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高中英语读后续写:
父子越野跑
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绿哲私家英语
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My dad and I had been looking forward to the State cross-country race of my senior year of high
which would be the climax()of my existence.
I was the fastest runner on my team,and I was supposed to make it into the top fifteen.We had b
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working towards this race for three years.It was everything to me,and it was everything to my dad.He was a
runner and was wild with joy by my success in running.He made it to every race,even flying home early from
business trips to see me run.I always listened for his voice,which rang above the crowd--telling me to relax my
arms,calling out my time.He pushed me.He cheered for me.He believed in me.We spent countless hours on
the sandy canals of Arizona.Breathing in the dust of the desert,the blossoms of the orange trees,and the terrible
smell of the dairy farm,we made our way across the city.We pounded miles and miles into our running shoes,
marking with every step the path to greatness.It was a journey that was just ours.A dream passed on from one
generation to the next.
Then the big day came.It was hotter than normal-too hot.My throat felt like a field of cotton,cracked with
the summer heat,as I waited for the gun to fire.I gazed out at the crowd;dozens of familiar faces from church
and school flickered across my view.They had come for me.They were counting on me.I saw my dad set his
watch,worry and excitement etched across his face.With the sound of a gunshot,the race began.
For the first two and half miles,I felt great.I had never before been so ready for something.The weeks
leading up to the race were filled with hard practices and a strict diet.The scorching sun beat upon my back,
blinding me with its brilliance.Nothing was going to stop me,though.
However;without warning,my strength was running out.
I whispered,'T'm so sorry I disappointed you,Dad."