兰作家、政论家，世界上最伟大的讽刺文学大师之一。他以讽刺作品名垂青史，代表作为《格列佛游记》。他的作品抨击豪绅和英国殖民主义政策，受到读者欢迎。他的讽刺小说影响更为深广，所以高尔基称他为“世界文学创造者之一”。Unit 2 Section Ⅴ Writing
【学习目标】
1.通过阅读熟悉英语记叙文的文体特征,并掌握其写作方法及策略。(语言能力,学习能力)
2.能够借助已知的关键信息,适当补充辅助信息,写好记叙文。(语言能力)
【合作探究】
写作探究
记叙文的写作
本单元的写作体裁为记叙文,其中有以介绍人物事迹为主要内容,侧重写人的记叙文;有以叙述事情的发生、发展经过和结果为重点,侧重写事的记叙文;还有以写景物为主的记叙文。 记叙文的六要素包括时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过、结果。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.在记叙文中常用到的连接词
first, then, next, finally
2.时间顺序
early in the morning/in the early morning,in the middle of the day/at noon,late in the afternoon/in the late afternoon,far/deep into the night;in the past, at present, in the future;first,second,next,then,finally;at first,in the beginning;at last,in the end;shortly afterwards,at once,immediately,all of a sudden,suddenly,soon;the moment,as soon as,the first time,not until,next time,before,after,etc.
Ⅱ.话题句式
★精彩开头
1.Last Saturday,our family went to climb the beautiful West Hill.
上周六,我们全家去爬了美丽的西山。
2.We had an unforgettable experience in the Spring Festival.
在春节我们有了一次难忘的经历。
★正文佳句
1.After a long walking,I was as hungry as a wolf and helped myself to the roast beef and chicken.
长时间的步行之后,我饿得像条狼,吃掉了烤牛肉和烤鸡肉。
2.Hardly had I done this when I realized that I had done something bad to our environment.
我刚一这样做,就意识到自己的所作所为破坏了我们的环境。
★余味结尾
1.Until late into the night,I couldn't fall asleep,thinking about the happiness I had in the day.
夜很深了,我还不能入睡,想着白天的快乐时光。
2.We all hope we can have such activities from time to time.
我们都希望我们可以偶尔有这样的活动。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
假定你是红星中学高一(1)班的学生李华,上周末你帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
体裁 记叙文 时态 一般过去时
主题 安排旅行 人称 以第一人称为主
结构 “三段式”结构: 第一段:一句话统领全篇; 第二段:交代清楚时间、地点、事情经过; 第三段:感受体会
Step 2 要点翻译
1.翻译词汇
(1)火车时刻表
(2)设法完成某事
(3)长长的队列
(4)为某人送行
答案 (1)train schedule (2)manage to do
(3)a long queue (4)see sb off
2.翻译句子
(1)周六早上,我和爷爷奶奶一起在网上搜索火车时刻表、北戴河的天气和一些酒店信息。
On Saturday morning, , I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe and some hotel information.
(2)下午,我去了火车站,虽然排了很长的队,但我还是设法为爷爷奶奶买了两张票。
In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents .
(3)第二天早上,我去车站为他们送行。
The next morning, I went to the station .
答案 (1)together with my grandparents (2)although there was a long queue (3)to see them off
Step 3 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.
On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents needed, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off.
Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe and happy journey.
【随堂检测】
主题写作
假定你是李华,请根据下面五幅图画写一篇80词左右的短文介绍你和家人庆祝春节的经过。
吃团圆饭 看春晚 放鞭炮
吃饺子 拜年
参考词汇:the Spring Festival Gala春节联欢晚会
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The Spring Festival was really full of fun.
First,we all gathered around having a big dinner.Then began the Spring Festival Gala.Many stars turned up on the stage,bringing us so much pleasure that we were all drowned in admiring their performances.The midnight saw us setting off the firecrackers to celebrate the beginning of a new year.Then we ate dumplings.The next morning,we all dressed up and paid a visit door to door.
We all hope we will have a good luck in the following new year and realize all our dreams.
视野拓展
1.Festivals are becoming more and more commercial,with businesses taking advantage of the celebrations. Online shopping websites and social media apps have made it much easier for the public to spend more on gifts for their loved ones.
随着商家会利用庆祝活动(进行促销),节日变得越来越商业化了。在线购物网站和社交媒体应用程序极大地方便了人们为至亲至爱花更多钱购买礼物。
2.As the plane came down through the clouds,green fields and white houses came into sight.
当飞机穿过云层下降时,绿色的田野和白色的房屋映入眼帘。
3.Not only do teachers pass on knowledge to children,but they also teach children how to behave themselves.
老师不仅把知识传授给孩子们,还教孩子们如何做人。
英美文化
美篇导读
《格列佛游记》是英国作家乔纳森·斯威夫特创作的一部长篇游记体讽刺小说。作品通过描述主人公格列佛在小人国、大人国、飞岛国和慧骃国的奇遇,反映了18世纪前半期英国统治阶级的腐败和罪恶。
作者用丰富的讽刺手法和虚构的幻想写出了荒诞而离奇的情节,深刻地反映了当时的英国议会中毫无意义的党派斗争,统治集团的昏庸腐朽和唯利是图,对殖民战争的残酷暴戾进行了揭露和批判,同时它在一定程度上歌颂了殖民地人民反抗统治者的英勇斗争。
美篇呈现
Gulliver's Travels(Excerpt)
I was born in Nottinghamshire and was the third of five sons.My father was not a rich man,but he was able to send me to Cambridge University,where I studied for three years.When I left college,I continued my studies and became a doctor.But I always wanted to travel,and so I made several voyages as a ship's doctor.When I married my wife Mary,however,I planned to stay at home for a while.But after a few years I discovered I was not earning enough money from my patients.I decided to go to sea again,and this time I joined a ship sailing to the islands in the South Pacific Ocean.We started our journey from Bristol on May 4th,1699.
At first our voyage went well.We sailed across the Atlantic,round the coast of Africa and into the Indian Ocean.But before we could reach the Pacific,a violent① storm hit us and drove us to the north-west of Tasmania.The wind drove our ship on to a rock,which broke the ship in half.Some of the sailors and I managed to get a boat into the water,and we rowed② away to look for land.But when we were too tired to row any more,a great wave hit our small boat,and we all fell into the sea.I do not know what happened to my companions③,but I suppose they were all drowned④.
《格列佛游记》(节选)
我出生在诺丁汉郡,在五个孩子中排行第三。父亲并不富裕,不过还是能送我上剑桥大学,在那儿我学习了三年。我离开大学后继续深造,成为一名医生。可是我总想去旅行,就当了船医,出海了几次。然而,我娶了妻子玛丽后,计划在家待一段时间。可几年后,我发现从病人身上赚不了多少钱。我决定再次出海,这次我登上了开往南太平洋的轮船。我们于1699年5月4日从布里斯托尔启程。
起初航行很顺利。我们穿过大西洋,绕过非洲的海岸,进入印度洋。可是在我们抵达太平洋之前,暴风雨袭击了我们,我们被刮到塔斯马尼亚的西北边。暴风使我们的船撞上了礁石,被劈成两半。我和一些水手把救生艇放下水,划去寻找陆地。我们累得再也划不动时,一个巨浪掀翻了我们的小船,我们都落入海里。我不清楚我的同伴怎么样了,不过我猜他们都淹死了。
知识积累
①violent adj.猛烈的
②row vt. 划船
③companion n. 同伴
④drown vt. 淹死;淹没
文化链接
乔纳森·斯威夫特(Jonathan Swift,1667~1745)。英裔爱尔兰作家、政论家,世界上最伟大的讽
刺文学大师之一。他以讽刺作品名垂青史,代表作为《格列佛游记》。他的作品抨击豪绅和英国殖民主义政策,受到读者欢迎。他的讽刺小说影响更为深广,所以高尔基称他为“世界文学创造者之一”。
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