2024届4月云南省二统英语读后续写助人类--志愿者献爱心帮助罗纳德先生 讲义
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Laura Mulvihill felt the ride was probably very unusual when she picked up 89-year-old Ronald Dembner from the Veteran's Hospital in Henry County, Georgia. It was obvious that he was struggling and in bad shape. But it wasn't until they arrived at his home that her worst doubts were confirmed, Expecting to be greeted by family members, she was greeted by something out of a nightmare(酷梦)episode of Hoarders instead.
Laura Mulvihill在乔治亚州亨利县退伍军人医院接走89岁的Ronald Dembner时，觉得这次骑行可能非常不寻常。很明显，他在挣扎，状态很糟糕。但直到他们到达他的家，她最严重的怀疑才得到证实。她本以为会受到家人的欢迎，却受到了噩梦般的欢迎(酷梦)取而代之的是《囤积者》一集。
Mr, Ronald's home was covered with rubbish, The counters. carpets, and walls looked dirty.The room smelt absolutely terrible. Because all of Ronald's family members had passed away, he had no one to assist him, Even the home care nurses had stopped coming to visit as a result of the extremely awful living conditions. He was completely alone, except for his dog, Homer, who had taken to pooping in the house. Unable to clean up after himself or Homer but terrified of losing his home and his dog, Mr. Ronald was too afraid to reach out for help.
罗纳德先生的家里堆满了垃圾，柜台。地毯和墙壁看起来很脏。这个房间闻起来非常难闻。由于罗纳德的所有家人都去世了，他没有人帮助他，甚至家庭护理护士也因为极其恶劣的生活条件而不再来探望他。除了他的狗霍默，他完全是一个人，霍默已经开始在家里拉屎了。罗纳德先生不能在自己或霍默之后打扫卫生，但害怕失去家和狗，他太害怕了，不敢寻求帮助。
Mulvihill, however, was not, Horrified by what she witnessed, she decided to take matters into her own hands. She spent hours on the phone, contacting the fire department, adult services the Chamber of Commerce and Habitat for Humanity, No one could offer any help. “Everyone said, mentally he's fine, he's just older. So nobody will help," she said.
然而，Mulvihill并没有，她被所目睹的一切吓坏了，她决定亲自处理此事。她花了几个小时打电话，联系消防部门、成人服务商会和人类家园，没有人能提供任何帮助。“每个人都说，他精神上很好，只是年纪大了。所以没有人会帮忙，”她说。
Finally, with all other resources running out, she posted a call to arms on social media creating the group, Helping Mr, Ronald, She explained the situation. She wrote in part, “'[ drove him home and he asked me to help him inside. He lives alone and cannot keep up with his pet. The house is terrible." She went on to explain that “the main issues are dog poop (1 dog) and general disrepair (no railing on the stairs, soiled carpet and furniture, etc)". She knew it would take an army to make things right. Luckily, she had found one, 2000 strong. The army was formed.
最后，在所有其他资源都用完的情况下，她在社交媒体上发布了一条号召，创建了“帮助罗纳德先生”组织。她解释了当时的情况。她写道，“（开车送他回家，他让我帮他进去。他一个人住，跟不上他的宠物。房子太糟糕了。”她接着解释说，“主要问题是狗的粪便（1只狗）和年久失修（楼梯上没有栏杆，地毯和家具脏了，等等）”。她知道需要一支军队才能把事情做好。幸运的是，她找到了一支2000人的军队。军队已经组建。
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dozens of volunteers came forward to help, with a desire to make a difference.
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Mr. Ronald was deeply moved by what Mulvihill and the volunteers had done.
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解析：
主题：献爱心！
续之分解：第一段： Dozens of volunteers came forward to help, with a desire to make a difference.
志愿者来了，那么来做什么了？（说个123）
1：清理垃圾，打扫狗粪；刷墙漆，铺地板.......
2：修缮楼梯扶手，（原文中：房子年久失修）
3：物质的解决了，精神关怀，送温暖，化孤独
设计思路：回扣原文，层层递进
续之分解：第二段： Mr. Ronald was deeply moved by what Mulvihill and the volunteers had done.
感动，表达， 升华
1：（老人）无缝连接的感动：止不住的眼泪，停不下的感谢，握紧不放的手
2：（志愿者和Mulvihill）：赠人玫瑰，手有余香！改变别人，也重拾自己
3：升华：伸出手，献出爱！（人间自有真情在）
下水：
Dozens of volunteers came forward to help, with a desire to make a difference.It took them days to clean out the rubbish and the waste of Homer, paint the walls and install the new flooring.They also built a railing for the stairs to ensure Mr Ronaldo's safety. The volunteers even organized a schedule to take turns to visit Mr Ronaldo, making sure he was not alone again and offering him what he needed in this hard time.
Mr. Ronald was deeply moved by what Mulvihill and the volunteers had done. He was overwhelmed with gratitude, tears rolling down without control. He kept thanking all the guys for their kindness, squeezing their hands tightly one by one. While Mulvihill and her army of volunteers may have made a life-changing difference in Mr Ronaldo world, it made a difference in the in her world as well. When we extend our hand to lift others up, we are raising ourselves up too!
参考范文：
Dozens of volunteers came forward armed with cleaning supplies, tools, and an overwhelming desire to make a difference.Within a week, Mr. Ronald's home was stripped apart and deep-cleaned from top to bottom. Volunteers removed all of the garbage, the old furniture, and the old, moldy carpet.It was just the beginning. Help continued to pour in.One husband/wife team provided free fencing, a veterinarian saw to Homer's rabies shots and flea treatment, and a local caterer offered up free meals.Additionally, numerous tradespeople spent their off-hours working for free; installing new flooring, painting the walls, and rebuilding the deck, all with donated supplies from community members and area businesses.In addition to the structural improvements, Mulvihill also set up appointments for nurses and health care support to start coming to the home again.
Mr. Ronald was deeply moved by what Mulvihill and the volunteers had done.“He is so thankful, he cracks me up. He keeps saying, ‘I don’t know what I did to deserve all of this from all you guys,’”said Mulvihill. “It’s giving him hope that he will be taken care of.”When We Transform The Lives Of Others, We Also Transform Our Own.While Mulvihill and her army of volunteers may have made a life-changing difference in Mr. Ronald's world, she says it made a difference in her world as well."I will never forget their help, their love, for the rest of my life. I will never forget it," she said. "We will never forget you either," she added, talking to Mr. Ronald.Because that's the thing when we help each other. It's not just about making a positive impact on someone else's life; it's about the profound effect it has on our own lives.When we extend our hand to lift others up, we inadvertently lift up ourselves too.
Laura Mulvihill felt the ride was probably very unusual when she picked up 89-year-old Ronald Dembner from the Veteran's Hospital in Henry County, Georgia. It was obvious that he was struggling and in bad shape. But it wasn't until they arrived at his home that her worst doubts were confirmed, Expecting to be greeted by family members, she was greeted by something out of a nightmare(酷梦)episode of Hoarders instead.
Laura Mulvihill在乔治亚州亨利县退伍军人医院接走89岁的Ronald Dembner时，觉得这次骑行可能非常不寻常。很明显，他在挣扎，状态很糟糕。但直到他们到达他的家，她最严重的怀疑才得到证实。她本以为会受到家人的欢迎，却受到了噩梦般的欢迎(酷梦)取而代之的是《囤积者》一集。
Mr, Ronald's home was covered with rubbish, The counters. carpets, and walls looked dirty.The room smelt absolutely terrible. Because all of Ronald's family members had passed away, he had no one to assist him, Even the home care nurses had stopped coming to visit as a result of the extremely awful living conditions. He was completely alone, except for his dog, Homer, who had taken to pooping in the house. Unable to clean up after himself or Homer but terrified of losing his home and his dog, Mr. Ronald was too afraid to reach out for help.
罗纳德先生的家里堆满了垃圾，柜台。地毯和墙壁看起来很脏。这个房间闻起来非常难闻。由于罗纳德的所有家人都去世了，他没有人帮助他，甚至家庭护理护士也因为极其恶劣的生活条件而不再来探望他。除了他的狗霍默，他完全是一个人，霍默已经开始在家里拉屎了。罗纳德先生不能在自己或霍默之后打扫卫生，但害怕失去家和狗，他太害怕了，不敢寻求帮助。
Mulvihill, however, was not, Horrified by what she witnessed, she decided to take matters into her own hands. She spent hours on the phone, contacting the fire department, adult services the Chamber of Commerce and Habitat for Humanity, No one could offer any help. “Everyone said, mentally he's fine, he's just older. So nobody will help," she said.
然而，Mulvihill并没有，她被所目睹的一切吓坏了，她决定亲自处理此事。她花了几个小时打电话，联系消防部门、成人服务商会和人类家园，没有人能提供任何帮助。“每个人都说，他精神上很好，只是年纪大了。所以没有人会帮忙，”她说。
Finally, with all other resources running out, she posted a call to arms on social media creating the group, Helping Mr, Ronald, She explained the situation. She wrote in part, “'[ drove him home and he asked me to help him inside. He lives alone and cannot keep up with his pet. The house is terrible." She went on to explain that “the main issues are dog poop (1 dog) and general disrepair (no railing on the stairs, soiled carpet and furniture, etc)". She knew it would take an army to make things right. Luckily, she had found one, 2000 strong. The army was formed.
最后，在所有其他资源都用完的情况下，她在社交媒体上发布了一条号召，创建了“帮助罗纳德先生”组织。她解释了当时的情况。她写道，“（开车送他回家，他让我帮他进去。他一个人住，跟不上他的宠物。房子太糟糕了。”她接着解释说，“主要问题是狗的粪便（1只狗）和年久失修（楼梯上没有栏杆，地毯和家具脏了，等等）”。她知道需要一支军队才能把事情做好。幸运的是，她找到了一支2000人的军队。军队已经组建。
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dozens of volunteers came forward to help, with a desire to make a difference.
————————————————————————————————————————————
Mr. Ronald was deeply moved by what Mulvihill and the volunteers had done.
————————————————————————————————————————————————————
解析：
主题：献爱心！
续之分解：第一段： Dozens of volunteers came forward to help, with a desire to make a difference.
志愿者来了，那么来做什么了？（说个123）
1：清理垃圾，打扫狗粪；刷墙漆，铺地板.......
2：修缮楼梯扶手，（原文中：房子年久失修）
3：物质的解决了，精神关怀，送温暖，化孤独
设计思路：回扣原文，层层递进
续之分解：第二段： Mr. Ronald was deeply moved by what Mulvihill and the volunteers had done.
感动，表达， 升华
1：（老人）无缝连接的感动：止不住的眼泪，停不下的感谢，握紧不放的手
2：（志愿者和Mulvihill）：赠人玫瑰，手有余香！改变别人，也重拾自己
3：升华：伸出手，献出爱！（人间自有真情在）
下水：
Dozens of volunteers came forward to help, with a desire to make a difference.It took them days to clean out the rubbish and the waste of Homer, paint the walls and install the new flooring.They also built a railing for the stairs to ensure Mr Ronaldo's safety. The volunteers even organized a schedule to take turns to visit Mr Ronaldo, making sure he was not alone again and offering him what he needed in this hard time.
Mr. Ronald was deeply moved by what Mulvihill and the volunteers had done. He was overwhelmed with gratitude, tears rolling down without control. He kept thanking all the guys for their kindness, squeezing their hands tightly one by one. While Mulvihill and her army of volunteers may have made a life-changing difference in Mr Ronaldo world, it made a difference in the in her world as well. When we extend our hand to lift others up, we are raising ourselves up too!
参考范文：
Dozens of volunteers came forward armed with cleaning supplies, tools, and an overwhelming desire to make a difference.Within a week, Mr. Ronald's home was stripped apart and deep-cleaned from top to bottom. Volunteers removed all of the garbage, the old furniture, and the old, moldy carpet.It was just the beginning. Help continued to pour in.One husband/wife team provided free fencing, a veterinarian saw to Homer's rabies shots and flea treatment, and a local caterer offered up free meals.Additionally, numerous tradespeople spent their off-hours working for free; installing new flooring, painting the walls, and rebuilding the deck, all with donated supplies from community members and area businesses.In addition to the structural improvements, Mulvihill also set up appointments for nurses and health care support to start coming to the home again.
Mr. Ronald was deeply moved by what Mulvihill and the volunteers had done.“He is so thankful, he cracks me up. He keeps saying, ‘I don’t know what I did to deserve all of this from all you guys,’”said Mulvihill. “It’s giving him hope that he will be taken care of.”When We Transform The Lives Of Others, We Also Transform Our Own.While Mulvihill and her army of volunteers may have made a life-changing difference in Mr. Ronald's world, she says it made a difference in her world as well."I will never forget their help, their love, for the rest of my life. I will never forget it," she said. "We will never forget you either," she added, talking to Mr. Ronald.Because that's the thing when we help each other. It's not just about making a positive impact on someone else's life; it's about the profound effect it has on our own lives.When we extend our hand to lift others up, we inadvertently lift up ourselves too.