Unit 4 Then and now 单元复习(五)-写作指导+典型例题（共21张PPT）
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(共21张PPT)
Unit 4
人教六下复习课件
主讲教师：Cici
时间：2024.4.17
写作指导
谈论事物和人物的今昔变化
Part 5
本单元以“谈论事物和人物的今昔变化”为话题，学习用-一般过去时和一般现在时描述身边的事物或人物的变化。现在的你和过去相比有了哪些变化呢 以“My changes”为题，写一篇小短文来向我们描述一下吧!
要求:不少于50 词。
写
作
题
目
写
作
思
路
首先进行简短的自我介绍，并表明自己和过去相比有了变化。
I'm ...
I am different now.
然后从外貌、性格、爱好等方面具体描述自己过去和现在的不同。
Before, I was ... Now, I am ... I had ... before. Now, I have ...
At that time, I didn't like ... Now, I like ... I couldn't ... five years ago. Now, I can ...
最后进行情感升华，表达自己对未来的期待。
I will get better and better in the future.
积
累
可
用
词
汇
描写外貌的词汇：
tall 高的 short 矮的; 短的
thin 瘦的 strong 强壮的
cute 可爱的 pretty 漂亮的，美丽的
long 长的 big 大的
积
累
可
用
词
汇
描写爱好的词汇
love pink 喜欢粉红色 like singing 喜欢唱歌
love to ice-skate 喜欢滑冰 like swimming 喜欢游泳
don't like English不喜欢英语
favourite subject最喜欢的科目
be interested in cycling 喜欢骑自行车运动
积
累
可
用
词
汇
描写性格的词汇
kind 体贴的，和蔼的 strict严厉的
quiet 安静的 active 活跃的
shy害羞的 happy 快乐的
①I am different now.我现在不一样了。
②Before, I was short and thin. Now, I am tall and strong.
以前，我又矮又瘦。现在，我又高又壮。
③Now I change a lot.现在我变了很多。
④ I will get better and better in the future.
将来我会变得越来越好。
积
累
万
能
句
子
My changes
My name is Mary. I'm thirteen years old. Look, this is my old photo. I am different now.
Before, I was short and thin. Now, I am tall and strong. My hair was long and my eyes were small before.Now I have short hair and my eyes look big and bright.
范
文
赏
析
At that time, I was quiet and shy. I didn't like talking. I couldn't sing or dance. Now I change a lot. I make many friends and become very active. I can sing and dance well.
I will get better and better in the future.
范
文
赏
析
My changes
My name is Mary. I'm thirteen years old. Look, this is my old photo. I am different now.
范
文
赏
析
本句的运用点明了本文主旨:对比作者过去和现在的不同
Before, I was short and thin. Now, I am tall and strong. My hair was long and my eyes were small before.Now I have short hair and my eyes look big and bright.
范
文
赏
析
“Before”和“Now”在句首的应用，使得两句的内容形成了简洁而鲜明的对比
用“look”替换了“are”,增添了表达的多样性
At that time, I was quiet and shy. I didn't like talking. I couldn't sing or dance. Now I change a lot. I make many friends and become very active. I can sing and dance well.
I will get better and better in the future.
范
文
赏
析
用“At that time”替换了“Before”，增添了表达的多样性
本句now 的正确运用与前文对过去情形的描述形成了对比， change 的运用也意味着下文将描述现在的情形
该短语的正确运用是本文的一大亮点
假设你是张兰，请根据下表以 “My change”为题，写一篇小短文，介绍你的变化，内容可适当发挥，不少于40 词
写
作
实
践
Zhang Lan Appearance Character Hobbies
Before Height: 1.52 m, long hair shy didn’t like sports
Now Height: 1.63 m , short hair active love to ice-skate,
play badminton
写
作
思
路
第一步开头，介绍人物；
第二步正文，用一般过去时和一般现在时介绍发生的变化；
第三步结尾，表达对变化的感受。
素
材
积
累
必备词汇 必备句型
开头 friend, sister, cousin My friend is John.
素
材
积
累
必备词汇 必备句型
正文 时间：before, now, two years ago 形容词： short, tall, thin, heavy, long, small, big, quiet, shy, active 其他： is, was, are, were, can, could, have, had, did, didn't, like Before, I was quiet. Now, I'm active.
I didn't like cats two years ago. Now, I like them very much.
素
材
积
累
必备词汇 必备句型
结尾 different, change, better We are getting better and better.
My change
My name is Zhang Lan. I am different now. Before, I was short. Now, I am tall. Before, I had long hair. Now, I have short hair. Before, I was shy. Now, I am active in class. I didn’t like sports before. Now I love to ice-skate and play badminton. Exercise makes me happier and healthier. I think I’m better than before.
范
文
赏
析
点拨
写作前要先审题，明确人称、时态和主题，根据表格梳理要点。写作时首先介绍人物，然后具体介绍发生的变化，注意时态的正确使用，最后表达对变化的感受。
Unit 4
人教六下复习课件
Unit 4
人教六下复习课件
主讲教师：Cici
时间：2024.4.17
写作指导
谈论事物和人物的今昔变化
Part 5
本单元以“谈论事物和人物的今昔变化”为话题，学习用-一般过去时和一般现在时描述身边的事物或人物的变化。现在的你和过去相比有了哪些变化呢 以“My changes”为题，写一篇小短文来向我们描述一下吧!
要求:不少于50 词。
写
作
题
目
写
作
思
路
首先进行简短的自我介绍，并表明自己和过去相比有了变化。
I'm ...
I am different now.
然后从外貌、性格、爱好等方面具体描述自己过去和现在的不同。
Before, I was ... Now, I am ... I had ... before. Now, I have ...
At that time, I didn't like ... Now, I like ... I couldn't ... five years ago. Now, I can ...
最后进行情感升华，表达自己对未来的期待。
I will get better and better in the future.
积
累
可
用
词
汇
描写外貌的词汇：
tall 高的 short 矮的; 短的
thin 瘦的 strong 强壮的
cute 可爱的 pretty 漂亮的，美丽的
long 长的 big 大的
积
累
可
用
词
汇
描写爱好的词汇
love pink 喜欢粉红色 like singing 喜欢唱歌
love to ice-skate 喜欢滑冰 like swimming 喜欢游泳
don't like English不喜欢英语
favourite subject最喜欢的科目
be interested in cycling 喜欢骑自行车运动
积
累
可
用
词
汇
描写性格的词汇
kind 体贴的，和蔼的 strict严厉的
quiet 安静的 active 活跃的
shy害羞的 happy 快乐的
①I am different now.我现在不一样了。
②Before, I was short and thin. Now, I am tall and strong.
以前，我又矮又瘦。现在，我又高又壮。
③Now I change a lot.现在我变了很多。
④ I will get better and better in the future.
将来我会变得越来越好。
积
累
万
能
句
子
My changes
My name is Mary. I'm thirteen years old. Look, this is my old photo. I am different now.
Before, I was short and thin. Now, I am tall and strong. My hair was long and my eyes were small before.Now I have short hair and my eyes look big and bright.
范
文
赏
析
At that time, I was quiet and shy. I didn't like talking. I couldn't sing or dance. Now I change a lot. I make many friends and become very active. I can sing and dance well.
I will get better and better in the future.
范
文
赏
析
My changes
My name is Mary. I'm thirteen years old. Look, this is my old photo. I am different now.
范
文
赏
析
本句的运用点明了本文主旨:对比作者过去和现在的不同
Before, I was short and thin. Now, I am tall and strong. My hair was long and my eyes were small before.Now I have short hair and my eyes look big and bright.
范
文
赏
析
“Before”和“Now”在句首的应用，使得两句的内容形成了简洁而鲜明的对比
用“look”替换了“are”,增添了表达的多样性
At that time, I was quiet and shy. I didn't like talking. I couldn't sing or dance. Now I change a lot. I make many friends and become very active. I can sing and dance well.
I will get better and better in the future.
范
文
赏
析
用“At that time”替换了“Before”，增添了表达的多样性
本句now 的正确运用与前文对过去情形的描述形成了对比， change 的运用也意味着下文将描述现在的情形
该短语的正确运用是本文的一大亮点
假设你是张兰，请根据下表以 “My change”为题，写一篇小短文，介绍你的变化，内容可适当发挥，不少于40 词
写
作
实
践
Zhang Lan Appearance Character Hobbies
Before Height: 1.52 m, long hair shy didn’t like sports
Now Height: 1.63 m , short hair active love to ice-skate,
play badminton
写
作
思
路
第一步开头，介绍人物；
第二步正文，用一般过去时和一般现在时介绍发生的变化；
第三步结尾，表达对变化的感受。
素
材
积
累
必备词汇 必备句型
开头 friend, sister, cousin My friend is John.
素
材
积
累
必备词汇 必备句型
正文 时间：before, now, two years ago 形容词： short, tall, thin, heavy, long, small, big, quiet, shy, active 其他： is, was, are, were, can, could, have, had, did, didn't, like Before, I was quiet. Now, I'm active.
I didn't like cats two years ago. Now, I like them very much.
素
材
积
累
必备词汇 必备句型
结尾 different, change, better We are getting better and better.
My change
My name is Zhang Lan. I am different now. Before, I was short. Now, I am tall. Before, I had long hair. Now, I have short hair. Before, I was shy. Now, I am active in class. I didn’t like sports before. Now I love to ice-skate and play badminton. Exercise makes me happier and healthier. I think I’m better than before.
范
文
赏
析
点拨
写作前要先审题，明确人称、时态和主题，根据表格梳理要点。写作时首先介绍人物，然后具体介绍发生的变化，注意时态的正确使用，最后表达对变化的感受。
Unit 4
人教六下复习课件