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UNIT 5 EDUCATION
Section Ⅴ Writing
1.观察图画，学习描述类写作的文体特征，并掌握其写作方法及策略。（语言能力，学习能力）
2.能够借助已知的关键信息，适当补充辅助信息，写好图画描述类作文。（语言能力）
图 画 描 述
本单元的写作任务是描述图画。图画描述类作文以图画形式给出信息，所以需要抓住图画所传递的信息，将图片信息转化为文字要点。图画描述写作的三个步骤：
1.简要描述图画内容
写好图画作文的第一步是要把自己直观看到的图画内容简要地描述出来，这一段的描写简要即可。
2.阐明观点并深层探讨
可以先说明图画所揭示的现象，然后再探讨导致该现象的原因以及该现象可能导致的后果等。
3.总结观点并给出合理建议
跟一般的提纲作文一样，图画描述类作文最后也要对全文观点进行总结，学生还要根据不同的图画内容和主题给出相应的建议或者评价，这一点类似解决问题型的作文结尾。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
课文范例
素材积累
Ⅰ.开头
1.From the picture we can see that...
2.As is vividly shown in the picture...
3.As is revealed in the picture above...
Ⅱ.常用过渡词
nevertheless、consequently、undoubtedly、as far as I can see、personally speaking、for my part、in my view、as for me
Ⅲ.主体
1.There are mainly two reasons. On the one hand， __________. On the other hand，
__________.
2.There are three reasons to account for this phenomenon. To begin with，
__________. What's more， __________. Last but not least， __________.
3.This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.
Ⅳ.结尾
In consequence/In brief/To sum up/In conclusion/To summarize...
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
如今，随着智能手机和电子设备的普及，“低头族”现象兴起，请根据下图写一篇英语短文。
内容要点:1.描述图画内容；
2.对图中现象加以分析；
3.针对这个现象提出建议。
注意:1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
第一段:介绍图画内容，全家人正在聚餐，但年轻人却在玩手机，完全不顾父母的感受。
第二段:陈述“低头族”这种社会现象。
第三段:就此现象提出自己的看法。
Step 2 要点翻译
1.翻译词汇
（1）_______________忙于；专心于
bury oneself in
（2）_________________对……有影响
have an effect on
（3）_______扩大
widen
（4）_______增加
add to
（5）________________________就……而言
as far as sb be concerned
（6）____________面对面地
face to face
（7）___________和谐的
harmonious
2.翻译句子
（1）从图中我们可以看出，一个大家庭正聚在一起吃一顿丰盛的晚餐。
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As can be seen from the picture， a big family is getting together to have a big dinner.
（2）当他们坐下来吃饭时，年轻人只是埋头玩手机，完全无视他们的父母，父母感到
非常孤独和悲伤。
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When they sit down at table， the young just bury themselves in playing with their cell phones， totally ignoring their parents， who feel very lonely and sad.
（4）我认为与我们的家庭成员面对面交流很重要，这有助于营造一个和谐的家庭氛围。
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I think it important to communicate with our family members face to face. Face to face communication helps build harmonious family atmosphere.
（3）对手机上瘾也可能导致青少年在学校表现不佳，这给长辈增添担忧。
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Addiction to cell phones might also lead to teenagers' poor performance at school， which adds to the elders' worry.
Step 3 句式升级
1.用状语从句的省略改写上题中的句（2）
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When sitting down at table， the young just bury themselves in playing with their cell phones， totally ignoring their parents， who feel very lonely and sad.
2.用定语从句改写上题中的句（4）
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I think it important to communicate with our family members face to face， which helps build harmonious family atmosphere.
Step 4 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子，加上恰当的连接词和过渡句，必要时可以改变句式，使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
As can be seen from the picture， a big family is getting together to have a big dinner. But when sitting down at table， the young just bury themselves in playing with their cell phones， totally ignoring their parents， who feel very lonely and sad.
There is no doubt that cell phones have a negative effect on our lives. Heavy use of cell phones actually widens the distance between teenagers and their elders，
leaving the elders more lonely. Worse still， addiction to cell phones might also lead to teenagers' poor performance at school， which adds to the elders' worry.
As far as I'm concerned， it's necessary to limit the time we spend using cell phones. And I think it important to communicate with our family members face to face， which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere.
主题写作
请你根据下面漫画所反映的现象和问题，写一篇题为 “The faster， the better ”的短文。
内容要点：1.漫画描述和反映的问题；
2.你对此问题的想法；
3.在我们的学习生活中应该怎样正确地解决这样的问题。
注意:1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考范文
The faster， the better
As we can see in the picture， two men are competing against each other in building walls. One man has built up an obviously higher but twisted wall， while the other's basic work is completely vertical， strong and solid though lower.
The picture implies a very important rule of doing things that we always need a balance between speed and quality. In our daily life， “The faster， the better” has become a motto for us due to the fiercely competitive environment of our society. However， our work has no value at all if we overlook the quality of it just like the man in the picture.
As students， with the heavy burdens of our studies， we are required to do things at high speed. Meanwhile， we should always bear it in mind that no matter how fast we need to achieve something， quality may never be ignored. After all， it is our test results rather than the speed that count.
1.Life is short， and perhaps you need to do something worthwhile with it.
人生短暂， 也许你需要做些有意义的事情。
2.Had it not been for the superb preservation of these fossils they might well have been classified as dinosaurs.
如果不是这些化石被极好地保存下来， 它们也许会被归类为恐龙。
3.Why waste precious time dreaming when waking life is so much better
醒着的生活是如此美好， 为何要把时间浪费在做梦上呢？
4.There is one thing that is for sure： technology will be at the centre of tomorrow's language education.
有一点是肯定的： 科技将在未来的语言教育中占据中心地位。
5.Many people contributed money to the poor boy， which contributed to his returning to school. A writer wrote a story about this and contributed it to a newspaper.
许多人给那个可怜的男孩捐款， 使他可以重返校园。一位作家写了一篇关于此事的故事并投稿给报社。
美篇导读
《雾都孤儿》是英国作家查尔斯·狄更斯的作品。它以伦敦为背景，讲述了孤儿奥利弗悲惨的身世及遭遇，最后在善良人的帮助下，奥利弗查明了身世并获得了幸福。
美篇呈现
Oliver Twist（excerpt）
“Wolves tear your throats！”muttered① Sikes，grinding his teeth.“I wish I was among some of you； you'd howl the hoarser for it.”
As Sikes growled forth this imprecation，with the most desperate ferocity that his desperate nature was capable of，he rested the body of the wounded boy across his bended knee；and turned his head，for an instant，to look back at his pursuers②.
There was little to be made out，in the mist and darkness；but the loud shouting of men vibrated③ through the air，and the barking of the neighbouring dogs，roused by the sound of the alarm bell，resounded in every direction.
“Stop，you white-livered hound！” cried the robber，shouting after Toby Crackit， who，making the best use of his long legs，was already ahead.“Stop！”
The repetition of the word， brought Toby to a dead stand-still. For he was not quite satisfied that he was beyond the range of pistol-shot；and Sikes was in no mood to be played with.
“Bear a hand with the boy，” cried Sikes，beckoning furiously④ to his confederate.“Come back！”
Toby made a show of returning；but ventured⑤，in a low voice，broken for want of breath，to intimate⑥ considerable reluctance as he came slowly along.
“Quicker！” cried Sikes， laying the boy in a dry ditch at his feet， and drawing a pistol from his pocket.“Don't play booty with me.”
At this moment the noise grew louder. Sikes，again looking round，could discern⑦ that the men who had given chase were already climbing the gate of the field in which he stood；and that a couple of dogs were some paces in advance of them.
雾都孤儿（节选）
“让狼咬断你们的脖子！”赛克斯小声地说，牙齿咬得咯咯直响。“有朝一日你们谁也躲不掉，你们会把嗓子喊得更哑的。”
赛克斯骂骂咧咧地把这一番诅咒发泄出来，脸上那副不顾死活的样子充分体现了他的那种不顾死活的脾气。他把受伤的奥利弗横放在自己的膝盖上，回过头去看看后面的追兵。
夜黑雾浓，什么东西也辨别不出来，只有嘈杂喧闹的呼喊声在空中震响，邻近的狗被告急的钟声惊醒，此呼彼应地吠叫起来，四下里响成一片。
“站住，你这个胆小鬼！”这个强盗见托比·格拉基特撒开两条长腿，已经抢在了前边，便厉声喝道。“站住！”
听到第二声吆喝，托比猝然停了下来。他还不敢肯定自己已经脱离了手枪的射程，赛克斯可是根本没有心思闹着玩的。
“帮忙把这小子弄走，”赛克斯杀气腾腾地向同伙打了个手势。“回来！”
托比做出一副要折回来的样子，慢吞吞地朝这边走来，却大着胆子表示自己非常不情愿回去，声音不大，又因为喘气，说得断断续续。
“快些！”赛克斯叫道，他把奥利弗放在脚下一条干枯的水沟里，从衣袋里拔出一支手枪。“别跟我耍滑头。”
就在这时，喧闹声变得更嘈杂了。赛克斯又一次扭头看了看，可以断定追兵正在爬他所处的这一片田野的篱笆门，有两只狗跑在前面。
知识积累
①mutter vi.嘀咕
②pursuer n. 追赶者；追寻者；追捕者
③vibrate vi.颤动；震动
④furiously adv. 猛烈地；狂暴地
⑤venture v.冒险
⑥intimate v. 透露；暗示
⑦discern v.辨出；察觉出
素养链接
查尔斯·狄更斯，19世纪英国批判现实主义小说家。狄更斯特别注意描写生活在英国社会底层的“小人物”的生活遭遇，深刻地反映了当时英国复杂的社会现实，为英国批判现实主义文学的开拓和发展做出了卓越的贡献。他的作品至今依然盛行，对英国文学发展起到了深远的影响。他的主要作品有《匹克威克外传》《雾都孤儿》 《老古玩店》《艰难时世》《我们共同的朋友》等。Unit 5 Section Ⅴ Writing
【学习目标】
1.观察图画,学习描述类写作的文体特征,并掌握其写作方法及策略。(语言能力,学习能力)
2.能够借助已知的关键信息,适当补充辅助信息,写好图画描述类作文。(语言能力)
【合作探究】
写作探究
图 画 描 述
本单元的写作任务是描述图画。图画描述类作文以图画形式给出信息,所以需要抓住图画所传递的信息,将图片信息转化为文字要点。图画描述写作的三个步骤:
1.简要描述图画内容
写好图画作文的第一步是要把自己直观看到的图画内容简要地描述出来,这一段的描写简要即可。
2.阐明观点并深层探讨
可以先说明图画所揭示的现象,然后再探讨导致该现象的原因以及该现象可能导致的后果等。
3.总结观点并给出合理建议
跟一般的提纲作文一样,图画描述类作文最后也要对全文观点进行总结,学生还要根据不同的图画内容和主题给出相应的建议或者评价,这一点类似解决问题型的作文结尾。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
Ⅰ.开头
1.From the picture we can see that...
2.As is vividly shown in the picture...
3.As is revealed in the picture above...
Ⅱ.常用过渡词
nevertheless、consequently、undoubtedly、as far as I can see、personally speaking、for my part、in my view、as for me
Ⅲ.主体
1.There are mainly two reasons. On the one hand, . On the other hand, .
2.There are three reasons to account for this phenomenon. To begin with, . What's more, . Last but not least, .
3.This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.
Ⅳ.结尾
In consequence/In brief/To sum up/In conclusion/To summarize...
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
如今,随着智能手机和电子设备的普及,“低头族”现象兴起,请根据下图写一篇英语短文。
内容要点:1.描述图画内容;
2.对图中现象加以分析;
3.针对这个现象提出建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
第一段:介绍图画内容,全家人正在聚餐,但年轻人却在玩手机,完全不顾父母的感受。
第二段:陈述“低头族”这种社会现象。
第三段:就此现象提出自己的看法。
Step 2 要点翻译
1.翻译词汇
(1) 忙于;专心于
(2) 对……有影响
(3) 扩大
(4) 增加
(5) 就……而言
(6) 面对面地
(7) 和谐的
答案 (1)bury oneself in (2)have an effect on
(3)widen (4)add to (5)as far as sb be concerned
(6)face to face (7)harmonious
2.翻译句子
(1)从图中我们可以看出,一个大家庭正聚在一起吃一顿丰盛的晚餐。
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(2)当他们坐下来吃饭时,年轻人只是埋头玩手机,完全无视他们的父母,父母感到非常孤独和悲伤。
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(3)对手机上瘾也可能导致青少年在学校表现不佳,这给长辈增添担忧。
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(4)我认为与我们的家庭成员面对面交流很重要,这有助于营造一个和谐的家庭氛围。
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答案
(1)As can be seen from the picture, a big family is getting together to have a big dinner.
(2)When they sit down at table, the young just bury themselves in playing with their cell phones, totally ignoring their parents, who feel very lonely and sad.
(3)Addiction to cell phones might also lead to teenagers' poor performance at school, which adds to the elders' worry.
(4)I think it important to communicate with our family members face to face. Face to face communication helps build harmonious family atmosphere.
Step 3 句式升级
1.用状语从句的省略改写上题中的句(2)
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2.用定语从句改写上题中的句(4)
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答案
1.When sitting down at table, the young just bury themselves in playing with their cell phones, totally ignoring their parents, who feel very lonely and sad.
2.I think it important to communicate with our family members face to face, which helps build harmonious family atmosphere.
Step 4 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子,加上恰当的连接词和过渡句,必要时可以改变句式,使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
As can be seen from the picture, a big family is getting together to have a big dinner. But when sitting down at table, the young just bury themselves in playing with their cell phones, totally ignoring their parents, who feel very lonely and sad.
There is no doubt that cell phones have a negative effect on our lives. Heavy use of cell phones actually widens the distance between teenagers and their elders, leaving the elders more lonely.Worse still, addiction to cell phones might also lead to teenagers' poor performance at school, which adds to the elders' worry.
As far as I'm concerned, it's necessary to limit the time we spend using cell phones. And I think it important to communicate with our family members face to face, which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere.
【随堂检测】
夯实基础
主题写作
请你根据下面漫画所反映的现象和问题,写一篇题为 “The faster, the better ”的短文。
内容要点:1.漫画描述和反映的问题;
2.你对此问题的想法;
3.在我们的学习生活中应该怎样正确地解决这样的问题。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考范文
The faster, the better
As we can see in the picture, two men are competing against each other in building walls. One man has built up an obviously higher but twisted wall, while the other's basic work is completely vertical, strong and solid though lower.
The picture implies a very important rule of doing things that we always need a balance between speed and quality. In our daily life, “The faster, the better” has become a motto for us due to the fiercely competitive environment of our society. However, our work has no value at all if we overlook the quality of it just like the man in the picture.
As students, with the heavy burdens of our studies, we are required to do things at high speed. Meanwhile, we should always bear it in mind that no matter how fast we need to achieve something, quality may never be ignored. After all, it is our test results rather than the speed that count.
视野拓展
1.Life is short, and perhaps you need to do something worthwhile with it.
人生短暂, 也许你需要做些有意义的事情。
2.Had it not been for the superb preservation of these fossils they might well have been classified as dinosaurs.
如果不是这些化石被极好地保存下来, 它们也许会被归类为恐龙。
3.Why waste precious time dreaming when waking life is so much better
醒着的生活是如此美好, 为何要把时间浪费在做梦上呢
4.There is one thing that is for sure: technology will be at the centre of tomorrow's language education.
有一点是肯定的: 科技将在未来的语言教育中占据中心地位。
5.Many people contributed money to the poor boy, which contributed to his returning to school. A writer wrote a story about this and contributed it to a newspaper.
许多人给那个可怜的男孩捐款, 使他可以重返校园。一位作家写了一篇关于此事的故事并投稿给报社。
英美文化
美篇导读
《雾都孤儿》是英国作家查尔斯·狄更斯的作品。它以伦敦为背景,讲述了孤儿奥利弗悲惨的身世及遭遇,最后在善良人的帮助下,奥利弗查明了身世并获得了幸福。
美篇呈现
Oliver Twist(excerpt)
“Wolves tear your throats!”muttered① Sikes,grinding his teeth.“I wish I was among some of you; you'd howl the hoarser for it.”
As Sikes growled forth this imprecation,with the most desperate ferocity that his desperate nature was capable of,he rested the body of the wounded boy across his bended knee;and turned his head,for an instant,to look back at his pursuers②.
There was little to be made out,in the mist and darkness;but the loud shouting of men vibrated③ through the air,and the barking of the neighbouring dogs,roused by the sound of the alarm bell,resounded in every direction.
“Stop,you white-livered hound!” cried the robber,shouting after Toby Crackit, who,making the best use of his long legs,was already ahead.“Stop!”
The repetition of the word, brought Toby to a dead stand-still. For he was not quite satisfied that he was beyond the range of pistol-shot;and Sikes was in no mood to be played with.
“Bear a hand with the boy,” cried Sikes,beckoning furiously④ to his confederate.“Come back!”
Toby made a show of returning;but ventured⑤,in a low voice,broken for want of breath,to intimate⑥ considerable reluctance as he came slowly along.
“Quicker!” cried Sikes, laying the boy in a dry ditch at his feet, and drawing a pistol from his pocket.“Don't play booty with me.”
At this moment the noise grew louder. Sikes,again looking round,could discern⑦ that the men who had given chase were already climbing the gate of the field in which he stood;and that a couple of dogs were some paces in advance of them.
雾都孤儿(节选)
“让狼咬断你们的脖子!”赛克斯小声地说,牙齿咬得咯咯直响。“有朝一日你们谁也躲不掉,你们会把嗓子喊得更哑的。”
赛克斯骂骂咧咧地把这一番诅咒发泄出来,脸上那副不顾死活的样子充分体现了他的那种不顾死活的脾气。他把受伤的奥利弗横放在自己的膝盖上,回过头去看看后面的追兵。
夜黑雾浓,什么东西也辨别不出来,只有嘈杂喧闹的呼喊声在空中震响,邻近的狗被告急的钟声惊醒,此呼彼应地吠叫起来,四下里响成一片。
“站住,你这个胆小鬼!”这个强盗见托比·格拉基特撒开两条长腿,已经抢在了前边,便厉声喝道。“站住!”
听到第二声吆喝,托比猝然停了下来。他还不敢肯定自己已经脱离了手枪的射程,赛克斯可是根本没有心思闹着玩的。
“帮忙把这小子弄走,”赛克斯杀气腾腾地向同伙打了个手势。“回来!”
托比做出一副要折回来的样子,慢吞吞地朝这边走来,却大着胆子表示自己非常不情愿回去,声音不大,又因为喘气,说得断断续续。
“快些!”赛克斯叫道,他把奥利弗放在脚下一条干枯的水沟里,从衣袋里拔出一支手枪。“别跟我耍滑头。”
就在这时,喧闹声变得更嘈杂了。赛克斯又一次扭头看了看,可以断定追兵正在爬他所处的这一片田野的篱笆门,有两只狗跑在前面。
知识积累
①mutter vi.嘀咕
②pursuer n. 追赶者;追寻者;追捕者
③vibrate vi.颤动;震动
④furiously adv. 猛烈地;狂暴地
⑤venture v.冒险
⑥intimate v. 透露;暗示
⑦discern v.辨出;察觉出
素养链接
查尔斯·狄更斯,19世纪英国批判现实主义小说家。狄更斯特别注意描写生活在英国社会底层的“小人物”的生活遭遇,深刻地反映了当时英国复杂的社会现实,为英国批判现实主义文学的开拓和发展做出了卓越的贡献。他的作品至今依然盛行,对英国文学发展起到了深远的影响。他的主要作品有《匹克威克外传》《雾都孤儿》 《老古玩店》《艰难时世》《我们共同的朋友》等。
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