北师大版（2019）选择性必修 第四册Unit 10 Connections Writing课件(共37张PPT)

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UNIT 10 CONNECTIONS
Section Ⅴ Writing
1.通过阅读熟悉英语新闻报道的文体特征，并掌握其写作方法及策略。（语言能力，学习能力）
2.能够借助已知的关键信息，适当补充辅助信息，写好新闻报道。（语言能力）
3.写作时做到内容表达的完整性、行文的连贯性和遣词造句的准确性。（学习能力）
新闻报道
本单元的写作任务是写一篇新闻报道。新闻一般报道新发生的、重要的、有意义的、能引起广泛兴趣的事情,具有迅速、明了、简短的特点。
（一）新闻报道的主体结构:
标题（headline）:标题一般浓缩概括全文的中心主题,要简洁、生动、具有概括性。
导语（lead or introduction）:导语是新闻的开头,通常为文章的第1段,要求用极简明的文字概括新闻的主要内容。
正文（body）:在导语的基础上,引入更多与主题相关的信息,使之更加翔实、具体,并展开评论,进而得出结论。
（二）新闻报道写作的语言特点:
1.具体。新闻用事实说话,五个W和一个H （when、where、who、what、why和how）是构成一则完整消息不可缺少的要素,这就需要记叙具体的时间,地点,人物,事件的起因、经过、结果等。
2.准确。新闻语言不能含糊不清、模棱两可,也不能夸大或缩小事实。
3.简练。新闻语言要简明扼要、直截了当。
探究点1 教材范例提炼
课文范例
素材积累
导语常用句式：
1.A big fire broke out in the forest in the southwest of the United States late in November.
11月底，美国西南部的森林里发生了一场大火灾。
2.“Saving the Earth” Conference, held in Dalian, came to a close last Saturday.
在大连举行的“拯救地球”会议于上周六结束。
主体常用句式：
1.The government sent 3,000 firefighters and policemen there to help them move to a safe place.
政府派出了3000名消防员和警察去那里，帮助他们搬到一个安全的地方。
2.The fire lasted over three weeks, causing a damage of at least twenty million dollars.
大火持续了三个多星期，造成了至少两千万美元的损失。
结语常用句式：
1.In a word, it is necessary for us to learn to protect ourselves.
总之，我们有必要学会保护自己。
2.I feel sad. If we all do something for them, things will be sure to get better.
我感到难过。如果我们都为他们做点什么，事情一定会变好的。
3.I believe we can certainly overcome the disaster with the public and the government working together.
我相信，通过公众和政府的共同努力，我们肯定可以战胜这场灾难。
探究点2 写作应用体验
写作典例
5月1日，高二（3）班的学生志愿者李越和张华去阳光敬老院 （Sunshine Nursing Home） 开展志愿者活动。假定你是校英语报的记者陈杰，请按下列要点用英语写一篇新闻报道。
1.活动过程；
2.老人们的反应；
3.简短评论。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Volunteer Students Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two,
went aboard the bus to Sunshine Nursing Home to do some voluntary
work.______________________________________________________________
By Chen Jie, School Newspaper
分步推进
Step 1 审题谋篇
体裁 新闻报道 时态 一般过去时
主题 开展志愿者活动 人称 第三人称
结构 第一部分：报道事实； 第二部分：老人的反应； 第三部分：简短评论
Step 2 要点翻译
1.翻译词汇
（1）_______prep. 上（车）
（2）_________vt.&n. 欢迎
（3）____________ n. 成就；功业；伟绩
（4）_________adj. 高兴的；快乐的
aboard
welcome
achievement
delighted
2.翻译句子
（1）他们一到那里，就受到了热烈的欢迎。
Upon their arrival, they _____________________________________________.
（2）所有事都做完后，他们坐在院子里与老人们聊天。
After everything was done, they sat in the yard and ______________________.
（3）到了他们该离开的时候，老人们对他们的善意表示感谢。
When ____________________________, the elderly thanked them for their kindness.
were warmly welcomed/received a warm welcome
chatted with the elderly
it was time for them to leave
（4）这一天很美好，他们有一种成就感。
It was a very beautiful day and they _________________________.
（5）他们所做的事情给别人带来了快乐，并且丰富了他们自己的生活。
______________ has brought joy to others and ______________________.
felt a sense of achievement
What they did
enriched their own lives
Step 3 句式升级
用独立主格结构和分词短语作状语改写上一题中的句（2）
________________________________________________________
Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly.
Step 4 连句成篇
利用以上几个句子，加上恰当的连接词和过渡句，必要时可以改变句式，使之成为一篇连贯的文章。
参考范文
Volunteer Students Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went aboard the bus to Sunshine Nursing Home to do some voluntary work.
Upon their arrival, they received a warm welcome, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly.
When it was time for them to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. It was a very beautiful day and they felt a sense of achievement.
Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very delighted. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.
By Chen Jie, School Newspaper
主题写作
假定你是学校英语杂志社记者李华， 上周你校开展了给偏远地区学生捐赠 “爱心包裹”的活动。请你写一篇新闻报道，内容包括：
1.活动时间与地点；
2.活动过程；
3.活动意义。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________
参考范文
Loving Parcels for Students in Need
Last week witnessed our “Loving Parcels” donation activity at our school. Aimed at helping the students in the remote areas, this activity was well received in the whole school.
All of the teachers and students took an active part in the activity. The activity provided a platform for all the students to donate their clothes, books and schoolbags to the students in need. Most impressively, they also wrote down the best wishes on cards, which would be collected and delivered to the schools in the remote areas.
With the students' active participation and teachers' enthusiastic support, the donation was undoubtedly a success.
1.The local people worry that building the hotel is not eco-friendly and will disturb the wildlife， in particular the turtles which lay their eggs on White Beach.
当地人担心，修建这家酒店不环保，会干扰野生动物，特别是在白沙滩上产卵的海龟。
2.When another bean plant detects the chemicals from its injured neighbour， it starts to release its own different chemicals.
当另一棵豆秧察觉到从它受伤的邻居身上释放出的化学物质时，它开始释放自己不同的化学物质。
3.The wealthy couple adopted a little boy. The adopted boy was smart.
这对富有的夫妇收养了一个小男孩。被收养的男孩很聪明。
美篇导读
《绿野仙踪》是美国作家弗兰克·鲍姆的代表作。作者以奇特的想象力描述了一个小女孩因被旋风刮到奥兹国，和她的三个朋友，即狮子、稻草人、铁皮人，团结在一起，共同克服困难，战胜险恶，为了实现自己的愿望，不屈不挠地同恶魔做斗争，最终如愿以偿的故事。
美篇呈现
The Wizard of Oz（Excerpt）
Dorothy lived in the midst of the great Kansas prairies, with Uncle Henry, who was a farmer, and Aunt Em, who was the farmer's wife. Their house was small, for the lumber① to build it had to be carried by wagon many miles. There were four walls, a floor and a roof, which made one room； this room contained a rusty② looking cookstove, a cupboard for the dishes, a table, three or four chairs, and the beds. Uncle Henry and Aunt Em had a big bed in one corner, and Dorothy a little bed in another corner.
There was no garret at all, and no cellar—except a small hole dug in the ground, called a cyclone cellar, where the family could go in case one of those great whirlwinds③ arose, mighty enough to crush any building in its path. It was reached by a trap door in the middle of the floor, from which a ladder led down into the small, dark hole.
When Dorothy stood in the doorway and looked around, she could see nothing but the great gray prairie on every side. Not a tree nor a house broke the broad sweep of flat country that reached the edge of the sky in all directions④.
The sun had baked the plowed land into a gray mass, with little cracks running through it. Even the grass was not green, for the sun had burned the tops of the long blades until they were the same gray color to be seen everywhere. Once the house had been painted, but the sun blistered the paint and the rains washed it away, and now the house was as dull and gray as everything else.
When Aunt Em came there to live she was a young, pretty wife. The sun and wind had changed her, too. They had taken the sparkle⑤ from her eyes and left them a sober gray； they had taken the red from her cheeks and lips, and they were also gray. She was thin and gaunt, and never smiled now.
When Dorothy, who was an orphan, first came to her, Aunt Em had been so startled⑥ by the child's laughter that she would scream and press her hand upon her heart whenever Dorothy's merry voice reached her ears； she still looked at the little girl with wonder that she could find anything to laugh at.
Uncle Henry never laughed. He worked hard from morning till night and did not know what joy was. He was gray also, from his long beard to his rough boots, and he looked stern and solemn⑦, and rarely spoke.
It was Toto that made Dorothy laugh, and saved her from growing as gray as her other surroundings. Toto was not gray； he was a little black dog, with long silky hair and small black eyes that twinkled⑧ merrily on either side of his funny, wee nose. Toto played all day long, and Dorothy played with him, and loved him dearly.
Today, however, they were not playing. Uncle Henry sat upon the doorstep and looked anxiously at the sky, which was even grayer than usual. Dorothy stood at the door with Toto in her arms, and looked at the sky too. Aunt Em was washing the dishes.
From the far north they heard a low wail of the wind, and Uncle Henry and Dorothy could see where the long grass bowed⑨ in waves before the coming storm. There now came a sharp whistling in the air from the south, and as they turned their eyes that way they saw ripples in the grass coming from that direction too.
Suddenly Uncle Henry stood up.
“There's a cyclone coming, Em，” he called to his wife.“I'll go look after the stock.” Then he ran toward the sheds where the cows and horses were kept.
Aunt Em dropped her work and came to the door. One glance told her of the danger close at hand.
“Quick, Dorothy！” she screamed.“Run for the cellar！”
Toto jumped out of Dorothy's arms and hid under the bed, and the girl started to get him.
Aunt Em, badly frightened, threw open the trap door in the floor and climbed down the ladder into the small, dark hole. Dorothy caught Toto at last and started to follow her aunt. When she was halfway across the room there came a great shriek⑩ from the wind, and the house shook so hard that she lost her footing and sat down suddenly upon the floor.
绿野仙踪（节选）
多萝茜与亨利叔叔（一位农民）、爱姆婶婶（这位农民的妻子）一起生活在堪萨斯州大草原的中部。因为建房子的木材要从很远的地方用货车运过来，所以他们住的房子很小，是由四堵墙、一堂地板和一个屋顶构成的；屋子里有一个看起来生锈的烧饭用的炉灶，一个放着盘子的橱柜，一张桌子，三四把椅子，几张床。亨利叔叔和爱姆婶婶有一张大床，放在角落里，多萝茜有一张小床，放在另外一个角落里。
整个屋子没有阁楼，也没有地下室——只有一个小洞，直通到地下，这洞叫作“旋风的地洞”。在大旋风刮来时，全家人可以躲进里面去，因为凡是旋风经过的地方，不论什么建筑物它都能够吹倒。在地板的中央，有一扇活动的木门，那里有一架梯子，走下去就进入了那又小又黑的地洞里。
多萝茜站在门口，向四周眺望，只看见茫茫的灰色大草原，望不到尽头。在那一片宽阔平坦的原野上没有一棵树，也没有一座房子。那草原从四面八方一直伸展到天边。
太阳炙烤着耕作过的田地，使它变成一片灰色的有许多裂缝的荒野。甚至，原野上的草也不是绿色的，因为太阳灼烧着它们的顶部长叶，使得它们不论从何处看都是灰色的。有一次，屋子已被刷过油漆，但是太阳却把油漆晒起了泡，雨水把它褪尽了，现在这屋子就像其他东西一样暗淡了。
当爱姆婶婶来到那里生活的时候，她是一位年轻而美丽的妻子。太阳和风也使她变了样。它们带走了她眼睛里闪耀的光辉，留下了一种沉重的灰色；她的面颊上和嘴唇上失去了红润，也只剩灰色了。如今她消瘦而且憔悴，不再微笑。
多萝茜是一个孤儿，当她第一次来到爱姆婶婶家时，婶婶惊诧于孩子的笑声，无论何时，多萝茜快活的声音钻到婶婶的耳朵里，婶婶总会尖叫起来，并用手抚着她的心头；她仍带着惊奇，看着这个小女孩——因为她在任何东西上，都能够发现笑料来。
亨利叔叔从不爱笑。他从早到晚在地里干活儿，不知道什么是快乐。从他的长须直到他粗糙的鞋子，也全是灰色的。他看起来稳重而严肃，很少说话。
让多萝茜笑的是托托，在四周一切事物都褪变成灰色的环境中，托托带来了不同的色彩；它是一只小黑狗，有着柔软滑顺的长毛，一对小黑眼睛，在它那逗人的极小的鼻子两边快乐地眨着。多萝茜整天跟它在一块儿玩着，并且越来越喜欢它。
然而，今天他们没有玩。亨利叔叔坐在门口的阶沿上，焦虑地望着比平时更灰的天空。多萝茜抱着托托，站在门口，也望着那天空。爱姆婶婶正在洗着盘子。
他们听到北风低低的呼啸声，亨利叔叔和多萝茜看到风暴到来之前的长草像波浪似的起伏着。接着，现在从南方的高空中也传来了一种尖锐的呼啸声。他们转眼望去，只见在那个方向的草同样掀起了波浪。
亨利叔叔突然站了起来。
“爱姆，旋风就要来了！”他对他的妻子大喊着，“我要去照料家畜。” 说着他就迅速跑向栏舍，他们的牛和马都关在那里。
爱姆婶婶立即停下手上的事来到门口。看了一眼之后，她知道危险马上就要到来了。
“多萝茜，快一点儿！”她高声尖叫着，“立刻到地洞里去！”
托托从多萝茜怀抱里跳下来，钻到床底下去，多萝茜开始去抓它。
爱姆婶婶非常害怕，打开地板上活动的门，爬下梯子，躲到那又小又暗的地洞里去。多萝茜最后捉到了托托，就开始去找她婶婶。当她走到半路时背后就传来呼啸的风声，屋子猛然摇晃起来，她失去了平衡，立刻摔倒在地板上。
知识积累
①lumber n. 木材；废旧家具
②rusty adj. 生锈的
③whirlwind n.旋风
④in all directions 从各个方向；向四面八方
⑤sparkle n. 闪耀的光
⑥startle vt.使惊吓；使吓一跳；使大吃一惊
⑦solemn adj. 庄严的；表情严肃的
⑧twinkle v. 闪烁
⑨bow v.鞠躬；垂（首）；（使）弯曲
⑩shriek n.尖叫
footing n.站稳；立足点
素养链接
由《绿野仙踪》改编的同名电影，是一部经典的儿童影片。全片极富想象力和活力，随处都是神奇有趣的童话角色和欢快的歌舞场面。《绿野仙踪》虽然从特技或音效上都无法和21世纪的一些电影媲美，但是它的温情、真实、感人却给观众留下了难以磨灭的印象。