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Unit 9
Have you ever been to a museum ？
Section B 3a-SC
课型：写作课
主讲人：XXX
CONTENTS
01
情景导入
回顾总结
05
学习理解
02
考点速递
06
应用实践
03
随堂小练
07
迁移创新
04
家庭作业
08
01
能够围绕“fun places”的话题，通过看、读、说等活动搜集、理解所需要的语言基础信息；能够正确使用包括现在完成时在内的多种时态描述自己的家乡或曾去过的地方
语言能力
02
能够通过多种渠道学习和复习，保持英语学习兴趣；认识了以读促写的写作模式并尝试进行写作，认识到写作的步骤有头脑风暴、提纲罗列、修改提升等
学习能力
03
能够在老师的帮助下，通过学习，多层次、多角度、多元化地内化有关“家乡和曾去过地方”的语言知识；在写作中，注意到语篇的整体性、结构性、逻辑性
思维品质
04
能够进一步了解自己的家乡，表达对家乡的情感；树立主动探索美丽世界的意识和积极的人生观和生活态度
文化意识
学习目标
B
01 情景导入
Scenario import
Watch a video
Have you ever been to…
Read the circle map and make sentences.
the Great
Wall
the Bird Nest
the Tian’an
Men Square
...
I went ... with ... On that day, ... One great thing about ... is ...
If you come ...,you should …
have seen
Read the circle map and make sentences.
have visited
the Temple of Heaven
the Palace
Museum
the Water Cube
hutong
...
I went ... with ... On that day, ... One great thing about ... is ...
If you come ...,you should …
Read the circle map and make sentences.
have tried
...
Beijing duck
candied haws on a stick
I went ... with ... On that day, ... One great thing about ... is ...
If you come ...,you should …
02 学习理解
Learning to understand
Make a list of facts about your hometown or a place you have been to. Think about these topics.
3a
Size and location: ________________
Population: _____________________
Weather: _______________________
History: ________________________
Places to visit: ___________________
Things to eat: ___________________
Have you ever been to Beijing
Yes, I have been there since 2 years ago.
Have you ever visited the Great Wall
Discuss in groups according to the questions in 3a.
Of course! It’s wonderful!
What else have you done
I have tried Beijing duck!
Write an article to advertise your hometown or a place you have been to.
Have you ever tried/seen/been...
If you..., you will/can...
You should...
One great thing about...is...
3b
Try to write an outline of your article.
Outline
Have you ever tried/seen/been...
Location
It’s really a great city.
/If you travel to Xi’an. I think you are sure to have a good time.
Facts
Ending
Beginning
Linking words
Food
Weather
Place to visit
...
Traffic
Here are some facts about Beijing.
Size :
Location:
Population:
Weather:
History:
Name Card of Beijing
Beijing is one of the four ancient cities of China (together with Xi'an, Luoyang and Nanjing). Beijing city covers a total area of 16,807.8 sq. km. Beijing is located in the north of China. The current population of Beijing according to the 2010 census, as reported by the official Chinese Government statistics agency, was 19,612,368. As early as 700,000 years ago, Peking Man lived in Zhoukoudian area of this city. Beijing weather features four distinct seasons - short windy spring, long hot summer, cool pleasant autumn, and long chilly winter.
16,807.8 sq. km
in the north of China
19,612,368
short windy spring
long hot summer
cool pleasant autumn
long chilly winter
a long history
Let’s practice.
文
体裁
时
时态
第 人称
人称
.
话题
①审
记叙
现在完成
一
曾经去过的地方
某英文杂志正在举办题为“A place I have been to”的征文活动。
请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇短文，参加此活动。
要求：
1. 短文应包括以下所有提示内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数80个左右；
1 我去过几次北京；
2 我参观了故宫和长城；
3 我品尝了北京传统美食；
4 我认为......
Brainstorm
Let’s find out the writing structure.
Beijing
1. greeting
2. Size and location:
Population:
Weather:
History:
3. Places & stories
4. Invitation
03 应用实践
Application Practice
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
Beijing
1. Greeting
2. Size and location:
Population:
Weather:
History:
3. Places & stories
4. Invitation
Greeting
Dear Tom,
Long time no see. How is it going I miss you so much. I have been in Beijing for five years. The summer vacation is coming. Would you like to come to China
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
Beijing
1. Greeting
2. Size and location:
Population:
Weather:
History:
3. Places & stories
4. Invitation
Dear Tom,
Long time no see. How is it going I miss you so much. I have been in Beijing for five years. The summer vacation is coming. Would you like to come to China
2. Location: It lies in the north of China
Size: It has an area of ...
Population: Beijing has ... people ...
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
Beijing
1. Greeting
2. Size and location:
Population:
Weather:
History:
3. Places & stories
4. Invitation
Location: It lies in the north of China
Size: It has an area of ...
Population: Beijing has ... people ...
Dear Tom,
Long time no see. How is it going I miss you so much. I have been in Beijing for five years. The summer vacation is coming. Would you like to come to China
3. Places & stories
I have been to / visited / seen / tried...
I went ... with ... On that day, ......
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
Beijing
1. Greeting
2. Size and location:
Population:
Weather:
History:
3. Places & stories
4. Invitation
Location: It lies in the north of China
Size: It has an area of ...
Population: Beijing has ... people ...
Dear Tom,
Long time no see. How is it going I miss you so much. I have been in Beijing for five years. The summer vacation is coming. Would you like to come to China
I have been to / visited / seen / tried...
I went ... with ... On that day, ......
4. Invitation
I’m sure if you come to Beijing, you will have a great time!
Lucy
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
Beijing
1. Greeting
2. Size and location:
Population:
Weather:
History:
3. Places & stories
4. Invitation
Location: It lies in the north of China
Size: It has an area of ...
Population: Beijing has ... people ...
Dear Tom,
Long time no see. How is it going I miss you so much. I have been in Beijing for five years. The summer vacation is coming. Would you like to come to China
I have been to / visited / seen / tried...
I went ... with ... On that day, ......
I’m sure if you come to Beijing, you will have a great time!
Lucy
04 迁移创新
Migration Innovation
Let’s proofread
One possible version.
Dear Tom,
Long time to see. How is it going I miss you so much. I have been in Beijing for five years. The summer vacation is coming. Would you like to come to China
Have you ever been to Beijing Beijing is one of the four ancient cities of China (together with Xi’an, Luoyang, Nanjing). It has a long history. It lies in the north of China and has an area of about 16,807.8 square kilometers. It has a population of 19,612,368. One great thing about Beijing is that the weather changes with seasons. It’s warm in spring, hot in summer, cool in fall and cold in winter.
There are many places of interest. If you come here, you should visit the Great Wall. As an old saying says, he who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man. It is also a symbol of China. On that day, we drove to the Great Wall first. I walked up to the top. Everything was small above. It looked so long and old. It is about 21 thousand kilometers. Many people in the past built the Great Wall and it represents strong will. You should visit the Palace Museum and the Temple of Heaven. You can try many kinds of delicious food in Beijing，such as Beijing ducks, candied haws on a stick and so on. They are delicious.
I’m sure if you come to Beijing, you will have a great time! I am looking forward to your reply.
Miss Zhao
Self-check and peer-check.
Let’s proofread
check
Check for mistakes:
spelling
grammar
polish
□你分段了吗？
□你的每一段都有主旨吗？
□你包含介绍的基本信息了吗？
□ 你有拼写错误吗？
□ 你有语法错误吗？
□ 你使用连词and了吗？
Let’s evaluate
Let’s edit
评价维度 具体要求 分值 得分 总分
基本分 (9分) 内容 要点齐全有细节 3
词数恰当 (80-120词) 1 逻辑连贯 (不生搬硬套) 2 结构 段落布局适合文体 (2-4段) 1 衔接 (恰当使用过渡词) 2 加分项 (6分) 语言 表达符合语境且拼写正确 1 大量使用初中阶段所学表达 1 满足语言使用的多样性: 短语、句型、从句等 1 标点符号使用正确 1 排版 书写干净整齐 1 版面布局恰当 (分段/对齐) 1 05 回顾总结
Summary
1 Think about the things below and write an answer for each one.
1. One thing that you have collected before:
______________________________________________________________
2. One invention that you have found to be very useful:
______________________________________________________________
3. One unbelievable or unusual thing that you’ve seen or heard recently:
______________________________________________________________
4. One way that you’ve used to encourage a friend in the past:
______________________________________________________________
5. One peaceful and quiet place that you’ve been to recently:
______________________________________________________________
Self check 1
I have collected LEGO before.
I have found computer is very useful.
I have been shocked by Ya Ya’s condition.
I have encouraged my friend by telling stories.
I have been to a countryside near the city recently.
Self check 2
2 Complete the conversation.
A: Hey, John. ___________ are you doing this weekend
B: Not much, Mark. I don’t really have any plans yet.
A: ___________ you ever been to the space museum
B: ___________, I have. I ___________ there last month.
A: Oh, how ___________ it
B: It was great. I ___________ been there many times.
A:I see. I ___________ never ___________ there.
B: Well, let’s go this weekend then. I don’t ___________ going again. I think there’s something new there. I ___________ not see it last time.
A: Perfect!
What
Have
Yes
went
was
have
have
been
mind
did
Self check 3
3 Complete the chart
Have you ever been to a/an… How many times What did you see/do there
home for old people
farm
amusement park
You can report like this:
John has been to a home for old people twice.
He helped the old people to use smartphone and told them lots of jokes to make them happy.
Summary
A: Have you ever been to…
B: Yes, I have./ No, I haven’t.
A: I’ve been to…many times.
B: Me too.
Fun places
Different aspects about a place
Places to visit
Talk about past experiences
size and location, population, weather, history, places to visit, things to eat
space/art/history/space/film museum, water park, zoo, amusement park, the Terracotta Army, the Great Wall, the Bird’s Nest, the Palace Museum
A: I’ve never been to…
B: Me neither.
A: Have you tried…
B: Yes, I have./ No, I haven’t.
Summary
Revision
Writing
现在完成时态
介绍曾经去过的地方
体裁：说明文
时态：现在完成时和一般过去时
人称：第一人称
Function
To write to advertise a place
Revision
location
06 随堂小练
Exercise
一、单项选择
1
2
The Smiths China for three years.
A.have come B.have been to C.have been in D.have come to
— When his grandpa
— Three years ago.
A. has; died B. is; dead C. did; die D. is; died
Laura bought this house ____ because it is close to the school.
A. especially B. finally C. simply D. recently
C
C
3
C
一、语法填空，阅读下面短文, 按照句子结构的语法性和上下文连贯的要求, 在空格处填入一个适当的词或使用括号中词语的正确形式填空(每空不多于3个单词)
How much do you know about Australia ________1 you ever visited it before
Australia is to the south of the equator, so it is often called “the Land Down Under”. It is the ________2(small) continent(洲), but it is the sixth largest country in the world. The population of Australia is just as large as that of Shanghai. It is ________3 English -speaking country.
Have
smallest
an
It is a __________4(peace) and beautiful place to take a holiday. Nowadays, _________5(thousand) of Chinese tourists go there on vacation.
Last month we decided________6(visit) Australia. First we went to Berth. Berth is a fantastic place full ______7wild flowers. While we __________8(lie) and enjoying ourselves near a path(小道) at the foot of a hill, we suddenly heard bells ringing at the top of the hill. What we saw made us so surprised ________9 we picked up all our things right away and ran to our car.
peaceful
thousands
to visit
of
were lying
that
All the way we ran as ________10(quick) as we could. There were about three hundred sheep coming towards us down the path.
Australia is also famous for sheep. After a short drive away from any town, you'll find yourself in the middle of white sheep.
quickly
07 家庭作业
homework
Homework
Level A: Work in groups, make a poster or a video about our hometown, city, province or country. We will have a hometown introduction meeting next class. You can share your posters or videos.
Level B: Draw a mind map to sum up the knowledge of this unit.
Thank you for listening！
