专题07 书面表达
Part 1 回复询问信
（一）
（204届 . 北京海淀区 . 统考一模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。六月十四日是世界献血者日（World Blood Donor Day ），你在京学习的英国好友Jim决定当天去献血，并询问你的意愿。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 你的答复及理由；
2. 提醒注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
9 April 2024
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9 April 2024
Dear Jim,
I'm glad to know that you want to donate blood on World Blood Donor Day. I also want to do it, but I am not in good condition recently, so I can't go with you. Donating blood is a very meaningful act, which can help save lives. It is a great way to contribute to society.
However, I want to remind you that before donating blood, you should pay attention to the following points: First, make sure you are in good health. Second, keep a good rest and a balanced diet before donating. Finally, follow the doctor's advice during the donation process.
I hope your donation goes smoothly!
Yours,
Li Hua
（二）
（2024届 . 北京东城区等五区 . 统考一模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Chris想了解不同颜色在中国文化中的涵义。请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.颜色及其涵义；
2.生活中的实例。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hope you are doing great! Knowing that you are interested in the implication of colors in Chinese culture, I am writing to share my ideas with you.
In our culture, many colors hold deep symbolic meanings. For instance, red, the color of celebration and joy, symbolizes good luck and prosperity. Black, on the other hand, embodies a sense of depth and mystery, which often lends a mysterious touch.
These symbolic meanings are reflected in various aspects in our daily lives. Take black for example. In art forms like ink painting and calligraphy, black ink is used skillfully to convey a sense of harmony and balance. In traditional martial arts, black is also a sign of inner exploration.
How do colors play a role in your culture Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Chris回一封邮件，告诉他不同颜色在中国文化
中的涵义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→take an interest in
例如：for instance→for example
各种各样的：various→all kinds of
表达：convey→express
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For instance, red, the color of celebration and joy, symbolizes good luck and prosperity.
拓展句：For instance, red, which is the color of celebration and joy, symbolizes good luck and prosperity.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Knowing that you are interested in the implication of colors in Chinese culture, I am writing to share my ideas with you.（运用了现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
Black, on the other hand, embodies a sense of depth and mystery, which often lends a mysterious touch.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
（三）
（2024届 . 北京房山区 . 统考一模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim计划明年来北京上大学学习中文，特发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 推荐他上哪所大学；
3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：1. 词数100 词左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear Jim,
You couldn’t imagine how happy I am when learning that you’ll come to Beijing to attend college. Welcome to Beijing!
I strongly recommend Peking University to you. It offers the best courses of Chinese history and philosophy. Studying with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture.
As for preparation, I suggest you surf the Internet for some relevant information about this university, such as its history and development, its academic performance and various departments. Moreover, you had better learn some Chinese in order to communicate with others better on campus.
Hope my suggestions will be of some help. If you have any question, just feel free to contact me. I couldn’t wait to see you next semester in Beijing!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写封邮件，欢迎他来北京上大学学习中文，推荐他上哪所大学，建议他做哪些准备工作。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→delighted
提供：offer→provide
专家：expert→specialist
另外：moreover→furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Studying with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture.
拓展句：If you study with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] You couldn’t imagine how happy I am when learning that you’ll come to Beijing to attend college. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句，省略句和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If you have any question, just feel free to contact me. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Part 2 邀请信+介绍信
（一）
（2024届 . 北京延庆 . 统考一模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周将要举办“科技嘉年华”活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动安排。
科技嘉年华 Science and Technology Carnival
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival to be held next week in our school.
The aim of this activity is to enrich our school life and arouse our interest in science and technology. During the carnival, there will be a variety of activities, including exhibitions of the latest scientific and technological achievements, lectures by famous scientists, and hands-on experiments. In addition, there will be a science competition, where you can show your creativity and knowledge.
I believe this event will be a great opportunity for you to learn more about science and technology and interact with other students. I look forward to seeing you at the carnival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加学校即将举办的“科技嘉年华”活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
目的：aim→ purpose
各种各样的：a variety of → various/all kinds of
著名的：famous → well-known
此外：in addition→ what’s more
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival to be held next week in our school.
拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival which will be held next week in our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In addition, there will be a science competition, where you can show your creativity and knowledge. (运用了where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe this event will be a great opportunity for you to learn more about science and technology and interact with other students. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
（二）
（2024届 . 北京门头沟 . 统考一模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。国际月季节(International Rose Festival) 将于下周在北京举办。你得知你校外教Jim对花卉十分感兴趣，想邀请他一同参加。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 介绍国际月季节基本信息；
2. 介绍其亮点。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Learning you’re interested in flowers, I’m writing to invite you to attend International Rose Festival. It will be held in the Rose Valley next Friday.
This event is a celebration of beauty and culture, aiming to attract people from all over the world to appreciate beautiful roses. It starts with a grand parade and is followed by activities including rose exhibitions, cultural performances and rose cultivation workshops.
As a local student, I’m excited about the International Rose Festival. It not only offers chances to enjoy the pleasure of gardening, but also enlarges your knowledge on various kinds of roses.
I’m sure you will enjoy the festival. Would you like to come with me
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请对花卉十分感兴趣的外教Jim参加下周在北京举办的国际月季节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in
和：and→as well as
机会：chance→opportunity
各种各样的：various→a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This event is a celebration of beauty and culture, aiming to attract people from all over the world to appreciate beautiful roses.
拓展句：This event is a celebration of beauty and culture, which aims to attract people from all over the world to appreciate beautiful roses.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning you’re interested in flowers, I’m writing to invite you to attend International Rose Festival. (运用了现在分词作状语和省略that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m sure you will enjoy the festival. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
Part 3 询问信
（2024届 . 北京西城区 . 统考一模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你和你校交换生Jim准备联合参加学校组织的校园文创设计大赛(Campus Cultural and Creative Design Competition), 请给Jim发邮件，内容包括：
1. 分享你的创意;
2. 询问Jim的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How is it going I’ve just had a “light bulb” moment for our entry in the upcoming Campus Cultural and Creative Design Competition, and I can’t wait to share it with you to get your thoughts.
How about creating a series of bookmarks On one side, we’ll have our school motto, and on the flip side, breathtaking illustrations showcase our campus throughout the four seasons. Each bookmark will capture a special moment or scene that perfectly reflects the essence of that particular season. I really think this idea not only nails the competition theme but also offers a practical yet visually stunning product that truly represents the spirit of our school.
What do you think Would love to hear your thoughts and any suggestions you might have!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Jim发邮件，介绍你参加校园文创设计大赛的创意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
……怎样：how about→what about
建议：suggestion→advice
本质：essence→nature
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Would love to hear your thoughts and any suggestions you might have!
拓展句：If you have any better thoughts or suggestions, don’t hesitate to contact me.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Each bookmark will capture a special moment or scene that perfectly reflects the essence of that particular season. (运用了that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] I really think this idea not only nails the competition theme but also offers a practical yet visually stunning product that truly represents the spirit of our school. (运用了not only…but also…句型)
Part 4祝贺信
（2024届 . 北京石景山区 . 统考一模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim在汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名，他发来邮件感谢你提供的帮助。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.回顾他的困难；
3.赞扬他的努力。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m writing to express my congratulations on your winning the first place in the Chinese speech contest. It’s your hard work that means more than anything.
I remember vividly how you devoted yourself to making this achievement. During the preparation of the contest, you polished your draft many times and better your pronunciation with great patience. I’m glad you mastered the public speaking skills and they turned out really effective. More importantly, you never felt hesitant and unsure about yourself. You deserve such an achievement for your confidence and perseverance.
Wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友 Jim回复一封邮件，对他在汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名表示祝贺，回顾他的困难并赞扬他的努力。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey
全力以赴做某事：devote oneself to doing→bend oneself to doing
改进：better→improve
坚持：perseverance→tenacity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You deserve such an achievement for your confidence and perseverance.
拓展句：There is no doubt that you deserve such an achievement for your confidence and perseverance.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s your hard work that means more than anything. (运用了强调句)
[高分句型2] I remember vividly how you devoted yourself to making this achievement. (运用了how引导的宾语从句)专题07 书面表达
Part 1 回复询问信
（一）
（204届 . 北京海淀区 . 统考一模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。六月十四日是世界献血者日（World Blood Donor Day ），你在京学习的英国好友Jim决定当天去献血，并询问你的意愿。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 你的答复及理由；
2. 提醒注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
9 April 2024
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（二）
（2024届 . 北京东城区等五区 . 统考一模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Chris想了解不同颜色在中国文化中的涵义。请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.颜色及其涵义；
2.生活中的实例。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
（三）
（2024届 . 北京房山区 . 统考一模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim计划明年来北京上大学学习中文，特发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 推荐他上哪所大学；
3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：1. 词数100 词左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Part 2 邀请信+介绍信
（一）
（2024届 . 北京延庆 . 统考一模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周将要举办“科技嘉年华”活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动安排。
科技嘉年华 Science and Technology Carnival
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua
（二）
（2024届 . 北京门头沟 . 统考一模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。国际月季节(International Rose Festival) 将于下周在北京举办。你得知你校外教Jim对花卉十分感兴趣，想邀请他一同参加。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 介绍国际月季节基本信息；
2. 介绍其亮点。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Part 3 询问信
（2024届 . 北京西城区 . 统考一模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你和你校交换生Jim准备联合参加学校组织的校园文创设计大赛
(Campus Cultural and Creative Design Competition), 请给Jim发邮件，内容包括：
1. 分享你的创意;
2. 询问Jim的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Part 4祝贺信
（2024届 . 北京石景山区 . 统考一模）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim在汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名，他发来邮件感谢你提供的帮助。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.回顾他的困难；
3.赞扬他的努力。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
