2024届广东省茂名市高三第二次综合测试读后续写Mr Smith鼓励开导孤独自卑女孩 讲义
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| 名称 | 2024届广东省茂名市高三第二次综合测试读后续写Mr Smith鼓励开导孤独自卑女孩 讲义 |  | |
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| 资源类型 | 教案 | ||
| 版本资源 | 人教版（2019） | ||
| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2024-04-18 10:44:27 | ||
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阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I used to be a lonely girl sitting at the back of the classroom. Having failed the college entrance exams and changed schools twice, I seldom smiled. Every day I would sit at the desk, staring into textbooks and exercises, motionless and heavy-hearted. However, my classmates were in a different picture. They were playing, laughing and chatting delightedly. Besides, I hated it when they were always answering the teachers’ questions, loudly and confidently. Obviously, I had no friends in this fiercely competitive class.
我曾经是一个孤独的女孩，坐在教室的后面。高考不及格，换了两次学，我很少笑。每天我都会坐在办公桌前，目不转睛地看着课本和练习题，一动不动，心情沉重。然而，我的同学却完全不同。他们高兴地玩耍、大笑、聊天。此外，我讨厌他们总是大声自信地回答老师的问题。显然，在这个竞争激烈的班级里，我没有朋友。
Life is harder for senior students. Hardly does a day go by without exercises or tests. Every time when the scores came out, mine wouldn’t be the first or second but last. I was especially tired of the endless exercises and exams, which I seemingly would never do well in. I was under a lot of pressure, feeling like a fish being fried in a pan.
高年级学生的生活更艰难。几乎每天都要锻炼或测试。每次分数出来的时候，我的不是第一名或第二名，而是最后一名。我特别厌倦了没完没了的练习和考试，这些我似乎永远都做不好。我承受着很大的压力，感觉就像锅里炸的鱼。
Hanging over me was a dark cloud. The only dim light came from Mr. Smith. Every time I stepped into the classroom, he welcomed me with a warm smile; every time my gaze began to wander over the classroom or stare out of the window, his caring eyes would draw me back to his class. Besides, he was the only teacher who invited me to the office, talking about my studies and scores. I remembered when I came out of his office, I felt refreshed, believing that I could work harder.
乌云笼罩着我。唯一微弱的光线来自史密斯先生。每次我走进教室，他都热情地微笑着迎接我；每当我的目光开始在教室里徘徊或凝视窗外时，他关爱的目光就会把我拉回到他的课堂上。此外，他是唯一一个邀请我到办公室谈论我的学习和成绩的老师。我记得当我从他的办公室出来时，我感到神清气爽，相信我可以更加努力地工作。
I was feeling everything was changing for the better. I prepared hard for the final exam of the first semester, desiring to prove that I was not the last one. So before Mr. Smith told us the test result, I was expecting something good in store for me.
我感觉一切都在好转。我为第一学期的期末考试做了艰苦的准备，渴望证明我不是最后一个。所以，在史密斯先生告诉我们测试结果之前，我一直期待着一些好的结果。
But I was still the last one in the class. A burst of sadness and shame consuming me, I was heartbroken.
但我仍然是班上最后一个。一阵悲伤和羞愧吞噬了我，我心碎了。
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Right at that moment, Mr. Smith invited me to his office.
Finally, the college admission letter came.
文本分析：
故事大意---我是一个孤独的女孩，因为高考两次失利，压力巨大，我心情低落，不喜欢说笑。Mr Smith总是对我报以微笑，用坚定的目光鼓励我，这让我心里感到温暖和一股力量。第一学期的期末考试，我努力备考，期望得到一个不错的成绩来证明自己，结果却让我心碎。
伏笔1高考失利两次
后文---被大学录取
伏笔2 我孤独自卑，不爱讲话和微笑
后文---开始自信，喜欢笑
伏笔3 Smith先生非常好
后文---会鼓励开导我
续写情节发展：
第一段：由第一段首饲内容Right at that moment, Mr. Smith史密斯先生邀请我去invited me to his office(就在此时，他的办公室)可设问如下:
Would the girl go to Mr. Smith's office
2What was her feeling
3Was Mr. Smith angry and disappointed with the girl
4How did Mr. Smith encourage her
5.Would Mr. Smith succeed in trying to inspire her （问题结合第二段首句设问)
第二段：
根据第二段首句Finally, the college admission letter(接到大学录取通知书)可设问如下:
6How did the girl deal with the letter
7How did the girl feel about her success
8Who did she owe her success to ？
9.What else did she realize ( 这个问题可结合故事的主旨提问)
参考答案：
Right at that moment, Mr: Smith invited me to his office. Hesitantly, I walked into the office lowering my head and avoiding his eye contact, r. Smith greeted me with a warm smile as usual.As he began talking, not about my grades or mistakes, but about my potential and perseverance, it became apparent that this talk was totally a different one. He didn't blame me for being the last.Instead, he praised my resilience and determination. He encouraged me to embrace my struggles as stepping stones, not stumbling blocks, reminding me that success was never a straight path. In his eyes, I could see his belief in me, and i knew i should never quit.
Finally, the college admission letter came. l held it in my shaking hands, doubting whether l was in a world of fantasy. But as l opened the envelope and read the first few lines, I couldn't believe my eyes. Despite all the odds, l got admitted l stared at the letter in disbelief, then relief and finally joy. lt felt like the dawn after a seemingly endless night, a reward for the perseverance I didn't "know i had until Mr, Smith showed me,.The tears welling up in my eyes were no longer out of despair, but out of gratitude and self-accomplishment. Mr. Smith might never know how much his encouragement might mean to me in my toughest time.
I used to be a lonely girl sitting at the back of the classroom. Having failed the college entrance exams and changed schools twice, I seldom smiled. Every day I would sit at the desk, staring into textbooks and exercises, motionless and heavy-hearted. However, my classmates were in a different picture. They were playing, laughing and chatting delightedly. Besides, I hated it when they were always answering the teachers’ questions, loudly and confidently. Obviously, I had no friends in this fiercely competitive class.
我曾经是一个孤独的女孩，坐在教室的后面。高考不及格，换了两次学，我很少笑。每天我都会坐在办公桌前，目不转睛地看着课本和练习题，一动不动，心情沉重。然而，我的同学却完全不同。他们高兴地玩耍、大笑、聊天。此外，我讨厌他们总是大声自信地回答老师的问题。显然，在这个竞争激烈的班级里，我没有朋友。
Life is harder for senior students. Hardly does a day go by without exercises or tests. Every time when the scores came out, mine wouldn’t be the first or second but last. I was especially tired of the endless exercises and exams, which I seemingly would never do well in. I was under a lot of pressure, feeling like a fish being fried in a pan.
高年级学生的生活更艰难。几乎每天都要锻炼或测试。每次分数出来的时候，我的不是第一名或第二名，而是最后一名。我特别厌倦了没完没了的练习和考试，这些我似乎永远都做不好。我承受着很大的压力，感觉就像锅里炸的鱼。
Hanging over me was a dark cloud. The only dim light came from Mr. Smith. Every time I stepped into the classroom, he welcomed me with a warm smile; every time my gaze began to wander over the classroom or stare out of the window, his caring eyes would draw me back to his class. Besides, he was the only teacher who invited me to the office, talking about my studies and scores. I remembered when I came out of his office, I felt refreshed, believing that I could work harder.
乌云笼罩着我。唯一微弱的光线来自史密斯先生。每次我走进教室，他都热情地微笑着迎接我；每当我的目光开始在教室里徘徊或凝视窗外时，他关爱的目光就会把我拉回到他的课堂上。此外，他是唯一一个邀请我到办公室谈论我的学习和成绩的老师。我记得当我从他的办公室出来时，我感到神清气爽，相信我可以更加努力地工作。
I was feeling everything was changing for the better. I prepared hard for the final exam of the first semester, desiring to prove that I was not the last one. So before Mr. Smith told us the test result, I was expecting something good in store for me.
我感觉一切都在好转。我为第一学期的期末考试做了艰苦的准备，渴望证明我不是最后一个。所以，在史密斯先生告诉我们测试结果之前，我一直期待着一些好的结果。
But I was still the last one in the class. A burst of sadness and shame consuming me, I was heartbroken.
但我仍然是班上最后一个。一阵悲伤和羞愧吞噬了我，我心碎了。
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Right at that moment, Mr. Smith invited me to his office.
Finally, the college admission letter came.
文本分析：
故事大意---我是一个孤独的女孩，因为高考两次失利，压力巨大，我心情低落，不喜欢说笑。Mr Smith总是对我报以微笑，用坚定的目光鼓励我，这让我心里感到温暖和一股力量。第一学期的期末考试，我努力备考，期望得到一个不错的成绩来证明自己，结果却让我心碎。
伏笔1高考失利两次
后文---被大学录取
伏笔2 我孤独自卑，不爱讲话和微笑
后文---开始自信，喜欢笑
伏笔3 Smith先生非常好
后文---会鼓励开导我
续写情节发展：
第一段：由第一段首饲内容Right at that moment, Mr. Smith史密斯先生邀请我去invited me to his office(就在此时，他的办公室)可设问如下:
Would the girl go to Mr. Smith's office
2What was her feeling
3Was Mr. Smith angry and disappointed with the girl
4How did Mr. Smith encourage her
5.Would Mr. Smith succeed in trying to inspire her （问题结合第二段首句设问)
第二段：
根据第二段首句Finally, the college admission letter(接到大学录取通知书)可设问如下:
6How did the girl deal with the letter
7How did the girl feel about her success
8Who did she owe her success to ？
9.What else did she realize ( 这个问题可结合故事的主旨提问)
参考答案：
Right at that moment, Mr: Smith invited me to his office. Hesitantly, I walked into the office lowering my head and avoiding his eye contact, r. Smith greeted me with a warm smile as usual.As he began talking, not about my grades or mistakes, but about my potential and perseverance, it became apparent that this talk was totally a different one. He didn't blame me for being the last.Instead, he praised my resilience and determination. He encouraged me to embrace my struggles as stepping stones, not stumbling blocks, reminding me that success was never a straight path. In his eyes, I could see his belief in me, and i knew i should never quit.
Finally, the college admission letter came. l held it in my shaking hands, doubting whether l was in a world of fantasy. But as l opened the envelope and read the first few lines, I couldn't believe my eyes. Despite all the odds, l got admitted l stared at the letter in disbelief, then relief and finally joy. lt felt like the dawn after a seemingly endless night, a reward for the perseverance I didn't "know i had until Mr, Smith showed me,.The tears welling up in my eyes were no longer out of despair, but out of gratitude and self-accomplishment. Mr. Smith might never know how much his encouragement might mean to me in my toughest time.