押上海卷76题
写作
【题型解读】
纵观近五年上海高考题,不难发现,上海卷在作文题目的选择上偏向生活化话题,没有涉及时事的话
题,侧重对于教育现象的思考,除2013年外话题皆与校园生活有关;在体栽上,以夹叙夹议为主,不论建议方案类应用文抑或是图表、图片写作,都需要分析其理由;在话题呈现方面,出题者本着examinee-friendly
的原则,用中文设置提示,简明扼要,告诉考生写什么,怎么写,避免偏题之嫌。题目都有一定的选择和
思考的空间;而在文章内容的选择往往有很大的灵活性。
高考写作是对学生话题信息、话题语汇和逻辑思维能力的综合考察,所以,在阅卷中按照内容、语言和结构三个部分评分:
● 内容(10分):题目所要求的内容是否清楚、有效地表达出来
● 语言(10分):语法、词汇、拼写和标点符号等使用的准确性、句子结构和用词的多样性
● 结构(5分):文章段落及句子间组织结构的连贯性
【答题点津】
01重视词汇基础,提升阅读水平。
上海高考英语的难度之一体现在对考生的词汇量要求很大。整张高考英语的试卷中,阅读理解的分值占据很大比例,而很多学生阅读水平不高的重要原因之一就是单词量不够,甚至有相当一部分学生连考纲中要求必须掌握的词汇都没有完全掌握,给阅读文章造成很大的困难。所以建议考生首先应掌握考纲中的词汇,达到语音、语意、拼写三者相统一的目的。在此基础上,尽可能地扩大词汇量,可以精选时事性较强、题材新颖的文章来进行阅读,从而扩大视野,提升词汇,以适应高考的要求。
02系统掌握语法,注重结合篇章。
语法和词汇一样,同为英语学习的基础。语法细则虽繁杂,但是掌握基本框架之后,就可以进行全面系统的复习,分专题各个击破。高中重点语法要记的东西很多,所以记忆是基础。语法的提升需要理论与实践的反复交替,在正确的理论的支撑下,实践出真知。练习形式比较多样,可以做语法选择题,语法填
空,翻译等等,并且养成整理错题的习惯,反复思考,精益求精。学而不思则罔,思而不学则殆,采用了正确的学习方法才可事半功倍。
03认真对待专题,提高复习质量。
专题设计具有针对性,能体现出高考要求和考生的实际情况。专题训练的目的是辨析各知识块内的基本概念及其相互关系,对主干知识进行梳理串联构成科学、系统的知识网络,总结小范围内综合问题的解题方法和技巧,从而培养分析问题和解决问题的综合能力。
04明确高考要求,制定复习计划。
考生要熟悉考纲内容,对比学习新旧考纲,把握新旧考纲的不同点。重视新增内容,了解新考纲中的要求。研究学习考纲样题与近三年高考真题,搞明白“考什么以及怎么考”的问题。
1.【2023年6月上海英语高考真题】
你是明启中学高三学生吴磊,你校英语节即将举行主题为“ 快乐童年”的展览,邀请每个同学提供一件生活中物品参展,并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读,要求描述展品以及选择原因。
内容必须包括:
1)对该物品的简要描述
2)你选择该物品参展的原因
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________解题思路:
第一段:自我介绍+背景介绍+引出主题(我的展品)
第二段:对展品的展开描述。
可以选择一件与快乐童年有关的物品,秘鲁一本喜欢的童话书或者一个陪伴自己成长的玩具
第三段:选择此展品的原因。解释为什么选择了该物品参展,可以从个人情感回忆和影响等方面进行阐述,说明该物品与快乐童年之间的联系。
第四段:总结全文,深化主题
常用表达:
介绍外形: long, white, high ,round, square, big small , shape,color, pink, brown
介绍用途: be used to; be applied to; be used for different purposes
介绍材料质地:be made of/ from; steel; iron copper, plastic; leather;wood;cloth; cotton
句型:
1. It is …… centimeters long.
2.It is……centimeters in length and…… centimeters in width.
3. It is made in/of/from
4. The problem it may bring is
5. It can be used to
6. It is convenient for……
参考范文1:
I’m Wu Lei.For the "Happy Childhood" exhibition, I have chosen to exhibit my cherished Barbie doll. This special doll was given to me by my mother, and she has been my constant companion throughout my entire childhood. With her beautiful black hair, pink skirt, and captivating big eyes, she exudes a sense of elegance and charm. I enjoyed dressing her up and experimenting with different styles, making her even more stunning.
The Barbie doll holds immense sentimental value to me, as she played a significant role in my childhood. She was not just a toy; she became my confidante and my dearest friend. During moments of sadness or conflict with my peers, I would turn to her and pour out my heart. She patiently listened, providing solace and comfort during my loneliest and darkest days. Her presence was a source of strength and understanding.
Reflecting upon my childhood, memories of this beloved Barbie doll never fail to surface. She remains a symbol of unwavering companionship and a source of joy. Regardless of the circumstances, she was always there, faithfully accompanying me. Through this exhibition, I aim to share the significance of this doll in my life and evoke a sense of nostalgia and appreciation for the simple joys and cherished connections of childhood.
参考范文2:
I'm glad to know that our school is organizing an English festival with the theme “Happy Childhood”, where each student is invited to provide an item from their life to be exhibited. After much consideration, I have decided to exhibit my favorite childhood book, “The Adventures of Peter Rabbit ”
The Adventures of Peter Rabbit is a classic children's book. It tells the story of a rabbit named Peter and his exciting adventures in McGregor's Garden. I chose this book for the exhibition because it represents the joy and innocence of my early years. It reminds me of the carefree days of my childhood where I could immerse myself in the enchanting word of stories.
By exhibiting this book, I hope to share the happiness and wonder of my childhood with others. I believe that everyone deserves to experience the joy of a carefree and imaginative childhood.
2.【2022年7月上海英语高考真题】
假使你是明启中学的高三学生李华、你的学校正在组织“走进历史”主题活动,拟从三个活动形式里选择一个:走访老战视、表演历史则和制作短视频。学校正在向全体师生征求建议,内容必须包含:
(1)你的选择:
(2)你的理由。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
As a history enthusiast, I am excited to learn that our school is organizing a theme activity entitled “A walk into History."” The three recommended activities are all closely related to this theme, yet after comparing them, I would suggest choosing the first option, which is paying visits to war veterans, for the following reasons.
Firstly, a face-to-face interaction with these war heroes enables students to literally"walk into history, because they can hear first-hand stories and insightful comments from people who have personally experienced the horror and the impact of war.
Moreover, this activity serves as an important opportunity to bridge the disconnect nowadays between young people s perception of heroism and reality. Many youngsters romanticize the idea of heroism due to the influences of media, especially Hollywood movies. Meeting real-life heroes can open their eyes to the tragedies of war, making them realize the determination and sacrifice needed to become true heroes --guardians of their motherland.
Finally, such visits allow our veterans to pass on what they have learned from war, particularly their thoughts on peace, justice and patriotism, to the next generation, who, in turn, will reassure these old soldiers that their dedication and sacrifice will never be forgotten,whether in peaceful or turbulent times.
Although historical drama and short videos are also nice options,they both require a significant amount of time and expertise to prepare, which may discourage senior three students from active participation.
I hope you consider the merits of my recommendation, and I look forward to a memorable and exciting “walk into history.
Sincerely yours.
【内容】
想要写好作文内容,首先,作文内容上要包含到题目给出的所有信息点;其次,在用词上除了熟练运用日常词汇之外,高级词汇点缀也必不可少;最后,巧用逻辑连词也很重要,想要行文流畅避免“流水账”就要学会用好逻辑连词。
【结构】
结构考察的是你在行文时段落分配是否合理,当你拿到一个提纲作文的时候,首先可以根据题目的背景和提示进行内容分段,一般来说我们最常用的都是三段式。
第一段:1个长句交代背景+1个短句引出观点
第二段:分成4句话来写,结构是1短+3长
第三段:1个长句再次表达观点+1个短句升华
【句型】
“高级准确的单词+优秀多变的句型”永远是英语作文的“王炸”,当然这部分也是最难的,因为考核的是同
学们的基本功。如果说你的基础不扎实,平时积累不够。那就可以多背背范文中的好词好句。
【卷面】
这个部分与中文一样,不一定大家都要练习“衡水体”,字迹清晰易辨认就可以。
【2024·虹口区·一模】
假设你是明启中学高三学生赵磊,你们班最近与国际伙伴校的同学们共同开展了一个团队项目,但目前的合作效果并不理想。项目负责人 Mr. Johnson 请你负责在中方同学的范围内调查原因。你发 现有些同学对团队中的角色分配不满意,有些同学觉得团队沟通存在问题。请给 Mr. Johnson 写 一封邮件,内容必须包括:
1. 简述同学们的反馈;
2. 向 Mr. Johnson 提出改进建议并说明理由。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I have investigated the reasons behind the lack of effectiveness in our team project with our international partner school, as requested. Feedback from my Chinese classmates suggests two main issues.
Firstly, some students are dissatisfied with the role allocation within the team. They feel that roles were not assigned based on individual strengths and abilities, leading to reduced motivation and productivity.
Secondly, there are communication problems within the team. Language barriers and cultural differences make it challenging to express ideas and understand each other's perspectives.
To improve the situation, I recommend two actions. Firstly, conduct a thorough evaluation to reallocate roles based on each student's expertise and skills. This will ensure that everyone feels valued and can contribute effectively. Secondly, organize team-building activities and workshops on cross-cultural communication to enhance
understanding among team members.
Implementing these suggestions should address the current challenges we face.Thank you for considering my recommendations. I look forward to your guidance on how to proceed.
Sincerely,
Zhao Lei
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你们班最近与国际伙伴校的同学们共同开展了一个团队项目,但目前的合作效果并不理想。项目负责人Mr. Johnson请你负责在中方同学的范围内调查原因,要求考生给Mr. Johnson写一封邮件汇报调查结果和提出改进建议。
【详解】
1. 词汇激活
表明: suggest→show
首先: firstly→to begin with
改进: improve→promote
确保: ensure→make sure
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Secondly, organize team-building activities and workshops on cross-cultural communication to enhance understanding among team members.
拓展句: Secondly, organize team-building activities and workshops on cross-cultural communication, which can enhance understanding among team members.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]They feel that roles were not assigned based on individual strengths and abilities, leading to reduced motivation and productivity.(that 引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型 2]This will ensure that everyone feels valued and can contribute effectively.(that 引导的宾语从句)
【2024·崇明区·一模】
假设你是明启中学高三学生徐晶,学校最近就如何组织好每天上午30分钟的大课间活动征求全校学生的意见。你给负责的王老师写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.有关组织大课间活动的建议;
2.你的理由。
注意:不要在邮件中提及你的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Xu Jing, a senior student. I am writing to share some suggestions regarding how to organize our daily 30-minute mid-morning break activities.
I suggest incorporating a variety of activities during the break time. This could include physical activities like sports, dance or yoga sessions, as well as creative activities such as art workshops or music clubs. Providing diverse options would cater to different interests and allow students to choose activities that they enjoy and find beneficial. In addition, it would be great to involve student clubs and organizations in organizing these activities. This not only offers opportunities for student leadership and teamwork, but it also ensures a wider range of options and promotes a sense of belonging among students.
I believe implementing these suggestions would make our mid-morning break more enjoyable and productive. Thank you for taking the time to consider my suggestions.
Sincerely,
Xu Jing
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给负责征求如何组织好每天上午30 分钟大课间活动意见的王老师写一封电子邮件,需陈述个人对于组织大课间活动的建议,并提供相应的理由。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
关于: regarding→concerning/with regard to
各种各样的: a variety of→various/a wide range of
选择: choose→pick/select
确保: ensure→guarantee/secure
促进: promote→advance/facilitate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: I suggest incorporating a variety of activities during the break time.
拓展句: It is suggested that a variety of activities during the break time should be incorporated.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]Providing diverse options would cater to different interests and allow students to choose activities that they enjoy and find beneficial.(运用了动名词短语作主语、that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型 2]I believe implementing these suggestions would make our mid-morning break more enjoyable and productive.(运用了 that引导宾语从句并被省略、动名词短语作从句的主语)
【2024·金山区·一模】
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。学校将举办运动会,你班拟从以下三个方案中选其一参加开幕式的节目表演:中国传统乐器演奏(如古筝、二胡等等); 中国传统服饰秀(如汉服、旗袍等等)和中国传统才艺展示(如民族舞、武术等等)。现征求全班同学意见。给班主任写封邮件,内容须包括:
1. 你的选择;
2. 你的理由。
(文中不要出现真实姓名和学校名称)
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my opinion on the upcoming opening ceremony performance for our school's sports meet. I suggest that our class participate in theChinese traditional instrument performance, such as playing guzheng or erhu.
Firstly, this choice will allow us to showcase our cultural heritage and appreciation for traditional Chinese music. Instruments like guzheng and erhu are emblematic of Chinese culture, and their unique sound and music have been
popular around the world for generations. Secondly, the instrument performance will also provide a unique and exciting break from the usual sports-related activities.
In conclusion, I believe that our class participating in the Chinese traditional instrument performance will not only enrich the cultural diversity of the opening ceremony but also present a unique opportunity for us to share our cultural identity with the rest of the school. Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。学校将举办运动会,你班拟从以下三个方案中选其一参加开幕式的节目表演:中国传统乐器演奏(如古筝、二胡等等);中国传统服饰秀(如汉服、旗袍等等)和中国传统才艺展示(如民族舞、武术等等)。现征求全班同学意见。给班主任写封邮件。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
表达: express→convey
建议: suggest→recommend
机会: opportunity→chance
总之: in conclusion→in short
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句: Instruments like guzheng and erhu are emblematic of Chinese culture, and their unique sound and music have been popular around the world for generations.
拓展句: Not only are instruments like guzheng and erhu emblematic of Chinese culture, but also their unique sound and music have been popular around the world for generations.
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]I suggest that our class participate in the Chinese traditional instrument performance, such as playing the guzheng or erhu.(运用了 that 引导宾语从句)
[高分句型 2] In conclusion,I believe that our class participating in the Chinese traditional instrument performance will not only enrich the cultural diversity of the opening ceremony but also present a unique opportunity for us to share our cultural identity with the rest of the school.(运用了 not only……but also……句型)
【2024·奉贤区·一模】
假如你是明启中学学生李华,你校正在举行青少年模拟政协(Model CPPCC)提案征集活动,其中一项提案是将中国传统节日重阳节(The Double Ninth Festival)设为国定假日请就该提案写一封信给模拟政协主席,内容需包含:
1.你是否支持此提案;
2.你支持或反对此提案的理由______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Chairman of the Model CPPCC,
I am writing to express my support for the proposal of designating the Double Ninth Festival as a national holiday. As a student of Mingqi High School,I believe that this traditional Chinese festival holds significant cultural value and deserves more recognition and celebration.
Firstly, by establishing the Double Ninth Festival as a national holiday, we can preserve and promote our rich cultural heritage. This festival, also known as the Chongyang Festival, is not only a time for family reunions but also an to honor and respect the elderly. By granting it national holiday status, we can encourage families and communities to carry out traditional customs, such as visiting elders, climbing mountains, and appreciating chrysanthemums. This will contribute to the preservation and passing down of our traditional values to future generations.
Secondly, recognizing the Double Ninth Festival as a national holiday can enhance social harmony and cohesion. In today's fast-paced and modern society, many people are occupied with work and personal commitments, often neglecting the importance of s pending quality time with family and showing filial piety to the elderly. Designating this festival as a holiday will create opportunities for people to pause, reflect, and reconnect with their roots. This can help strengthen family bonds, foster a sense of unity within communities, and ultimately contribute to a harmonious society.
In conclusion, I wholeheartedly support the proposal to make the Double Ninth Festival a national holiday. It is an excellent initiative to preserve our cultural heritage and promote traditional values while fostering social harmony. I
urge the Model CPPCC to give due consideration to this proposal and make a collective effort to honor and
celebrate our traditional festivals.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作框架
1.开头:表达对将重阳节设为国定假日的支持,并介绍自己的身份和背景。
2.主体段落1:强调重阳节的文化价值和传统习俗,以及为何应该保护和传承这一节日。
3.主体段落2:阐述重阳节作为国定假日能够增进社会和谐和凝聚力的原因。
4.结尾:重申对将重阳节设为国定假日的支持,呼吁模拟全国政协认真考虑这一建议。
思路点拨
1.开头可以简要介绍自己的身份和支持的立场,例如作为一名学生或拥趸传统文化的人。
2.在主体段落1中,可以提到重阳节的历史渊源和突出的传统习俗,如探望长辈、登高赏菊等,强调这是重阳节需要被保护和传承的文化价值。
3.主体段落2可以从现代社会缺乏与家人团聚和孝敬长辈的机会出发,阐述将重阳节设为国定假日有助于提升社会和谐和家庭凝聚力,可以列举相关的调研或事实论证支持。
4.结尾部分再次表达对此建议的支持,强调重阳节作为国定假日的重要性,并号召政协委员对此做出深入考虑。
【2024·黄浦区·一模】
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明。你校英语社团公众号正在举行主题为“我的2023”的征文活动,写一篇文章投稿。在文中,你必须:
1. 描述一件你今年亲身经历且让你有所成长的事情;
2. 说明这件事对你的意义。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
As a senior student at Mingqi High School, I have had numerous experiences this year that have contributed to my personal growth. However, there is one particular event that stands out above the rest.
Earlier this year, I participated in a volunteering program organized by our school. We visited a local orphanage and spent time with the children there. This experience had a profound impact on me. Interacting with those children who lacked the love and care of a family made me realize the importance of compassion and empathy.
The time spent at the orphanage taught me valuable life lessons. It taught me to appreciate what I have and not take it for granted. It also made me more aware of the inequalities in society and ignited a desire within me to contribute towards creating a more inclusive and compassionate world.
This experience has had a significant meaning in my life. It has helped me develop a sense of gratitude and compassion towards others. It has also motivated me to actively engage in community service and make a positive difference in the lives of those less fortunate.
In conclusion, the volunteering experience at the orphanage in 2023 has been a transformative journey for me. It has shaped my perspective on life and instilled in me the values of empathy and kindness. I am grateful for this opportunity to grow as an individual and contribute to making the world a better place.押上海卷76题
写作
【题型解读】
纵观近五年上海高考题,不难发现,上海卷在作文题目的选择上偏向生活化话题,没有涉及时事的话
题,侧重对于教育现象的思考,除2013年外话题皆与校园生活有关;在体栽上,以夹叙夹议为主,不论建议方案类应用文抑或是图表、图片写作,都需要分析其理由;在话题呈现方面,出题者本着examinee-friendly
的原则,用中文设置提示,简明扼要,告诉考生写什么,怎么写,避免偏题之嫌。题目都有一定的选择和
思考的空间;而在文章内容的选择往往有很大的灵活性。
高考写作是对学生话题信息、话题语汇和逻辑思维能力的综合考察,所以,在阅卷中按照内容、语言和结构三个部分评分:
● 内容(10分):题目所要求的内容是否清楚、有效地表达出来
● 语言(10分):语法、词汇、拼写和标点符号等使用的准确性、句子结构和用词的多样性
● 结构(5分):文章段落及句子间组织结构的连贯性
【答题点津】
01重视词汇基础,提升阅读水平。
上海高考英语的难度之一体现在对考生的词汇量要求很大。整张高考英语的试卷中,阅读理解的分值占据很大比例,而很多学生阅读水平不高的重要原因之一就是单词量不够,甚至有相当一部分学生连考纲中要求必须掌握的词汇都没有完全掌握,给阅读文章造成很大的困难。所以建议考生首先应掌握考纲中的词汇,达到语音、语意、拼写三者相统一的目的。在此基础上,尽可能地扩大词汇量,可以精选时事性较强、题材新颖的文章来进行阅读,从而扩大视野,提升词汇,以适应高考的要求。
02系统掌握语法,注重结合篇章。
语法和词汇一样,同为英语学习的基础。语法细则虽繁杂,但是掌握基本框架之后,就可以进行全面系统的复习,分专题各个击破。高中重点语法要记的东西很多,所以记忆是基础。语法的提升需要理论与实践的反复交替,在正确的理论的支撑下,实践出真知。练习形式比较多样,可以做语法选择题,语法填
空,翻译等等,并且养成整理错题的习惯,反复思考,精益求精。学而不思则罔,思而不学则殆,采用了正确的学习方法才可事半功倍。
03认真对待专题,提高复习质量。
专题设计具有针对性,能体现出高考要求和考生的实际情况。专题训练的目的是辨析各知识块内的基本概念及其相互关系,对主干知识进行梳理串联构成科学、系统的知识网络,总结小范围内综合问题的解题方法和技巧,从而培养分析问题和解决问题的综合能力。
04明确高考要求,制定复习计划。
考生要熟悉考纲内容,对比学习新旧考纲,把握新旧考纲的不同点。重视新增内容,了解新考纲中的要求。研究学习考纲样题与近三年高考真题,搞明白“考什么以及怎么考”的问题。
1.【2023年6月上海英语高考真题】
你是明启中学高三学生吴磊,你校英语节即将举行主题为“ 快乐童年”的展览,邀请每个同学提供一件生活中物品参展,并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读,要求描述展品以及选择原因。
内容必须包括:
1)对该物品的简要描述
2)你选择该物品参展的原因
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2.【2022年7月上海英语高考真题】
假使你是明启中学的高三学生李华、你的学校正在组织“走进历史”主题活动,拟从三个活动形式里选择一个:走访老战视、表演历史则和制作短视频。学校正在向全体师生征求建议,内容必须包含:
(1)你的选择:
(2)你的理由。
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【内容】
想要写好作文内容,首先,作文内容上要包含到题目给出的所有信息点;其次,在用词上除了熟练运用日常词汇之外,高级词汇点缀也必不可少;最后,巧用逻辑连词也很重要,想要行文流畅避免“流水账”就要学会用好逻辑连词。
【结构】
结构考察的是你在行文时段落分配是否合理,当你拿到一个提纲作文的时候,首先可以根据题目的背景和提示进行内容分段,一般来说我们最常用的都是三段式。
第一段:1个长句交代背景+1个短句引出观点
第二段:分成4句话来写,结构是1短+3长
第三段:1个长句再次表达观点+1个短句升华
【句型】
“高级准确的单词+优秀多变的句型”永远是英语作文的“王炸”,当然这部分也是最难的,因为考核的是同学们的基本功。如果说你的基础不扎实,平时积累不够。那就可以多背背范文中的好词好句。
【卷面】
这个部分与中文一样,不一定大家都要练习“衡水体”,字迹清晰易辨认就可以。
【2024·虹口区·一模】
假设你是明启中学高三学生赵磊,你们班最近与国际伙伴校的同学们共同开展了一个团队项目,但目前的合作效果并不理想。项目负责人 Mr. Johnson 请你负责在中方同学的范围内调查原因。你发 现有些同学对团队中的角色分配不满意,有些同学觉得团队沟通存在问题。请给 Mr. Johnson 写 一封邮件,内容必须包括:
1. 简述同学们的反馈;
2. 向 Mr. Johnson 提出改进建议并说明理由。
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【2024·崇明区·一模】
假设你是明启中学高三学生徐晶,学校最近就如何组织好每天上午30分钟的大课间活动征求全校学生的意见。你给负责的王老师写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.有关组织大课间活动的建议;
2.你的理由。
注意:不要在邮件中提及你的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【2024·金山区·一模】
假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。学校将举办运动会,你班拟从以下三个方案中选其一参加开幕式的节目表演:中国传统乐器演奏(如古筝、二胡等等); 中国传统服饰秀(如汉服、旗袍等等)和中国传统才艺展示(如民族舞、武术等等)。现征求全班同学意见。给班主任写封邮件,内容须包括:
1. 你的选择;
2. 你的理由。
(文中不要出现真实姓名和学校名称)
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【2024·奉贤区·一模】
假如你是明启中学学生李华,你校正在举行青少年模拟政协(Model CPPCC)提案征集活动,其中一项提案是将中国传统节日重阳节(The Double Ninth Festival)设为国定假日请就该提案写一封信给模拟政协主席,内容需包含:
1.你是否支持此提案;
2.你支持或反对此提案的理由______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【2024·黄浦区·一模】
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明。你校英语社团公众号正在举行主题为“我的2023”的征文活动,写一篇文章投稿。在文中,你必须:
1. 描述一件你今年亲身经历且让你有所成长的事情;
2. 说明这件事对你的意义。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________