-备战2024年高考英语答题技巧与模板构建题型01 征文约稿(答题模板与解题技巧)(原卷板+解析版)

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题型01 征文约稿类
第一段 点名栏目、报刊、俱乐部、机构活动等约稿或征文的目的。
第二段 具体的写作内容和要求。如,活动介绍,交稿日期或地点等。
第三段 表达期待回复并表示感谢。
注意 应当分为三段表达使文章显得条理清晰,结构合理。注意避免时态、人称和数等语法错误。
【满分词汇模板】
单词 column栏目; introduce介绍; article文章; section部分; deadline截止日期; submit提交; concerning关于; share分享; publish出版;
短语 Invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事; be welcome to欢迎; be popular with受某人的欢迎; anything relevant任何相关内容; hand in上交; composition contest征文大赛;
【满分句型模板】
【满分作文模板】
Dear _________,
I’d like to ask you to write an article on____________(主题)for ____________ (某机构或媒体等).
The ____________ (某媒体)section provides a nice platform for _____________(媒体受众)to __________________ (某事). In this section there are a wide variety of materials available _____________(媒体受众). And here are some relevant details about the articles we are eager for.
First of all, not only can you write something at ______________ (细节一), but also you can focus on ________________ (细节二). What’s more, your article can have a title made up by yourself with a vocabulary of ________________ (数量)or so.
Last but not least, you are supposed to subscribe your article by ______________ (日期).I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
_______
【模板示例】
Dear Jim,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our English newspaper.
The “Foreign Culture” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students, which carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States And we would especially welcome article about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students would be fine. Could we have your article before October 1st.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【译文】
亲爱的吉姆:
我想请你为我们英文报纸写一篇文章。
我们报纸上的“外国文化”栏目在我们学生中很受欢迎。它的文章包括外国朋友写的关于他们国家的文化。你能写一些关于你的家乡美国那的文化吗?我们会非常期待关于美国人如何度过他们的假期和节日的文章,关于美国高中学生们的生活的内容也很好。我们可以在10月1号之前收到你的文章吗?
期待着你的回复。
你的朋友
李华
1.假如你是李华,你校英文报新开了“My Favorite Book”专栏,最近想邀请外国朋友投稿。请你给你的外国朋友David写一封信,向其约稿。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.栏目介绍;
3.稿件要求。
参考词汇:专栏 column
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
How are you doing I’m writing to invite you to contribute an article to our school English Paper.
The new column “my favorite book” in our Paper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by any student, including foreign friends, which give us a better understanding of popular books in different teenagers’ eyes. Would you please write an article about your favorite book as a recommendation We’d appreciate it if you could review the book within 300 words or so. At last, I’m wondering if we can have your article by July10
Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英文报新开了“My Favorite Book”专栏,最近想邀请外国朋友投稿。请你给你的外国朋友David写一封信,向其约稿。内容包括:1.写信目的;2.栏目介绍;3.稿件要求。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
给:give→offer
关于:about→concerning
大约:or so→about
最后:at last→in the end
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Would you please write an article about your favorite book as a recommendation
拓展句:Would you please write an article which is about your favorite book as a recommendation
【点睛】【高分句型1】It carries articles written by any student, including foreign friends, which give us a better understanding of popular books in different teenagers’ eyes. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】We’d appreciate it if you could review the book within 300 words or so. (运用了if引导的宾语从句)
2.假定你是校英文报编辑李华,你们的“Human and Nature”专栏拟刊登一篇主题为“wild animals”的文章。请你给校外教Mr Smith写信约稿,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.稿件内容及要求;
3.表达期待。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m Li Hua, an editor of the school English newspaper. I’m writing to ask you to contribute to our Human and Nature column.
The column, which provides a wide knowledge of nature, is popular with students. I wonder if you would like to write an article about wild animals for the column. You can write whatever is related to the topic within 400 words and send it to me before September 17. I would appreciate it if you could accept my request.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校外教Mr Smith写信,就校英文报拟刊登的一篇主题为“wild animals”的文章向他约稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供:provide→offer
想要做:would like to do→feel like doing
文章:article→passage
与……有关:be related to→be relevant to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, an editor of the school English newspaper.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is an editor of the school English newspaper.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The column, which provides a wide knowledge of nature, is popular with students.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】You can write whatever is related to the topic within 400 words and send it to me before September 17.(运用了whatever引导的宾语从句)
假定你是李华,是你校英文报增设的“职业规划”(Career Planning) 栏目的负责人,请给职业规划师David写一封邮件向他约稿,内容包括:
1. 栏目介绍;2. 稿件内容;3. 稿件长度:约800词;4. 交稿日期:6月2日前。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear David,
I hope this email finds you well. It’s my privilege to invite you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
Career planning is a newly added column with the aim of assisting us to get a better understanding of the job market. In that case, the article you write is intended to give us guidance on what qualities we should possess to meet the requirements of a wide range of jobs. Additionally, we would be more than grateful if you could offer us some tips on how we can get well-prepared for our future career. Furthermore, I think 800 words or so would be fine. Should it be possible, it couldn’t be better if you can submit your article before June 2nd.
Looking forward to your words of wisdom.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学校英文报“职业规划”(Career Planning) 栏目的负责人的身份给职业规划师David写一封邮件向他约稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸:privilege →honor
目的:aim →purpose
此外:additionally →in addition
感激的:grateful →thankful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Career planning is a newly added column with the aim of assisting us to get a better understanding of the job market.
拓展句:Career planning is a newly added column whose aim is to assist us to get a better understanding of the job market.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In that case, the article you write is intended to give us guidance on what qualities we should possess to meet the requirements of a wide range of jobs.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Should it be possible, it couldn’t be better if you can submit your article before June 2nd.(运用了倒装句和“否定词+比较级”句型结构)
4.假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:1.栏目介绍;2.稿件内容;3.稿件长度:约400词;4.交稿日期:6月28日前。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。写一封信给美国朋友彼得。
【详解】假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:1.栏目介绍。2.稿件内容;3.稿件长度:约400词汇 4.交稿日期:6月28日前天 注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯的;3.开头语已为你写好。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有:be popular among ; so long as;look forward to等。可以使用的衔接词:1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫,我们就很容易地行文了,文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】本文是一篇英文书信,格式正确,内容齐全,结构严谨,布局合理,运用高级句子。It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.使用一般现在时态的被动;And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.在这里how引导介词的宾语从句;Could we have your article before June 28 问句的运用很是巧妙。
5.假如你是李华,某英文报社正在举行主题为“我们的未来生活”的征文活动,请你给编辑写一篇征文稿,通过合理想象,展望未来的生活,要点如下:
1. 有的人会到月球上度假;
2. 某些科学家会在海底生活;
3. 通过网络在家工作。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I learned you are wanting articles on the theme of our future life. And I want to have a try
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to receiving your early reply.
Yours.
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear editor,
I learned you are wanting articles on the theme of our future life. And I want to have a try.
I am always dreaming about what life will be like in the future. It must be of high technology, much convenience, and high efficiency. With the development of science and technology, perhaps some people will go to the moon for a vacation by taking a spacecraft. Scientists have been committed to exploring the mystery of the sea for many years, they believe they will live under the sea one day. What’s more, because of the convenience of Internet, people can finish their work even without leaving their house. I think future life will be meaningful and colorful, and it will come true through our joint efforts.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生以“我们的未来生活”为主题,给某报社编辑投一篇稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
或许:perhaps→maybe
致力于:be committed to→be devoted to
由于:because of →due to
此外:what’s more →besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I think future life will be meaningful and colorful, and it will come true through our joint efforts.
拓展句:I think future life will be meaningful and colorful, which will come true through our joint efforts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am always dreaming about what life will be like in the future.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】With the development of science and technology, perhaps some people will go to the moon for a vacation by taking a spacecraft.(运用了with的复合结构)
6.假定你是校刊英语专栏Experiences Enlighten Us的负责人李华,请给外教Harry写邮件遨请他写一篇发生在自己身上的启发了自己的人生故事。内容包括:
1. 专栏简介;
2. 约稿内容;
3. 期待回复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Harry,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Harry,
How are you doing Recently, our school newspaper has started a column called Experiences Enlighten Us. The articles in this column are about life stories that have given us some inspiration. As a result, I am writing to ask you to write an article on it.
Here are some details about it. To begin with, you may describe the stories that have given you inspiration in your life or work. Besides, you can talk about the specific influence the story has on you. I have the confidence that everyone will like your article.
Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer. I’m looking forward to your reply and your article.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Harry写封邮件,遨请他写一篇发生在自己身上的启发了自己的人生故事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近:recently→lately
另外:besides→moreover
影响:influence→impact
因此:as a result→as a consequence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Recently, our school newspaper has started a column called Experiences Enlighten Us.
拓展句:Recently, our school newspaper has started a column which is called Experiences Enlighten Us.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The articles in this column are about life stories that have given us some inspiration. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] To begin with, you may describe the stories that have given you inspiration in your life or work. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
7.假设你是阳光中学英语校报的小记者李华。校报主编向你约稿,报道今天刚刚开幕的校运会。要点如下: 1.运动会的时间和地点;
2.参与人员及其项目;
3.对运动会的看法。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The school sports meeting, which lasts three days, began on the playground at 8 this morning.
All the students and teachers are taking an active part in it. Athletes from each class are challenging their limits in track and field competitions like the high jump, distance races and so on. Crowds of audience gather around the venues, watching and cheering for the athletes. Volunteers are organized to keep order and offer help wherever it is needed.
The sports meeting is definitely a meaningful event because it not only inspires us to build up our physical strength but also promotes social and emotional skills. At last, best wishes for everyone out there!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于今天刚刚开幕的校运会,校报主编向你约稿这一情况,做出报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
积极参加:take an active part in→ participate in actively
激励,鼓励:inspires→ encourages
增强:build up→ enhance
提供:offer→ provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Volunteers are organized to keep order and offer help wherever it is needed.
拓展句:Volunteers are organized to keep order so that they can offer help wherever it is needed.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The school sports meeting, which lasts three days, began on the playground at 8 this morning.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The sports meeting is definitely a meaningful event because it not only inspires us to build up our physical strength but also promotes social and emotional skills.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句。)
8.假定你是李华,你校英文报将刊登以“Body Language”为主题的文章。请给你的外国朋友Jack写一封邮件向他约稿,内容包括:
1. 稿件内容;
2. 稿件长度;
3. 交稿时间。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jack,
How are you doing I’d like to invite you to write an article for our school’s English magazine.
In order to make us students have a better understanding of body language in different countries, we are going to cover some articles about body language. I wonder if you could write something concerning what is body language as well as the implications in different cultures. You can write anything relevant so long as students can appreciate the art of non-verbal humour. 350 words would be fine. Could we have your article before next Friday
Looking forward to your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英文报将刊登以“Body Language”为主题的文章,要求考生给外国朋友Jack写一封邮件向他约稿,内容包括稿件的内容、长度以及交稿时间。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不同的:different →various
想知道:wonder →want to know
关于:concerning →with regard to
相关的:relevant →related
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to make us students have a better understanding of body language in different countries, we are going to cover some articles about body language.
拓展句:We are going to cover some articles about body language, which is aimed at making us students have a better understanding of body language in different countries.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I wonder if you could write something concerning what is body language as well as the implications in different cultures.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句和what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】You can write anything relevant so long as students can appreciate the art of non-verbal humour.(运用了so long as引导的条件状语从句)题型01 征文约稿类
第一段 点名栏目、报刊、俱乐部、机构活动等约稿或征文的目的。
第二段 具体的写作内容和要求。如,活动介绍,交稿日期或地点等。
第三段 表达期待回复并表示感谢。
注意 应当分为三段表达使文章显得条理清晰,结构合理。注意避免时态、人称和数等语法错误。
【满分词汇模板】
单词 栏目__________; 介绍__________; 文章__________; 部分__________; 截止日期__________; 提交__________; 关于__________; 分享__________; 出版__________;
短语 邀请某人做某事__________; 欢迎__________; 受某人的欢迎__________; 任何相关内容__________; 上交__________; 征文大赛__________;
【满分句型模板】
【满分作文模板】
Dear _________,
I’d like to ask you to write an article on____________(主题)for ____________ (某机构或媒体等).
The ____________ (某媒体)section provides a nice platform for _____________(媒体受众)to __________________ (某事). In this section there are a wide variety of materials available _____________(媒体受众). And here are some relevant details about the articles we are eager for.
First of all, not only can you write something at ______________ (细节一), but also you can focus on ________________ (细节二). What’s more, your article can have a title made up by yourself with a vocabulary of ________________ (数量)or so.
Last but not least, you are supposed to subscribe your article by ______________ (日期).I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
_______
【模板示例】
Dear Jim,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our English newspaper.
The “Foreign Culture” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students, which carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States And we would especially welcome article about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students would be fine. Could we have your article before October 1st.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【译文】
亲爱的吉姆:
我想请你为我们英文报纸写一篇文章。
我们报纸上的“外国文化”栏目在我们学生中很受欢迎。它的文章包括外国朋友写的关于他们国家的文化。你能写一些关于你的家乡美国那的文化吗?我们会非常期待关于美国人如何度过他们的假期和节日的文章,关于美国高中学生们的生活的内容也很好。我们可以在10月1号之前收到你的文章吗?
期待着你的回复。
你的朋友
李华
1.假如你是李华,你校英文报新开了“My Favorite Book”专栏,最近想邀请外国朋友投稿。请你给你的外国朋友David写一封信,向其约稿。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.栏目介绍;
3.稿件要求。
参考词汇:专栏 column
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
How are you doing I’m writing to invite you to contribute an article to our school English Paper.
The new column “my favorite book” in our Paper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by any student, including foreign friends, which give us a better understanding of popular books in different teenagers’ eyes. Would you please write an article about your favorite book as a recommendation We’d appreciate it if you could review the book within 300 words or so. At last, I’m wondering if we can have your article by July10
Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英文报新开了“My Favorite Book”专栏,最近想邀请外国朋友投稿。请你给你的外国朋友David写一封信,向其约稿。内容包括:1.写信目的;2.栏目介绍;3.稿件要求。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
给:give→offer
关于:about→concerning
大约:or so→about
最后:at last→in the end
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Would you please write an article about your favorite book as a recommendation
拓展句:Would you please write an article which is about your favorite book as a recommendation
【点睛】【高分句型1】It carries articles written by any student, including foreign friends, which give us a better understanding of popular books in different teenagers’ eyes. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】We’d appreciate it if you could review the book within 300 words or so. (运用了if引导的宾语从句)
2.假定你是校英文报编辑李华,你们的“Human and Nature”专栏拟刊登一篇主题为“wild animals”的文章。请你给校外教Mr Smith写信约稿,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.稿件内容及要求;
3.表达期待。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m Li Hua, an editor of the school English newspaper. I’m writing to ask you to contribute to our Human and Nature column.
The column, which provides a wide knowledge of nature, is popular with students. I wonder if you would like to write an article about wild animals for the column. You can write whatever is related to the topic within 400 words and send it to me before September 17. I would appreciate it if you could accept my request.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校外教Mr Smith写信,就校英文报拟刊登的一篇主题为“wild animals”的文章向他约稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供:provide→offer
想要做:would like to do→feel like doing
文章:article→passage
与……有关:be related to→be relevant to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, an editor of the school English newspaper.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is an editor of the school English newspaper.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The column, which provides a wide knowledge of nature, is popular with students.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】You can write whatever is related to the topic within 400 words and send it to me before September 17.(运用了whatever引导的宾语从句)
假定你是李华,是你校英文报增设的“职业规划”(Career Planning) 栏目的负责人,请给职业规划师David写一封邮件向他约稿,内容包括:
1. 栏目介绍;2. 稿件内容;3. 稿件长度:约800词;4. 交稿日期:6月2日前。
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【答案】
Dear David,
I hope this email finds you well. It’s my privilege to invite you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
Career planning is a newly added column with the aim of assisting us to get a better understanding of the job market. In that case, the article you write is intended to give us guidance on what qualities we should possess to meet the requirements of a wide range of jobs. Additionally, we would be more than grateful if you could offer us some tips on how we can get well-prepared for our future career. Furthermore, I think 800 words or so would be fine. Should it be possible, it couldn’t be better if you can submit your article before June 2nd.
Looking forward to your words of wisdom.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学校英文报“职业规划”(Career Planning) 栏目的负责人的身份给职业规划师David写一封邮件向他约稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸:privilege →honor
目的:aim →purpose
此外:additionally →in addition
感激的:grateful →thankful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Career planning is a newly added column with the aim of assisting us to get a better understanding of the job market.
拓展句:Career planning is a newly added column whose aim is to assist us to get a better understanding of the job market.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In that case, the article you write is intended to give us guidance on what qualities we should possess to meet the requirements of a wide range of jobs.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Should it be possible, it couldn’t be better if you can submit your article before June 2nd.(运用了倒装句和“否定词+比较级”句型结构)
4.假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:1.栏目介绍;2.稿件内容;3.稿件长度:约400词;4.交稿日期:6月28日前。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.
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【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。写一封信给美国朋友彼得。
【详解】假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:1.栏目介绍。2.稿件内容;3.稿件长度:约400词汇 4.交稿日期:6月28日前天 注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯的;3.开头语已为你写好。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有:be popular among ; so long as;look forward to等。可以使用的衔接词:1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫,我们就很容易地行文了,文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】本文是一篇英文书信,格式正确,内容齐全,结构严谨,布局合理,运用高级句子。It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.使用一般现在时态的被动;And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.在这里how引导介词的宾语从句;Could we have your article before June 28 问句的运用很是巧妙。
5.假如你是李华,某英文报社正在举行主题为“我们的未来生活”的征文活动,请你给编辑写一篇征文稿,通过合理想象,展望未来的生活,要点如下:
1. 有的人会到月球上度假;
2. 某些科学家会在海底生活;
3. 通过网络在家工作。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I learned you are wanting articles on the theme of our future life. And I want to have a try
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I'm looking forward to receiving your early reply.
Yours.
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear editor,
I learned you are wanting articles on the theme of our future life. And I want to have a try.
I am always dreaming about what life will be like in the future. It must be of high technology, much convenience, and high efficiency. With the development of science and technology, perhaps some people will go to the moon for a vacation by taking a spacecraft. Scientists have been committed to exploring the mystery of the sea for many years, they believe they will live under the sea one day. What’s more, because of the convenience of Internet, people can finish their work even without leaving their house. I think future life will be meaningful and colorful, and it will come true through our joint efforts.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生以“我们的未来生活”为主题,给某报社编辑投一篇稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
或许:perhaps→maybe
致力于:be committed to→be devoted to
由于:because of →due to
此外:what’s more →besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I think future life will be meaningful and colorful, and it will come true through our joint efforts.
拓展句:I think future life will be meaningful and colorful, which will come true through our joint efforts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am always dreaming about what life will be like in the future.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】With the development of science and technology, perhaps some people will go to the moon for a vacation by taking a spacecraft.(运用了with的复合结构)
6.假定你是校刊英语专栏Experiences Enlighten Us的负责人李华,请给外教Harry写邮件遨请他写一篇发生在自己身上的启发了自己的人生故事。内容包括:
1. 专栏简介;
2. 约稿内容;
3. 期待回复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Harry,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Harry,
How are you doing Recently, our school newspaper has started a column called Experiences Enlighten Us. The articles in this column are about life stories that have given us some inspiration. As a result, I am writing to ask you to write an article on it.
Here are some details about it. To begin with, you may describe the stories that have given you inspiration in your life or work. Besides, you can talk about the specific influence the story has on you. I have the confidence that everyone will like your article.
Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer. I’m looking forward to your reply and your article.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Harry写封邮件,遨请他写一篇发生在自己身上的启发了自己的人生故事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近:recently→lately
另外:besides→moreover
影响:influence→impact
因此:as a result→as a consequence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Recently, our school newspaper has started a column called Experiences Enlighten Us.
拓展句:Recently, our school newspaper has started a column which is called Experiences Enlighten Us.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The articles in this column are about life stories that have given us some inspiration. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] To begin with, you may describe the stories that have given you inspiration in your life or work. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
7.假设你是阳光中学英语校报的小记者李华。校报主编向你约稿,报道今天刚刚开幕的校运会。要点如下: 1.运动会的时间和地点;
2.参与人员及其项目;
3.对运动会的看法。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
The school sports meeting, which lasts three days, began on the playground at 8 this morning.
All the students and teachers are taking an active part in it. Athletes from each class are challenging their limits in track and field competitions like the high jump, distance races and so on. Crowds of audience gather around the venues, watching and cheering for the athletes. Volunteers are organized to keep order and offer help wherever it is needed.
The sports meeting is definitely a meaningful event because it not only inspires us to build up our physical strength but also promotes social and emotional skills. At last, best wishes for everyone out there!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于今天刚刚开幕的校运会,校报主编向你约稿这一情况,做出报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
积极参加:take an active part in→ participate in actively
激励,鼓励:inspires→ encourages
增强:build up→ enhance
提供:offer→ provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Volunteers are organized to keep order and offer help wherever it is needed.
拓展句:Volunteers are organized to keep order so that they can offer help wherever it is needed.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The school sports meeting, which lasts three days, began on the playground at 8 this morning.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The sports meeting is definitely a meaningful event because it not only inspires us to build up our physical strength but also promotes social and emotional skills.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句。)
8.假定你是李华,你校英文报将刊登以“Body Language”为主题的文章。请给你的外国朋友Jack写一封邮件向他约稿,内容包括:
1. 稿件内容;
2. 稿件长度;
3. 交稿时间。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jack,
How are you doing I’d like to invite you to write an article for our school’s English magazine.
In order to make us students have a better understanding of body language in different countries, we are going to cover some articles about body language. I wonder if you could write something concerning what is body language as well as the implications in different cultures. You can write anything relevant so long as students can appreciate the art of non-verbal humour. 350 words would be fine. Could we have your article before next Friday
Looking forward to your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英文报将刊登以“Body Language”为主题的文章,要求考生给外国朋友Jack写一封邮件向他约稿,内容包括稿件的内容、长度以及交稿时间。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不同的:different →various
想知道:wonder →want to know
关于:concerning →with regard to
相关的:relevant →related
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to make us students have a better understanding of body language in different countries, we are going to cover some articles about body language.
拓展句:We are going to cover some articles about body language, which is aimed at making us students have a better understanding of body language in different countries.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I wonder if you could write something concerning what is body language as well as the implications in different cultures.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句和what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】You can write anything relevant so long as students can appreciate the art of non-verbal humour.(运用了so long as引导的条件状语从句)