2024届高三英语二轮专题复习：作文学案祝贺信 学案（含答案）
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祝贺信 (Letters of Congratulations)
范文展示
假设你是李华，听说朋友李雷考取了北京大学，想写信向他表示祝贺。并预祝他在大学里能取得更大的成功。
要点: 1. 付出的努力得到了回报。 2. 父母朋友为之骄傲。3. 利用优秀资源,获得更大成功。
Dear Li Lei,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your graduation from senior school and enrollment by the Peking University. I know you worked very hard in the past years, so I am truly happy to see that all your efforts get rewards. I am sure your parents are greatly proud of you. I just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success.
Being admitted to Peking University is a new start for you, which will bring you a good chance to learn from topping professors. Besides, it’s good for you to study with so many excellent students who of course will give you motivations to study hard.
I wish you greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four years.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
写作指导
一、常见框架：（三步走）
Para.1.说明祝贺事由、表达诚挚祝贺;
Para.2.围绕事件表述贺喜内容、表扬收信人；
Para.3再次表达良好祝愿，并展望他将来的发展前景。
可以重点赞扬当事人的优秀能力和取得的成就、并展望他将来的发展前景。
二、常用表达
Congratulation祝贺 congratulate you on your success或者congratulations on your promotion
delighted 高兴的，欣喜的 achievement成就 manage管理 enhance提高，增强 expectation展望，期待 essential 基本的，重要的 sincere真诚的 succeed in doing sth成功地做某事 pave the way for为…铺平道路 play a role in在…起作用
三、常用句式
开头句式：
It was exciting news for me to learn of …
Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on …
It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on …
I was delighted to learn of your success /achievements in …
You don’t know how excited and happy we felt at the news of …
It is with great pleasure that I hear of your success.
Allow me to convey my congratulations on your promotion to…
Heartiest congratulations upon your …
结尾句式：
We wish to share your honor and joy.
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.
May all go wonderfully in your new post!
May every happiness be yours!
All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!
May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity.
Every good wish to you for much health, happiness, and prosperity!
其他常用句式：（说明祝贺的缘由）
You’ve worked hard, gained everyone’s respect, and now you’ve made it to the top.
No one else has done more to deserve the honor.
Good news travels fast!
I am pleased to know that you have …
It was a splendid performance / a great triumph.
Best wishes for your greater success in all that you undertake.
I only want to let you know how happy I am for you.
It is with the greatest pleasure that I offer you my sincerest congratulations on your …
I am sure a talented person as you will make great achievement and live a fuller life.
常用套语
Dear ______ ,
I have learned with delight that you ___________.祝贺事由②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. ③You must be ______. ④And I feel very happy for you.
⑤ ______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! ⑥I know this is surely owing to ___________________被祝贺人过去的努力.⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______被祝贺人的优点. ⑧Kindly let me know when you ______（咨询对方何时有空）.
⑨I hope ______（表达自己的愿望）. ⑩My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
实战演练1
你听说朋友Dr. Harmon最近晋升为the Morning Post的主编，想向他表达表达你的祝贺。
内容要点：1. 年纪轻轻就获得提升，是源于努力的工作和卓越的能力；
2. 祝愿他在此职位能大放异彩，取得更大成功
Dear Dr. Harmon,
From today’s paper, I have learned with much delight that ____________________________
Para.1 写信的目的：
_________________________________________________________________________________
Para.2围绕事件表述贺喜内容、表扬收信人；
__________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
Para.3再次表达良好祝愿，并展望他将来的发展前景。
___________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
Keys:
Dear Dr.Harmon,
From today’s paper I have learned with much delight that you were recently appointed editor-in-chief of the Morning Post. I would like to express my congratulations to you on your promotion.
Your speedy advancement at such a young age is quite rare. This is surely owing to your untiring industry, coupled with your extraordinary competence.
With your qualifications and unyielding(坚定的) will, the position will surely prove to be a pleasant one. The Morning Post at last has an editor-in-chief who can make it the dominant(最重要的), outstanding daily of the country.
With my best wishes for your further success.
Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练2
你朋友获得了CCTV英语演讲比赛的冠军，请你写一封祝贺信给她。
Hello, Mary !
I am writing to congratulate you on your success in the English competition. I heard that you got the first prize and I am so proud and happy for you.
I know that you like English and you often go to the English corners to practise speaking English. It is your strong will and hard work that have made you succeed. You have been dreaming of becoming a translator in the future. I think if you can go on working like this, you will surely realize your dream.
I do hope that you can make greater progress. So I want to say "Come on". I will support you forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练3
1．假定你是李华，你校交换生Mary在市古筝比赛中获得了一等奖，请你给她写一封邮件，祝贺她取得好成绩。内容包括：1.写信目的；2.你的感想。
Dear Mary,
I’m thrilled to hear that you won the first prize in the Guzheng competition held in the city. Congratulations! Your dedication and hard work have truly paid off. I am so proud of you for achieving such an outstanding result.
Your performance was truly wonderful, and your passion for music was evident in every note you played. You have not only brought honor to our school but also inspired many of us with your talent and perseverance.
Once again, congratulations on your well-deserved victory. Keep up the good work, and I am sure you will continue to achieve great things in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练4
假如你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Eric在汉语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信，内容包括：1．表示祝贺； 2．赞扬他为此付出的努力；3．表达对他未来的祝愿。
Dear Eric,
I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you on your first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest.
How excited I was when I heard the good news! I am well aware that it is your diligence, perseverance and effective learning methods that contribute to your success. I am deeply impressed with your standard pronunciation and fluent Chinese, which must have taken you countless hours to practice. There is no doubt that having a good command of Chinese enables you to see the world through a new window.
Wish you greater progress and further success in learning Chinese!
Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练5
假如你是晨光中学的李津，你校举办了一场有关用英语讲中国故事的演讲比赛，你的朋友
Chris 获得了第一名，请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：
(1)表达祝贺;(2)向他学习;(3)希望他能够分享提高英语口语的方法。
参考词汇: 用英语讲中国故事 Stories of China Retold in English Challenge
Dear Chris,
I’m writing this letter to express my congratulations to you for winning the first prize in the Stories of China Retold in English Challenge.
Your performance was perfect, especially your excellent spoken English, which has left a deep impression on all the teachers and students present. Besides, what surprised us most was that you were so confident and brave on the stage when facing plenty of audience. To be honest, you are a hero in my heart, and I would like to take this chance to learn from you. I would appreciate it if you could share with me some methods of improving oral English.
All in all, no words can express my congratulations. Looking forward to your reply.
【仿写演练】
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris来邮件与你分享了他参加了他们学校中文学习俱乐部开展的“中国成语(Chinese Idioms)”比赛，并获得了冠军的消息。请你给他写一封回信。
要求如下：
1.表达祝贺；2.肯定努力； 3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Chris,
I’m so delighted to learn that you have been the champion of Chinese Idioms con test in your school. This is a special and happy moment for you. I’m very proud of you. Please accept my sincerest congratulations!
But indeed no one could have been more deserving of the champion than you because I know how hard you have been learning Chinese. It is your diligence and perseverance that stand you out in the crowd. It is a real encouragement to see your efforts paid off and I do hope you can hold your passion for Chinese and further understand our splendid culture.
Wish you future success in Chinese study. I’m looking forward to meeting you in China one day.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Chris写一封回信，祝贺他比赛获得冠军。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
快乐：happy→merry
以……为骄傲：be proud of→take pride in
取得回报：pay off→get in return
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：This is a special and happy moment for you. I’m very proud of you.
拓展句：This is a special and happy moment for you, when I’m very proud of you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m so delighted to learn that you have been the champion of Chinese Idioms con test in your school. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is your diligence and perseverance that stand you out in the crowd. (运用了强调句)
Dear Chris,
I’m so delighted to learn that you have been the champion of Chinese Idioms con test in your school. This is a special and happy moment for you. I’m very proud of you. Please accept my sincerest congratulations!
But indeed no one could have been more deserving of the champion than you because I know how hard you have been learning Chinese. It is your diligence and perseverance that stand you out in the crowd. It is a real encouragement to see your efforts paid off and I do hope you can hold your passion for Chinese and further understand our splendid culture.
Wish you future success in Chinese study. I’m looking forward to meeting you in China one day.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Chris写一封回信，祝贺他比赛获得冠军。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
快乐：happy→merry
以……为骄傲：be proud of→take pride in
取得回报：pay off→get in return
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：This is a special and happy moment for you. I’m very proud of you.
拓展句：This is a special and happy moment for you, when I’m very proud of you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m so delighted to learn that you have been the champion of Chinese Idioms con test in your school. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is your diligence and perseverance that stand you out in the crowd. (运用了强调句)
范文展示
假设你是李华，听说朋友李雷考取了北京大学，想写信向他表示祝贺。并预祝他在大学里能取得更大的成功。
要点: 1. 付出的努力得到了回报。 2. 父母朋友为之骄傲。3. 利用优秀资源,获得更大成功。
Dear Li Lei,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your graduation from senior school and enrollment by the Peking University. I know you worked very hard in the past years, so I am truly happy to see that all your efforts get rewards. I am sure your parents are greatly proud of you. I just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success.
Being admitted to Peking University is a new start for you, which will bring you a good chance to learn from topping professors. Besides, it’s good for you to study with so many excellent students who of course will give you motivations to study hard.
I wish you greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four years.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
写作指导
一、常见框架：（三步走）
Para.1.说明祝贺事由、表达诚挚祝贺;
Para.2.围绕事件表述贺喜内容、表扬收信人；
Para.3再次表达良好祝愿，并展望他将来的发展前景。
可以重点赞扬当事人的优秀能力和取得的成就、并展望他将来的发展前景。
二、常用表达
Congratulation祝贺 congratulate you on your success或者congratulations on your promotion
delighted 高兴的，欣喜的 achievement成就 manage管理 enhance提高，增强 expectation展望，期待 essential 基本的，重要的 sincere真诚的 succeed in doing sth成功地做某事 pave the way for为…铺平道路 play a role in在…起作用
三、常用句式
开头句式：
It was exciting news for me to learn of …
Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on …
It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on …
I was delighted to learn of your success /achievements in …
You don’t know how excited and happy we felt at the news of …
It is with great pleasure that I hear of your success.
Allow me to convey my congratulations on your promotion to…
Heartiest congratulations upon your …
结尾句式：
We wish to share your honor and joy.
I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.
May all go wonderfully in your new post!
May every happiness be yours!
All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!
May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity.
Every good wish to you for much health, happiness, and prosperity!
其他常用句式：（说明祝贺的缘由）
You’ve worked hard, gained everyone’s respect, and now you’ve made it to the top.
No one else has done more to deserve the honor.
Good news travels fast!
I am pleased to know that you have …
It was a splendid performance / a great triumph.
Best wishes for your greater success in all that you undertake.
I only want to let you know how happy I am for you.
It is with the greatest pleasure that I offer you my sincerest congratulations on your …
I am sure a talented person as you will make great achievement and live a fuller life.
常用套语
Dear ______ ,
I have learned with delight that you ___________.祝贺事由②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. ③You must be ______. ④And I feel very happy for you.
⑤ ______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! ⑥I know this is surely owing to ___________________被祝贺人过去的努力.⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______被祝贺人的优点. ⑧Kindly let me know when you ______（咨询对方何时有空）.
⑨I hope ______（表达自己的愿望）. ⑩My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
实战演练1
你听说朋友Dr. Harmon最近晋升为the Morning Post的主编，想向他表达表达你的祝贺。
内容要点：1. 年纪轻轻就获得提升，是源于努力的工作和卓越的能力；
2. 祝愿他在此职位能大放异彩，取得更大成功
Dear Dr. Harmon,
From today’s paper, I have learned with much delight that ____________________________
Para.1 写信的目的：
_________________________________________________________________________________
Para.2围绕事件表述贺喜内容、表扬收信人；
__________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
Para.3再次表达良好祝愿，并展望他将来的发展前景。
___________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
Keys:
Dear Dr.Harmon,
From today’s paper I have learned with much delight that you were recently appointed editor-in-chief of the Morning Post. I would like to express my congratulations to you on your promotion.
Your speedy advancement at such a young age is quite rare. This is surely owing to your untiring industry, coupled with your extraordinary competence.
With your qualifications and unyielding(坚定的) will, the position will surely prove to be a pleasant one. The Morning Post at last has an editor-in-chief who can make it the dominant(最重要的), outstanding daily of the country.
With my best wishes for your further success.
Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练2
你朋友获得了CCTV英语演讲比赛的冠军，请你写一封祝贺信给她。
Hello, Mary !
I am writing to congratulate you on your success in the English competition. I heard that you got the first prize and I am so proud and happy for you.
I know that you like English and you often go to the English corners to practise speaking English. It is your strong will and hard work that have made you succeed. You have been dreaming of becoming a translator in the future. I think if you can go on working like this, you will surely realize your dream.
I do hope that you can make greater progress. So I want to say "Come on". I will support you forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练3
1．假定你是李华，你校交换生Mary在市古筝比赛中获得了一等奖，请你给她写一封邮件，祝贺她取得好成绩。内容包括：1.写信目的；2.你的感想。
Dear Mary,
I’m thrilled to hear that you won the first prize in the Guzheng competition held in the city. Congratulations! Your dedication and hard work have truly paid off. I am so proud of you for achieving such an outstanding result.
Your performance was truly wonderful, and your passion for music was evident in every note you played. You have not only brought honor to our school but also inspired many of us with your talent and perseverance.
Once again, congratulations on your well-deserved victory. Keep up the good work, and I am sure you will continue to achieve great things in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练4
假如你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Eric在汉语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信，内容包括：1．表示祝贺； 2．赞扬他为此付出的努力；3．表达对他未来的祝愿。
Dear Eric,
I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you on your first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest.
How excited I was when I heard the good news! I am well aware that it is your diligence, perseverance and effective learning methods that contribute to your success. I am deeply impressed with your standard pronunciation and fluent Chinese, which must have taken you countless hours to practice. There is no doubt that having a good command of Chinese enables you to see the world through a new window.
Wish you greater progress and further success in learning Chinese!
Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练5
假如你是晨光中学的李津，你校举办了一场有关用英语讲中国故事的演讲比赛，你的朋友
Chris 获得了第一名，请你给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：
(1)表达祝贺;(2)向他学习;(3)希望他能够分享提高英语口语的方法。
参考词汇: 用英语讲中国故事 Stories of China Retold in English Challenge
Dear Chris,
I’m writing this letter to express my congratulations to you for winning the first prize in the Stories of China Retold in English Challenge.
Your performance was perfect, especially your excellent spoken English, which has left a deep impression on all the teachers and students present. Besides, what surprised us most was that you were so confident and brave on the stage when facing plenty of audience. To be honest, you are a hero in my heart, and I would like to take this chance to learn from you. I would appreciate it if you could share with me some methods of improving oral English.
All in all, no words can express my congratulations. Looking forward to your reply.
【仿写演练】
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris来邮件与你分享了他参加了他们学校中文学习俱乐部开展的“中国成语(Chinese Idioms)”比赛，并获得了冠军的消息。请你给他写一封回信。
要求如下：
1.表达祝贺；2.肯定努力； 3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Chris,
I’m so delighted to learn that you have been the champion of Chinese Idioms con test in your school. This is a special and happy moment for you. I’m very proud of you. Please accept my sincerest congratulations!
But indeed no one could have been more deserving of the champion than you because I know how hard you have been learning Chinese. It is your diligence and perseverance that stand you out in the crowd. It is a real encouragement to see your efforts paid off and I do hope you can hold your passion for Chinese and further understand our splendid culture.
Wish you future success in Chinese study. I’m looking forward to meeting you in China one day.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Chris写一封回信，祝贺他比赛获得冠军。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
快乐：happy→merry
以……为骄傲：be proud of→take pride in
取得回报：pay off→get in return
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：This is a special and happy moment for you. I’m very proud of you.
拓展句：This is a special and happy moment for you, when I’m very proud of you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m so delighted to learn that you have been the champion of Chinese Idioms con test in your school. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is your diligence and perseverance that stand you out in the crowd. (运用了强调句)
Dear Chris,
I’m so delighted to learn that you have been the champion of Chinese Idioms con test in your school. This is a special and happy moment for you. I’m very proud of you. Please accept my sincerest congratulations!
But indeed no one could have been more deserving of the champion than you because I know how hard you have been learning Chinese. It is your diligence and perseverance that stand you out in the crowd. It is a real encouragement to see your efforts paid off and I do hope you can hold your passion for Chinese and further understand our splendid culture.
Wish you future success in Chinese study. I’m looking forward to meeting you in China one day.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Chris写一封回信，祝贺他比赛获得冠军。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
快乐：happy→merry
以……为骄傲：be proud of→take pride in
取得回报：pay off→get in return
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：This is a special and happy moment for you. I’m very proud of you.
拓展句：This is a special and happy moment for you, when I’m very proud of you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m so delighted to learn that you have been the champion of Chinese Idioms con test in your school. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] It is your diligence and perseverance that stand you out in the crowd. (运用了强调句)