Unit 1 Section Ⅴ Writing
【学习目标】
1.熟悉英语邀请信的文体特征并掌握其写作方法及策略。(语言能力,学习能力)
2.能够借助已知的关键信息,适当补充细节,写好邀请信。(语言能力)
【合作探究】
写作探究
邀 请 信
本单元写作任务是写一封邀请信,属于书信的写作范畴。正式的邀请信可以使用第三人称或第一人称,要注意措辞和语气应该是正式的,而不是口语的。
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,内容应包含以下几个方面:
1.邀请对方参加的活动的内容、时间和地点;
2.与该活动有关的注意事项;
3.期待对方接受邀请。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.make/deliver a speech做演讲
2.accept one's invitation接受某人的邀请
3.on behalf of our school代表我们学校
4.be a judge at our English speech contest做我们英语演讲比赛的评委
5.last for about three hours持续约三个小时
6.contact us in advance提前与我们联系
7.plan several activities计划一些活动
8.have a great time玩得很开心
9.invite you to visit the Chinese painting exhibition together 邀请你一起去参观中国画展
10.give us a lecture about the cultural differences between America and China 给我们做一个关于中美文化差异的讲座
Ⅱ.话题句式
★篇首句:介绍自己,简要说明活动,并邀请对方。
1.I'm Wang Ming from Yuwen School, president of the Student Union.
我是来自育文学校的学生会主席王明。
2.An English speech contest of our school will be held on August 6.
我们学校有一场英语演讲比赛将在8月6日举行。
3.I'd like to invite you to be a judge.
我想邀请你做裁判。
★篇中句:介绍活动具体内容,并发出邀请。
1.It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours,during which 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
它将于下午两点钟开始,四点钟结束,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
2.We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00 am.
我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。
3.I'm sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
★篇尾句:期待对方接受邀请,并期待对方尽快回复。
1.Will you be available during that time Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.
那期间你有空吗 请方便时尽快给我打电话,号码是1234567。
2.Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation
请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请,好吗
3.We will feel much honored if you could come.
如果你能来,我们会非常荣幸。
4.We are looking forward to your coming.
我们期待着你的到来。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
假定你是美国的Ann,你的朋友Susan很想知道中国学校里打招呼的方式和师生关系。应Susan的要求,你打算邀请中国的留学生朋友李华于5月12日共进晚餐,并向他请教一些问题。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.邀请的原因;
2.吃饭时间、地点;
3.期待回复。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
邀请信属于应用文,主要用来邀请某人参加宴会、庆祝活动或会议等。邀请信可分为正式的邀请信(请柬)和非正式的邀请信两种。
我们平时所写的通常是非正式的邀请信。它与普通信件的格式基本一样:
(1)称呼;
(2)开头语;
(3)活动内容、时间及地点;
(4)结束语;
(5)落款。
体裁 应用文 时态 一般现在时
主题 邀请共进晚餐 人称 第一、三人称
结构 第一段:介绍邀请的原因; 第二段:吃饭的时间、地点; 第三段:希望对方回应
Step 2 要点翻译
1.翻译词汇
(1) n.请求;要求
(2) vt.邀请
(3) vt.打招呼
(4) n.关系
(5) adj.常见的;普遍的
答案 (1)request (2)invite (3)greet (4)relation
(5)common
2.翻译句子
(1)她想知道校园常见的打招呼的方式是什么。
She wonders .
(2)师生关系是怎样的呢
What are like
(3)应她的请求,我想邀请您在5月12日与我们共进晚餐。
, I'd like to with us on May 12th.
答案 (1)what the common way of greeting on campus is (2)the relations between students and teachers
(3)At her request; invite you to have supper
Step 3 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
Dear Li Hua,
How is it going
My friend Susan is interested in body language in Chinese schools. She wonders what the common way of greeting on campus is and what the relations between students and teachers are like.So at her request,I'd like to invite you to have supper with us on May 12th,and wish you to introduce some body language explain some problems to us.
We plan to have supper at five at the school canteen so that we can have enough time for our talk.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Ann
【随堂检测】
夯实基础
主题写作
假定你是李华,你校将举办一场交通安全知识讲座,你打算邀请外教John参加。请用英语给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.告知讲座的时间和地点;
2.介绍讲座的主题和内容;
3.期待他的出席。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
Dear John,
I'm writing to tell you a piece of good news. There will be a lecture about traffic safety at 7 pm next Monday. Organized by our school,it will be held in the school hall. There are three parts of the lecture. At first,our headmaster will give a speech on behalf of the school. Then some traffic policemen coming from our city will show us some pictures about traffic accidents. In addition,they will teach us many traffic regulations to remind us to pay attention to traffic safety.
I believe the lecture will be educational,so I sincerely invite you to attend it.
I'm looking forward to your attendance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
视野拓展
1.February 22,2022 is called one of China's most “loving” dates in recent memory,as the number “2” in Chinese has a similar pronunciation to the Chinese word for love. On this special occasion,many Chinese people had decided to tie the knot to give their own special days an added meaning.
2022年2月22日被称为中国近期记忆中最“爱”的日子之一,因为汉语中的数字“二”与汉语中的“爱”一词发音相似。在这个特殊的日子里,许多中国人决定结婚,为自己的特殊日子增添意义。
2.The kids at this school are disciplined,hard-working and well-behaved.
这所学校的孩子们遵守纪律、学习勤奋、彬彬有礼。
3.Family snow tours not only create a new segment for resorts but also boost snow consumption. Many parents prefer to buy a full set of professional snow equipment for their children rather than rent it.
家庭冰雪旅游不仅为度假村创造了一个新的细分市场,而且还促进了冰雪消费。许多父母宁愿为孩子购买全套专业的雪上设备,也不愿意租用。
英美文化
美篇导读
《我有一个梦想》是马丁·路德·金于1963年8月28日在华盛顿林肯纪念堂发表的著名演讲,内容主要关于黑人民族平等。阅读下面选取的部分,认真体会作者表达了什么样的思想感情。
美篇呈现
I have a dream (Excerpt)
I say to you today, my friends.And so even though we face the difficulties of today and tomorrow, I still have a dream.It is a dream deeply rooted in the American dream.
I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: “We hold these truths to be self-evident that all men are created equal.”
I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia, the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood.
I have a dream that one day even the state of Mississippi, a state sweltering① with the heat of injustice, sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.
I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.
I have a dream today!
I have a dream that one day, down in Alabama, with its vicious racists, with its governor having his lips dripping with the words of “interposition②” and “nullification③”—one day right there in Alabama little black boys and black girls will be able to join hands with little white boys and white girls as sisters and brothers.
I have a dream today!
I have a dream that one day every valley shall be exalted④, every hill and mountain shall be made low, the rough places will be made plain, and the crooked places will be made straight, and the glory of the Lord shall be revealed and all flesh shall see it together.
我有一个梦想(节选)
朋友们,今天我对你们说,此时此刻,我们虽然遭受种种困难和挫折,但我仍然有一个梦想。这个梦想深深扎根于美国梦中。
我梦想有一天,这个国家会站立起来,真正实现其信条的真谛:“我们认为这些真理是不言而喻的——人人生而平等。”
我梦想有一天,在佐治亚的红山上,昔日奴隶的儿子将能够和昔日奴隶主的儿子坐在一起,共叙兄弟情谊。
我梦想有一天,甚至连密西西比州这个正义匿迹、压迫成风的荒漠之州,也将变成自由和正义的绿洲。
我梦想有一天,我的四个小孩将生活在一个不是以他们的肤色,而是以他们的品格优劣来评价他们的国度里。
我今天有一个梦想!
我梦想有一天,这个有着残酷的种族主义者的亚拉巴马州能够有所转变。虽然该州州长现在仍然满口异议,拒绝执行联邦法令,但有朝一日,那里的黑人小男孩和小女孩将能够与白人小男孩和小女孩情同骨肉,携手并进。
我今天有一个梦想!
我梦想有一天,幽谷上升,高山下降,坎坷曲折之路成坦途,圣光披露,满照人间。
知识积累
①swelter v. 热得难受
②interposition n. 提出异议;干涉
③nullification n. 取消;废止
④exalt v. 提高;提升
文化链接
马丁·路德·金,非裔美国人,1929年出生于美国亚特兰大,是美国牧师、社会活动家、黑人民权运动领袖。他于1964年获得诺贝尔和平奖,于1968年4月被人暗杀。从1986年起,美国政府将每年1月的第3个星期一定为马丁·路德·金全国纪念日。
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UNIT 1 RELATIONSHIPS
Section Ⅴ Writing
1.熟悉英语邀请信的文体特征并掌握其写作方法及策略。(语言能力,学习能力)
2.能够借助已知的关键信息,适当补充细节,写好邀请信。(语言能力)
本单元写作任务是写一封邀请信,属于书信的写作范畴。正式的邀请信可以使用第三人称或第一人称,要注意措辞和语气应该是正式的,而不是口语的。
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,内容应包含以下几个方面:
1.邀请对方参加的活动的内容、时间和地点;
2.与该活动有关的注意事项;
3.期待对方接受邀请。
邀 请 信
探究点1 教材范例提炼
Ⅰ.常用词汇
1.make/deliver a speech做演讲
2.accept one's invitation接受某人的邀请
3.on behalf of our school代表我们学校
4.be a judge at our English speech contest做我们英语演讲比赛的评委
5.last for about three hours持续约三个小时
6.contact us in advance提前与我们联系
7.plan several activities计划一些活动
8.have a great time玩得很开心
9.invite you to visit the Chinese painting exhibition together 邀请你一起去参观中国画展
10.give us a lecture about the cultural differences between America and China 给我们做一个关于中美文化差异的讲座
Ⅱ.话题句式
★篇首句:介绍自己,简要说明活动,并邀请对方。
1.I'm Wang Ming from Yuwen School, president of the Student Union.
我是来自育文学校的学生会主席王明。
2.An English speech contest of our school will be held on August 6.
我们学校有一场英语演讲比赛将在8月6日举行。
3.I'd like to invite you to be a judge.
我想邀请你做裁判。
★篇中句:介绍活动具体内容,并发出邀请。
1.It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours,during which 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
它将于下午两点钟开始,四点钟结束,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
2.We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00 am.
我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。
3.I'm sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
★篇尾句:期待对方接受邀请,并期待对方尽快回复。
1.Will you be available during that time Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.
那期间你有空吗 请方便时尽快给我打电话,号码是1234567。
2.Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation
请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请,好吗
3.We will feel much honored if you could come.
如果你能来,我们会非常荣幸。
4.We are looking forward to your coming.
我们期待着你的到来。
假定你是美国的Ann,你的朋友Susan很想知道中国学校里打招呼的方式和师生关系。应Susan的要求,你打算邀请中国的留学生朋友李华于5月12日共进晚餐,并向他请教一些问题。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.邀请的原因;
2.吃饭时间、地点;
3.期待回复。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
探究点2 写作应用体验
Step 1 审题谋篇
邀请信属于应用文,主要用来邀请某人参加宴会、庆祝活动或会议等。邀请信可分为正式的邀请信(请柬)和非正式的邀请信两种。
我们平时所写的通常是非正式的邀请信。它与普通信件的格式基本一样:
(1)称呼;
(2)开头语;
(3)活动内容、时间及地点;
(4)结束语;
(5)落款。
体裁 应用文 时态 一般现在时
主题 邀请共进晚餐 人称 第一、三人称
结构 第一段:介绍邀请的原因; 第二段:吃饭的时间、地点; 第三段:希望对方回应
Step 2 要点翻译
1.翻译词汇
(1) n.请求;要求
(2) vt.邀请
(3) vt.打招呼
(4) n.关系
(5) adj.常见的;普遍的
request
invite
greet
relation
common
2.翻译句子
(1)她想知道校园常见的打招呼的方式是什么。
She wonders .
(2)师生关系是怎样的呢
What are like
(3)应她的请求,我想邀请您在5月12日与我们共进晚餐。
, I’d like to with us on May 12th.
what the common way of greeting on campus is
the relations between students and teachers
At her request invite you to have supper
Step 3 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
Dear Li Hua,
How is it going
My friend Susan is interested in body language in Chinese schools. She wonders what the common way of greeting on campus is and what the relations between students and teachers are like.So at her request,I'd like to invite you to have supper with us on May 12th,and wish you to introduce some body language explain some problems to us.
We plan to have supper at five at the school canteen so that we can have enough time for our talk.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Ann
主题写作
假定你是李华,你校将举办一场交通安全知识讲座,你打算邀请外教John参加。请用英语给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.告知讲座的时间和地点;
2.介绍讲座的主题和内容;
3.期待他的出席。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
I'm writing to tell you a piece of good news. There will be a lecture about traffic safety at 7 pm next Monday. Organized by our school,it will be held in the school hall. There are three parts of the lecture. At first,our headmaster will give a speech on behalf of the school. Then some traffic policemen coming from our city will show us some pictures about traffic accidents. In addition,they will teach us many traffic regulations to remind us to pay attention to traffic safety.
I believe the lecture will be educational,so I sincerely invite you to attend it.
I'm looking forward to your attendance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.February 22,2022 is called one of China's most “loving” dates in recent memory,as the number “2” in Chinese has a similar pronunciation to the Chinese word for love. On this special occasion,many Chinese people had decided to tie the knot to give their own special days an added meaning.
2022年2月22日被称为中国近期记忆中最“爱”的日子之一,因为汉语中的数字“二”与汉语中的“爱”一词发音相似。在这个特殊的日子里,许多中国人决定结婚,为自己的特殊日子增添意义。
2.The kids at this school are disciplined,hard-working and well-behaved.
这所学校的孩子们遵守纪律、学习勤奋、彬彬有礼。
3.Family snow tours not only create a new segment for resorts but also boost snow consumption. Many parents prefer to buy a full set of professional snow equipment for their children rather than rent it.
家庭冰雪旅游不仅为度假村创造了一个新的细分市场,而且还促进了冰雪消费。许多父母宁愿为孩子购买全套专业的雪上设备,也不愿意租用。
《我有一个梦想》是马丁·路德·金于1963年8月28日在华盛顿林肯纪念堂发表的著名演讲,内容主要关于黑人民族平等。阅读下面选取的部分,认真体会作者表达了什么样的思想感情。
I have a dream (Excerpt)
I say to you today, my friends.And so even though we face the difficulties of today and tomorrow, I still have a dream.It is a dream deeply rooted in the American dream.
I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: “We hold these truths to be self-evident that all men are created equal.”
I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia, the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood.
I have a dream that one day even the state of Mississippi, a state sweltering① with the heat of injustice, sweltering with the heat of oppression, will be transformed into an oasis of freedom and justice.
I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.
I have a dream today!
I have a dream that one day, down in Alabama, with its vicious racists, with its governor having his lips dripping with the words of “interposition②” and “nullification③”—one day right there in Alabama little black boys and black girls will be able to join hands with little white boys and white girls as sisters and brothers.
I have a dream today!
I have a dream that one day every valley shall be exalted④, every hill and mountain shall be made low, the rough places will be made plain, and the crooked places will be made straight, and the glory of the Lord shall be revealed and all flesh shall see it together.
我有一个梦想(节选)
朋友们,今天我对你们说,此时此刻,我们虽然遭受种种困难和挫折,但我仍然有一个梦想。这个梦想深深扎根于美国梦中。
我梦想有一天,这个国家会站立起来,真正实现其信条的真谛:“我们认为这些真理是不言而喻的——人人生而平等。”
我梦想有一天,在佐治亚的红山上,昔日奴隶的儿子将能够和昔日奴隶主的儿子坐在一起,共叙兄弟情谊。
我梦想有一天,甚至连密西西比州这个正义匿迹、压迫成风的荒漠之州,也将变成自由和正义的绿洲。
我梦想有一天,我的四个小孩将生活在一个不是以他们的肤色,而是以他们的品格优劣来评价他们的国度里。
我今天有一个梦想!
我梦想有一天,这个有着残酷的种族主义者的亚拉巴马州能够有所转变。虽然该州州长现在仍然满口异议,拒绝执行联邦法令,但有朝一日,那里的黑人小男孩和小女孩将能够与白人小男孩和小女孩情同骨肉,携手并进。
我今天有一个梦想!
我梦想有一天,幽谷上升,高山下降,坎坷曲折之路成坦途,圣光披露,满照人间。
①swelter v. 热得难受
②interposition n. 提出异议;干涉
③nullification n. 取消;废止
④exalt v. 提高;提升
马丁·路德·金,非裔美国人,1929年出生于美国亚特兰大,是美国牧师、社会活动家、黑人民权运动领袖。他于1964年获得诺贝尔和平奖,于1968年4月被人暗杀。从1986年起,美国政府将每年1月的第3个星期一定为马丁·路德·金全国纪念日。
