人教版(2019)必修 第一册Unit 4 Natural disasters课件(共78张PPT)

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(共78张PPT)
UNIT 4 NATURAL DISASTERS
研考点 核心突破
目录索引
强基础 语基自测
1
2
测效果 课堂评价
3
练续写 锤炼技能
4
强基础 语基自测
默写查验
一、核心单词
1.__________ n.灾难;灾害
2.___________ n.洪水;大量 vi.淹没;大量涌入 vt.使灌满水;淹没
3.__________ n.& vt.营救;救援
4.__________ vt.损害;破坏 n.损坏;损失
5.__________ vt.摧毁;毁灭
6.__________ n.& vt.破坏;毁坏
7.__________ vt.使落入险境;使陷入圈套 n.险境;陷阱
8.__________ vt.埋葬;安葬
disaster
flood
rescue
damage
destroy
ruin
trap
bury
9.__________ n.努力;艰难的尝试;尽力
10.__________ n.供应(量);补给;[pl.]补给品 vt.供应;供给
11.__________ vi.& vt.轻叩;轻敲;轻拍 n.水龙头;轻叩;轻敲
12.__________ adj.镇静的;沉着的 vt.使平静;使镇静
13.__________ n.援助;帮助;救援物资 vi.& vt.(formal )帮助;援助
14.____________ vt.& vi.(____________,__________)打扫;清扫
15.__________ n.海浪;波浪 vi.& vt.挥手;招手
16.___________ vi.& vt.(_________,_______________)侵袭;突击;击打 
n.罢工;罢课;袭击
effort
supply
tap
calm
aid
sweep
wave
strike
swept
swept
struck
struck/stricken
二、派生单词
1.__________ n.死;死亡→__________ adj.死的→__________ adj.致命的
→      v.死亡
2.__________ vt.影响;(疾病)侵袭;深深打动
→___________ n.效果;结果;影响→__________ adj.有效的
3.__________ n.震惊;令人震惊的事;休克 vt.(使)震惊
→__________ adj.令人震惊的→__________ adj.感到震惊的
4.__________ vi.& vt.呼吸→__________ n.呼吸
→__________ adj.气喘吁吁的
death
dead
deadly
die
affect
effect
effective
shock
shocking
shocked
breathe
breath
breathless
5.__________ n.智慧;才智→__________ adj.明智的
→__________ adj.不明智的
6.__________ vi.生存;存活 vt.幸存;艰难度过→__________ n.幸存;生还→__________ n.幸存者;生还者
7.__________ n.突发事件;紧急情况→__________ adj.紧急的→__________ vi.浮现;出现
8.__________ vt.& vi.递送;传达 vt.发表→__________ n.投递;送交
wisdom
unwise
survive
survival
survivor
emergency
emergent
emerge
deliver
delivery
wise
三、重点短语
1._____________________严重受损;破败不堪
2._____________________震惊;吃惊
3._____________________露天;在户外
4._____________________现有(尤指帮助)
5._____________________消灭;彻底消除
6._____________________发掘,挖掘
7._____________________像往常一样
8._____________________告终;结束
in ruins
in shock
in the open air
on hand
sweep away
dig out
as usual
come to an end
四、典型句式
1.too...to...表示“太……而不能……”
教材原句:Chickens and even pigs were too nervous to eat,and dogs refused to go inside buildings.
2.as if引导的虚拟语气
教材原句:It seemed as if the world were coming to an end!
3.主语+be+adj.+to do
教材原句:Water,food,and electricity were hard to get.
4.现在分词短语作结果状语
教材原句:The most powerful earthquake in the past 40 years caused a tsunami that crashed into coastlines across Asia yesterday,killing more than 6,500 people in Indonesia,India,Thailand,Malaysia,and at least four other countries.
5.be doing...when...正在做……突然……
教材原句:I was having breakfast with my three children when water started filling my home.
语境应用
Ⅰ.用所给单词的适当形式填空
1.The __________(supply) which are provided to the disaster area will be collected from around the country.
2.(2023浙江1月卷)After his vivid introduction,the idea that it is definitely Yuan Longping's intense efforts that feed so many people on Earth ________
(strike) me deeply.
3.Sweet memories came __________(flood) back and Jane was in tears.
4.The earthquake was so big that most of the houses in the small village were completely __________(destroy).
supplies
struck
flooding
destroyed
5.The mother stood there,__________(wave) goodbye to her son on the train.
6.We set out to go travelling with excitement,but the bad weather ______(ruin) our trip.
7.People often dress up in traditional costumes and splash water on each other,hoping to take away diseases and __________(disaster).
8.In the future,I will devote myself to my work,__________(rescue) the dying and healing the wounded.
9.Rescuers found victims ______________(trap) several feet underground.
10.He ___________(bury) in his work so that the noise outside the window just washed over him.
waving
ruined
disasters
rescuing
(were)trapped
was buried
Ⅱ.用所给词的适当形式填空
1.The __________disease has affected many people and has caused at least 30 __________up to now.(dead)
2.In order to find more __________ways to protect the environment and help all of us avoid waste,we called on the government to put the law into      .(effect)
3.We were __________at the __________news that he died suddenly yesterday.(shock)
deadly
deaths
effective
effect
shocked
shocking
4.The woman was the only __________who ____________the earthquake.Her __________was a real wonder and finally she __________her husband by 5 years.(survive)
5.Yesterday,I climbed to the mountain top to __________the fresh air.Although I became __________when I was on the top,the __________of fresh air was worth it.(breath)
6.The __________man has much __________and can handle various matters __________.(wise)
7.Each __________man has a table with a route number on it and the mail to __________.(deliver)
survivor
had survived
survival
survived
breathe
breathless
breath
wise
wisdom
wisely
delivery
deliver
Ⅲ.用左栏所给短语的正确形式填空
1.Everyone was in shock,thinking the world was ____________________.
2.He wants to see me now,but I have so much work _____________that I would rather he came tomorrow than today.
3.Their houses were ____________________by the flood,so they had to build new ones.
4.It is no wonder that the whole building is now ________________;it caught so big a fire last night.
coming to an end
on hand
swept away
in ruins
Ⅳ.微写作
1.了解到我为他所做的一切,亨利感动得说不出话来,他非常高兴能成为我的同学。(读后续写之情感描写)
Learning what I had done for him,Henry______________________________
and was overjoyed to be my schoolmate.
2.(2022浙江1月卷)他看着我,好像我不在那里。
He looked at me________________________.
3.尽管这个问题很难解决,我们应该不遗余力地帮助那些正在遭受网瘾之苦的人。
Although ______________________________,we should spare no effort to help those who are suffering from the Internet addiction.
was too moved to say anything
as if I weren't there
the problem is difficult to handle
4.这个有意义的活动不仅帮助我们放松自我,也让我们接近自然,还让我们体验劳动的快乐。(应用文之活动介绍)
This meaningful activity not only helps us relax ourselves but also makes us get close to nature,____________________________________.
5.(外研版必修三)当时我正坐在自己房间里,猫咪斯玛蒂趴在我的腿上,突然屋顶就飞走了。
I _________________in my room with my cat,Smartie,on my lap,__________ the roof just flew off.
leaving us to experience the joy of labour
was sitting
when
研考点 核心突破
核心词汇突破

1.flood n.洪水,大量 vi.& vt. 淹没;(使)泛滥;使灌满水;大量涌入;充满;挤满
[练会]单句语法填空
①A great sense of relief and pride flooded __________my father.(读后续写之情感描写)
②She drew the curtains and the sunlight flooded ______.(读后续写之写景)
[写美]微写作·背诵
③甜蜜的回忆涌上心头,简哭得像个泪人似的。(读后续写之情感描写)
Sweet memories came flooding back and Jane was___________________.
over
in
in floods of tears
归纳(1)a flood of...一大批……
in floods of tears 泪如雨下
(2)flood in/into 大量涌入
flood out of 蜂拥而出
flood back涌上心头
(3)表“情感”的名词+flood over sb 某人非常/深感……
(4)be flooded with 充满/挤满……
佳句Hearing her mother's voice,the girl came downstairs in floods of tears.
听见她妈妈的声音,那个女孩泪流满面地走下楼来。
大量的
2.affect vt.影响;(疾病)侵袭;深深打动→affection n.喜爱→effect n.作用;影响→effective adj.有效的
[练会]单句语法填空

①A large number of donations have been flooding into the __________(affect) areas.(应用文之报道)
②(2020浙江7月卷)Learning that you have returned to Ireland because you __________(affect) with a serious/severe illness,I am terribly sorry about it.
③(2021新高考全国Ⅰ卷)In summary,the English newspaper Youth has a great effect __________me.(应用文之短文投稿)
affected
are affected
on
[写美]句式升级·背诵
④We were deeply affected by the film and couldn't hold back tears.
→________________________________________,we couldn't hold back tears.(用过去分词短语作状语改写)
归纳(1)be affected by 受……的影响;被……感动
be affected with 感染……疾病
(2) have an effect/influence on/upon 对……产生影响
佳句Affected by those selfless doctors,I have developed a deep affection for the career.(应用文之短文投稿)
在那些无私的医生的影响下,我喜欢上了这个职业。
Deeply affected by the film
3.ruin n.& vt.破坏;毁坏
[练会]单句语法填空
①On returning to the town,they were shocked to find their neighbourhood __________ruins.(读后续写之情感描写)
②Shortly after suffering from a massive earthquake and ____________________(reduce) to ruins,the city took on a new look.
呈现新貌
in
being reduced
[写美]句式升级·背诵
③He made a serious mistake in the race and ruined his chance to win the championship.
→He made a serious mistake in the race,__________________________ to win the championship.(用定语从句改写)
→He made a serious mistake in the race,____________________ to win the championship.(用现在分词改写)
which ruined his chance
ruining his chance
归纳(1)lie/be in ruins 成为废墟
be reduced to ruins 沦为废墟
fall into ruin 成为废墟
(2)ruin oneself 毁掉自己;自取灭亡
ruin one's health/fame/future 毁坏某人的健康/声誉/前途
佳句The whole city lay in ruins after the earthquake,which made us awake all night.(应用文之场景描写)
地震过后,整个城市成了一片废墟,这使我们彻夜难眠。
4.shock n.震惊;令人震惊的事;休克 vt. (使)震惊→shocked adj.感到震惊的→shocking adj.令人震惊的
[练会]单句语法填空
①Looking at the house which lay in ruins __________shock,he called 119 immediately to rescue the injured people who were trapped.
②On a cold morning,I opened the door and was shocked __________(find) him badly injured.
in
to find
[写美]一句多译·背诵
③(2022全国甲卷)令我们震惊的是,海洋正受到严重污染。
→______________________________ the ocean is becoming severely polluted.(用what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
→The ocean is becoming severely polluted,_________________________________.(用which引导的非限制性定语从句)
What shocks us was that
which shocked us
归纳(1)be a shock to...是一件令……震惊的事
in shock 吃惊地,震惊地
(2)be shocked at sth/that...对……感到震惊
be shocked to do sth 因做某事而感到震惊
佳句I froze with shock,feeling as if I had been thrown into a dark world.(读后续写之恐惧描写)
我吓呆了,觉得自己好像被扔进了一个黑暗的世界。
5.bury vt.埋葬;安葬;掩埋;使沉浸;使专心
[练会]单句语法填空
①After the volcanic eruption,many houses ___________(bury) by ashes.
②Since she graduated,my mother ___________(bury) herself in teaching,receiving high praise.(应用文之短文投稿)
③__________(bury) in reading the English newspaper every day,I have gained lots of useful knowledge.(应用文之征文投稿)
were buried
has buried
Buried
[写美]句式升级·背诵
④(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷)David still refused to look at me and his head was buried in his arms.
→David still refused to look at me,________________________________________.(现在分词作状语)
→David still refused to look at me,________________________________________.(with复合结构)
burying his head in his arms
with his head buried in his arms
归纳bury...in...把……埋到……里;使……沉浸于……
bury one's face in one's hands 双手掩面
埋头于/专心于(做)某事
佳句(2021新高考全国Ⅰ卷)Father paced in,his hands buried in his pockets.
父亲双手插在口袋里踱步进来。
独立主格结构
(doing) sth
6.effort n.努力;艰难的尝试;尽力
[练会]单句语法填空
①We should make great efforts ___________(preserve) and enrich our own traditional cultures.(应用文之传统文化)
②She took a deep breath and sat up slowly __________great effort.(读后续写之动作描写)
③They have been working day and night in an effort ___________(get) the bridge ready on time.
to preserve
with
to get
[写美]微写作·背诵
④然而,他不顾一切地追赶着其他人,汗水从他的脸颊上流下来,他丝毫没有放弃的迹象。(读后续写之情感描写)
However,he ______________________________up with the others,drops of sweat streaming down his cheeks,and he showed no sign of giving up.
独立主格结构
spared no effort to catch
归纳with great effort 努力
without effort 毫不费力地
in an effort to do sth 为了做某事
spare no effort to do sth 不遗余力地做某事
make every effort to do sth 尽全力做某事
make an effort/efforts to do sth 努力做某事
佳句Let's start now and spare no effort to do a little bit every minute.(应用文之倡议书)
让我们从现在开始,不遗余力地每分钟做一点。
7.suffer vt.遭受;蒙受 vi.(因疾病、痛苦、悲伤等)受苦→suffering n.痛苦;苦恼;让人痛苦的事→sufferer n.受难者;患病者
[练会]单句语法填空
①My hometown used to suffer __________problems such as poor road conditions and dirty environment.(应用文之短文投稿)
②There are always some ups and downs in our lives,but it is the __________(suffer) that makes us stronger.(读后续写之主旨升华)
③(2022新高考全国Ⅰ卷)It is also being used to help patients __________(suffer) dementia,a serious illness of the mind.
from
suffering
suffering
[写美]句式升级·背诵
④John has suffered from lung cancer for many years.He has decided to give up smoking.
→__________________________________________,John has decided to give up smoking.(现在分词短语作状语)
Having suffered from lung cancer for many years
归纳suffer pain/injury/hardship/damage 遭受痛苦/受伤/艰难/破坏
suffer defeat/loss/poverty/punishment 遭受失败/贫困/惩罚
suffer from 受……折磨;患……病
佳句(人教选择性必修二)Some may struggle and suffer from culture shock when learning how to behave in new surroundings.
在学习如何在新环境中举止得体时,有些学生可能会感到吃力,并承受文化冲击的折磨。
8.supply n. 供应(量);补给;[pl.]补给品 vt.供应;供给
[练会]单句语法填空
①(2021北京卷)We decided to collect as many school      (supply) as possible,and make them into kits—one kit,one child.
②The natural resources,such as coal and oil,are __________short supply in this country.
supplies
in
[写美]一句多译·背诵
③此外,这次竞争将会给你提供一个机会,帮助你发展创造力,与志同道合的同学建立友谊。(应用文之活动介绍)
→Moreover,the competition will ______________________________a chance to develop your creativity and build friendship with other students who share the same interest with you.
→Moreover,the competition will _________________you to develop your creativity and build friendship with other students who share the same interest with you.
supply you with
supply a chance to
归纳(1)in short supply 短缺
have a good supply of...备有许多……
(2)supply sth to sb 为某人提供某物
supply sb with sth 为某人提供某物
点津(1)supply作名词,表示“补给品”时,要用复数形式,即supplies。
(2) 表示“为某人提供某物”的短语还有:provide sb with sth=provide sth for sb、offer sb sth=offer sth to sb。
佳句The government has supplied the local people with plenty of food and clothes since the earthquake occurred.
政府在地震发生后已经向当地人民提供了大量的食物和衣服。
9.survive vi.生存;存活 vt.幸存;艰难度过→survival n.[U]幸存;[C]残存物→survivor n.幸存者;生还者
[练会]单句语法填空
①When I realized that the poor boy survived     discarded(被丢弃的) food,a wave of sadness and sympathy washed over me.(读后续写之情感描写)
②Although the old lady suffered from a serious illness,she still survived her husband __________5 years.
③The ancient building survived __________the Tang Dynasty as a museum.(应用文之短文投稿)
on
by
from
④She'd once told him she'd lost her parents in a boating accident and was the only __________(survive).
[写美]句式升级·背诵
⑤Since we had survived that accident,we were confident that everything else would be all right.
→______________________________,we were confident that everything else would be all right.(改写为分词短语作状语)
survivor
Having survived that accident
归纳survive sth 幸免于;从……中挺过来/活过来
survive on 依靠……生存下来
A survive B (by...) A比B活得长(……)
survive from...as...作为……留存下来
点津survive 表示“幸免于……”时,是及物动词,因而不需要加多余的介词。
佳句Life isn't about how to survive storms,but how to dance in the rain.(读后续写之主旨升华)
生活不在于如何从暴风雨中幸存,而在于在雨中翩翩起舞。
10.strike vt.& vi.(struck,struck/stricken)击打;罢工;时钟等敲响;划(火柴);撞击;侵袭;给某人以……印象;突然想起 n.罢工;罢课;袭击
[练会]单句语法填空
①We should know what to do when a hurricane __________(strike).
②The workers are coming out __________strike for higher wages,which is a shock to the government.
③(2021浙江1月卷)__________ suddenly struck/hit/occurred to me that I could win first place by forcing my head inside the pumpkin.
strikes
on
It
[写美]一句多译·背诵
④被他为我所做的事情所感动,我没能控制住自己,感激的泪水顺着脸颊流下来。(读后续写之心理描写)
→Because ___________________________________________,I couldn't contain myself,tears of gratitude flowing down my cheeks.
→___________________________________,I couldn't contain myself,tears of gratitude flowing down my cheeks.(用过去分词短语作状语改写)
独立主格结构
I was struck with/by what he had done for me
Struck by/with what he had done for me
归纳(1)be struck with/by 为……所袭击(感动)
It strikes/hits/occurs to sb that...某人突然想到……
(2)strike...into one's heart 使……刻骨铭心
(3)be on strike 在罢工
go on strike 举行罢工
佳句Mount Tai has struck its beauty into my heart;as a result,it strikes me that I will visit it again.
泰山的美让我刻骨铭心,所以我想我会再次游览泰山。
★补遗缺 微点练全
Ⅰ.一词多义
deliver
A.递送 B.生(小孩);接生 C.发表(演说等)
①The princess has been delivered of a healthy baby boy.  
②I'm having some flowers delivered for her birthday.  
③I feel greatly honoured to deliver a lecture on genetic engineering here.  
B
A
C
Ⅱ.教材熟词生义
hit
项目 意义 例句
熟义 vt._______________ She hit her thumb with the hammer.
vt._______________ Try to hit the middle of the target.
击,打
射击;轰炸
项目 意义 例句
生义 vt.___________________ (2023新高考全国Ⅱ卷)You'll hit roadblocks,and you'll feel discouraged at times.
vt._____________________ That's when it hit me that my life would never be the same again.
vt._________________ I just can't hit those high notes as I used to.
n.________________________ The Beatles had a string of number-one hits in the 1960s.
n.______________________ Our page had 243 hits this week.
(无意中)碰到
使忽然意识到
达到,实现
风行一时的流行歌曲(唱片)
(对因特网网页的)点击
重点句型透视
as if/as though引导表语从句和方式状语从句
[教材原句] It seemed as if the world were coming to an end!仿佛世界末日即将来临!
[练会]单句语法填空
①Listen,the whistle of an ambulance!It seems as if there __________(be) an emergency.
②The kids were very friendly with her and even looked up to her as if she __________(be) their own mother.
is
were
③Jack wasn't saying anything but the teacher smiled at him as if he ____________________ (do) something very clever.
④He opened his mouth as if ___________(say) something important.
⑤(译林必修三)Its walls were fresh as if __________(paint) yesterday;not a single colour changed on the rich pattern of its floors.
had done
to say
painted
[写美]微写作·背诵
⑥靠近房子的时候,我注意到爸爸妈妈站在那辆旧卡车旁边,一脸悲伤。好像发生了什么不愉快的事情。(读后续写之情绪描写)
Upon approaching the house,I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck,looking sad._________________________________________.
It seemed as if something unpleasant happened
归纳(1)as if相当于as though,意为“似乎,好像”,用在seem,look等系动词之后引导表语从句。
(2)as if/though还可引导方式状语从句。若as if从句描述非现实情况,则用虚拟语气。
①当从句表示与现在事实相反的情况时,谓语动词用一般过去时(be动词一般用were);
②当从句表示与过去事实相反的情况时,谓语动词用过去完成时(had+过去分词);
点津(1)若从句描述的情况发生的可能性很大,则不用虚拟语气。
(2) 如果as if引导的从句中的主语和主句的主语相同,且含有be动词,可省略从句主语和be动词,这样as if 后就只剩下名词、不定式、形容词(短语)、介词短语或分词。
佳句They moved and jumped fast and smoothly across every obstacle as if they were flying.(读后续写之动作描写)
他们移动、跳跃,快速而平稳地越过每一个障碍,就像在飞翔一样。
测效果 课堂评价
Ⅰ.单句语法填空——分层级强化高频考点
A组 基础必练
1.He spared no effort ___________(carry) out a series of reforms to make his country prosperous.
2.Some children ____________________(slide) on the ice happily when they heard someone crying for help.
3.__________(bury) in reading the legend of a master in basketball,he didn't make it to school on time.
4.How can you survive __________such a poor diet Keeping slim doesn't make sense if you're not healthy.
5.The stadium and the gym lay__________ ruins after the big fire caused by careless smoking.
to carry
were sliding
Buried
on
in
B组 高考链接
6.(2023浙江1月卷)Habitat loss,pesticide use,and climate change have caused dramatic declines in pollinator populations over the past couple of decades,which ____________________(damage) the U.S.agricultural economy.
7.(2023新高考全国Ⅱ卷)They surveyed several hundred park-goers,asking them to submit a written      (summarize) online of a meaningful interaction they had with nature in the park.
has damaged
summary
8.(2023全国甲卷)Putting electric fencing around chicken houses and other farm animal quarters is also highly __________(effect) at getting grizzlies away.
9.(2022全国甲卷)Shirley Fitzgerald,the city's official historian,told me that in its rush to modernity in the 1970s,Sydney __________(sweep) aside much of its past,including many of its finest buildings.
10.(2021全国乙卷)The collapse was disastrous,requiring the __________(emergent) medical team and good teamwork.
effective
swept
emergency
Ⅱ.语篇填空——语境中应用单元要点
Tom was shocked 1.___________(find) that the water kept rising.He 2.________________ (trap) in his house and his heart suddenly jumped into his throat.Frozen with fear,he stood rooted to the spot,various terrible thoughts 3.________(flood) in.Whether he 4._____________(survive) the flood was still unknown.Luckily,some rescue workers came 5.__________ his aid,bringing him the last glimmer of hope.A sense of 6.__________(calm) immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in his mind.7.____________________(suffer) so much,Tom couldn't contain his emotions and tears of gratitude trickled down his cheeks,like a broken line of beads.
to find
was trapped
flooding
would survive
to
calmness
Having suffered
Ⅲ.话题微写作——场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达)
应用文——感谢信
第一步 单句写作
1.我是李华,谨代表我校写信对你们的努力和帮助表示真诚的感谢。否则重庆可能会遭受更大的破坏。(effort,aid,suffer,damage)
I'm Li Hua,writing on behalf of our school to ______________________________________________________.Otherwise,the city _______________________________.
express our sincere appreciation for your efforts and aid
could have suffered more damage
2.令人震惊的是,重庆受高温和干旱袭击,导致烈火发生。(drought,strike)
Shockingly,___________________________________________________,leaving violent wildfires breaking out.
3.你们来了,及时提供了援助。(rescue)
You came and _____________________.
4.尽管许多志愿者极其疲惫,他们依然忙于运送物资。(bury,deliver,supply)
Though a number of volunteers were extremely tired,they______________
______________________________.
high temperature and drought struck Chongqing
offered timely rescue
were still
buried in delivering supplies
5.你们的努力和决心结束了这次自然灾害。(effort,disaster)
______________________________________________________________
6.我们被你们深深感动,我们决定竭尽全力使我们的城市更美好。(affect,power)
_____________________,we are determined to _______________________
to make our city better.
Your efforts and determination put an end to the natural disaster.
Deeply affected by you
do everything in our power
第二步 句式升级
7.用倒装句改写句4
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
8.用强调句型升级句5
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
Extremely tired though a number of volunteers were,they were still buried in delivering supplies.
It was your efforts and determination that put an end to the natural disaster.
第三步 连句成篇(注意使用恰当的衔接词)
Dear volunteers,
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
I'm Li Hua,writing on behalf of our school to express our sincere appreciation for your efforts and aid.Otherwise,the city could have suffered more damage.
Shockingly,high temperature and drought struck Chongqing,leaving violent wildfires breaking out.Thankfully,you came and offered timely rescue.Extremely tired though a number of volunteers were,they were still buried in delivering supplies.Additionally,it was your efforts and
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
determination that put an end to the natural disaster.
Deeply affected by you,we are determined to do everything in our power to make our city better.
练续写 锤炼技能
(三)情感描写之“恐惧与惊恐”
Ⅰ.语块必记
1.scare sb to death吓死某人
2.let out a scream of terror发出恐怖的尖叫
3.scare sb out of one's wits把某人吓得魂飞魄散
4.a flood of fear恐惧万分
5.on pins and needles如坐针毡
6.be seized with panic惊慌失措
7.be numb with fear吓呆
8.(make) one's hair stand on end(使)某人毛骨悚然
9.be dead with fright吓得面无人色
10.make one's blood freeze令人惊恐
Ⅱ.佳句背诵
1.直陈式表述
在读后续写中我们可以直接用fear,scare,afraid,frightened 等将恐惧表达出来。
I was scared stiff/silly.我吓傻了。
His frigid glance made me afraid.
他冷淡的目光使我害怕。
I am afraid under the vigilant eyes of the examiner.
在主考人警惕的目光下,我害怕。
2.描述性表述
人们恐惧时,会脸色苍白、睁大眼睛、呆立不动、大声尖叫、呼吸急促、不自觉地后退。人们特别恐惧时还会发抖、休克。我们可以通过角色的表现从侧面描写恐惧。
Sally said I should try bungee,but I had cold feet.
萨莉说我应该试试蹦极,但我临阵退缩了。
Mac sat in the car,his heart still fluttering with fear.
麦克坐在车里,他的心仍因恐惧而怦怦直跳。
He could even imagine the wolf's teeth tearing into his flesh.他甚至可以想象狼的牙齿撕咬他的肉。
Failing to get the prey,the disappointed wolf left disappearing into the woods.
没能抓到猎物,失望的狼消失在树林里。
3.比喻性表述
我们可用比喻的手法表达恐惧,带有 like或as 的是明喻,不带的是暗喻或借喻。
Yes,but for their timely help,I would have been the food of the wolf.是的,要不是他们及时的帮助,我早就成为狼的食物了。
They were surprised to find Mac's bicycle lying on the road and Mac was like a drowned mouse.
他们惊讶地发现麦克的自行车横躺在路上,而麦克看上去也像一只落汤鸡一样。
4.夸张性表述
我们也可以运用我们的想象力,将恐惧想象成有形事物进行描述,并加以放大。
He was frightened out of life.
他吓得魂不附体。
It seemed as if the world were at an end.
世界似乎到了尽头。
It seemed as if his life had come to an end.
他的生命似乎走到了尽头。
The explosion really frightened the pants off me.
爆炸把我吓得魂飞魄散。
A snake came out of the woods and scared me to death.
一条蛇从树林里出来,把我吓死了。
5.拟人式表述
我们也可以将恐惧想象成一个人或有生命的动物来描述它的言行。
A flood of fear welled up in him.
一阵恐惧涌上他的心头。
The dark and rainy evening,the wind,the thunder,and the clouds held me entirely in their power.
漆黑的雨夜、狂风、雷声和乌云把我完全控制住了。
6.反语式表述
在读后续写中,我们也可以用正话反说的方式来表达恐惧的心理。
By this time his courage had fled.
这时他的勇气已经消失了。
He held his breath,daring not to make a movement.
他屏住呼吸,不敢动。
实战演练
1.按要求用表示“恐惧、惊恐”的表达完成下列各句。(2020浙江卷,读后续写)
①你无法想象北极熊向我们逼近时我们是多么恐惧。
You could hardly imagine ______________________________________________________.(形容词)
②我惊恐万分,脸色苍白。
______________________________________,and I turned pale.(无灵主语句)
③我转向妻子,眼里满是恐惧。
I turned to my wife,____________________________________.(独立主格)
how frightened we were at the approach of the polar bear
A burst of horror held me entirely in its power
my eyes filled with/full of terror
④她脸上掠过惊恐的神情。
_________________________________________.(无灵主语句)
⑤她看着北极熊的血盆大口,吓得面无人色。
___________________________________________________________.
⑥阵阵恐惧涌上我们的心头,我们吓得心怦怦跳。
___________________________________________________________.Our hearts __________________________________________________.(名词作主语+动作描写)
A look of terror/fear flashed across her face
At the sight of the polar bear's bloody mouth,she was dead with fright
Waves of fear welled up in/swept over/seized/flooded over us
thumped/pounded violently with fear
2.将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文,注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇。
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
You could hardly imagine how frightened we were at the approach of the polar bear.A burst of horror held me entirely in its power,and I turned pale.I turned to my wife,my eyes filled with/full of terror.A look of terror/fear flashed across her face.At the sight of the polar bear's bloody mouth,she was dead with fright.Waves of fear welled up in/swept over/seized/flooded over us.Our hearts thumped/pounded violently with fear.