2024年人教版九年级英语备战中考书面表达专练（2）含解析

2024人教版九年级英语备战中考书面表达专练（2）
题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达：本大题共10小题，共150分。
1.你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题（theme）为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.—11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Center
Activities …
Purpose …
注意：
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右（邮件的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.假设你是赵凯，你的英国笔友Frank对中国文化很感兴趣，尤其是对中国传统节日元宵节。请你根据下面表格提示，用英语写一封电子邮件，介绍一下元宵节。
The Lantern Festival
When On the 15th day of the first lunar month
What to eat sweet dumplings
What to do ◆guess lantern riddles (猜灯谜) ◆set off fireworks (放烟花)
要求：（1）内容必须包含所给的要点，可以适当地发挥；
（2）80词左右。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.闲置旧书占用空间，有些人会把它们扔掉或者当废纸卖掉。其实，绝大部分闲置旧书可以循环阅读。让我们一起想办法让旧书继续发挥它们的价值吧!请你根据提示和要求，写一篇英语倡议书和同学们分享恰当处理旧书的办法。
提示：
如何处理闲置旧书◆送给低年级的学生或亲戚、朋友；
◆赠送给贫困学生；
◆在学校开展旧书回收项目；
◆……
要求：
（ 1）提示要点齐全，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；
（ 2）表述准确，语言通顺，书写规范，卷面整洁；
（ 3）文中不得出现答题者真实的校名和人名；4、80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇： .
亲戚 relatives；旧书回收项目old book recycling program；充分利用 make full use of
Dear Classmates，
As we all know，old books really take up much room.But some of them are still worth reading.There is no need to throw them away.
__________________
4.良好的家庭关系对青少年的健康成长很重要。但现实生活中，不少孩子和父母之间缺乏必要的沟通和交流。作为晚辈，我们应该如何和父母友好相处呢？请根据下面的提示，以"How to get on well with our parents？"为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示：
（1）每天花些时间，与父母谈谈老师、同学和学校的事；
（2）每周至少跟父母一起做件事，比如做饭、逛商店等；
（3）遇事多与父母讨论，他们会帮你更好地解决问题。
参考词汇：communicate with，talk about，make dinner，go shopping，improve，discuss...with，better ways，……
要求：
（1）参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（4）词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
How to get on well with our parents？ For teenagers，it's important to get on well with our parents.
5.假设你叫李明，你打算向某学生英文网站投稿，分享你做过的一个有趣的梦。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文。
注意：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
（2）不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名；
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
An Interesting Dream
By Li Ming
I have an interesting dream to share with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
6.假定你是李华，你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频，打算做成视频日志（vlog），参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。
内容包括：
1. 海边活动：
下午：①沙滩排球；②……；
晚上：搭帐篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享会。
2. 活动感言。
注意：
1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：冲浪surf 帐篷tent
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. It's my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thank you.
7.假如你是李明，你校正在举办英语读书节活动，你在参与的过程中遇到一些困难，请给你的朋友Amy写一封邮件向她求助。内容要点如下：
活动情况介绍 活动的内容和意义
遇到的困难 没有足够的书；不擅长英语
请求帮助的事 推荐适合的书；……

要求：词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数
Dear Amy,
How is everything going
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
8.提示：每个人都有梦想，请以“I Want to Be a/an ______”为题，写一篇英语短文，说一说你的梦想是什么。
要求：
1)补全并抄写题目，用英语写一篇不少于 70 词的短文；
2)书写规范，卷面整洁，内容连贯；
3)可展开合理想象，做适当发挥；
4)文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计；
5)短文必须写在答题卡上，如在试题卷上作答，一律不得分。
9.Make a Change
提示：世界是美好的，但很多时候总有些事情不如人意。如果你想改变世界，就先改变自己。
请以“Make a Change”为题写一篇英语短文，叙述你做出的一次改变以及你的感悟。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.________ Makes Me Happy
提示：在你的学习生活中，一定做过很多让自己感到幸福快乐的事，如帮助别人、读书、志愿服务等。请以“________ Makes Me Happy”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你做某件事的经历和感受。
要求：
1. 补全题目，用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文；
2. 语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁；
3. 文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计；
4. 短文必须写在答题卡上，如在试题卷上作答，一律不得分。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案和解析
1.【答案】Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday. Let me introduce something about the activity to you.
①The theme of the activity is "Healthy You and Me", and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. It will be held in the Sports Center. There are many interesting activities. First, there will be a sports history show. It will be held in our school hall. Besides, "Healthy You and Me" speech will be on, too. If you want to take part, please let us know before this Friday. There will be different kinds of after-school exercise classes, such as football, basketball, tennis and so on. You can choose the one you like.
②The main purpose is to increase students' interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively. I am looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文写作。话题是你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题（theme）为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。注意表述清楚，有条理。注意词汇时态等的合理运用。
【结构布局】
引言：表明写作意图，引出对活动的重点介绍；
中心：具体阐述写作内容；
结尾：介绍活动的目的并期望回复；
【亮点词汇】
①introduce...to...介绍……给……
②different kinds of各种不同的
③look forward to期待
【高分句型】
①The theme of the activity is "Healthy You and Me", and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. （and连接并列句）
②The main purpose is to increase students' interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively.（不定式结构作表语和宾语补足语）
2.【答案】 Dear Frank,
How are you I'd like to introduce the Lantern Festival to you.
Chinese people celebrate it on the 15th day of the first lunar month and it means the end of the Spring Festival.① Usually, Chinese people eat a kind of special food called sweet dumplings. ②On that day, people go out to watch colorful lanterns and guess lantern riddles with their family members. At night, people also set off fireworks for fun. It's really interesting.
I like the Lantern Festival very much. Could you tell me some interesting festivals in your country I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhao Kai
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇提纲作文，话题为介绍元宵节。写作时，时态以一般现在时进行写作，人称代词要以第一人称和第三人称为主，必须确保要点齐全，句子通顺。
【亮点词汇】
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②go out外出
③look forward to期待
【高分句型】
①Usually, Chinese people eat a kind of special food called sweet dumplings（过去分词短语作后置定语。）
②On that day, people go out to watch colorful lanterns and guess lantern riddles with their family members.（不定式作目的状语）
【结构布局】
引言：直入主题，介绍主题元宵节
中心：详细地介绍元宵节的时间，人们吃的食物及具体的活动
结尾：元宵节的感受及期待对方介绍他的国家的传统节日
3.【答案】Dear Classmates，
As we all know，old books really take up much room.But some of them are still worth reading.There is no need to throw them away.
We know that a book is a recyclable item and that it is made from trees and so on. 【高分句型一】So it's very important.Old books may be of little use to some people，but they are still very useful to others，so we can give old books to lower grade students or relatives and friends. （送给低年级的学生或亲戚、朋友）We can also give it to poor students.（赠送给贫困学生） Finally，we have to start a recycling program for old books in schools and give them to people in need. （在学校开展旧书回收项目）I hope that we can act together to make old books play a greater value.【高分句型二】
【解析】【高分句型一】
We know that a book is a recyclable item and that it is made from trees and so on.我们知道书是一种可回收的物品，它是由树木等制成的。that+宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
I hope that we can act together to make old books play a greater value.希望我们一起行动起来，让旧书发挥更大的价值。that+宾语从句。
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
4.【答案】How to get on well with our parents？ For teenagers，it's important to get on well with our parents..But how can we get along well with our parents？Here is some of my advice.
Firstly，we should understand and respect our parents.Parents talk much because they care about us.We are supposed to listen to them.When we want to tell them our opinions，we'd better be in a polite way.【高分句型一】（主动交流：每天花些时间，与父母谈谈老师、同学和学校的事）In addition，we should also talk with them about our happiness and tell them about our problems.When we are in trouble，we can discuss these questions with our parents.（讨论问题：遇事多与父母讨论，他们会帮你更好地解决问题）In the end，when we are free，we'd better help them do some things at least once a week，such as cleaning the room，washing dishes.（主动帮忙：每周至少做一次家务活，比如整理房间、洗碗等）
Let's get on well with our parents because they are our parents.【高分句型二】
【解析】【高分句型一】
When we want to tell them our opinions，we'd better be in a polite way.当我们想告诉他们我们的意见时，我们最好用礼貌的方式。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Let's get on well with our parents because they are our parents.让我们和父母好好相处，因为他们是我们的父母。祈使句。
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
5.【答案】An Interesting Dream
By Li Ming
I have an interesting dream to share with you. In my dream, I became a scientist. The reason why I had this dream may be because I participated in Science Week activities. It had a positive impact on me, as it made me more interested in science.
①In my dream, I was conducting experiments in a laboratory and discovering new things that could help improve the world. ②Although it was just a dream, it has inspired me to pursue a career in science and make a difference in the world.
I am grateful for the Science Week event for sparking my interest in this field.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
【结构布局】
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己的梦境；
第二步，具体阐述做梦的可能原因；
第三步，最后介绍这个梦对自己积极的影响。
【亮点词汇】
①participate in参与
②have a positive impact on对……有积极的影响
③inspire sb to do激励某人做某事
【高分句型】
①In my dream, I was conducting experiments in a laboratory and discovering new things that could help improve the world.（that引导的定语从句）
②Although it was just a dream, it has inspired me to pursue a career in science and make a difference in the world.（although引导的让步状语从句）
6.【答案】 Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. lt's my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, we had a beach volleyball game. Then, we enjoyed the fun of surfing in the sea. Before dark, we picked up the litter on the beach. ①How meaningful it was! At night, we put up two tents and had a picnic. ②The food cooked by us was so delicious. Finally, all of us shared our feelings about this fantastic experience. ③Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience.
So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it.
Thank you.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
①题材：本文是一篇解说词，属于应用文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
【结构布局】
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示的要点介绍在海边的活动，包括下午和晚上的具体活动，要列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。
【亮点词汇】
①pick up the litter捡垃圾
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
【高分句型】
①How meaningful it was!（how引导的感叹句）
②The food cooked by us was so delicious.（过去分词作定语）
③Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience.（部分倒装）
7.【答案】Dear Amy,
How is everything going
Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I'm very interested in it. ①There are many different activities in the festival such as reading good English books and sharing good stories.②It's a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don't have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I'm not so good at English. I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading
I expect to hear from you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，写邮件就自己参加英语读书节活动遇到的困难向朋友求助。
【写作步骤】
第一步，介绍学校的英语读书节活动的内容及意义；
第二步，告知对方自己遇到的困难并寻求对方的帮助；
第三步，期待收到回信。
【亮点词汇】
①be interested in 对……感兴趣
②such as 例如
③for example 例如
④be good at 擅长
⑤have trouble in doing sth. 做某事有困难
【高分句型】
①There are many different activities in the festival such as reading good English books and sharing good stories.（There be句型）
②It's a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures.（it固定句式）
8.【答案】I want to be an English teacher
Have you ever thought about your future job Maybe you'd like to be a police officer A doctor A scientist For me, my dream job is to be an English teacher.
Why do I want to be an English teacher when I grow up Because I'm good at English and I like it a lot. ①Learning English makes me very happy, and speaking English makes me confident.
But I need to learn more to be an English teacher. I should make an effort to study English every day. Sometimes I make mistakes in speaking and writing, so I have to do more English exercises. In addition, I will try my best to be a good teacher and make my class interesting.
② I'm sure that if I put my heart into it, my dream will come true.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
①题材：本文是一篇命题作文；
②时态：本文时态应以一般现在时、一般将来时为主；
③提示：写作时围绕主题展开叙述，注意时态的交替使用，确保语句通顺，逻辑清晰，无单词、语法错误。
【结构布局】
第一步：补全题目，引出本文主题，介绍自己的梦想
第二步：具体说明怎样实现梦想
第三步：表达期望
【亮点词汇】
①confident 自信的
②spare an effort to do sth. 努力做某事
③make mistakes 犯错误
【高分句型】
①Learning English makes me very happy, and speaking English makes me confident.（动名词短语作主语）
②I'm sure that if I put my heart into it, my dream will come true.（that引导的宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句）
9.【答案】Make a Change
It is important for us to make a change when things don't fit us, so that we can get better and better. I still remembered what had happened on the day of an English speech contest.
Before getting on the stage, everyone was so nervous that they kept mumbling their speeches to get themselves well-prepared. But I felt very confident since I had won many awards in such contests before. I didn't do anything and just waited on my seat. ①However, when it was my turn to give the speech, my mind suddenly went blank and I totally forgot what I was going to say. The terrible experience made me realize something. From that day on, I made a change. ② I know under no circumstances should I be overconfident. Practice makes perfect and being humble and hungry is always the best policy.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
时态：叙事部分时态为“一般过去时”；感悟部分时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点给出了两个，叙述经历以及谈谈感悟，注意叙事部分是写作重心，且要突出变化。
【结构布局】
第一步：引出“变化”这个主题；
第二步：描写自己的经历，突出前后的变化；
第三步：文章结尾，谈谈自己做出变化的感悟。
【亮点词汇】
① get oneself well-prepared 让自己做好充分准备
② go blank 变得空白
③ from that day on 从那天起
【高分句型】
① However, when it was my turn to give the speech, my mind suddenly went blank and I totally forgot what I was going to say.（when引导的时间状语从句及what引导的宾语从句）
② I know under no circumstances should I be overconfident.（部分倒装句型）
10.【答案】Helping Others Makes Me Happy
Helping others makes me happy. I enjoy it.
I went to the old people's home with my classmates last month. We cleaned their rooms and read them the newspaper. We called them grandpa or grandma. Some of my classmates talked with them and asked them to tell us their stories. Their stories were very interesting. ①Seeing their smiling faces, I felt happy and proud.
②I think helping others is a great thing. It makes me a happy person and it makes the world a better place.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
题材：本文是一篇命题作文
时态：时态应以一般现在时、一般过去时为主
提示：写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯
【结构布局】
第一步：补全题目，点名本文主旨
第二步：具体阐述事件的经过或某次经历
第三步：表达感想
【亮点词汇】
①talk with sb. 和某人交谈
②ask sb. to do sth. 让某人做某事
【高分句型】
①Seeing their smiling faces, I felt happy and proud.（现在分词作状语）
②I think helping others is a great thing.（省略that的宾语从句；动名词作主语）
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