2024届高考英语二轮读后续写专题复习高级句子结构模型例析 练习（无答案）

高级句子结构模型例析(读后续写篇)
四种高级句子结构的基本模型：
1.状语+简单句 2.简单句+状语 3.状语+简单句+状语 4.简单句,+定从
当然,实际运用中,可以在这四种基本模型的基础上进行灵活的组合。
●句型 1：Doing/Done... (状语),+简单句
doing作状语，逻辑主语与句子的主语一致，构成主动关系；有时可以在doing前加before, after,
while等; 但如果是被动关系,使用过去分词done作状语。例如：
1._____________________ in her eyes, Ms. Johnson encouraged her to take just one step.
看到她眼中的恐惧,约翰逊女士鼓励她只往前走一步.
Seeing the terror
2._____________________________,I was instantly seized by disappointment.
听到她说的话,我立刻感到失望。
Hearing what she said
3.______________ the kidnapper’s car __________,the kids could do nothing but keep stamping
their feet wildly.
看着绑匪的车消失了,孩子们什么也做不了,只能不停地使劲跺脚。
Watching;vanished
4.___________________________,she had no idea how to cope with the terrible
situation.
Feeling unbearably cold and exhausted
感到难以忍受的寒冷和疲惫,她不知道如何应付这种可怕的局面。
5._____________________, he said, "That's wonderful! I'm going to design programs myself!"
Clapping his hands
他拍着手说,太棒了!我要自己设计项目.
6. ___________________________, the man walked away quickly.
那人无视她的话,很快走开了。
Ignoring her words
7.________________________________________, she could not say a word.
她沉浸在强烈的恐惧感中,一句话也说不出来。
Immersed in a strong sense of fear
8.____________________________,John didn't notice evening approaching.
约翰全神贯注地画画,没有注意到晚上快到了。
Absorbed in painting
9.___________________________ on the farm,we jumped and cheered with joy.
沐浴在农场的阳光下,我们高兴地跳起来欢呼。
Bathed in the sunshine
10.__________________ ,she can do nothing but burst into tears, helpless and disappointed.
被困在雾中,她什么也做不了,只能放声大哭,感到无助和失望。
Trapped in the fog
●句型2:简单句... ,doing/done...(状语)
doing作伴随状语,与句子的谓语动词同时发生,逻辑主语与句子的主语一致,构成主动关系;该句
型可以以并列谓语的形式出现，转换为：主+谓...and 谓...; 如果是被动关系，应该使用过去
分词done作伴随状语。例如：
1.Before the police,he drooped his head,__________________________.
在警察面前,他低下头,无助地叹了口气.
sighing helplessly
2“There!There!”the father sprang to his feet and dashed towards the boy, _________________.
“好啦,好啦!”父亲跳起身来,向男孩冲去,把他紧紧抱在怀里。
Holding him into his arms tightly
3.However,another voice __________,_________him to give it back to Fahad,_________
made him torn.
然而,另一个声音突然出现,催促他把它还给法哈德,这让他左右为难.
popped up;urging;which
4.Mildred chewed on her bottom lip,___________________,and then nodded.
MIldred咬着下唇,一直眨着眼睛,然后点了点头.
blinking all the time
5.Her father was lying on his back, _________________ the truck.
trapped under
她父亲仰面躺着，被困在卡车下面。
6.Bitter memories of the man's harsh words came _______________ to her.
她又痛苦地想起了那个男人刺耳的话。
flooding back
7.It was Rough Lock, _____________________.
是Rough Lock,全身湿透了。
soaked all over
●句型3:简单句 , +主语 + doing/done (独立主格结构作状语)...
或主语+ doing/done (独立主格结构作状语), + 简单句...
1.________________ and ________________,nervousness nibbled(啃) at her.
膝盖摇晃,手掌出汗,紧张使她感到不安。
Knees wobbling;palms sweating
2.Li lifted up her eyes and nodded her head in rapture,eyes _______________________
李抬起眼神,高兴地点了点头,两个眼睛像相惜闪烁的星星闪闪发亮。
glistening like twinkling stars
3.____________________________ through her,mom kissed the two sisters gently.
妈妈身上洋溢着幸福和温暖,她温柔地亲了两姐妹.
A surge of happiness and warmth running
4.__________________________,visiting hours would end.
时钟滴答作响,探视时间即将结束。
The clock ticking
5._____________________________ in the room,the two sisters immersed themselves in
the beauty of the music.
欢快的歌声飘荡在房间里,两姐妹沉浸在音乐的美妙中。
Cheerful singing floating
6.Mom silently watched us, ______________________ in her eyes.
妈妈默默地看着我们,眼里闪烁着喜悦。
joy glittering
7.Harmony pervaded弥漫/filled the whole room ,___________________________.
整个房间充满了和谐,我们脸上充满喜悦。
joy written on our faces
8.“Don't stand in my way,”Tim yelled out, his voice ______________________________.
=“Don't stand in my way,”Tim yelled out, and his voice ___________________________.
“别挡我的道,”蒂姆喊道,他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
quivering with rage;was quivering with rage
9.My heart (being) cold with fear,I felt_____________________.
我的心因恐惧而冰冷,我感到很绝望。
hopeless and desperate
10.They turned to me,_______________________on their faces.
他们转向我,一脸困惑。
confusion mapped/written
●句型4:简单句+with的复合结构(状语）或with的复合结构(状语)，+简单句
1.”We made it!”,they exclaimed ________________________ the soccer field.”
“我们成功了!”他们大声喊道,笑声在足球场上回荡.
With laughters lingering around
2._______________________the trees turn yellow and some birds fly south.(with结构)，
=_______________________the trees turn yellow and some birds fly south.(独立主格)
随着冬天到来,树叶变黄了,小鸟们飞去南方。
With winter approaching;Winter approaching
3.The girl sits there with her eyes ___________________ on the wall.
女孩坐在那里,眼睛盯着墙上。
with her eyes fixed
4.He was shocked _______________________.
他睁大了眼睛,惊呆了。
with his eyes wide open
5.The boy is smiling ___________________________.
男孩手里拿着一本书和一支铅笔,面带着微笑。
with a book and a pencil in his hand
6.The child is crying with tears ________________________________.
with tears streaming down his face
这孩子哭得泪流满面。
7.He rushed to the room with his heart _____________________ and his face flushing.
他冲进房间,心砰砰跳,脸发红。
with his heart beating/thumping/thudding wildly
8.His wife was in deep sorrow , __________________________________.
他的妻子悲痛万分,她的眼里充满了泪水。
with her eyes filled/brimming with tears
●句型5:表情感类的形容词(状语) , +简单句...
或简单句 +, 表情感类的形容词(状语）
情感类的形容词在句中作状语,说明主语的情感状态,可以转化为Feeling +adj, 主+谓...。
有时可以放在句后:主+谓...，+表情感类的形容词。例如：
1.__________________________, Jane lay down near a stone, missing her family.
简又累又怕,躺在一块石头旁边,想念着她的家人。
Exhausted and scared
2.And then they jumped, laughed and screamed, totally ________________ the people
passing by.
然后他们跳着，笑着，叫着，全然不觉过往的行人。
unaware of
3.______________________, she waved her hands, trying to attract others' attention.
她既热切又兴奋,挥动双手,想引起别人的注意。
Eager and excited
4.To Annie's delight, surrounded by his classmates, Mark seemed like a rock star,
________________________.
令安妮高兴的是,在同学们的簇拥下,马克看起来像一个摇滚明星,开心又自豪。
cheerful and proud
●句型6:方式副词(状语)，+简单句...
方式副词在句中作状语，修饰谓语动词，一般放在宾语后，但有时根据需要可以放在句首，
有时放在实义动词前。例如：
1._______________, I washed the dish, __________________.
我不情愿地洗了盘子,感到不耐烦。
Reluctantly;feeling impatient
2.Helen spoke clearly,_____________________.
海伦讲话的声音清晰、缓慢而且洪亮。
slowly and loudly
3.________________________,he asked Lee to teach him how to drive.
他礼貌而兴奋地请Lee教他开车。
Politely and excitedly
4, And_______________(amaze), the boys recovered soon.
令人惊讶的是,这些男孩不久就康复了。
amazingly
5.________________(fortune), the cat was still alive, ___________________.
幸运的是,这只猫虽然受了重伤,但还活着。
Fortunately;though badly injured
6.______________, I _________the small package and what came into my view was the dream
present I had wanted for ages -----a camera!
我小心翼翼地打开了小包裹,我看到的是我多年来一直想要的梦想礼物----- 一台照相机.
Gingerly;unwrapped
7.______________, I _________________, making up my mind to give her a new doll as a toy.
立刻我就深受感动了,下定决心给她一个新娃娃。
Immediately;was deeply moved
●句型7:介词短语(状语),+简单句
1.____________________,David built up his confidence and decided to run with other runners.
在我的鼓励下,大卫建立了信心,决定与其他跑步者一起跑步。
With my encouragement
2.____________________, Chelsea was no longer what she used to be.
经历过这段经历后,切尔西不再是她曾经的样子。
After this experience
3.___________________, ___________________, I also earned something more valuable: ...
通过这段经历,除了服务时间,我还我还赢得了一些更有价值的东西: ...
Through the experience;apart from the service hours (两个状语+简单句的组合）
4._______________________________, I would never have turned my imagination into reality.
没有她的慷慨帮助和我的坚持,我永远不会把我的想象变成现实。
Without her generous help and my perseverance
5.__________________, Carrie ______________________________, “I’m sorry for my previous words. You are talented enough to join the choir.”
令我吃惊的是,嘉莉走上前,红着脸向我道歉:“我为我之前说的话道歉。你很有才华,可以加入合唱团。”
Much to my surprise;stepped forward and apologized to me with a tomato red face
6.______________________ from her illness, she never ceased showing her love to me.
尽管她受到疾病的极大折磨,但她从未停止对我的爱。
Despite immense sufferings
7.____________________________, the shopkeeper nodded and wrapped the doll for the little girl, which made them extremely excited.
看到所发生的事,店主点了点头,把玩具娃娃为这个小女孩包了起来,这让他们非常兴奋.
At the sight of what had happened
8._________________, I handed him the coat, telling him the Christmas was around the corner; as a result, we would like to give him the coat as a gift.
我毫不犹豫地把外套递给他,告诉他圣诞节快到了;因此,我们想把这件外套作为礼物送给他。
Without hesitation
●句型8:时间状语, +简单句...
时间状语一般放在句末,但有些时间状语放在句首,能使行文连贯,逻辑合理,结构紧凑。如：shortly afterwards, hours later, for the first time, before long, at that moment, after that, several minutes after that, after seemingly a long time, after what seemed a long time, in the meanwhile, before I knew it, It wasn't long before...等。例如：
1.________________________, another helicopter flew overhead.
几分钟后,另一架直升机飞过头顶。
A few minutes later
2.______________________ in her life, Maria felt frightened and lonely.
玛丽亚有生以来第一次感到害怕和孤独。
For the first time
3.__________________, this box witnessed each sweet moment in my life.
在接下来的几年里,这个盒子见证了我生命中的每一个甜蜜时刻。
In the following years
4. __________________, the meal was done, which gave them a great sense of achievement.
过了一会儿,饭就做好了,这让他们有了一种强烈的责任感。
After a short while
5.____________ he recalled the war many years ago, saying he would never like to be a soldier again, ___________________ he could not face the blood and death anymore.
之后,他回忆起多年前的战争,说他再也不想当兵了,考虑到他不可以再面对血腥和死亡了。
After that;considering that
6._________, I made up my mind to _____________ my skills to match the violin I played that day.
从那时起,为了配得上我那天演奏的小提琴,我下定决心要打磨和提高自己的技能。
From then on;polish and improve
●句型9:状语+,简单句,+状语
1.___________________,I said “Thank you” to both of them __________________.
逐渐恢复了体力,我热泪盈眶向他们两人说了声“谢谢！”
Gradually regaining my strength;with eyes full of tears
2.________________,they were deeply attracted by the lively garden full of fragrant
blooms, ________________________ and birds singing cheerfully.
一进门,他们就被充满充满芬芳的花朵的生气勃勃的花园深深吸引了,蜜蜂嗡嗡
作响,鸟儿欢快地歌唱.
On entering the door;with honeybees buzzing busily
3._______________________ the garden work,my daughters hugged me tightly,________________
in their eyes.
意识到园艺工作的治愈效果,我的几个女儿紧紧拥抱着我,他们热泪盈眶。
Realizing the healing power of;tears welling up
4._____________________,I knew I was ready to thrive again,___________________.
深深地呼吸着青草的芳香,我知道我已经准备好再次茁壮成长;就像花园一样。
Breathing deeply the grassy scent;just like the garden
5.____________, she reached the last tower, ___________.
最终,她到达了最后一座塔,筋疲力尽的。
Ultimately;exhausted
6._____________________ show him my warmest congratulations, he embraced me tightly,
_____________ but for my timely encouragement he could never have won the championship.
当我走近他向他表示最热烈的祝贺时,他紧紧拥抱我,他说,要不是我及时的鼓励,他
永远不会赢得冠军。
When I approached him to;saying that
7.___________, the instructor encouraged Chelsea instantly, _________she could make it as
long as she didn’t give up.
发现这个情况,教练立即鼓励切尔西,说只要她不放弃,她就能成功。
Spotting this;saying that
8._____________________, I made a determination that I must join in the school Choir
_________________________.
一眨眼的功夫,我就下定决心要毫不犹豫地加入学校合唱团。
In a blink of an eye;without the slightest hesitation
9.______________the whole story and my thoughts, she_____________, _______________,“Just
believe in yourself. And I’m always here helping you.”
她知道了整个事情和我的想法,抚摸着我的头,安慰我:“只要相信你自己。我会
在这里一直帮助你。”
Having known;stroked my head;soothing me
●句型10：V1..., (V2..., ) and V3...(连动的表达)
描述一系列的动作,构成并列谓语。两个动作的结构：
主+谓1...and(then) 谓2...。例如：
1.The adults put on performances, ________, and then _________ goodbye.
大人们表演,聊天,然后道别。
chatted;said
2.She stopped the truck safely outside the garage and then ___________ back to the basement.
她把卡车安全地停在车库外面,然后冲回地下室。
rushed/dashed/raced/darted/galloped
3.She________ and _________ to look back at her house across the street.
她打了个哈欠,转过身来,回头看看街对面的房子。
yawned;turned
4.He ___________ and __________ the door shut.
他怒气冲冲地跑了出去,把门重重地关上。
stormed out;slammed
5.Elli and I_________at the top of our lungs, and _______ our fists at him in an attempt to
intimidate and scare him away.
Elli和我声嘶力竭地大叫着,并向它挥舞着拳头,试图吓走它。
screamed;waved
6.______________,we ______ the rope and eventually_______ on the helicopter safe and sound.
我激动不已,抓住绳索,最终安全降落在直升机上,松了口气。
Thrilled yet relieved;grabbed; landed
●句型11:简单句,+ 定从
1._______________, she was successful in reaching the last tower eventually,________ made those
watching her greatly relieved.
尽管她很累,但最终还是成功地到达了最后一座塔,这让那些看着她的人松了一口气。
Tired as she was;which
2.But shortly after, _________, he was left far behind, ______________some jeers from the
crowd by the track.
但不久之后,像往常一样,他被远远甩在了后面,这 招致了赛道旁人群的嘲笑。
as usual;which invited
3.As Elli and I cooked dinner, we noticed our sister, ______ was playing in a nearby lake,
___________________ her friends.
我和艾莉做饭时,我们注意到我们的妹妹在附近的湖里玩,高兴地和她的朋友聊天。
who;delightedly chatting with
4._________________, I was almost exhausted, ________ made me far away from my boat.
在水中挣扎,我几乎筋疲力尽,这使我远离了我的小船.
Struggling in the water;which
5.Suddenly, she hurried to the shop, _____________ she bought the beautiful pearl.
突然,她匆忙来到商店,从那里买了这颗美丽的珍珠
from which
6.During holiday seasons, I will live in the countryside,_______ air is fresh and people are friendly.
假日期间,我会住在农村,那儿空气清新,人们友好。
Where
7._______________, she went to the lunch table and started to enjoy the fresh fruits and vegetables, __________ was juicy and tasty.
她热泪盈眶,走到餐桌前,开始享受新鲜的多汁可口的水果和蔬菜。
Tears in her eyes;which
8.It turned out that he was an old friend of my father’s,________ had known each other since many years ago, _________h was why he knew my name.
原来他是我父亲的老朋友,多年前就互相认识了,这就是为什么他知道我名字的原因。
who;which
●各种加分语法结构的综合训练:
1.Seeing what I did ______________, I felt a deep pleasure _____________ inside.
看到我所做的让他们快乐,我感到一种深深的快乐涌上心头。 状语+简单句
make their day;welling up
2.Working in the yard kept my hands busy and my mind focused on the task in front
of me,gradually ________ me a beautiful garden as well as _________________.
简单句+状语
在院子里工作使我的双手忙碌着,我的注意力集中在面前的任务上，慢慢地给
我带来了一个美丽的花园也给我带来了成就感。
offering;a sense of achievement
3.___________________ he still _______ behind others but _________________ he
gradually caught up with others one by one. 状语+简单句+状语+简单句组合
一开始他仍然落后于其他人,但随着时间的推移他逐渐一个接一个地赶上了其他人。
In the very beginning;lagged;with time ticking by
4.He ________ his hands constantly, eyes _________ the starting line ______ stood the
other runners, ________ are ready to shine themselves. 简单句+独立主格结构+定从组合
他不停地搓着双手,眼睛紧盯着起跑线,其他跑者站在哪里,他们随时准备大显身手。
rubbed;locked to/glued to/focused on;where;who
5.__________ it a good chance to get him back on track, I decided to _________ courage into this poor
boy. 状语+简单句
考虑到这是一个让他重回跑道的好机会,我决定要鼓起他的勇气。
Thinking;infuse
6.__________________________, I turned him around, looked straight into his red-rimmed eyes
and encouraged, “David, don’t care about others and just do what you want. People will not laugh
at those who work __________________________.” 状语+连动组合
我轻轻拍了拍他的肩膀,我让他转过身来,看着他布满血丝的双眼并且鼓励他,“大卫,不要在乎别
人,做你想做的事.人们不会嘲笑那些尽力工作的人。
With a gentle pat on his shoulder;to the best of their ability
7.As if ____________ by my words, David ____________, bowed to me, turned and _____ forward,
slowly but firmly. 状语+连动+状语组合
大卫仿佛受到了我的话的极大鼓舞,他站起身来,向我鞠躬,转身大步向前,缓慢而坚定。
greatly inspired;rose to his feet;strode
8.However,_______________________, David insisted on running at a steady speed toward the
finishing line,______________________________________. 状语+简单句+状语
然而,有了坚定的决心.大卫坚持以稳定的速度跑向终点线,尽管他的衬衫湿透了,他的呼吸很沉重。
with a strong determination; despite his drenched shirt and heavy breaths
9.___________ the bike would probably knock into the girls, _______________________ and that
he himself and the bike would end up in the stream,Farhan got increasingly nervous _____________
状语+状语+简单句+状语组合
意识到自行车可能会撞到女孩,使他们重伤,他自己和自行车都会掉进河里,法翰在呼救时变得越
来越紧张。
Realizing that;leaving them seriously injured;while shouting for help
10.____________________, she ______________ and _____________ the bike and ____________
the backseat of the bike, as a result of which the bike slowed down and finally came to a stop
altogether. 状语+连动+定从组合
她不假思索地一跃而起,冲向自行车并紧紧抓住自行车后座,于是自行车减了速,最后完全停了下
来.
Without a second thought;jumped to her feet;dashed towards;held tightly
11.Seeing her brother safe and sound and the bike still in good condition, Aminah ________________. （状语+简单句）
看到她哥哥安然无恙,自行车还完好无损, Aminah松了一口气。
heaved a sigh of relief
12.__________ __________, I didn’t know what to do . 独立主格结构(状语)+简单句
郁闷笼罩着我,我不知道该怎么办。
Depression enveloping me
13.Carrie’s words __________me, _____________________:“I must rejoin the dance class.”
简单句+状语
嘉莉的话萦绕在我心头，促使我做出决定:“我必须重新参加舞蹈课。”
haunted;urging me to make a decision
14.After weeks’ practice, I _________________that I _______________________dancing, which
________________________________join the school chorus. 状语+简单句+名从+定从组合
经过几周的练习，我很高兴地发现我为舞蹈打好了坚实的基础，这让我有足够的信心申请加入
学校合唱团。
was delighted to find;had laid a solid foundation for;allowed me to have enough confidence to
apply to
15._______________________________, I, ______________________,burst into tears,
_____________ my secret friend didn't give me a better gift, so that I could feel proud of
him or her. 状语+简单句+状语的变形组合
我感到失望、沮丧，甚至恼怒,手里拿着洋娃娃,我突然哭了起来,想知道为什么我的秘密
朋友没有给我更好的礼物,这样我就能为他或她感到骄傲。
Feeling disappointed, frustrated and even annoyed;with the doll in my hands;wondering why