2024年人教版七年级上册期末书面表达专练（含解析）
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2024年人教版七年级上册期末书面表达专练
题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达：本大题共10小题，共150分。
1.My New Friend
提示：进入新的学校，你一定认识了很多新同学，交了一些新朋友。请以My New Friend为题，写一篇英语作文。
要求：
1.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分记：
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷作答，一律不得分。
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
2.你喜欢周末吗？请以“My last weekend”为题向大家介绍一下你上个周末做了些什么？过得怎么样？
要点提示：
1.上周末我和父母去农村看望了祖父母；
2.天气不错，农村空气清新；
3.我和祖父一起钓鱼，喂鸡，非常有趣；
4.我和父母一起爬山，山上有许多花，我们采了一些带回家；
5.上个周末我过的棒极了。
要求：
1.要点完整，可以适当发挥；
2.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
3.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；4.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
3.朋友是人生中最宝贵的财富。假如你是李华，你的学校将举办以“My Best Friend”为题的英文演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。谈一谈谁是你最好的朋友，描述一下他/她的外貌，并说明你喜欢他/她的原因。
提示词语：
of medium build；helpful；share happiness
提示问题：
●Who is your best friend
● What does he/she look like
●Why do you like him/her
A good friend is the treasure in our lives.
________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
4.假如你是李华，你的英国好友 Peter想了解你校近期的外出活动。请用英语写一封邮件，告诉他你们去了哪里，做了什么以及你的感受或收获。
提示词语：
park；fly a kite；take photos；exciting
提示问题：
●Where did you go
●What did you do during the trip
●How did you feel or what did you learn from it
Dear Peter，
I'd like to tell you something about the school trip last week.
__________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
Do you have anything fun to share Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
5.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter对你们学校丰富多彩的活动很感兴趣。请用英语给他发一封电子邮件，向他介绍你最喜欢的一项学校活动是什么，在该活动中你们都做些什么以及你喜欢它的原因。
提示词语：English Day，read，enjoy，friends，interesting
提示问题：
What is your favorite school activity？
What do you do in the activity？
Why do you like it best？
To Peter From Li Hua Subject My Favorite School Activity Dear Peter, How's it going？I'm writing to tell you about my favorite school activity. Hope you can join us next time. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua
6.题目：I Like Sports
要点：1.介绍一下你喜欢什么运动；
2.其它内容可以适当发挥。
要求：1.抄写题目，短文不少于50词；
2.语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁；
3.文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计；
4.短文必须写在答题卡上，如在试题卷上作答，一律不得分。
7.“双减”政策实施后，你的学校除了常规课程外，一定还安排了很多精彩纷呈的课外活动吧？请你以My School Day为题，谈一谈你的充实的一天。
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用姓名，请用Mike，Mary等英文名，校名统一用Kunming Middle School；
3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分；
4. 抄袭试卷中相关材料的，抄袭部分不给分。
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
8.学校英文俱乐部正在开展主题为“争做健康少年”（Be a Healthy Teenager）的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇文章投稿，介绍你的饮食习惯，运动情况并谈谈你为什么这样做。
提示词语：different，vegetables，run，keep fit
提示问题：
What are your eating habits？
What sports do you do every day？
Why do you keep these habits？
As we all known, health is very important in our life.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.请你按照下表的信息提示，写一篇70词左右的文章向我们介绍一下你的好朋友的相关情况。
中文名：Li Mingming 英文名：Jack 生日：2008. 09. 01 爱好：打篮球、排球；最喜欢蓝色 食物：喜欢汉堡、香蕉，讨厌米饭 学科：最喜爱数学、英语，讨厌历史、地理
要求：
1.根据所给题目及提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于70；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
My good friend
__________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________
10.请你按照下表的信息提示，写一篇70词左右的文章向我们介绍一下你的好朋友的相关情况。
中文名：Li Mingming 英文名：Jack 生日：2008. 09. 01 爱好：打篮球、排球；最喜欢蓝色 食物：喜欢汉堡、香蕉，讨厌米饭 学科：最喜爱数学、英语，讨厌历史、地理
要求：(1)根据所给题目及提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于70；
(2)语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
(3)文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
My good friend
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案和解析
1.【答案】 My New Friend My New Friend, Bill, is fourteen yeras old. He is American. He is tall but a little heavy. He is outgoing and helpful. I like him very much.
He has many hobbies. ①He likes playing chess, playing the piano and collecting stamps. He often shows his talents in the school Art Festival. He also likes playing sports. He exercises two or three times a week. He loves playing basketball. He is on the school basketball team. He has a healthy lifestyle.
Last summer vacation, we went to Beijing for a trip with my family. We visited the Great Wall, Tian'anmen Square and the Palace Museum. They are great places of interest in Beijing. We also enjoyed delicious food in Beijing hutong. It was a wonderful trip and we enjoyed ourselves.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要求根据题干所给信息介绍自己的朋友Bill，人称以第三人称单数为主，时态需用一般现在时为主，还可适当增加细节，以使文章内容更为充实。
【亮点词汇】
①outgoing and helpful外向并且乐于助人
②show talents in...在……方面展现出天赋
③places of interest名胜古迹
【高分句型】
①He likes playing chess, playing the piano and collecting stamps.（动名词作宾语；and连接并列结构）
【结构布局】
引言：介绍Bill的相貌、性格
中心：介绍Bill的爱好、习惯
结尾：回忆之前与Bill的美好回忆
2.【答案】My last weekend
It was sunny last weekend and I went to visit my grandparents in the countryside with my parents.
The air was so fresh there. After lunch, I went fishing with my grandfather. ①They kept many chickens in the backyard and I helped feed them. It was so interesting. On Sunday morning, I climbed the hill out of the village with my parents. There were many beautiful flowers here and there. I picked some and brought them home.
It was such a happy weekend and I really enjoyed myself. ②I hope I can be back soon.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇命题作文，题目为My last weekend，写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，以充实文章内容。
【亮点词汇】
①feed 喂养，给……食物
②pick 采，摘
③enjoy oneself 玩得开心
【高分句型】
①They kept many chickens in the backyard and I helped feed them.（and连接的并列句）
②I hope I can be back soon.（省略that的宾语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：点明文章主题
中心：具体叙述发生的事情
结尾：总结文章，表达期望
3.【答案】 A good friend is the treasure in our lives. My best friend is Jack White. He is of medium build. He is very helpful. I had a fall when we new students lined up on the playground．Jack came over then and helped me. Since then, we have become good friends.
Tom impressed me deeply with his kindness when we met for the first time. He is not only kind, but also smart. ①He does well in his studies, although not at the top level, and has time for relaxing activities. He always looks happy. I've learned a lot from him. We share happiness with each other.
②I hope to keep this friendship with him as long as I can, because our life needs friendship.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇命题写作。话题是假如你是李华，你的学校将举办以“My Best Friend”为题的英文演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。谈一谈谁是你最好的朋友，描述一下他/她的外貌，并说明你喜欢他/她的原因。注意表述清楚，有条理。注意词汇时态等的合理运用。
【结构布局】
引言：我的好朋友是谁
中心：如何成为好朋友的；喜欢他的原因
结尾：表达愿望
【亮点词汇】
①line up排队
②come over过来
【高分句型】
①He does well in his studies, although not at the top level, and has time for relaxing activities.（although引导让步状语从句）
②I hope to keep this friendship with him as long as I can, because our life needs friendship.（because引导的原因状语从句）
4.【答案】Dear Peter，
I'd like to tell you something about the school trip last week.The weather was fine that day. I went to the park with my classmates. ①We flew kites in the park and took many photos. We also played some interesting games. In the afternoon, we also worke as volunteers to help clean the park. ②Although we were very tired that day, we wered very happy.
Do you have anything fun to share Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文写作。话题是假如你是李华，你的英国好友 Peter想了解你校近期的外出活动。请用英语写一封邮件，告诉他你们去了哪里，做了什么以及你的感受或收获。注意表述清楚，有条理。注意词汇时态等的合理运用。
【结构布局】
引言：介绍去了哪里，做了什么
中心：描述感受
结尾：期望回复
【亮点词汇】
①work as担任
②look forward to期待
高分句型】
①We flew kites in the park and took many photos.（and连接并列句）
②Although we were very tired that day, we were very happy.（although引导让步状语从句）
5.【答案】Dear Peter,
How's it going？I'm writing to tell you about my favorite school activity. My favorite school activity is English Day. We usually have it in our school library on December 30th.（最喜欢的一项学校活动是什么）
To start with, we share our favorite English books. We read our favorite parts of the books in groups.【高分句型一】In the afternoon, we watched an English movie and laughed heartily. Finally, we wrote down our New Year's wishes in English on colored paper and made a poster.（在该活动中我们都做些什么）
I enjoy our English Day because we can learn English with our friends and have fun together. 【高分句型二】Hope you can join us next time.（我喜欢它的原因）
【解析】【思路点拨】
【高分句型一】
We read our favorite parts of the books in groups. 我们分组阅读书中我们最喜欢的部分。in groups分组。
【高分句型二】
I enjoy our English Day because we can learn English with our friends and have fun together. 我喜欢我们的英语日，因为我们可以和朋友一起学习英语，一起玩得很开心。原因状语从句。
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
6.【答案】I Like Sports Hello, I'm Li Hua. I like sports. I have two baseballs, five tennis balls, two tennis bats and three volleyballs. I like volleyball. I always play it with my classmates after school. It's interesting and fun. I watch volleyball games on TV, too. I think it's relaxing.
【解析】【思路点拨】
略
【亮点词汇】
略
【高分句型】
略
【结构布局】
略
7.【答案】My School Day I'm a junior high school student. I love going to school. I get up at seven o'clock. I have breakfast at half past seven. Then I go to school at eight o'clock. I have five lessons every day. I have three lessons in the morning and two lessons in the afternoon. I have lunch at twelve o'clock. Classes finish at half past four and I go home at five o'clock. I sometimes play basketball or listen to music after class. ①I like English best because I find it very useful.
② My school life is busy but happy.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
【结构布局】
引言：点明主题
中心：上学时间、学校课程安排及你的课外活动
结尾：对学校生活的看法
【亮点词汇】
①get up起床
②useful 有用的
【高分句型】
①I like English best because I find it very useful.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②My school life is busy but happy. （but表转折）
8.【答案】 As we all know, health is very important in our life. I try my best to be a healthy teenager.
First of all, I have healthy eating habits. I hardly eat junk food. To maintain a balanced diet, I eat different kinds of food, such as fruits, vegetables and meat.（我的饮食习惯） Secondly, doing sports is another way for me to keep fit. In school days, I do sports such as running and playing basketball. On weekends, I usually swim or play badminton with my family.（运动情况）
The main reason why I keep the habits is that they can help me keep fit.【高分句型一】Staying healthy enables me to make good use of my time and enjoy my life. Let's be healthy teenagers together!【高分句型二】（为什么这样做）
【解析】【思路点拨】
【分析】【高分句型一】
The main reason why I keep the habits is that they can help me keep fit.我保持这些习惯的主要原因是它们可以帮助我保持健康。定语从句。
【高分句型二】
Let's be healthy teenagers together!让我们一起做健康的青少年！祈使句。
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
9.【答案】My good friend
I have a friend. ①His name is Li Mingming and his English name is Jack. He was born on September 1st, 2008. He likes playing basketball and volleyball. We often play basketball with our classmates after school. His favourite color is blue. He likes hamburgers and bananas very much. He hates rice. ②Maths and English are his favorite subjects because they are very interesting. He hates history and geography because he thinks they're boring.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
题材:本文是一篇说明文；
时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
提示:写作要点已给出，本文以第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时。第三人称作主语时，注意主谓一致。可以多应用从句，给文章增加亮点。
【结构布局】
第一步，介绍李明明的个人信息，包括英文名字、生日。
第二步，介绍李明明的爱好、最喜欢的十五和学科。
【亮点词汇】
①hate讨厌
②boring 无聊的
【高分句型】
①His name is Li Mingming and his English name is Jack.（并列句）
②Maths and English are his favorite subjects because they are very interesting.（because引导的原因状语从句）
10.【答案】My good friend
I have a friend. His name is Li Mingming and his English name is Jack. He was born on September 1st, 2008. He likes playing basketball and volleyball. We often play basketball with our classmates after school. His favourite color is blue. He likes hamburgers and bananas very much. He hates rice. Maths and English are his favorite subjects because they are very interesting. He hates history and geography because he thinks they’re boring.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇材料作文，文中给出李明明的个人信息，包括生日、爱好和学科等。注意要点齐全，上下文连贯。本文以第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时。第三人称作主语时，注意主谓一致。可以多应用从句，给文章增加亮点。
【亮点词汇】
略
【高分句型】
略
【结构布局】
略
【拓展词汇】
略
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题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达：本大题共10小题，共150分。
1.My New Friend
提示：进入新的学校，你一定认识了很多新同学，交了一些新朋友。请以My New Friend为题，写一篇英语作文。
要求：
1.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分记：
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷作答，一律不得分。
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
2.你喜欢周末吗？请以“My last weekend”为题向大家介绍一下你上个周末做了些什么？过得怎么样？
要点提示：
1.上周末我和父母去农村看望了祖父母；
2.天气不错，农村空气清新；
3.我和祖父一起钓鱼，喂鸡，非常有趣；
4.我和父母一起爬山，山上有许多花，我们采了一些带回家；
5.上个周末我过的棒极了。
要求：
1.要点完整，可以适当发挥；
2.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
3.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；4.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
3.朋友是人生中最宝贵的财富。假如你是李华，你的学校将举办以“My Best Friend”为题的英文演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。谈一谈谁是你最好的朋友，描述一下他/她的外貌，并说明你喜欢他/她的原因。
提示词语：
of medium build；helpful；share happiness
提示问题：
●Who is your best friend
● What does he/she look like
●Why do you like him/her
A good friend is the treasure in our lives.
________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
4.假如你是李华，你的英国好友 Peter想了解你校近期的外出活动。请用英语写一封邮件，告诉他你们去了哪里，做了什么以及你的感受或收获。
提示词语：
park；fly a kite；take photos；exciting
提示问题：
●Where did you go
●What did you do during the trip
●How did you feel or what did you learn from it
Dear Peter，
I'd like to tell you something about the school trip last week.
__________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
Do you have anything fun to share Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
5.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter对你们学校丰富多彩的活动很感兴趣。请用英语给他发一封电子邮件，向他介绍你最喜欢的一项学校活动是什么，在该活动中你们都做些什么以及你喜欢它的原因。
提示词语：English Day，read，enjoy，friends，interesting
提示问题：
What is your favorite school activity？
What do you do in the activity？
Why do you like it best？
To Peter From Li Hua Subject My Favorite School Activity Dear Peter, How's it going？I'm writing to tell you about my favorite school activity. Hope you can join us next time. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua
6.题目：I Like Sports
要点：1.介绍一下你喜欢什么运动；
2.其它内容可以适当发挥。
要求：1.抄写题目，短文不少于50词；
2.语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁；
3.文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计；
4.短文必须写在答题卡上，如在试题卷上作答，一律不得分。
7.“双减”政策实施后，你的学校除了常规课程外，一定还安排了很多精彩纷呈的课外活动吧？请你以My School Day为题，谈一谈你的充实的一天。
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用姓名，请用Mike，Mary等英文名，校名统一用Kunming Middle School；
3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分；
4. 抄袭试卷中相关材料的，抄袭部分不给分。
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8.学校英文俱乐部正在开展主题为“争做健康少年”（Be a Healthy Teenager）的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇文章投稿，介绍你的饮食习惯，运动情况并谈谈你为什么这样做。
提示词语：different，vegetables，run，keep fit
提示问题：
What are your eating habits？
What sports do you do every day？
Why do you keep these habits？
As we all known, health is very important in our life.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.请你按照下表的信息提示，写一篇70词左右的文章向我们介绍一下你的好朋友的相关情况。
中文名：Li Mingming 英文名：Jack 生日：2008. 09. 01 爱好：打篮球、排球；最喜欢蓝色 食物：喜欢汉堡、香蕉，讨厌米饭 学科：最喜爱数学、英语，讨厌历史、地理
要求：
1.根据所给题目及提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于70；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
My good friend
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10.请你按照下表的信息提示，写一篇70词左右的文章向我们介绍一下你的好朋友的相关情况。
中文名：Li Mingming 英文名：Jack 生日：2008. 09. 01 爱好：打篮球、排球；最喜欢蓝色 食物：喜欢汉堡、香蕉，讨厌米饭 学科：最喜爱数学、英语，讨厌历史、地理
要求：(1)根据所给题目及提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于70；
(2)语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
(3)文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
My good friend
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答案和解析
1.【答案】 My New Friend My New Friend, Bill, is fourteen yeras old. He is American. He is tall but a little heavy. He is outgoing and helpful. I like him very much.
He has many hobbies. ①He likes playing chess, playing the piano and collecting stamps. He often shows his talents in the school Art Festival. He also likes playing sports. He exercises two or three times a week. He loves playing basketball. He is on the school basketball team. He has a healthy lifestyle.
Last summer vacation, we went to Beijing for a trip with my family. We visited the Great Wall, Tian'anmen Square and the Palace Museum. They are great places of interest in Beijing. We also enjoyed delicious food in Beijing hutong. It was a wonderful trip and we enjoyed ourselves.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要求根据题干所给信息介绍自己的朋友Bill，人称以第三人称单数为主，时态需用一般现在时为主，还可适当增加细节，以使文章内容更为充实。
【亮点词汇】
①outgoing and helpful外向并且乐于助人
②show talents in...在……方面展现出天赋
③places of interest名胜古迹
【高分句型】
①He likes playing chess, playing the piano and collecting stamps.（动名词作宾语；and连接并列结构）
【结构布局】
引言：介绍Bill的相貌、性格
中心：介绍Bill的爱好、习惯
结尾：回忆之前与Bill的美好回忆
2.【答案】My last weekend
It was sunny last weekend and I went to visit my grandparents in the countryside with my parents.
The air was so fresh there. After lunch, I went fishing with my grandfather. ①They kept many chickens in the backyard and I helped feed them. It was so interesting. On Sunday morning, I climbed the hill out of the village with my parents. There were many beautiful flowers here and there. I picked some and brought them home.
It was such a happy weekend and I really enjoyed myself. ②I hope I can be back soon.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇命题作文，题目为My last weekend，写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，以充实文章内容。
【亮点词汇】
①feed 喂养，给……食物
②pick 采，摘
③enjoy oneself 玩得开心
【高分句型】
①They kept many chickens in the backyard and I helped feed them.（and连接的并列句）
②I hope I can be back soon.（省略that的宾语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：点明文章主题
中心：具体叙述发生的事情
结尾：总结文章，表达期望
3.【答案】 A good friend is the treasure in our lives. My best friend is Jack White. He is of medium build. He is very helpful. I had a fall when we new students lined up on the playground．Jack came over then and helped me. Since then, we have become good friends.
Tom impressed me deeply with his kindness when we met for the first time. He is not only kind, but also smart. ①He does well in his studies, although not at the top level, and has time for relaxing activities. He always looks happy. I've learned a lot from him. We share happiness with each other.
②I hope to keep this friendship with him as long as I can, because our life needs friendship.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇命题写作。话题是假如你是李华，你的学校将举办以“My Best Friend”为题的英文演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。谈一谈谁是你最好的朋友，描述一下他/她的外貌，并说明你喜欢他/她的原因。注意表述清楚，有条理。注意词汇时态等的合理运用。
【结构布局】
引言：我的好朋友是谁
中心：如何成为好朋友的；喜欢他的原因
结尾：表达愿望
【亮点词汇】
①line up排队
②come over过来
【高分句型】
①He does well in his studies, although not at the top level, and has time for relaxing activities.（although引导让步状语从句）
②I hope to keep this friendship with him as long as I can, because our life needs friendship.（because引导的原因状语从句）
4.【答案】Dear Peter，
I'd like to tell you something about the school trip last week.The weather was fine that day. I went to the park with my classmates. ①We flew kites in the park and took many photos. We also played some interesting games. In the afternoon, we also worke as volunteers to help clean the park. ②Although we were very tired that day, we wered very happy.
Do you have anything fun to share Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文写作。话题是假如你是李华，你的英国好友 Peter想了解你校近期的外出活动。请用英语写一封邮件，告诉他你们去了哪里，做了什么以及你的感受或收获。注意表述清楚，有条理。注意词汇时态等的合理运用。
【结构布局】
引言：介绍去了哪里，做了什么
中心：描述感受
结尾：期望回复
【亮点词汇】
①work as担任
②look forward to期待
高分句型】
①We flew kites in the park and took many photos.（and连接并列句）
②Although we were very tired that day, we were very happy.（although引导让步状语从句）
5.【答案】Dear Peter,
How's it going？I'm writing to tell you about my favorite school activity. My favorite school activity is English Day. We usually have it in our school library on December 30th.（最喜欢的一项学校活动是什么）
To start with, we share our favorite English books. We read our favorite parts of the books in groups.【高分句型一】In the afternoon, we watched an English movie and laughed heartily. Finally, we wrote down our New Year's wishes in English on colored paper and made a poster.（在该活动中我们都做些什么）
I enjoy our English Day because we can learn English with our friends and have fun together. 【高分句型二】Hope you can join us next time.（我喜欢它的原因）
【解析】【思路点拨】
【高分句型一】
We read our favorite parts of the books in groups. 我们分组阅读书中我们最喜欢的部分。in groups分组。
【高分句型二】
I enjoy our English Day because we can learn English with our friends and have fun together. 我喜欢我们的英语日，因为我们可以和朋友一起学习英语，一起玩得很开心。原因状语从句。
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
6.【答案】I Like Sports Hello, I'm Li Hua. I like sports. I have two baseballs, five tennis balls, two tennis bats and three volleyballs. I like volleyball. I always play it with my classmates after school. It's interesting and fun. I watch volleyball games on TV, too. I think it's relaxing.
【解析】【思路点拨】
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【亮点词汇】
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【高分句型】
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【结构布局】
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7.【答案】My School Day I'm a junior high school student. I love going to school. I get up at seven o'clock. I have breakfast at half past seven. Then I go to school at eight o'clock. I have five lessons every day. I have three lessons in the morning and two lessons in the afternoon. I have lunch at twelve o'clock. Classes finish at half past four and I go home at five o'clock. I sometimes play basketball or listen to music after class. ①I like English best because I find it very useful.
② My school life is busy but happy.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
【结构布局】
引言：点明主题
中心：上学时间、学校课程安排及你的课外活动
结尾：对学校生活的看法
【亮点词汇】
①get up起床
②useful 有用的
【高分句型】
①I like English best because I find it very useful.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②My school life is busy but happy. （but表转折）
8.【答案】 As we all know, health is very important in our life. I try my best to be a healthy teenager.
First of all, I have healthy eating habits. I hardly eat junk food. To maintain a balanced diet, I eat different kinds of food, such as fruits, vegetables and meat.（我的饮食习惯） Secondly, doing sports is another way for me to keep fit. In school days, I do sports such as running and playing basketball. On weekends, I usually swim or play badminton with my family.（运动情况）
The main reason why I keep the habits is that they can help me keep fit.【高分句型一】Staying healthy enables me to make good use of my time and enjoy my life. Let's be healthy teenagers together!【高分句型二】（为什么这样做）
【解析】【思路点拨】
【分析】【高分句型一】
The main reason why I keep the habits is that they can help me keep fit.我保持这些习惯的主要原因是它们可以帮助我保持健康。定语从句。
【高分句型二】
Let's be healthy teenagers together!让我们一起做健康的青少年！祈使句。
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
9.【答案】My good friend
I have a friend. ①His name is Li Mingming and his English name is Jack. He was born on September 1st, 2008. He likes playing basketball and volleyball. We often play basketball with our classmates after school. His favourite color is blue. He likes hamburgers and bananas very much. He hates rice. ②Maths and English are his favorite subjects because they are very interesting. He hates history and geography because he thinks they're boring.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
题材:本文是一篇说明文；
时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
提示:写作要点已给出，本文以第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时。第三人称作主语时，注意主谓一致。可以多应用从句，给文章增加亮点。
【结构布局】
第一步，介绍李明明的个人信息，包括英文名字、生日。
第二步，介绍李明明的爱好、最喜欢的十五和学科。
【亮点词汇】
①hate讨厌
②boring 无聊的
【高分句型】
①His name is Li Mingming and his English name is Jack.（并列句）
②Maths and English are his favorite subjects because they are very interesting.（because引导的原因状语从句）
10.【答案】My good friend
I have a friend. His name is Li Mingming and his English name is Jack. He was born on September 1st, 2008. He likes playing basketball and volleyball. We often play basketball with our classmates after school. His favourite color is blue. He likes hamburgers and bananas very much. He hates rice. Maths and English are his favorite subjects because they are very interesting. He hates history and geography because he thinks they’re boring.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇材料作文，文中给出李明明的个人信息，包括生日、爱好和学科等。注意要点齐全，上下文连贯。本文以第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时。第三人称作主语时，注意主谓一致。可以多应用从句，给文章增加亮点。
【亮点词汇】
略
【高分句型】
略
【结构布局】
略
【拓展词汇】
略
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