人教版（2019）选择性必修 第一册Unit 1 People of Achievement课件(共76张PPT)

(共76张PPT)
UNIT 1　PEOPLE OF ACHIEVEMENT
研考点 核心突破
目录索引
强基础 语基自测
1
2
测效果 课堂评价
3
练续写 锤炼技能
4
强基础 语基自测
默写查验
一、核心单词
1.　　　　　　 adj.至关重要的;关键性的
2.　　　　　　 adj.必不可少的;极其重要的;充满生机的
3.　　　　　　 n.目标;目的　adj.客观的
4.　　　　　　 n.性质;特征;财产
5.　　　　　　 vt.& vi.(使)沸腾;煮开;烧开　n.沸腾;沸点
6.　　　　　　 vt.(尤指经努力)获得;赢得　vi.(规章、习俗等)存在;流行
7.　　　　　　 vt.承认(属实、权威等);(公开)感谢
8.　　　　　　 n.失败;挫败　vt.击败;战胜
9.　　　　　　 vi.& vt.坚持;坚决要求

crucial
vital
objective
property
boil
obtain
acknowledge
defeat
insist
　
10.　　　　　　 vi.& vt.(fled,fled)迅速离开;逃跑
11.　　　　　　 n.[usually pl.]条件;环境;状况
12.　　　　　　 n.流;流动;流畅;供应　vi.流;流动
13.　　　　　　 n.(pl.geniuses)天才;天资;天赋
14.　　　　　　 vt.偶然碰到;遇到　n.邂逅;遭遇
15.　　　　　　 n.草稿;草案　vt.起草;草拟
flee
circumstance
flow
genius
encounter
draft
二、派生单词
1.　　　　　　 vt.承诺;保证　vi.忠于;全心全意投入(工作、活动等)
→　　　　　　 adj.尽心尽力的;坚定的;坚信的→　　　　　　 n.投入;奉献;承诺
2.　　　　　　 vt.评价;评估→　　　　　　 n.评价;评估
3.　　　　　　 adj.清晰的;清楚的;有区别的→　　　　　　 n.区别;差别
4.　　　　　　(NAmE -ze) vt.分析→　　　　　　 (pl.analyses) n.分析
5.　　　　　　　 adv.显而易见;看来;显然→　　　　　　 adj.显而易见的;明显的
6.　　　　　　 adj.科学(上)的;关于科学的→　　　　　　 n.科学→
　 n.科学家
7.　　　　　　 n.结论;推论→　　　　　　 vt.断定;推断出

commit
committed
commitment
evaluate
evaluation
distinct
distinction
analyse
analysis
apparently
apparent
scientific
science
scientist
conclusion
conclude
8.　　　　　 n.小说家→　　　　　 n.(长篇)小说　adj.新颖的;珍奇的
9.　　　　 n.政治家;从政者;政客→　　　　 n.政治(学)
→　 adj.政治的
10.　　　　　　 adv.逐渐地;逐步地→　　　　　　 adj.逐渐的
11.　　　　　　 n.结果;后果→　　　　　　 adj.随之发生的;作为结果的→　　　　　　 adv.结果;因此;所以
12.　　　　　　 n.教授→　　　　　　 n.职业,行业
→　　　　　　 adj.职业的　n.专业人士
13.　　　　　　 adj.非凡的;显著的→　　　　　　 v.& n.谈论;评论
→　　　　　　 adv.惊人地
novelist
novel
politician
politics
political
gradually
gradual
consequence
consequent
consequently
professor
profession
professional
remarkable
remark
remarkably
三、重点短语
1.　　　　　　　　　　　　 承诺;保证(做某事、遵守协议或安排等)
2.　　　　　　　　　　　　 坚决要求
3.　　　　　　　　　　　　 (正常使用造成的)磨损;损耗
4.　　　　　　　　　　　　 流程图
5.　　　　　　　　　　　　 (开始)掌权;上台
6.　　　　　　　　　　　　 担任;任职
7.　　　　　　　　　　　　 总结;概括
8.　　　　　　　　　　　　 导致
9.　　　　　　　　　　　　 毕业于
10.　　　　　　　　　　　　目的是
commit oneself to sth/doing sth/do sth
insist on
wear and tear
flow chart
come to power
take up a position
sum up
lead to
graduate from
with the objective of
四、典型句式
1.upon doing...
教材原句:Upon hearing that she had been awarded the Nobel Prize,she said,“The honour is not just mine...”
2.it作形式主语
教材原句:It is indeed an honour for China's scientific research and Chinese medicine to be spread around the world.
3.while doing...
教材原句:While working there,out of a strong passion for knowledge,he continued to study,earning a doctorate in physics in 1905.
4.It is/was+过去分词+that从句
教材原句:On 18 April 1955,it was reported that Einstein had passed away,and the whole world mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist.
语境应用
Ⅰ.用所给单词的适当形式填空
1.I was excited because I knew we were going to win,but to my disappointment we 　　　　　　　　　(defeat).
2.The motto means excellence can only 　　　　　　　　　(obtain) after you have put to use what you have learnt and have tried it over and over again.
3.Now,the film festival 　　　　　　　　(acknowledge) as an event of international importance.
were defeated
be obtained
is acknowledged
4.As the pot 　　　　　　(boil) on,carrots,beef and cream soon found their way into the pot before everyone set out to the feast.
5.Scientists have many 　　　　　　(theory) about how the universe came into being.
6.He was accused of trying 　　　　　　　　　(flee) the scene of the accident.
7.The man didn't know how to overcome failure,and he was stopped by it when he 　　　　　　　　(encounter) one.
8.It was reported that the legislation 　　　　　　　　　　　　(draft) by House Democrats.
boiled
theories
to flee
encountered
had been drafted
Ⅱ.用所给词的适当形式填空
1.　　　　　　 to education,he 　　　　　　every minute to studying and teaching,so his 　　　　　 finally paid off.(commit)
2.As a child,he showed great interest in 　　　　　and wanted to be a 　　　　.Now he is committed to doing　　 researches.(science)
3.One of the worst 　　　　　　of smoking for a long time is that you may suffer from lung cancer.　　　　　　,you and your family will suffer a lot.(consequent)
4.He 　　　　　that Tom's injury led to his team's defeat in the game.
His　　　　 was the same as others'.(conclude)
Committed
committed
commitment
science
scientist
consequences
Consequently
concluded
scientific
conclusion
5.Do you want to 　　　 your intelligence Just complete the　 form below,please.(evaluate)
6.As is known to all,education is a 　　　 process,and people are _______ aware of its importance.(gradual)
7.Scapel,his last published 　　　　　　,followed in the footsteps of the enormously popular medical 　　　　　　Frank Slaughter.(novel)
8.What Monti's experience has shown is that you need 　　　　　　skills to be a 　　　　　　.(politics)
evaluate
evaluation
gradual
gradually
novel
novelist
political
politician
Ⅲ.用左栏所给短语的正确形式填空
1.The newly-elected President has taken a series of measures to improve economy since he 　　　　　　　　　　　　.
2.I 　　　　　　　　　your taking immediate action to settle the problem in a peaceful way.
3.Mr King 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　as a headmaster in a high school,so he knew the importance of education.
4.It is necessary for you to 　　　　　　　　　your experience constantly and improve the efficiency of your work.
5.The carpet is designed to stand up to a lot of 　　　　　　　　　　　　.
came to power
insist on
took up a position
sum up
wear and tear
Ⅳ.微写作
1.一听到这个消息,他难以抑制心中的兴奋,高兴地跳了起来。(读后续写之兴奋心理描写)
　　　　　　　　　　,he was unable to control his excitement and jumped with joy.
2.对于约翰来说,通过制作和卖爆米花来帮助伯纳德过更好的生活是一种莫大的荣幸。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Bernard to live a better life by making and selling popcorn.
Upon hearing the news
It is a great honour for John to help
3.上周末在农场摘水果的时候,我们沐浴在春日温暖的阳光中。(应用文之活动介绍)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　,we were bathed in the spring warm sunshine.
4.人们普遍认为书的影响是如此之大,以至于应该鼓励人们阅读更多的书籍。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 the influence of books is so great that people should be encouraged to read more books.
While picking fruits on the farm last weekend
It is commonly believed that
研考点 核心突破
核心词汇突破
1.vital adj.必不可少的;极其重要的;充满生机的
[练会]单句语法填空
①As we all know,water is vital 　　　　　　keeping every living things alive,
without which the world would be a dead place.
②If we are to make a difference in life,it's vital that we 　　　　　　　　　
(begin) with small things.
③As far as I'm concerned,it is vital 　　　　　　　　　　(keep) accurate
records.
虚拟语气
for/to
(should) begin
to keep
[写美]一句多译·背诵
④我们从失败中吸取教训是至关重要的。
→　　　　　　　　　　　　 we (should) learn something from failure.
→　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 we (should) learn something from failure.
It's vital that
It is of vital importance that
归纳(1)be vital to/for... 对……至关重要
It is vital to do sth.做某事很重要。
It is vital that...(should) do sth.做某事是十分重要的。
(2)of vital importance 至关重要的
佳句Besides,it's vital that you should mind your table manners in China when you attend a dinner party.(应用文之告知信)
此外,在中国,当你参加晚宴时,注意餐桌礼仪是至关重要的。
2.commit vt.承诺;保证　vi.忠于;全心全意投入(工作、活动等) →commitment n.投入;奉献;承诺
[练会]单句语法填空
①With the help of their father,the twins were committed to 　　　　(make) delicious breakfast. 　　
②He made a commitment to 　　　　　　(create) a novel,which made us wild with joy.
③The most awkward email mistake is usually 　　　　　　(commit) in anger.
④After taking up a position in the community,he has committed 　　　 (he) to keeping the neighborhood safe.
making
creating
committed
himself
[写美]微写作·背诵
⑤我强烈建议你每天抽出一个小时的时间读英语,这将逐渐提高你的英语口语。同时,你最好保证经常和你的同学练习说英语。(应用文之建议信)
I strongly suggest 　,
_________which will gradually improve your spoken English. Mean while, you'd better___________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
_________________________.
classmates regularly/make a commitment to practising speaking English
with your classmates regularly
that you (should) commit one hour to reading English
every day
commit yourself to practising speaking English with your
归纳(1)commit mistakes/murder/a crime犯错误/犯凶杀罪/犯罪
commit sth to doing sth 投入……做某事
(2)committed adj.尽心尽力的;坚定的
be committed to (doing) sth/致力于(做)某事
(3)make a commitment to (doing) sth 保证/承诺(做)某事
佳句I committed a silly mistake in front of so many people,my face red with embarrassment.(读后续写之尴尬心理描写)
我在如此多的人面前犯了一个愚蠢的错误,满脸窘得通红。
3.acknowledge vt.承认(属实、权威等);(公开)感谢
[练会]单句语法填空
①Tom acknowledged 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(defeat) in the
English speech competition,which made us quite depressed.(读后续写之情
感描写)
②Lu Xun,　　　　　　(acknowledge) as one of the greatest modern writers
in China,was born in Shaoxing,Zhejiang Province.
③He is widely acknowledged 　　　　 (be) the best player in the world.
④　　　 is acknowledged that the ocean plays a key role in our planet.
being defeated/having been defeated
acknowledged
to be
It
[写美]词汇升级·背诵
⑤I thank my English teacher,without whom I couldn't have made
such great progress in English.(应用文之感谢信)
→I 　　　　　　my English teacher,without whom I couldn't have made such great progress in English.
虚拟语气
acknowledge
归纳acknowledge doing/having done sth 承认做了某事
acknowledge sb/sth to be/as... 承认某人/某事是……
acknowledge that...承认……
It is universally/widely acknowledged that...大家公认……
佳句It is universally/widely acknowledged that the self-study room located on the second floor in our school library provides us students with an ideal place for independent and cooperative learning.
位于我们校图书馆二楼的自习室给我们学生提供了一个自主学习和合作学习的理想场所,这是大家公认的。
4.insist vi.& vt.坚持;坚决要求
[练会]单句语法填空
①He insisted on 　　　　　　(walk) me to the station to see me off,which
nearly moved me to tears.(读后续写之情感描写)
②As a consequence of some solid evidence,the police officer insisted that
he 　　　　　　　(disobey) the traffic rules and 　　　　　　　(fine).
可靠的
walking
had disobeyed
(should) be fined
[写美]一句多译·背诵
③只有当我们坚持经常锻炼身体时我们才能保持身心健康。
→We can keep physically and mentally healthy only when ____________
　　　　　　　　　 .(insist on)
→__________________________________________________________
__________________.(用倒装句改写)
and mentally healthy
we insist on
working out regularly
Only when we insist on working out regularly can we keep physically
归纳insist on/upon (doing) sth 坚持(做)某事
insist that从句,从句用陈述语气,表“坚持说……”
insist (that) sb/sth (should) do,从句用should do形式,should可省略,表“坚持主张;坚决要求”
佳句The Students' Union insists that every participant (should) arrive at the hall on time.(应用文之通知)
学生会坚决要求每个参与者按时到达大厅。
5.conclusion n.结论;推论→conclude vt.断定;推断出
[练会]单句语法填空
①We can safely draw the 　　　　　　　　(conclude) that more practice is crucial to our daily study.
②　　 conclusion,only with joint efforts can we have a better life tomorrow.
③He concluded his speech 　 　a famous saying “Where there is a will,there is a way.”
部分倒装
conclusion
In
with
[写美]一句多译·背诵
④我从自己的经历中得出结论:家庭是生活暴风雨中的救生衣。 (读后续写之亲情升华句)
→I 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　that family is a life jacket in the stormy sea of life.(conclude)
→I____________________________________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　 that family is a life jacket in the stormy sea of life.(conclusion)
came to/reached/arrived at/drew the conclusion from my own experience
concluded from my own experience
归纳(1)come to/reach/draw a conclusion 得出结论
come to the conclusion that... 得出……的结论
bring sth to a conclusion 结束某事
in conclusion 总而言之
(2)conclude从……推断出……
conclude sth以(做)某事结束某事
佳句When he brought his speech to a nice conclusion,applause rang through the hall.
当他圆满结束演讲时,掌声响彻大厅。
6.circumstance n.条件,环境;状况(常用复数)
[练会]单句语法填空
①My partner was ill.Even 　　　　　　the circumstances,he still spared no
effort to analyse and evaluate our collected data,and a feeling of admiration
began to rise in my deep heart.
②If 　　　　　　　　(circumstance) permit,I will take immediate action to
achieve my dream.
立刻采取行动
under/in
circumstances
[写美]微写作·背诵
③我尴尬极了,我提醒自己绝不会再犯这样的错误了。
Embarrassed,I reminded myself that 　　　　　　　　　　　would I commit such a mistake again.
in/under no circumstances
归纳under/in the circumstances 在此情况下
under/in no circumstances 决不;无论如何都不(位于句首时,句子要用部分倒装)
if circumstances permit/allow 如果情况允许
佳句Under no circumstances should you follow negative information on mass media blindly.(应用文之建议信)
在任何情况下,你都不应盲目跟从大众媒体上的负面信息。
7.consequence n.结果;后果→consequent adj.随之发生的;作为结果的→consequently adv.因此;结果
[练会]单句语法填空
①Drunk driving has been banned.　　　　　 　(consequent),the traffic accidents are decreasing.
②I carelessly got the plan ruined,and 　　　　　　consequence I had to face the 　　　　　　(consequence).
③　 consequence of/____ a consequence of her hospital experience,Shelly decided to become a nurse.
[写美]词汇升级·背诵
④As a result, I was chosen as a volunteer for the 13th National Games.
→　　　　　　　　　　　　,I was chosen as a volunteer for the 13th National Games.
As a consequence
Consequently
in
consequences
In
as
归纳as a consequence=in consequence 因此;结果
as a consequence of=in consequence of 由于……的缘故
of no/little consequence 不重要的,无足轻重的
佳句My grandfather was under treatment in hospital,and as a consequence/consequently,I have to take care of him.(应用文之道歉信)
我祖父在医院接受治疗,因此我得照顾他。
★补遗缺　微点练全
Ⅰ.一词多义
flow
A.n.流动　B.n.流畅　C.n.供应　D.vi.(液体) 流动　E.vi.(大量人或物)流动
①Believing in such a world,many governments have put an end to some of the
very necessary regulations on cross-border flows of capital,labour and goods,
with poor results.　　
②Too many examples can interrupt the smooth flow of the text.　　
A
B
③As we know,the government encourages the flow of goods and services to remote areas.　　
④(2023新高考全国Ⅰ卷)A dirty stream,for example,often became clear after flowing through plants and along rocks where tiny creatures lived.　　
⑤Large numbers of refugees continue to flow from the troubled region into the district.　　
C
D
E
Ⅱ.教材熟词生义
1.save
项目 意义 例句
熟义 vt.　　　　　　　　 (2023全国甲卷)Terri,who now rents a house with friends in Wandsworth,South West London,says DIY also saves her from losing any deposit when a tenancy (租期) comes to an end.
vt.　　　　　　　　 I've saved almost ￡100 so far.
vt.　　　 (2023新高考全国Ⅰ卷)We can save at least twenty minutes by walking through the park.
生义 vt.　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　 She did it herself to save argument.
挽救,搭救,救助　
储蓄,攒钱　　
　避免,免得(出现困
节省　
　难或不愉快的事)
2.fail
项目 意义 例句
熟义 v.　　　　　　　　　　　 (2023新高考全国Ⅰ卷)So,why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail
vt.　　　　　　　　　 (2023浙江1月卷)They may fail to get along.
v.　 　　　　　　　　　 I passed history but failed chemistry.
生义 vi.　　　　　　　　　 The brakes on my bike failed half way down the hill.
失败　未做
未履行　(使)不及格
(使)未能通过(考试)　出故障
失灵
重点句型透视
1.upon doing
[教材原句] Upon hearing that she had been awarded the Nobel Prize,she
said,“The honour is not just mine.There is a team behind me,and all the
people of my country...”
当听到自己被授予诺贝尔奖时,她就说:“这荣誉不仅仅属于我。也属于
我背后的团队以及我的祖国的人民……”
[练会]单句语法填空
①Upon 　　　　　　 (arrive),Alice was filled with joy at the news.
②No sooner had I presented our findings to the class 　　　　　
the class burst into applause.
部分倒装
arriving/arrival
than
[写美]一句多译·背诵
③我的头一从大南瓜里拔出来,我就松了一口气。
→　　　　　 　　　　　 ,I sighed in relief.(as soon as)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　 　,I sighed in relief.(名词短语构成的连词)
→　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　 ,I sighed in relief.(副词作连词)
Immediately/Instantly/Directly my head was pulled out of the huge pumpkin
As soon as my head was pulled out of the huge pumpkin
The instant/moment/minute my head was pulled out of the huge pumpkin
归纳(1)upon/on doing是介词短语用作时间状语,意为“一……就……”。
(2)表示“一……就……”的结构还有由名词构成的连词:the instant/moment/minute+句子
由副词作连词:instantly/immediately/directly+句子
固定句式: no sooner...than...,hardly...when...
佳句On/Upon returning,Bernard thanked the Meredith family with misty eyes.
伯纳德一回来就含着泪感谢了梅雷迪斯一家。
2.it 作形式主语
[教材原句] It is indeed an honour for China's scientific research and Chinese medicine to be spread around the world.
中国的科学研究和中药能够在全世界传播确实是一种荣誉。
[练会]单句语法填空
①As high school students,it's our responsibility 　　　　　　　(protect) the oceans.(话题写作之环境保护)
②　　　　　　 is a pity that I will fail to go out with you this Sunday as appointed.(应用文之道歉信)
to protect
It
[写美]同义句转换·背诵
③People generally believe that IT has both advantages and disadvantages.
→　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 .(it作形式主语)
④I'm more than delighted to learn that you are going to visit a Chinese family.It is necessary for you to know about the table manners of China.(话题写作之传统文化)
→I'm more than delighted to learn that you are going to visit a Chinese family.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 .(It is+adj.+that...)
It is necessary that you should know about the table manners of China
It is generally believed that IT has both advantages and disadvantages
归纳it作形式主语的常用句式:
·It be+名词短语+(for sb) to do sth
·It be+过去分词(said,thought,believed,supposed,reported...)+that从句
·It be+形容词(strange,important,vital,obvious,possible...)+that从句
·It be+名词短语(a pity,a shame,a fact,a good idea,no wonder...)+that从句
佳句It is a great honour to deliver a speech to share with you my opinions on Beijing Opera.(应用文之演讲稿)
很荣幸能发表演讲,与大家分享我对京剧的看法。
测效果 课堂评价
Ⅰ.单句语法填空——分层级强化高频考点
A组　基础必练
1.　　　　　　(commit) to scientific research to a great extent,he couldn't spare any time to go on holiday.
2.I acknowledge 　　　　　　　　　(make) a bet with his classmate.
3.To sum 　　　　　　　,we can tackle the problem in this scientific manner.
4.Insisting that Tom 　　　　　　　　　(steal) her car,the old tailor insisted that he 　　　　　　　　(send) to prison.
5.　　　　　 no circumstances will my mother permit me to go out alone at night.
Committed
making/having made
up
had stolen
(should) be sent
Under/In
B组　高考链接
6.(2023全国乙卷)The 　　　　　　(remark) development of this city,which is consciously designed to protect the past while stepping into the modern world,means there is always something new to discover here,and I could be photographing Beijing for the next 50 years.
7.(2023全国乙卷)From the English side,we have 　　　　　　　(science) reports and the captain's record of that terrible day.
8.(2023浙江1月卷)I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had 　　　　　(apparent) not been used in many years.
remarkable
scientific
apparently
9.(2023新高考全国卷)In part one,I describe the philosophical____________ (found)
of digital minimalism,starting with an examination of the forces that are making so many people's digital lives increasingly intolerable,before moving on to a detailed discussion of the digital minimalism philosophy.
10.(2021北京卷)“Only if we discuss the 　　　 　　(consequent) of our biophysical limits,” the December warning letter says.
foundations　
consequences
Ⅱ.语篇填空——语境中应用单元要点
The person I respect most is the geophysicist Huang Danian,who committed himself 1.　　　　　(make) many technological advances.
Huang 2.　　　　　　　　　(acknowledge) as an extraordinary scientist.He 3.　　　　　　　　　(study) and worked in Britain for 18 years,but upon 4. 　　　　　　(know) his country needed him,he quit his well-paid job and returned to China.Over the next seven years,Huang worked to develop many 5. 　　　　　　(device) needed for deep-sea exploration.
to making
was acknowledged
had studied
knowing
　devices
Unfortunately,such 6.　　　　　　　(remark) achievements didn't come cheap.As 7.　　　　　　 consequence of the frantic pace of his research,Huang was absent 8.　　　　　 his father's funeral,and even his own cancer went undetected as he had no time to see a doctor.9.　　　　　　 conclusion,Huang sacrificed everything for his research,10.　　　　　　 I think more people should honour him.
　　　remarkable
　　a
　　　In
　　　and
Ⅲ.话题微写作——场景中提升写作技能(黑体部分用本单元词汇表达)
应用文——人物介绍
第一步　单句写作
1.我的妈妈是我眼中的英雄。她在一家超市做收银员。(take up a position)
My mother is the hero in my eye.She 　 　　　at a supermarket.
2.我原以为她的工作很容易,但我逐渐意识到,这些年来妈妈一直怀着极大的热情做着一份出色的工作,值得尊重。(gradually,passion,remarkable)
takes up a position as a cashier
I used to think her job easy,but I gradually realize my mother deserves respect for doing a remarkable job all these years with great passion.
3.我母亲以她的工作为荣。她笑迎顾客,即使累了也坚持努力工作。(insist on)
4.虽然她每天工作时间很长,但她仍抽空做家务并花时间陪我。(though引导状语从句)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 , she finds time to do housework and spends time with me.
5.在她的鼓舞下,我学会了在遇到困难时不轻易放弃。(encounter)
I am inspired by her and I have learnt 　　　　　　　 　easily when I encounter difficulties.
My mother takes pride in her work.She faces customers with a gentle smile and insists on working hard even when tired.
Though she works long hours daily
not to give up
第二步　句式升级
6.用分词短语作状语改写句5
　　　　　　　　　　,I have learnt not to give up easily when I encounter difficulties.
第三步　连句成篇(注意使用恰当的衔接词)
Inspired by her
The Hero in My Eye
My mother is the hero in my eye.She takes up a position as a cashier at a supermarket.
I used to think her job easy,but I gradually realize my mother deserves respect for doing a remarkable job all these years with great passion.Moreover,my mother takes pride in her work.She faces customers
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with a gentle smile and insists on working hard even when tired.Though she works long hours daily,she finds time to do housework and spends time with me.
Inspired by her,I have learnt not to give up easily when I encounter difficulties.
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练续写 锤炼技能
(九)情感描写之“后悔、内疚与自责”
　Ⅰ.语块必记
1.much to one's regret 深感遗憾
2.with deep/great regret 深表遗憾地
3.full of guilt 满是愧疚
4.give/send your regrets 深表歉意
5.a pang of regret 一阵痛悔之情
6.feel guilty 感到内疚
7.regretful tears 悔恨的泪水
8.a guilty look on one's face 脸上露出惭愧的表情
9.a feeling of guilt 内疚感
10.have guilt written all over one's face 满脸愧疚
Ⅱ.佳句背诵
1.直陈式表述
运用guilty,shameful等将内疚心理直接表述出来是一种常见的表达方式。
I'm guilty of it myself.我自己也对此感到内疚。
I felt guilty about having told a lie.
我因撒了谎而感到内疚。
You really want her to stay out of guilt.
你真的想让她远离内疚。
You must be sorry for your own indifference.
你一定会为自己的冷漠而后悔。
He had no sense of shame and never felt guilty.
他没有羞耻感,也从不感到内疚。
I believed Julie was totally remorseful over what she did.
我相信朱莉对自己的所作所为非常懊悔。
He seemed so ashamed that he was not able to help his five children.
他似乎很惭愧,他无法帮助他的五个孩子。
He was filled with remorse for having refused to visit his dying father.
他因拒绝看望他垂死的父亲而深感懊悔。
2.描述性表述
人们内疚时会低头不语,步伐缓慢;羞愧难当时会泪流满面。描述人们内疚时的表现,将角色的内疚心情间接地表达出来更有画面感。
She took off the crown with her tears rolling down.
她摘下王冠,眼泪簌簌地流下来。
“I can't read anything in this book,” he said with great pain.“
这本书我什么也看不懂,”他痛苦地说。
Susan sat down on the grass speechless reflecting on what she did.
苏珊坐在草地上,无言以对地想着自己的所作所为。
Having heard the remark,Susan bent her head and wiped away a tear.
听到这句话,苏珊低下头,擦去了一滴眼泪。
“I shouldn't have been so stupid,” she said,tears flowing down her cheeks.
“我不应该这么愚蠢,”她说,眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。
3.比喻性表述
在写作中我们可以用比喻来表达内疚的心情,以使句子更加形象生动。
He couldn't go any further,his stiff legs like pieces of lead-heavy wood.
他再也走不动了,僵硬的双腿像一块块含铅的木头。
4.夸张性表述
我们也可以运用想象力,将内疚想象成有形事物进行描述,并加以放大。
He felt his head heavy with guilt.
他因内疚而感到沉重。
He was so burdened with guilt and regret that he lowered his head.
他被内疚和悔恨压得喘不过气来,低下了头。
5.拟人式表述
我们也可以将内疚想象成一个人或有生命的动物来描述它的言行,使语言更加生动。
The guilt infused his legs preventing him from walking further.
内疚充溢在他的双腿上,使他不能再往前走了。
6.反语式表述
在读后续写中,我们也可以用正话反说的方式来表达内疚的心情。
If you didn't feel guilty,you wouldn't have a look of shame.如果你不感到内疚,你就不会有羞愧的表情。
His face showed guilt though he said he had done nothing wrong.虽然他说他没有做错任何事,但他脸上露出内疚的表情。
实战演练
1.按要求用表示“后悔、内疚与自责”的表达完成下列各句。
①看着安泪流满面,我满脸愧疚。
Looking at Ann's face wet with tears,I 　 　　　　　　　　 　　.(神态+情感)
②她发出后悔的叫声:“我真傻!”
She 　　　　　　　　　　　,“How silly I am!”(对话)
③我还没来得及说话,她就冲出去了。
She 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.(动作描写)
　　
had guilt written all over my face
let out a cry of regret
dashed out before I could utter a word
④我愣住了,沉浸在对她的负罪感中。要是我没和她吵架多好啊!
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.If only I had not quarreled with her!(动作+情感,并列句)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　.If only I had not quarreled with her!(非谓语动词作状语)
⑤我眼里涌出懊悔的泪水,冲下楼向安道歉。
　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　,I dashed downstairs to apologize to Ann.(with复合结构)
With regretful tears welling up in my eyes
I froze and drowned in feelings of guilt about her
I froze,drowning in feelings of guilt about her
2.将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文,注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇。
Looking at Ann's face wet with tears,I had guilt written all over my face.All of a sudden,she let out a cry of regret,“How silly I am!”Then,she dashed out before I could utter a word.I froze,drowning in feelings of guilt about her.If only I had not quarreled with her! Eventually,with regretful tears welling up in my eyes,I dashed downstairs to apologize to Ann.
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