专题01应用文写作之申请信
申请信是指写信人想申请某个职位或某个项目而向收信人提出请求的信件。一般常考的内容有申请成为志愿者、申请某个岗位、加入俱乐部、或参加夏令营、留学项目等。申请信是非常正式的信件,所用语言也应该正式、简洁和准确,语气要客气礼貌。申请信是高考重点考查的考向。
解题思路秘籍
开头要直入主题,注意用语要言简意赅,语气要诚恳礼貌,说明写信目的明确要聘的职位,明确该职务的技能要求,介绍与该职务相关的经历。
主体写自己的简单经历,着重写教育、工作经历及业绩;详细阐述自己能胜任该工作的理由,最后要表明自己的信心写清自己的联系地址和电话,
结尾询问什么时间可安排面试。
提分秘籍01必备短语
advertise in 在……上宣传
apply for the post of 申请……的职务
be qualified for sth 胜任某事
get along with sb 与某人相处
communicate with sb 与某人沟通
be experienced in sth 对某事有经验
have a good command of sth 精通某事/物
meet requirements 满足条件
live up to one's expectation 不辜负某人的期待
be favorably considered 优先考虑
attain rich experience 获得丰富的经验
have a better understanding of sth 对某事/物有更好的理解
提分秘籍02必备句式
开头常用句
I'm more than delighted to know from your website that you need a volunteer during the summer.
我很开心地从你们网站上了解到你们需要暑期志愿者。
In reply to your advertisement on the Internet, I beg to apply for the post of marketing manager in your company.
见到网上刊登的贵公司广告,我谨申请应聘贵公司的市场部经理的职务。
Therefore, I'm writing this letter in the hope that I can obtain this precious chance.
因此,我写这封信,希望能得到这个宝贵的机会。
主体常用句
As far as I'm concerned, I'm qualified for the voluntary job.
我认为,我能胜任这项志愿者的工作。
Great passion for the job paves the way for me to be determined to make it.
我对这份工作强烈的热情使我决心完成它。
To start with, I have a good command of English, enabling me to communicate well with others.
首先,我精通英语,使我可以与他人顺利沟通。
In addition, I'm outgoing, which makes it possible for me to get along well with others.
另外,我很开朗,这使我可以与他人友好相处。
Furthermore, my interest and skill in teamwork and sports contribute to my application for the job.
还有,我在团队合作与运动方面的兴趣和技能有助于我申请这份工作。
My experience of such kind of jobs lays a solid foundation for my success.
我在这方面的工作经验为我的成功奠定了坚实的基础。
结尾常用句
Should you give me an opportunity of a personal interview, I would be most grateful.
如果您给我一次面试的机会,我将感激不尽。
I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
如果您能考虑我的申请,我将感激不尽。
I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
我期待着您在方便的时候尽早给我答复。
提分秘籍03必备模版
结构 内容
首段:点明写作背景和目的。 I'm ________ (简单自我介绍). When I was reading the
advertisement, ________ (表达看到相关广告后的感受). I think it's a good opportunity for me to ________ (应聘的原因). Therefore I recommend myself without hesitation.
主体:主题句,理由(从素质、能力、经验等方面陈述)。 I think I am qualified for this job. To start with, ________ (理由一:个人素质). In addition, ________ (理由二:个人能力). Furthermore, ________ (理由三:工作经验).
尾段:恳请对方同意。 I would appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply./Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
高考真题回顾
(一)
(2021·辽宁·高考真题)假如你是李华,从互联网上得知Banks夫妇的西餐厅在登广告招聘兼职服务员。请你写一封电子邮件应聘。内容包括:
1. 发邮件的目的;
2. 自我介绍;
3. 应聘理由(可开阔视野、交到新朋友等);
4. 表达自己的希望。
写作要求:
1. 应包含所给出的全部要点提示;
2. 字数80词左右;
3. 短文内不得出现真实的校名和姓名,否则不得分。
4. 开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. & Mrs. Banks,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. & Mrs. Banks,
I’m Li Hua, who has just graduated from high school this summer. I know that you want some part-timers for your newly-opened western restaurant on the Internet and I’d like to be part of your team.
I’ve been learning English for 10 years, and I can express myself fluently. Besides, I’m diligent and healthy with a nice character, which helps me get along well with people with different backgrounds. What matters most is the opportunity of expanding my horizons as well as making more new friends. And it is the sense of commitment that I am eager to raise through such a valuable experience that inspires me to make this request.
An early reply at your convenience will be much appreciated if my qualifications meet with your approval.
Regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生写一封电子邮件应聘Banks夫妇的西餐厅的兼职服务员。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
学习:learning→gaining knowledge in
另外:besides→in addition
勤勉的:diligent→conscientious
扩宽视野:expanding my horizons→broadening my perspectives
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’ve been learning English for 10 years, and I can express myself fluently.
拓展句:I’ve been learning English for 10 years so that I can express myself fluently.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I know that you want some part-timers for your newly-opened western restaurant on the Internet and I’d like to be part of your team.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Besides, I’m diligent and healthy with a nice character, which helps me get along well with people with different backgrounds.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(二)
(2023·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读,校方为加强中英文化交流,将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画,拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:
(1)申请参加本次活动;
(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解;
(3)结合个人兴趣和特长,说明拟教授何种技能,并阐述原因。
参考词汇:中国工坊 Chinese Workshop
中华美食 Chinese cuisine
手工艺 handicraft
书法 calligraphy
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin, an exchange student from China. Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.
The theme of the activity involves Chinese food, traditional Chinese handicrafts, Chinese calligraphy and painting. So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. As a Chinese, I have a passion for making Chinese cuisine, for example dumplings. Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.
I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本文是应用文。假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读,校方为加强中英文化交流,将举办“中国工坊” 活动。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:(1)申请参加本次活动;(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解;(3)结合个人兴趣和特长,说明拟教授何种技能,并阐述原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→host
参加:take part in→participate in
有助于:be conducive to→contribute to
促进、推动:promote→facilitate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句: I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event.
拓展句:I would be very appreciative if you would enroll me in the event.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词Knowing作原因状语)
【高分句型2】 So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.(not only...but also连接句子时,not only位于句首引起的部分倒装)
(三)
(2010·天津·高考真题)
假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生,利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示,用英语给校评选组写一封申请信:
● 对此活动的认识(如对本人、学生级社会的益处等)
●个人优势(如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等)
●你的计划(如怎样进行辅导等)
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
参考词汇:
晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two.
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One,Senior Two.As far as I am concerned,I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors,which thus will result in substantial social benefits.
I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach,because I have good character,and I'm independent in life and proficient in English.That's why I apply for the position.I hope I can join the instructive activity.
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening,speaking,reading and writing.What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language,creating a good learning environment.I hope you can offer the opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是书信类作文。
【详解】本文要求用英语给学校写一封申请信,申请用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。时态为一般现在时,人称以第一人称为主。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了,但不是很具体,考生要把要点全交代,
不能有遗漏。而且要拓展内容,在写作的过程中,要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,如强调句,倒装句等,让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如:First,second, Besides, What’s more等,让文章看起来很有条理,也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦,力求简洁。重要短语:As far as I am concerned (据我所知),result in (导致),be qualified for (有资格,合格),be independent (独立),instructive(有教育意义),stimulate interests in(激发…的兴趣)等
【点睛】所给范文语言简洁,应用了一些较好的词组和句子: As far as I am concerned据我所知,be qualified for 合格的。I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.这句话用了非限制性定语从句, That’s why I apply for the position.这句话用了表语从句, My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. 这句话用了不定式做表语。What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. 这句话用了主语从句和现在分词。
最新名校模拟提分巩固练
典例01
(2024·黑龙江·二模)假定你是李华,正在英国某高中上学。从你校网站上获悉你校将举办运动会并在招聘相关记者。你打算给相关人员发一封电子邮件应聘,内容包括:
1. 发邮件的原因;
2. 你的能力和特点;
3. 盼望得到肯定的答复。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to apply for the position of a journalist for the school sports meet.
I am passionate about sports and possess excellent writing and communication skills. As a responsible and reliable individual, I can accurately report on sports events and capture the wonderful moments. I also have some experience in multitasking and working under pressure, which will enable me to handle the job effectively. Please consider my application and I would be delighted to discuss my qualifications further.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的应聘信。要求考生写一封电子邮件,向校网站应聘在校运动会上担当记者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
拥有:possess→ be possessed of
处理:handle → deal with
考虑:consider → take…into consideration
高兴的:delighted→ happy/pleased
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to apply for the position of a journalist for the school sports meet.
拓展句:The reason for my writing is that I want to apply for the position of a journalist for the school sports meet.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I also have some experience in multitasking and working under pressure, which will enable me to handle the job effectively.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】 I am writing to apply for the position of a journalist for the school sports meet.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
典例02
(2024·全国·一模)假定你是李华,你校寒假期间将有一批来访的英国学生,需招募志愿者帮助完成接待工作。学校委托外教布朗先生负责招募。请给布朗先生写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 申请成为志愿者;
2. 自身优势。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Brown,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Brown,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class3, Senior 2. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
As an outgoing boy, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates. I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.
I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教布朗先生写封邮件,申请当志愿者,接待寒假期间将要来访的英国学生。
【详解】1.词汇积累
另外:besides→moreover
肯定的:sure→certain
感激的:grateful→thankful
精通:have a good command of→be well up in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, a student from Class3, Senior 2.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is a student from Class3, Senior 2.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. (运用了so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2] Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
典例03
(2023·全国·模拟预测)假定你是李华,在社区留言板上看到外籍工程师Grey夫妇想聘请一位临时管家在他们外出旅行期间代为照管房屋。你想应聘该职位,请给他们写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达意愿;
2. 简述个人优势;
3. 询问需注意的事项。
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Grey,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. and Mrs. Grey,
I’m a high school student living in the same community as you. Having learned that you are looking for a temporary housekeeper to take care of your home during your upcoming travels, I’d very much like to be the one you need.
You’ll find me capable of doing housekeeping chores, as I often help my parents with everyday family routines. In fact, I think keeping a house well-maintained brings a sense of achievement. What’s more, I live in the same block, which is a great convenience for getting work done.
Could you kindly provide me with any specific instructions or preferences you have regarding house management Your guidance will help me ensure that your home is taken care of just as you would like.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外籍工程师Grey夫妇写一封邮件,申请应聘他们家的临时管家。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻找:look for→seek
照顾:take care of→look after
日常的:everyday→daily
回复:reply→answer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m a high school student living in the same community as you.
拓展句:I’m a high school student who lives in the same community as you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Having learned that you are looking for a temporary housekeeper to take care of your home during your upcoming travels, I’d very much like to be the one you need. (运用了非谓语动词现在分词的完成式作状语)
【高分句型2】What’s more, I live in the same block, which is a great convenience for getting work done. (运用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)专题01应用文写作之申请信
申请信是指写信人想申请某个职位或某个项目而向收信人提出请求的信件。一般常考的内容有申请成为志愿者、申请某个岗位、加入俱乐部、或参加夏令营、留学项目等。申请信是非常正式的信件,所用语言也应该正式、简洁和准确,语气要客气礼貌。申请信是高考重点考查的考向。
解题思路秘籍
开头要直入主题,注意用语要言简意赅,语气要诚恳礼貌,说明写信目的明确要聘的职位,明确该职务的技能要求,介绍与该职务相关的经历。
主体写自己的简单经历,着重写教育、工作经历及业绩;详细阐述自己能胜任该工作的理由,最后要表明自己的信心写清自己的联系地址和电话,
结尾询问什么时间可安排面试。
提分秘籍01必备短语
advertise in 在……上宣传
apply for the post of 申请……的职务
be qualified for sth 胜任某事
get along with sb 与某人相处
communicate with sb 与某人沟通
be experienced in sth 对某事有经验
have a good command of sth 精通某事/物
meet requirements 满足条件
live up to one's expectation 不辜负某人的期待
be favorably considered 优先考虑
attain rich experience 获得丰富的经验
have a better understanding of sth 对某事/物有更好的理解
提分秘籍02必备句式
开头常用句
I'm more than delighted to know from your website that you need a volunteer during the summer.
我很开心地从你们网站上了解到你们需要暑期志愿者。
In reply to your advertisement on the Internet, I beg to apply for the post of marketing manager in your company.
见到网上刊登的贵公司广告,我谨申请应聘贵公司的市场部经理的职务。
Therefore, I'm writing this letter in the hope that I can obtain this precious chance.
因此,我写这封信,希望能得到这个宝贵的机会。
主体常用句
As far as I'm concerned, I'm qualified for the voluntary job.
我认为,我能胜任这项志愿者的工作。
Great passion for the job paves the way for me to be determined to make it.
我对这份工作强烈的热情使我决心完成它。
To start with, I have a good command of English, enabling me to communicate well with others.
首先,我精通英语,使我可以与他人顺利沟通。
In addition, I'm outgoing, which makes it possible for me to get along well with others.
另外,我很开朗,这使我可以与他人友好相处。
Furthermore, my interest and skill in teamwork and sports contribute to my application for the job.
还有,我在团队合作与运动方面的兴趣和技能有助于我申请这份工作。
My experience of such kind of jobs lays a solid foundation for my success.
我在这方面的工作经验为我的成功奠定了坚实的基础。
结尾常用句
Should you give me an opportunity of a personal interview, I would be most grateful.
如果您给我一次面试的机会,我将感激不尽。
I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
如果您能考虑我的申请,我将感激不尽。
I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
我期待着您在方便的时候尽早给我答复。
提分秘籍03必备模版
结构 内容
首段:点明写作背景和目的。 I'm ________ (简单自我介绍). When I was reading the
advertisement, ________ (表达看到相关广告后的感受). I think it's a good opportunity for me to ________ (应聘的原因). Therefore I recommend myself without hesitation.
主体:主题句,理由(从素质、能力、经验等方面陈述)。 I think I am qualified for this job. To start with, ________ (理由一:个人素质). In addition, ________ (理由二:个人能力). Furthermore, ________ (理由三:工作经验).
尾段:恳请对方同意。 I would appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply./Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
高考真题回顾
(一)
(2021·辽宁·高考真题)假如你是李华,从互联网上得知Banks夫妇的西餐厅在登广告招聘兼职服务员。请你写一封电子邮件应聘。内容包括:
1. 发邮件的目的;
2. 自我介绍;
3. 应聘理由(可开阔视野、交到新朋友等);
4. 表达自己的希望。
写作要求:
1. 应包含所给出的全部要点提示;
2. 字数80词左右;
3. 短文内不得出现真实的校名和姓名,否则不得分。
4. 开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. & Mrs. Banks,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Regards,
Li Hua
(二)
(2023·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读,校方为加强中英文化交流,将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画,拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:
(1)申请参加本次活动;
(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解;
(3)结合个人兴趣和特长,说明拟教授何种技能,并阐述原因。
参考词汇:中国工坊 Chinese Workshop
中华美食 Chinese cuisine
手工艺 handicraft
书法 calligraphy
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
(三)
(2010·天津·高考真题)
假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生,利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示,用英语给校评选组写一封申请信:
● 对此活动的认识(如对本人、学生级社会的益处等)
●个人优势(如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等)
●你的计划(如怎样进行辅导等)
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
参考词汇:
晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two.
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
最新名校模拟提分巩固练典例01
(2024·黑龙江·二模)假定你是李华,正在英国某高中上学。从你校网站上获悉你校将举办运动会并在招聘相关记者。你打算给相关人员发一封电子邮件应聘,内容包括:
1. 发邮件的原因;
2. 你的能力和特点;
3. 盼望得到肯定的答复。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
典例02
(2024·全国·一模)假定你是李华,你校寒假期间将有一批来访的英国学生,需招募志愿者帮助完成接待工作。学校委托外教布朗先生负责招募。请给布朗先生写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 申请成为志愿者;
2. 自身优势。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Brown,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
典例03
(2023·全国·模拟预测)假定你是李华,在社区留言板上看到外籍工程师Grey夫妇想聘请一位临时管家在他们外出旅行期间代为照管房屋。你想应聘该职位,请给他们写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达意愿;
2. 简述个人优势;
3. 询问需注意的事项。
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Grey,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua