-2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写 龙卷风后重建花园 讲义
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When I was seven years old,my family moved from Mexico to America.In Mexico I was a cheerful girl who loved making people laugh with my jokes and inventing fun games to play with my fiends. However,when I arrived in America.l found it hard to fit in,and I became quieter.
当我七岁的时候，我的家人从墨西哥搬到了美国。在墨西哥，我是一个快乐的女孩，喜欢用我的笑话逗别人笑，喜欢发明有趣的游戏和我的朋友们一起玩。然而，当我到达美国时，我发现很难融入其中，我变得更安静了。
We lived in a small house with a modest yard where we grew vegetables my responsibility.While I took pride in watching them grow,there were times when I dreamed of having a beautiful garden like my schoolmate Luella's,with its delicate tulips(郁金香). Although Luella lived in the same neighborhood as me, we barely knew each other.
我们住在一所小房子里，院子不大，我们在那里种菜，这是我的责任。虽然我为看着它们长大而感到自豪，但有时我梦想着拥有一个像我同学Luella那样美丽的花园，花园里有精致的郁金香(郁金香). 虽然Luella和我住在同一个街区，但我们几乎不认识对方。
It was after a tornado that Luella and I finally became close friends.
龙卷风过后，卢拉和我终于成为了亲密的朋友。
The tornado struck on a Sunday afternoon.The gentle breeze transformed into a strong wind,and thick gray clouds filled the sky.Gradually,the tornado took shape.starting as a thin rope and growing into a large black funnel (漏斗).My entire family gathered in the bathroom,seeking shelter from the storm.Terrified,l sat close to my mom,knees in my chest.After the storm had passed,our worries and fears were replaced by relief that we were unharmed and that our house had remained undamaged.
龙卷风发生在一个星期天下午。轻柔的微风变成了强风，厚厚的灰色云层布满了天空。渐渐地，龙卷风形成了，从一根细绳开始，长成一个黑色的大漏斗(漏斗).我全家都聚集在浴室里，躲避风暴。我吓坏了，坐在妈妈身边，膝盖放在胸口。风暴过去后，我们的担忧和恐惧被宽慰所取代，我们没有受伤，我们的房子也没有受损。
As I stepped outside,I witnessed the extent of the damage the tornado had caused to our neighborhood.Across the street,a tall tree had fallen,crushing Luella's garden in front of her yellow house.We hurried over to check on it.Fortunately,her family seemed to be away at the time,and no one was injured.However her once-beautiful garden was in ruins, with the fallen tree destroying the tulips and debris (碎片) spread everywhere.I could only imagine how heartbroken they must feel seeing this.
当我走到外面时，我目睹了龙卷风对我们社区造成的破坏程度。街对面，一棵大树倒下了，砸碎了卢拉黄色房子前的花园。我们赶紧过去查看。幸运的是，她的家人当时似乎不在，没有人受伤。然而，她曾经美丽的花园已经成了废墟，倒下的树毁坏了郁金香和碎片(碎片) 到处都是。我只能想象他们看到这件事会有多伤心。
Then my mom's usual words rang in my ear,"It is more blessed to give than to receive,and my family started to think about how we could help.
然后，我妈妈常说的话在我耳边响起，“给予比接受更幸福，我的家人开始考虑如何帮助我。
注意:
续写词数应为150左右;
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just at that moment.Luella's family returned in their car.
Even after the debris was cleared,I could still sense Luella's sorrow for her lost garden.
文本分析：
Main characters：
I: A girl who has just immigrated from Mexico to the United States. Despite being introverted in the early stages of cultural adaptation, I still maintain the quality of being helpful.
Luela: My neighbor has a beautiful garden, but it was destroyed in a tornado.
Theme：
Unity and Recovery: The story showcases how community members unite and work together to help others recover their lives in the face of difficulties.
Main idea：
At first, I found life in the United States very uncomfortable, feeling lonely and silent. However, I still sought pleasure in the family garden and dreamed of having a beautiful garden like Luella's. A sudden tornado changed everything. Although my home was safe and sound, Luella's garden was destroyed by a big tree. After the tornado, my family and I decided to help Fred clean up Luella's garden.
官方范文 l :
Just at that moment, Luella's family returned in their car. Empathy surged within me as l saw their shock and disbelief. Approaching Luella, I tightly held her hands and said, “I'm so sorry for your loss, but thankfully you're all right." She weakly nodded, still puzzled by the devastating scene. My family volunteered to help clean up the mess , cutting down the branches and removing the fallen trees. To uplift Luella's spirits and bring her comfort, I tried my best to cheer her up while tidying the garden with her, during which my own joyful personality seemed to revive a bit.
Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella's sorrow for her lost garden.My heart went out to her, knowing her devotion to those tulips she had nurtured. Determined to restore the beauty that once thrived, I suggested that we rebuild the garden , which Luella delightedly embraced. With each bulb carefully planted and watered, the new tulip seedlings filled the garden once again , which symbolized the sprouting of a new friendship between us,as well as the turning that I finally got embraced by this new environment. My mom was right：It's more blessed to give than to receive because when you give, you may receive something unexpected in return.
官方范文2 :
Just at that moment, Luella's family returned in their car. Empathy surged within me as l saw the shock and disbelief on their faces. I couldn't help but approach Luella , tightly holding her hands and saying , “ I'm so sorry for your loss , but thankfully you're all right. " She weakly nodded at me , still appearing puzzled by the devastating sight. My family volunteered to help her clean up the mess , cutting down the branches and removing the fallen trees from the yard.To uplift Luella's spirits and bring her comfort , I tried my best to cheer her up while tidying the garden with her, during which my own joyful personality seemed to revive a bit.
Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella's sorrow for her lost ganden.My heart went out to her, knowing how much she had cherished those tulips that she had devoted so much energy to. Yet now, they were all gone. Determined to restore the beauty that once thrived, I suggested that we rebuild the garden. Luella agreed delightedly. With each bulb carefully planted and watered, the new tulip seedlings filled the garden once again, which symbolized the sprouting of a new friendship between us , as well as the turning that I finally got embraced by this new environment. My mom was right: It's more blessed to give than to receive because when you give , you may receive something unexpected in return.
下水文:
Just at that moment, Luella's family returned in their car. The look on their faces as they took in the sight of the wreckage was heartbreaking. Luella's eyes filled with tears as she surveyed the remains of her once vibrant and cherished garden. My heart ached for her, and I felt a strong urge to do something, anything, to alleviate her pain. I approached her, offering a comforting smile and words of sympathy. "I'm so sorry about your garden, Luella," I said, trying to convey my genuine concern. "It's such a terrible loss."
Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella's sorrow for her lost garden. The void it left was more than just physical; it was a loss of something she had nurtured with love and care. My family and I decided to take action. We rallied the neighborhood, organizing a community effort to rebuild Luella's garden. We gathered seeds, bulbs, and tools, and on a sunny Saturday, we all came together. Parents, children, even the elderly, each contributing in their own way. It was a beautiful sight to see our community come together, united by a common goal. As we worked, laughter and conversations filled the air, and Luella's smile slowly returned. The act of giving, of helping a neighbor in need, not only brought color back to Luella's yard but also brought our community closer together. It was a day I would always remember, a day that taught me the true value of compassion and the power of community.
When I was seven years old,my family moved from Mexico to America.In Mexico I was a cheerful girl who loved making people laugh with my jokes and inventing fun games to play with my fiends. However,when I arrived in America.l found it hard to fit in,and I became quieter.
当我七岁的时候，我的家人从墨西哥搬到了美国。在墨西哥，我是一个快乐的女孩，喜欢用我的笑话逗别人笑，喜欢发明有趣的游戏和我的朋友们一起玩。然而，当我到达美国时，我发现很难融入其中，我变得更安静了。
We lived in a small house with a modest yard where we grew vegetables my responsibility.While I took pride in watching them grow,there were times when I dreamed of having a beautiful garden like my schoolmate Luella's,with its delicate tulips(郁金香). Although Luella lived in the same neighborhood as me, we barely knew each other.
我们住在一所小房子里，院子不大，我们在那里种菜，这是我的责任。虽然我为看着它们长大而感到自豪，但有时我梦想着拥有一个像我同学Luella那样美丽的花园，花园里有精致的郁金香(郁金香). 虽然Luella和我住在同一个街区，但我们几乎不认识对方。
It was after a tornado that Luella and I finally became close friends.
龙卷风过后，卢拉和我终于成为了亲密的朋友。
The tornado struck on a Sunday afternoon.The gentle breeze transformed into a strong wind,and thick gray clouds filled the sky.Gradually,the tornado took shape.starting as a thin rope and growing into a large black funnel (漏斗).My entire family gathered in the bathroom,seeking shelter from the storm.Terrified,l sat close to my mom,knees in my chest.After the storm had passed,our worries and fears were replaced by relief that we were unharmed and that our house had remained undamaged.
龙卷风发生在一个星期天下午。轻柔的微风变成了强风，厚厚的灰色云层布满了天空。渐渐地，龙卷风形成了，从一根细绳开始，长成一个黑色的大漏斗(漏斗).我全家都聚集在浴室里，躲避风暴。我吓坏了，坐在妈妈身边，膝盖放在胸口。风暴过去后，我们的担忧和恐惧被宽慰所取代，我们没有受伤，我们的房子也没有受损。
As I stepped outside,I witnessed the extent of the damage the tornado had caused to our neighborhood.Across the street,a tall tree had fallen,crushing Luella's garden in front of her yellow house.We hurried over to check on it.Fortunately,her family seemed to be away at the time,and no one was injured.However her once-beautiful garden was in ruins, with the fallen tree destroying the tulips and debris (碎片) spread everywhere.I could only imagine how heartbroken they must feel seeing this.
当我走到外面时，我目睹了龙卷风对我们社区造成的破坏程度。街对面，一棵大树倒下了，砸碎了卢拉黄色房子前的花园。我们赶紧过去查看。幸运的是，她的家人当时似乎不在，没有人受伤。然而，她曾经美丽的花园已经成了废墟，倒下的树毁坏了郁金香和碎片(碎片) 到处都是。我只能想象他们看到这件事会有多伤心。
Then my mom's usual words rang in my ear,"It is more blessed to give than to receive,and my family started to think about how we could help.
然后，我妈妈常说的话在我耳边响起，“给予比接受更幸福，我的家人开始考虑如何帮助我。
注意:
续写词数应为150左右;
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just at that moment.Luella's family returned in their car.
Even after the debris was cleared,I could still sense Luella's sorrow for her lost garden.
文本分析：
Main characters：
I: A girl who has just immigrated from Mexico to the United States. Despite being introverted in the early stages of cultural adaptation, I still maintain the quality of being helpful.
Luela: My neighbor has a beautiful garden, but it was destroyed in a tornado.
Theme：
Unity and Recovery: The story showcases how community members unite and work together to help others recover their lives in the face of difficulties.
Main idea：
At first, I found life in the United States very uncomfortable, feeling lonely and silent. However, I still sought pleasure in the family garden and dreamed of having a beautiful garden like Luella's. A sudden tornado changed everything. Although my home was safe and sound, Luella's garden was destroyed by a big tree. After the tornado, my family and I decided to help Fred clean up Luella's garden.
官方范文 l :
Just at that moment, Luella's family returned in their car. Empathy surged within me as l saw their shock and disbelief. Approaching Luella, I tightly held her hands and said, “I'm so sorry for your loss, but thankfully you're all right." She weakly nodded, still puzzled by the devastating scene. My family volunteered to help clean up the mess , cutting down the branches and removing the fallen trees. To uplift Luella's spirits and bring her comfort, I tried my best to cheer her up while tidying the garden with her, during which my own joyful personality seemed to revive a bit.
Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella's sorrow for her lost garden.My heart went out to her, knowing her devotion to those tulips she had nurtured. Determined to restore the beauty that once thrived, I suggested that we rebuild the garden , which Luella delightedly embraced. With each bulb carefully planted and watered, the new tulip seedlings filled the garden once again , which symbolized the sprouting of a new friendship between us,as well as the turning that I finally got embraced by this new environment. My mom was right：It's more blessed to give than to receive because when you give, you may receive something unexpected in return.
官方范文2 :
Just at that moment, Luella's family returned in their car. Empathy surged within me as l saw the shock and disbelief on their faces. I couldn't help but approach Luella , tightly holding her hands and saying , “ I'm so sorry for your loss , but thankfully you're all right. " She weakly nodded at me , still appearing puzzled by the devastating sight. My family volunteered to help her clean up the mess , cutting down the branches and removing the fallen trees from the yard.To uplift Luella's spirits and bring her comfort , I tried my best to cheer her up while tidying the garden with her, during which my own joyful personality seemed to revive a bit.
Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella's sorrow for her lost ganden.My heart went out to her, knowing how much she had cherished those tulips that she had devoted so much energy to. Yet now, they were all gone. Determined to restore the beauty that once thrived, I suggested that we rebuild the garden. Luella agreed delightedly. With each bulb carefully planted and watered, the new tulip seedlings filled the garden once again, which symbolized the sprouting of a new friendship between us , as well as the turning that I finally got embraced by this new environment. My mom was right: It's more blessed to give than to receive because when you give , you may receive something unexpected in return.
下水文:
Just at that moment, Luella's family returned in their car. The look on their faces as they took in the sight of the wreckage was heartbreaking. Luella's eyes filled with tears as she surveyed the remains of her once vibrant and cherished garden. My heart ached for her, and I felt a strong urge to do something, anything, to alleviate her pain. I approached her, offering a comforting smile and words of sympathy. "I'm so sorry about your garden, Luella," I said, trying to convey my genuine concern. "It's such a terrible loss."
Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella's sorrow for her lost garden. The void it left was more than just physical; it was a loss of something she had nurtured with love and care. My family and I decided to take action. We rallied the neighborhood, organizing a community effort to rebuild Luella's garden. We gathered seeds, bulbs, and tools, and on a sunny Saturday, we all came together. Parents, children, even the elderly, each contributing in their own way. It was a beautiful sight to see our community come together, united by a common goal. As we worked, laughter and conversations filled the air, and Luella's smile slowly returned. The act of giving, of helping a neighbor in need, not only brought color back to Luella's yard but also brought our community closer together. It was a day I would always remember, a day that taught me the true value of compassion and the power of community.