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UNIT 7 ART
Section Ⅴ Writing
1.通过阅读熟悉英语电子邮件的文体特征,并掌握其写作方法及策略。（语言能力，学习能力）
2.能够借助已知的关键信息,适当补充辅助信息,写好询问类电子邮件。（语言能力）
询问类电子邮件
本单元的写作项目属于应用文中的询问类电子邮件。询问类电子邮件属于正式电子邮件，询问类电子邮件要清楚地说明要询问的内容，语言要简洁，态度要诚恳，格式要正确。正式电子邮件包括寄件人地址、收件人地址、邮件的主题、开头、正文、结束语和签名。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
课文范例
素材积累
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.a well-known/famous school一所著名的学校
2.to one's surprise/amazement令人惊讶的
3.get on/along well with sb 与某人相处得很好
4.ways of teaching教学方式
5.nothing like完全不像
6.take part in after-class activities参加课外活动
Ⅱ.话题句式
★精彩开头
1.I'm happy/glad/pleased to receive your e-mail dated by May 1st.
很高兴收到你五月一日发来的电子邮件。
2.I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in England.
我写这封信是为了感谢我在英国时你对我的帮助。
3.I'm sorry not to answer/reply to your e-mail in time because I have been busy these days.
很抱歉没有及时回复你的电子邮件，因为这些日子我一直很忙。
4.I'm sorry to learn that you did not do well in the entrance examination.
得知你在入学考试中发挥不好，我很难过。
5.I'm glad to receive your e-mail saying that you have been offered a good job in a big company. Congratulations to you.
我很高兴收到你的邮件，邮件中说你被一家大公司聘用了，祝贺你。
6.I have been missing you a lot since we met last time.
自从我们上次见面以来，我一直很想你。
7.How are you getting on with your English study
你英语学得怎么样了？
8.I am sorry for not writing to you sooner.
很抱歉没有早点给你写信。
★精彩结尾
1.In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.
最后，如果你发现我的建议有用我会非常高兴。
2.I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
盼望很快收到你的来信。
3.Please give my regards to your family.
请代我向你的家人问好。
4.If you have any more questions, please let me know.
如果你还有问题，请告诉我。
5.I look forward to our next meeting.
期待我们的下次相见。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
假定你是李华，你计划期末考试结束后去英国旅行。请给你的英国网友Harry写一封邮件，从以下几个方面告诉他你的计划并就相关问题向他询问。
1.考试结束后和父母一起去英国旅行。
2.计划在伦敦停留5天。
3.旅行计划：
（1）第一天参观伦敦塔桥（Tower Bridge）和海德公园（Hyde Park）；
（2）第二天参观大本钟（Big Ben）和白金汉宫（Buckingham Palace）；
（3）第三天参观大英博物馆（British Museum）；
（4）去购物。
4.向他询问英国的风俗习惯。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
From: lihua@
To: harry@
Subject: Travel plan
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分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
电子邮件一般由以下五部分组成:
（1）收件人地址:在标题栏的 “To（收件人）”框中输入收信人的电子邮件地址。
（2）主题:“Subject（主题）”框的内容应概括电子邮件的内容,可以是一个单词,可以是一个名词性短语,也可以是一个完整的句子。
（3）称呼:电子邮件一般使用非正式的文体,因此正文前的称呼通常不必使用诸如Dear Mr John 之类的表达。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其名,如Hi Tom。但对长辈或上级最好使用头衔并加上姓氏,如Dear Doctor Li。
（4）正文:写英文电子邮件和写英文信件相差不多。
（5）信尾语:信尾语一般有Sincerely yours、Best regards等。
Step 2 要点翻译
1.翻译词汇
（1）打算做某事 ____________________
plan/intend to do sth
（2）玩得开心 _____________
enjoy oneself
（3）文化与习俗 ___________________
cultures and customs
（4）名胜 ________________
places of interest
2.翻译句子
（1）期末考试结束后,我要和父母一起去英国旅行。
_______________________________________________________________________
I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam.
（2）因为第一次去那里,我希望你能给我提供一些有关英国文化与习俗的信息。
___________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Because of going there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the cultures and customs of England.
Step 3 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
Dear Harry,
How is everything I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam. We plan to stay in London for about five days. During the trip, we will visit Tower Bridge and Hyde Park on the first day. On the second day, we intend to go to see Big Ben and Buckingham Palace, which are the places of interest I am crazy about. On the third day, we will enjoy ourselves at British Museum. And then we will go shopping during the following two days.
Because of going there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the cultures and customs of England.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
主题写作
假定你是李华,你想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点；
2.展览内容。
注意:1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Henry,
It must have been heard by you that____________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________
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________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
there'll be an art exhibition organized to display elegant Chinese paper-cuttings. Remembering your devotion to Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to come with us.
As for the timetable and specific information, the activity will be held next Wednesday at the stadium. One graphic scene to which you might readily relate is numerous charming paper-cuttings of distinctive appearance shown together along with splendid history of China. Owing to frequent media coverage, it is paper-cutting that has aroused huge attention.
What a delightful day it'll be if you can come!
1.Unluckily, the farmers have suffered a heavy drought this year. They have to struggle for a living. They are struggling with the bad weather for a better harvest.
不幸的是, 今年农民已经遭受了严重的干旱。他们为了生活不得不奋斗。他们为了有更好的收成一直在跟糟糕的天气抗争着。
2.The south of the country was worst affected by the drought.
该国南方受旱情影响最严重。
3.It is easy to enjoy Singapore with the City Sightseeing open-top touring system.Spot an interesting place or sight Simply hop off and walk around and you can continue the tour later by hopping on the next bus.
有开放式的旅游系统很容易就能享受到新加坡的城市风光。发现了一个有趣的地方或景点 只需要跳下车, 四处走走, 你也可以跳上下一辆公共汽车继续旅游。
4.China's economic performance over the past four decades has been the envy of the world.
中国过去40年的经济表现令世界艳羡。
5.If you are in search of your missing pet，you'd better put an advertisement in the newspaper.
如果你在寻找自己丢失的宠物，你最好在报纸上登个广告。
美篇导读
《简·爱》是英国女作家夏洛蒂·勃朗特创作的长篇小说，是一部具有自传色彩的作品，后来被改编为同名电影。下面是该部电影的剧本节选。
美篇呈现
Rochester:Who is there？ Mrs Faifax，is that you？ Is anyone there？ （To his dog.） There，boy. Ah！There's no one there. Whom did you think it was？ Mm？ Is anyone there，I say？ Who is it？
（Jane approaches.）
Jane:It is me．
Rochester:Jane？
Jane:Yes．
Rochester:Jane！
Jane:Yes！Yes！
Rochester:You mock① me.（Jane kneels down②，and takes his hand to touch her face.） Is that you，Jane？ Is it really you？ Have you come to visit me？ You didn't think to find me like this，mm？ What？ Crying？ No need for tears. How long can you stay？ An hour or two？ Stay a little while Or do you have some fretting③ husband waiting for you？
Jane:No．
Rochester:No husband yet？ Well，that's bad，Jane. You're not pretty，you know. You can't be choosy④．
Jane:No，Sir．
Rochester:Still，I'm surprised you have not been asked．
Jane:I didn't say I had not been asked，Sir．
Rochester:I see. Yes. That's good，Jane. You should be married．
Jane:Yes，Sir. I think so，and so should you. You can't be choosy，Sir，any more than I.
Rochester:No，perhaps not. Well，when is this wedding of yours？ I'll bring Adele home from school．
Jane:Wedding，Sir？
Rochester:The devil⑤ takes it. Didn't you say you were getting married？
Jane:No，Sir．
RochesterWell，I'm sure some fool will find you soon enough．
Jane:I hope so，Sir. Some fool that found me once before.（Touches his face with her hand.） I've come home，Edward. Let me stay.（Jane sits by his side and lays her head on his shoulders.）
罗切斯特:谁在那儿？费尔法克丝太太，是你吗？那儿有人吗？（对着他的狗说。）噢，好了，那儿没人，你怎么会认为有人呢？嗯？我说，那儿有人吗？是谁？（简走近。）
简:是我。
罗切斯特:是简吗？
简:是我。
罗切斯特:简！
简:是我，是我！
罗切斯特:笑话我吧。（简跪下，将罗切斯特的手放在自己的脸上。）是你吗，简？真是你吗？你是来看我的？你没想到我会这样吧，嗯？怎么？哭了？不用掉眼泪。你能待多久？一两个小时？还是只待一会儿？或是你有性急的丈夫在等你？
简:没有什么丈夫。
罗切斯特:还没有丈夫？那可不好，简。你知道的，你长得不漂亮。你不能太挑剔了。
简:是的，先生。
罗切斯特:我觉得奇怪了，怎么没人向你求婚？
简:我并没有说没人向我求过婚，先生。
罗切斯特:明白了。那好，简，你应该结婚。
简:是的，先生，我也这样认为，而且，你也应该结婚。你不能比我还挑剔。
罗切斯特:是的，或许是的。好吧，你的婚礼何时举行？我把阿黛尔从学校接回来。
简:什么婚礼，先生？
罗切斯特:见鬼，你不是说你要结婚了吗？
简:没有呀，先生。
罗切斯特:那么，我确定某个傻瓜很快会找到你的。
简:我也希望如此，先生。有个傻瓜早已找过我了。（用手抚摸罗切斯特的脸。）我已经回家了，爱德华，让我留下来吧。（简坐在罗切斯特的身边，头靠在他的肩上。）
知识积累
①mock v.嘲笑
②kneel down 跪下；跪着
③fret v.苦恼；烦躁
④choosy adj.挑剔的
⑤devil n.魔鬼
素养链接
夏洛蒂·勃朗特是英国小说家，曾当过学校教师和家庭教师。1847年长篇小说《简·爱》出版，轰动文坛。夏洛蒂·勃朗特与她的两个妹妹艾米莉·勃朗特和安妮·勃朗特在英国文学史上有“勃朗特三姐妹”之称。Unit 7 Section Ⅴ Writing
【学习目标】
1.通过阅读熟悉英语电子邮件的文体特征,并掌握其写作方法及策略。(语言能力,学习能力)
2.能够借助已知的关键信息,适当补充辅助信息,写好询问类电子邮件。(语言能力)
【合作探究】
写作探究
询问类电子邮件
本单元的写作项目属于应用文中的询问类电子邮件。询问类电子邮件属于正式电子邮件,询问类电子邮件要清楚地说明要询问的内容,语言要简洁,态度要诚恳,格式要正确。正式电子邮件包括寄件人地址、收件人地址、邮件的主题、开头、正文、结束语和签名。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
课文范例
素材积累
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.a well-known/famous school一所著名的学校
2.to one's surprise/amazement令人惊讶的
3.get on/along well with sb 与某人相处得很好
4.ways of teaching教学方式
5.nothing like完全不像
6.take part in after-class activities参加课外活动
Ⅱ.话题句式
★精彩开头
1.I'm happy/glad/pleased to receive your e-mail dated by May 1st.
很高兴收到你五月一日发来的电子邮件。
2.I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in England.
我写这封信是为了感谢我在英国时你对我的帮助。
3.I'm sorry not to answer/reply to your e-mail in time because I have been busy these days.
很抱歉没有及时回复你的电子邮件,因为这些日子我一直很忙。
4.I'm sorry to learn that you did not do well in the entrance examination.
得知你在入学考试中发挥不好,我很难过。
5.I'm glad to receive your e-mail saying that you have been offered a good job in a big company.Congratulations to you.
我很高兴收到你的邮件,邮件中说你被一家大公司聘用了,祝贺你。
6.I have been missing you a lot since we met last time.
自从我们上次见面以来,我一直很想你。
7.How are you getting on with your English study
你英语学得怎么样了
8.I am sorry for not writing to you sooner.
很抱歉没有早点给你写信。
★精彩结尾
1.In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.
最后,如果你发现我的建议有用我会非常高兴。
2.I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
盼望很快收到你的来信。
3.Please give my regards to your family.
请代我向你的家人问好。
4.If you have any more questions, please let me know.
如果你还有问题,请告诉我。
5.I look forward to our next meeting.
期待我们的下次相见。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
假定你是李华,你计划期末考试结束后去英国旅行。请给你的英国网友Harry写一封邮件,从以下几个方面告诉他你的计划并就相关问题向他询问。
1.考试结束后和父母一起去英国旅行。
2.计划在伦敦停留5天。
3.旅行计划:
(1)第一天参观伦敦塔桥(Tower Bridge)和海德公园(Hyde Park);
(2)第二天参观大本钟(Big Ben)和白金汉宫(Buckingham Palace);
(3)第三天参观大英博物馆(British Museum);
(4)去购物。
4.向他询问英国的风俗习惯。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
From: lihua@
To: harry@
Subject: Travel plan _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
电子邮件一般由以下五部分组成:
(1)收件人地址:在标题栏的 “To(收件人)”框中输入收信人的电子邮件地址。
(2)主题:“Subject(主题)”框的内容应概括电子邮件的内容,可以是一个单词,可以是一个名词性短语,也可以是一个完整的句子。
(3)称呼:电子邮件一般使用非正式的文体,因此正文前的称呼通常不必使用诸如Dear Mr John 之类的表达。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其名,如Hi Tom。但对长辈或上级最好使用头衔并加上姓氏,如Dear Doctor Li。
(4)正文:写英文电子邮件和写英文信件相差不多。
(5)信尾语:信尾语一般有Sincerely yours、Best regards等。
Step 2 要点翻译
1.翻译词汇
(1)打算做某事
(2)玩得开心
(3)文化与习俗
(4)名胜
答案 (1)plan/intend to do sth (2)enjoy oneself (3)cultures and customs (4)places of interest
2.翻译句子
(1)期末考试结束后,我要和父母一起去英国旅行。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
(2)因为第一次去那里,我希望你能给我提供一些有关英国文化与习俗的信息。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
答案
(1)I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam.
(2)Because of going there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the cultures and customs of England.
Step 3 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
Dear Harry,
How is everything I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam.We plan to stay in London for about five days.During the trip, we will visit Tower Bridge and Hyde Park on the first day.On the second day, we intend to go to see Big Ben and Buckingham Palace, which are the places of interest I am crazy about.On the third day, we will enjoy ourselves at British Museum.And then we will go shopping during the following two days.
Because of going there for the first time, I hope you can provide me with some information about the cultures and customs of England.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【随堂检测】
主题写作
假定你是李华,你想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Henry,
It must have been heard by you that
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Henry,
It must have been heard by you that there'll be an art exhibition organized to display elegant Chinese paper-cuttings.Remembering your devotion to Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to come with us.
As for the timetable and specific information, the activity will be held next Wednesday at the stadium.One graphic scene to which you might readily relate is numerous charming paper-cuttings of distinctive appearance shown together along with splendid history of China.Owing to frequent media coverage, it is paper-cutting that has aroused huge attention.
What a delightful day it'll be if you can come!
Yours,
Li Hua
【课外拓展】
视野拓展
1.Unluckily, the farmers have suffered a heavy drought this year.They have to struggle for a living.They are struggling with the bad weather for a better harvest.
不幸的是, 今年农民已经遭受了严重的干旱。他们为了生活不得不奋斗。他们为了有更好的收成一直在跟糟糕的天气抗争着。
2.The south of the country was worst affected by the drought.
该国南方受旱情影响最严重。
3.It is easy to enjoy Singapore with the City Sightseeing open-top touring system.Spot an interesting place or sight Simply hop off and walk around and you can continue the tour later by hopping on the next bus.
有开放式的旅游系统很容易就能享受到新加坡的城市风光。发现了一个有趣的地方或景点 只需要跳下车, 四处走走, 你也可以跳上下一辆公共汽车继续旅游。
4.China's economic performance over the past four decades has been the envy of the world.
中国过去40年的经济表现令世界艳羡。
5.If you are in search of your missing pet,you'd better put an advertisement in the newspaper.
如果你在寻找自己丢失的宠物,你最好在报纸上登个广告。
英美文化
美篇导读
《简·爱》是英国女作家夏洛蒂·勃朗特创作的长篇小说,是一部具有自传色彩的作品,后来被改编为同名电影。下面是该部电影的剧本节选。
美篇呈现
Rochester:Who is there Mrs Faifax,is that you Is anyone there (To his dog.) There,boy.Ah!There's no one there.Whom did you think it was Mm Is anyone there,I say Who is it
(Jane approaches.)
Jane: It is me.
Rochester: Jane
Jane: Yes.
Rochester: Jane!
Jane: Yes!Yes!
Rochester: You mock① me.(Jane kneels down②,and takes his hand to touch her face.) Is that you,Jane Is it really you Have you come to visit me You didn't think to find me like this,mm What Crying No need for tears.How long can you stay An hour or two Stay a little while Or do you have some fretting③ husband waiting for you
Jane: No.
Rochester: No husband yet Well,that's bad,Jane.You're not pretty,you know.You can't be choosy④.
Jane: No,Sir.
Rochester: Still,I'm surprised you have not been asked.
Jane: I didn't say I had not been asked,Sir.
Rochester: I see.Yes.That's good,Jane.You should be married.
Jane: Yes,Sir.I think so,and so should you.You can't be choosy,Sir,any more than I.
Rochester: No,perhaps not.Well,when is this wedding of yours I'll bring Adele home from school.
Jane: Wedding,Sir
Rochester: The devil⑤ takes it.Didn't you say you were getting married
Jane: No,Sir.
Rochester: Well,I'm sure some fool will find you soon enough.
Jane: I hope so,Sir.Some fool that found me once before.(Touches his face with her hand.) I've come home,Edward.Let me stay.(Jane sits by his side and lays her head on his shoulders.)
罗切斯特:谁在那儿 费尔法克丝太太,是你吗 那儿有人吗 (对着他的狗说
。)噢,好了,那儿没人,你怎么会认为有人呢 嗯 我说,那儿有人吗 是谁 (简走近
。)
简: 是我。
罗切斯特:是简吗
简: 是我。
罗切斯特: 简!
简: 是我,是我!
罗切斯特:笑话我吧。(简跪下,将罗切斯特的手放在自己的脸上
。)是你吗,简 真是你吗 你是来看我的 你没想到我会这样吧,嗯 怎么 哭了 不用掉眼泪。你能待多久 一两个小时 还是只待一会儿 或是你有性急的丈夫在等你
简: 没有什么丈夫。
罗切斯特:还没有丈夫 那可不好,简。你知道的,你长得不漂亮。你不能太挑剔了。
简: 是的,先生。
罗切斯特:我觉得奇怪了,怎么没人向你求婚
简: 我并没有说没人向我求过婚,先生。
罗切斯特:明白了。那好,简,你应该结婚。
简: 是的,先生,我也这样认为,而且,你也应该结婚。你不能比我还挑剔。
罗切斯特:是的,或许是的。好吧,你的婚礼何时举行 我把阿黛尔从学校接回来。
简: 什么婚礼,先生
罗切斯特:见鬼,你不是说你要结婚了吗
简: 没有呀,先生。
罗切斯特:那么,我确定某个傻瓜很快会找到你的。
简: 我也希望如此,先生。有个傻瓜早已找过我了。(用手抚摸罗切斯特的脸
。)我已经回家了,爱德华,让我留下来吧。(简坐在罗切斯特的身边,头靠在他的肩上。)
知识积累
①mock v.嘲笑
②kneel down 跪下;跪着
③fret v.苦恼;烦躁
④choosy adj.挑剔的
⑤devil n.魔鬼
素养链接
夏洛蒂·勃朗特是英国小说家,曾当过学校教师和家庭教师。1847年长篇小说《简·爱》出版,轰动文坛。夏洛蒂·勃朗特与她的两个妹妹艾米莉·勃朗特和安妮·勃朗特在英国文学史上有“勃朗特三姐妹”之称。
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