人教版（2019）必修第二册Unit5 Music Reading for Writing课件（共28张PPT，内嵌音频）

(共28张PPT)
MUSIC
UNIT 5
Reading for writing
Lead-in
There will be an English speech contest in our class, whose topic is “Music and Me”.
Please write a speech.
Music
elegant
beautiful
charming
quiet&relaxed
calm&peaceful
What do you feel when listening to the music
Pre-reading
Inspired，amused，peaceful，energetic...
Lead-in
What is speech writing
Speech writing sends a message to readers. The goal of a speech is to influence others to think or act in your favor.
What makes a good speech writing
A good speech writing should:
1. focus on one topic
2. have a clear structure
3. engage the audience
Give a brief summary of the
experience (Para. 4)
Introduce a speech (Para. 1)
Describe in detail about your feelings (Para. 3)
Describe the story (Para. 2)
Lear
n the structure of a speech.
1
2
3
4
Good morning! My name is ...
It’s an honor to be here and share with you the story of ...
Give some information about the story. (beginning-development-climax-ending)
Give a brief summary about your experience: what you have learnt/ how it made you feel.
Describe your feelings:
... give me happiness/ satisfaction.
It makes my spirits ...
Skim the text and match the main idea to each paragraph.
Read for Structure
E: Introduce herself and the topic.
B: The impacts of music
C: Sarah’s personal experience.
A: Sarah’s advice and hope.
D: Thank the audience.
Beginning (Para.1)
Body (Para.2-3)
Ending (Para.4-5)
Writing tip 1: Appropriate structure makes the speech smooth, logical and coherent.
focus on one topic
have a clear structure
________
Hopes，advice and thanks.
Introduction
Greeting；introducing herself and the topic.
_______
The author’s personal __________ about music.
_______
The author’s personal ________ about music.
experience
feelings
Body
Body
Ending
Match the names of rhetorical devices to the lettered sentences in the speech.
metaphor ____
personification ____
quote ____
repetition ____
rhetorical question ____
simile ____
A
E
F
B
C
D
Read for details in the beginning part
Read for Content
Good morning. My name is Sarah Williams. It’s an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how music has had an impact on my life.
Greet the audience
Introduce herself
Propose the topic
Beginning (para 1)
Para.1
Write a speech
Introduction
Greeting
Self-introduction
Topic
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen / classmates / schoolmates / Distinguished guests / friends…
I am xxx, a student from Class 1 Grade 1 / xxx senior high school.
I feel really honored to share … with you. / It is an honor to deliver a speech about …
Read for details in the body part
Read for Content
When
What
How (feeling)
two years ago
then one day
from then on
had a serious disease which was difficult to cure
listen to some music before medical treatment
Music helped her recover
afraid, alone, discouraged
feel so much better
happy
grateful
Writing tip 2: Engage the audience - Share your personal story with true feelings.
Para.2
Write a speech
Body
facts or problems
opinions or feelings
inspiration or significance
To begin with, it is well acknowledged that…
What I want to stress is that…
For one thing, … For another, …
As far as I am concerned, however, …
In addition, when it comes to…, I feel…
So I am firmly convinced that…
Read Para. 3 and identify the rhetorical devices
Read for Language
Para.3
Music gave me happiness. When I listened to music, it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind. Music gave me strength and brought me relief. It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times. Moreover, music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction. It became my best friend. It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.
repetition
simile
metaphor
personification
Writing tip 3: Engage the audience - Use proper rhetorical devices.
Recognize the rhetorical devices used in the sentences
【A】Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all
【B】John A. Logan said, “ Music is the medicine of the mind.”
【C】Music gave me happiness... Music gave me strength and brought me relief... Music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.
【D】It made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.
【E】It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.
【F】It became my best friend.
Rhetorical question
Quote
Repetition
Simile
Metaphor
Personification
Writing tip 3: Using proper rhetorical devices makes your speech vivid and impressive
Read for the details in the ending part
Read for Content
Para.4-5
Of course, I hope none of you have to go through the same kind of suffering that I did. At the same time, we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone. During those times, music can help you in the same way that it helped me. I hope all of you will somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.
Thank you!
Ending
(para 4-5)
Summarize the main point
Call to action
Thank the audience
Write a speech
Conclusion
closing speech
gratitude or expectations
Now please allow me to express my sincere gratitude to…, without whose help, I wouldn’t have…
Now, on behalf of my classmates, I wish you all the best.
I sincerely hope my speech today can
make a difference to …
Thank you for your listening /
attention.
While-writing
Draft your speech.
Outline:
Structure Content Language features
Beginning
Body
Ending
Greet the audience
Introduce yourself
Propose the topic
Share personal experience
Rhetorical devices
Summarize the main point
Call to action
Thank the audience
Writing
如何写演讲稿
演讲稿是在公众场合向某一群体进行宣告或演说的文稿。演讲稿一般由称呼语、正文和结束语组成。一般情况下, 写作时的开头和结尾会提供给考生。演讲稿一般分为三部分:
(1)开门见山地指出说话者要谈的话题;
(2)说明具体情况及看法;
(3)照应开头, 总结全文。可以对全文作总结, 也可以谈自己的感想。
假如你是高三学生李华，你们学校举办了一次主题为“我与音乐”的演讲比赛，请结合自身感受写一篇150词左右的演讲稿。主要内容如下：
1. 介绍自己喜爱的音乐类型或歌手
2. 音乐所带来的影响注意:
1.词数100左右。可适当增加细节。
2文章的开头与结尾部分已经给出,不计入总词数
Music in My Life
Boys and girls:
Good morning, everyone!_______________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
Go for Writing
审题构思
Go for Writing
明确体裁话题
主题为“我与音乐”的演讲稿
确定时态人称
一般现在时，第一人称
布局文意架构
首段：简单的自我介绍，并且说明演讲的主题；
中段：介绍自己喜爱的音乐类型或歌手以及音乐给你带来的影响；
尾段：提出自己的期望并且表示感谢。
Useful expressions in the “Start” part of the speech
1. Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’m... Today I'm greatly honored to speak here
to talk about...
2. Good morning, everyone. My name is ... Thank you for giving me the opportunity to
make a speech concerning...
3. Hello, my dearest fellow schoolmates. I'd like to start by introducing myself. My name
is …....
4. Good afternoon, everybody. My name is ... It’s my great honor to have the opportunity
to share with you my opinion regarding ...
5. Hello, ladies and gentlemen. Let me introduce myself. My name is…Today I’d like to
deliver a lecture on ...
6. Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’m...It’s my great honor to stand here on behalf of
all the students, and share with you my point of view on...
A speech about music
Useful expressions in the “Body” part of the speech
1. Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all
2. Have you ever experienced the ups and downs of life and felt frustrated or discouraged
3. Two years ago, when I entered the new school, I felt lost and depressed.
Useful expressions in the “Ending” part of the speech
enjoys a joyful experience in music.
Go for Writing
Sample Writings:
Music in My Life
Boys and girls,
Good morning! I am Li Hua. It’s an honor to be here and share my view on music. I am crazy about music, or I should say that music is an important part in my life.
Have you got a particular type of music that touches your heart I guess the answer is yes. Actually, I like many kinds of music, so I'd like to talk about my favourite music here. Well. I like New Age Music best. It is mixed with some modern melody, and it sounds very nice and pure, which can take me to dream land; I feel completely relaxed, and forget all my problems when immersed in the music world. What's more, I like Enya. She is a very famous New Age singer. Her voice just sounds like the voice of angel; it's just as nice and beautiful as herself. In a word, music plays a very important role in my life.
This is my story about music. If there is a chance, I hope you can share your story. Thank you!
Checklist Your scores
1.Does the writer write a clear structure 5 4 3 2 1
2.Does the writer use a personal story 5 4 3 2 1
3.Does the writer use rhetorical devices 5 4 3 2 1
4.Does the writer give hope and advice 5 4 3 2 1
5.Is her/his handwriting beautiful 5 4 3 2 1
Checklist Your scores
1.Does the writer write a clear structure 5 4 3 2 1
2.Does the writer use a personal story 5 4 3 2 1
3.Does the writer use rhetorical devices 5 4 3 2 1
4.Does the writer give hope and advice 5 4 3 2 1
5.Is her/his handwriting beautiful 5 4 3 2 1
Score your speech
Assignment: Create
1.Write a speech draft with the theme of The Power of Music, trying to make the structure clear, the content topic-focused and language attractive;
2. Exchange drafts with a partner. Use checklist on page 57 to help you revise the draft.
Thanks!