-2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写遣词造句课件 (共26张PPT)
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(共26张PPT)
How to be more attractive
Continuation Writing
---遣词造句
1. To learn how to make your sentences more attractive；
2. To grasp some useful sentence structures；
3. To make your story more fascinating.
Learning aims
If you were a little bird saved by a human, would you fly away or stay to show gratitude
Question
①I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
②With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
③When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
④As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
⑤During the cookout, I told my host the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say good-bye.”
Para.1 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
Para.2 I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
Step 1 Corrrect
wandered
I wandered in the farm.
I surrounded the farm.
1) 加形容词（可以是一个形容词，也可以是并列形容词或者形容词短语）
________________________________________（满心焦虑）, I wandered in the __________ （充满生机的）farm.
2）加副词（修饰动词、形容词、其他副词或整个句子，指的是时间、地点、程度、方式等概念）
(_____)I_________________________________________wandered in the farm(_____).
Full of anxiety/ overflowing with anxiety
Step 2 Add
I wandered in the farm.
lively
eagerly/ carefully/ merrily/ anxiously/excitedly
3)加介词短语
1.___________________________________(毫不犹豫地), I wandered in the farm.
2. _______________(出于好奇地), I wandered in the farm.
Without any hesitation/ a second thought
Out of curiosity
I wandered in the farm.
1.____________________________________ （注意到一些正在快乐飞行的不知名的小鸟), I started wandering in the farm.
2. __________________________（受到老朋友的启发）, I started wandering in the farm.
4）加非谓语动词
I wandered in the farm.
Noticing some unknown birds flying merrily
Inspired by my old friend
5）加with 复合结构/独立主格结构
with的复合结构
1. _________________________(睁大了眼睛), I wandered in the farm.
独立主格结构(身体部位+非谓语动词）
________________________(心狂跳), I wandered in the farm.
With my eyes wide open
My heart beating wildly
I wandered in the farm.
6）加衔接词/过渡词
表因果
_________________________（由于受到我朋友的鼓励），I wandered in the farm.
表转折
I wandered in the farm, ________，(然而) to my disappointment, there’s no sign of the little bird.
表递进
I wandered in the farm, ___________，(此外）, I searched the woods nearby for the little bird.
Due to my friend’s encourage
however
what’s more
I wandered in the farm.
1.三大从句
定语从句
I wandered in the farm，_________________________________(我与小鸟相遇的).
名词性从句
____________________________________________(好奇小鸟的近况), I wandered in the farm.
状语从句（so+adj.+be+sb. +that sb did sth）
我如此担忧以至于我迫不及待地在农场里来回漫步,想要再次遇到蜂鸟.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
where I met/encountered the little bird
Curious about what would happened to the little bird
So anxious was I that I couldn’t wait to wander in the farm
back and forth in the hope of meeting the hummingbird again.
Step 3 Upgrade
2. 三种特殊句
_______________________________(一阵焦虑感向我袭来)，I wandered in the farm .
A flood of anxiety swept over me
无灵主语句
a flood of ...swept over sb 表示人感到……”或“一阵/一种……向某人袭来”
用于该句式的有灵动词（短语）有：
seize/take hold of“抓住；攫住”；get the better of/defeat“击垮”；
sweep，/flood，rush over“袭来”；run through/pass through“掠过”；
swallow“吞噬；淹没”；choke“使哽咽, 哽住”；
desert“背离”escape“逃离”
tear...into pieces“把……撕碎”；fail“使失望；有负于”；
2. 三种特殊句
强调句
直到我在农场里漫步时，我才意识到我有多么思念这只小鸟。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________
倒装句
我立刻开始在农场里开始漫步起来.（in no time)
_______________________________________________
In no time did I wander in the farm.
It wasn’t until I wandered in the farm that I realized how much I missed the little bird.
3. 三种修辞手法
比喻
I wandered in the farm,_____________________________________.
(农场的风景美丽的如同一幅画)
whose scenery were just like a painting
夸张
I wandered in the farm, thinking ____________________________________.
(你一定已经等了我几个世纪了)
排比
我不仅在田野里，在农场里，而且在附近的小树林里漫步了起来
_______________________________________________________________
____________
“You must have waited for me for centuries”
I started wandering not only in the feild，in the farm, but also in the woods nearby.
How to be more attractive
Summary
2. Add
加形容词
加副词
加介词短语
加with复合结构/
独立主格结构
⑤ 加非谓语动词
⑥ 加衔接词/过渡词
1. Correct
订正拼写错误
订正语法错误
选用更准确的词汇
3. Upgrade
① 三大从句：定、状、名
② 三种特殊句：无、强、倒
③ 三种修辞：比、夸、排
Reading
①I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
②With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
③When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
④As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
⑤During the cookout, I told my host the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say good-bye.”
n
saved a bird
didn’t fly away
say good-bye
Para.1 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
Para.2 I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
plot line
emotional line
saved a bird
didn’t fly away
say good-bye
went to the farm again
the bird appeared
joyful/touched
sympathetic/caring
shocked/amazed
curious/disappointed
（grateful/attached）
confused
Overview of the two lines of story
05
4 Falling action
5 Ending
1 Beginning(backgroud)
2 Rising action
saved a bird
didn’t fly away
say good-bye
went to the farm again
the bird appeared
joyful/touched
sympathetic/caring
grateful/attached
shocked/amazed
curious/disappointed
3 Climax
①I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
②With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
③When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
④As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
⑤During the cookout, I told my host the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say good-bye.”
Para.1 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
Para.2 I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
Main idea:The story is about a man who saved a little bird and the bird knew how to be grateful.
foreshadowing(伏笔):1. my car; 2. the window of the milking house;3.the bird didn’t fly away
Foreshadowing(伏笔)
Thinking
Main idea
Discuss in groups of four. (1min)
What should we mention in Para. 1
1. Parked the car
2. Noticed the fixed window
3. The hummingbird would regularly fly back to the farm
4. Tried to find the hummingbird
5. Waited but the hummningbird didn’t appear
Discussion
Clue:develop the story according to the two given sentences and the foreshadowings(1. my car; 2. the window of the milking house;3.the bird didn’t fly away)
Use what we’ve learned to polish or rewrite Para.1
Practice (5mins)
评价表
序号 项目 评价标准 各项目总分 评分
1 书写 是否卷面整洁，字体美观 1
2 内容 是否覆盖所有要点 3
3 行文流畅 是否拼写有误 是否有语法错误 是否符合逻辑 3
4 语言丰满 是否加入步骤2中至少三个语言点 是否有应用步骤3中至少三种句式 8
总分 （15）
Para 1. A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
Pulling up my car, in no time did I noticed that the track leading to the deserted milking house. Along it, several little unknown birds were flying merrily, which recalled the moment weeks ago. It wasn’t until then that I realized I hadn’t seen her for centuries. My heart beating wildly, taking a step nearer with my eyes wide open, I noticed the brand-new window and the my friend’s surprised face reflected on the panes. So excited was he that gathered me in his arms tightly. He couldn’t wait to share with me that the little bird regularly visited the farm. Encouraged by his words, I started wondering along the same path, the same milk house, the same farm. However, I failed. A flood of frustration swept over me. The sun which were just like a burning flame was sinking. I was ready to leave.
Reference
停好车，看到挤奶房→想起蜂鸟→走近瞧瞧→ 发现窗修好了 →朋友告知近况→在农场寻找→没找到→失望→准备离开。
倒装句
定语从句
强调句+夸张
with复合结构
+独立主格结构
状语从句
名词性从句
非谓语动词
排比
无灵主语句
定语从句+比喻
As we know
Plant good cause and reap good fruit.
种善因，得善果。
Homework
Para.2 I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
Use what we’ve learned to polish or rewrite Para. 2
Thank You!
How to be more attractive
Continuation Writing
---遣词造句
1. To learn how to make your sentences more attractive；
2. To grasp some useful sentence structures；
3. To make your story more fascinating.
Learning aims
If you were a little bird saved by a human, would you fly away or stay to show gratitude
Question
①I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
②With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
③When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
④As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
⑤During the cookout, I told my host the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say good-bye.”
Para.1 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
Para.2 I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
Step 1 Corrrect
wandered
I wandered in the farm.
I surrounded the farm.
1) 加形容词（可以是一个形容词，也可以是并列形容词或者形容词短语）
________________________________________（满心焦虑）, I wandered in the __________ （充满生机的）farm.
2）加副词（修饰动词、形容词、其他副词或整个句子，指的是时间、地点、程度、方式等概念）
(_____)I_________________________________________wandered in the farm(_____).
Full of anxiety/ overflowing with anxiety
Step 2 Add
I wandered in the farm.
lively
eagerly/ carefully/ merrily/ anxiously/excitedly
3)加介词短语
1.___________________________________(毫不犹豫地), I wandered in the farm.
2. _______________(出于好奇地), I wandered in the farm.
Without any hesitation/ a second thought
Out of curiosity
I wandered in the farm.
1.____________________________________ （注意到一些正在快乐飞行的不知名的小鸟), I started wandering in the farm.
2. __________________________（受到老朋友的启发）, I started wandering in the farm.
4）加非谓语动词
I wandered in the farm.
Noticing some unknown birds flying merrily
Inspired by my old friend
5）加with 复合结构/独立主格结构
with的复合结构
1. _________________________(睁大了眼睛), I wandered in the farm.
独立主格结构(身体部位+非谓语动词）
________________________(心狂跳), I wandered in the farm.
With my eyes wide open
My heart beating wildly
I wandered in the farm.
6）加衔接词/过渡词
表因果
_________________________（由于受到我朋友的鼓励），I wandered in the farm.
表转折
I wandered in the farm, ________，(然而) to my disappointment, there’s no sign of the little bird.
表递进
I wandered in the farm, ___________，(此外）, I searched the woods nearby for the little bird.
Due to my friend’s encourage
however
what’s more
I wandered in the farm.
1.三大从句
定语从句
I wandered in the farm，_________________________________(我与小鸟相遇的).
名词性从句
____________________________________________(好奇小鸟的近况), I wandered in the farm.
状语从句（so+adj.+be+sb. +that sb did sth）
我如此担忧以至于我迫不及待地在农场里来回漫步,想要再次遇到蜂鸟.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
where I met/encountered the little bird
Curious about what would happened to the little bird
So anxious was I that I couldn’t wait to wander in the farm
back and forth in the hope of meeting the hummingbird again.
Step 3 Upgrade
2. 三种特殊句
_______________________________(一阵焦虑感向我袭来)，I wandered in the farm .
A flood of anxiety swept over me
无灵主语句
a flood of ...swept over sb 表示人感到……”或“一阵/一种……向某人袭来”
用于该句式的有灵动词（短语）有：
seize/take hold of“抓住；攫住”；get the better of/defeat“击垮”；
sweep，/flood，rush over“袭来”；run through/pass through“掠过”；
swallow“吞噬；淹没”；choke“使哽咽, 哽住”；
desert“背离”escape“逃离”
tear...into pieces“把……撕碎”；fail“使失望；有负于”；
2. 三种特殊句
强调句
直到我在农场里漫步时，我才意识到我有多么思念这只小鸟。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________
倒装句
我立刻开始在农场里开始漫步起来.（in no time)
_______________________________________________
In no time did I wander in the farm.
It wasn’t until I wandered in the farm that I realized how much I missed the little bird.
3. 三种修辞手法
比喻
I wandered in the farm,_____________________________________.
(农场的风景美丽的如同一幅画)
whose scenery were just like a painting
夸张
I wandered in the farm, thinking ____________________________________.
(你一定已经等了我几个世纪了)
排比
我不仅在田野里，在农场里，而且在附近的小树林里漫步了起来
_______________________________________________________________
____________
“You must have waited for me for centuries”
I started wandering not only in the feild，in the farm, but also in the woods nearby.
How to be more attractive
Summary
2. Add
加形容词
加副词
加介词短语
加with复合结构/
独立主格结构
⑤ 加非谓语动词
⑥ 加衔接词/过渡词
1. Correct
订正拼写错误
订正语法错误
选用更准确的词汇
3. Upgrade
① 三大从句：定、状、名
② 三种特殊句：无、强、倒
③ 三种修辞：比、夸、排
Reading
①I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
②With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
③When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
④As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
⑤During the cookout, I told my host the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say good-bye.”
n
saved a bird
didn’t fly away
say good-bye
Para.1 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
Para.2 I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
plot line
emotional line
saved a bird
didn’t fly away
say good-bye
went to the farm again
the bird appeared
joyful/touched
sympathetic/caring
shocked/amazed
curious/disappointed
（grateful/attached）
confused
Overview of the two lines of story
05
4 Falling action
5 Ending
1 Beginning(backgroud)
2 Rising action
saved a bird
didn’t fly away
say good-bye
went to the farm again
the bird appeared
joyful/touched
sympathetic/caring
grateful/attached
shocked/amazed
curious/disappointed
3 Climax
①I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
②With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
③When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
④As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away. Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
⑤During the cookout, I told my host the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say good-bye.”
Para.1 A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
Para.2 I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
Main idea:The story is about a man who saved a little bird and the bird knew how to be grateful.
foreshadowing(伏笔):1. my car; 2. the window of the milking house;3.the bird didn’t fly away
Foreshadowing(伏笔)
Thinking
Main idea
Discuss in groups of four. (1min)
What should we mention in Para. 1
1. Parked the car
2. Noticed the fixed window
3. The hummingbird would regularly fly back to the farm
4. Tried to find the hummingbird
5. Waited but the hummningbird didn’t appear
Discussion
Clue:develop the story according to the two given sentences and the foreshadowings(1. my car; 2. the window of the milking house;3.the bird didn’t fly away)
Use what we’ve learned to polish or rewrite Para.1
Practice (5mins)
评价表
序号 项目 评价标准 各项目总分 评分
1 书写 是否卷面整洁，字体美观 1
2 内容 是否覆盖所有要点 3
3 行文流畅 是否拼写有误 是否有语法错误 是否符合逻辑 3
4 语言丰满 是否加入步骤2中至少三个语言点 是否有应用步骤3中至少三种句式 8
总分 （15）
Para 1. A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
Pulling up my car, in no time did I noticed that the track leading to the deserted milking house. Along it, several little unknown birds were flying merrily, which recalled the moment weeks ago. It wasn’t until then that I realized I hadn’t seen her for centuries. My heart beating wildly, taking a step nearer with my eyes wide open, I noticed the brand-new window and the my friend’s surprised face reflected on the panes. So excited was he that gathered me in his arms tightly. He couldn’t wait to share with me that the little bird regularly visited the farm. Encouraged by his words, I started wondering along the same path, the same milk house, the same farm. However, I failed. A flood of frustration swept over me. The sun which were just like a burning flame was sinking. I was ready to leave.
Reference
停好车，看到挤奶房→想起蜂鸟→走近瞧瞧→ 发现窗修好了 →朋友告知近况→在农场寻找→没找到→失望→准备离开。
倒装句
定语从句
强调句+夸张
with复合结构
+独立主格结构
状语从句
名词性从句
非谓语动词
排比
无灵主语句
定语从句+比喻
As we know
Plant good cause and reap good fruit.
种善因，得善果。
Homework
Para.2 I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
Use what we’ve learned to polish or rewrite Para. 2
Thank You!