高三下写作语料清单5
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习。你对当地一个社区在网上发布的志愿者招募信息十分感兴趣,于是给该社区写信。内容包括:1. 说明报名原因;2. 询问相关情况;3. 表达你的期待。
【解题步骤】
①谋篇布局 ②内容要点 ③嵌套文体
开头+目的 写信报名与询问信息 【申请信/询问信开头】
正文 说明报名原因+询问相关情况 【why意义/申请原因】+【询问内容】
结尾 表达你的期待 【邀请信/申请信/询问信结尾】
Who 我+社区负责人,需自我介绍 What 说明报名原因+询问相关情况
When 一般现在时、一般将来时 Why 报名的理由/意义,为什么询问
Where 邮件,语气正式 How 如何参与
【基础词块】
报名参加 参加 志愿者活动 志愿者其他方面 询问
▲________ ▲________ ▲________ ▲_________ ▲_________ ▲_________ ▲_________ ▲volunteer _____/________/ ___ ▲____________________ ▲youth/cultural volunteering(具体) ▲volunteer __________ ▲volunteer __________ ▲volunteer __________ ▲ask about ▲_______________ ▲_______________ ▲_______________ ▲_______________ ▲_______________
combining studying with volunteering in the UK volunteering
【要点拓展】
要点1【自我介绍+写作目的】【将题干关键词进行串联翻译】
I’m Li Hua, a student studying in London during the summer vacation. Fascinated by/ Interested in/ Attracted by the volunteer recruitment information posted by your community online, I’m writing to inquire about some relevant details. (复杂版——I’m writing to extend my fervent anticipation to participate and enquire about some relevant information.)
要点2【报名原因/理由】【组合“暑假学习、志愿者、社区”展开思考为什么要报名?】
作用/理由套句:enables me to/// allows me to/// provide me with a platform where...///provides an excellent/exceptional opportunity to+表格个别词块
内部 德 gives me ________________ fulfillment and purpose 给了我一种深刻的成就感和使命感
德 yearn for________________ local society 渴望融入当地社会
德 ________with like-minded individuals 与志同道合的人联系
德 ________my social network in a meaningful way 以有意义的方式扩大我的社交网络
智 ________and ________my English language skills through real-life interactions and communications. 通过现实生活中的互动和交流,锻炼和提高自己的英语语言能力。
智 ________/________my interpersonal skills and leadership ________ 提高/发展我的人际交往技巧和领导能力
美 ________myself ____British culture 让我沉浸在英国文化中
美 ________my international ________ 开阔我的国际视野
美 enables me to ________the country 使我能够探索这个国家
劳 ________my abilities and gain practical experience that can be valuable in my professional career 拓展能力并获得对我的职业生涯有价值的实践经验
外部 社会 _______________/help to ________the betterment of our community by ________local ________and supporting community development projects. 通过解决本地问题和支持社区发展项目,贡献/帮助促进社区的改善。
社会 feel a strong sense of social ________________to ________________ and help those in need 有强烈的社会责任感,回馈社会,帮助有需要的人
社会 ________________improving public welfare 发挥公益改善作用
社会 ________solidarity and support for local communities, fostering cross-cultural understanding. 展示对当地社区的团结和支持,促进跨文化理解。
社会 promotes social ________by bringing together people from ________backgrounds to work towards common goals. 通过将不同背景的人聚集在一起,为共同的目标而努力,促进社会融合。
要点3【过渡】【思考为什么询问?个人满意+提早准备】
选择一:这项工作完全符合我的期望this work exactly caters to my expectations
选择二:为确保提前做好工作准备For guaranteeing appropriate preparations for the work in advance.
要点4【询问相关情况】①怎么询问?组合“志愿者活动、报名”展开思考询问什么方面?
①怎么询问
好奇地问 I am ______________(想知道) if it is possible to... I am _____________ (对…好奇)learn more about... I am______________(对…感兴趣) finding out... I ___________(想要) know more ________(关于)... I would like to _____________________(更好理解 I would like to inquire about I am ________(寻求) ___________...(对…的洞见) I am ________________________..(求指导). 感激地问 I would __________(感激) if you could offer details about... 迫切地问 I am _______________(急切需要) information regarding... 礼貌地问 It would help me greatly if you could explain... Could you ________(阐明)... Could you _____________(引导我理解)... Could you please provide me with information on... Would you be so kind as to inform me about...
粗放角度: 过程________ 步骤________ 建议________/ ________/ ________________/ ________ 指导________ 想法________ 资源________ 可用性________ 可能性________ ②询问什么
报名流程 申请程序________________ 截止日期________
报名要求 要求________________
报名要求 年龄限制________________
报名要求 特定技能 ________________资格________
活动准备 为志愿者提供培训/演练/指导/支持training/_______/_______/ support provided for volunteers
活动准备 准备工作________
安全保障 安全举措safety ________保险insurance coverage
活动时间 日常安排the ________
活动时间 频次How often/ ________
活动地点 提供交通工具transportation to volunteer sites provided
活动地点 活动进行Where do ... take place
活动内容 活动类型________of volunteer activities
活动内容 活动任务________involved in the volunteer roles
要点5【表达期待】期待①(参考要点2表格);期待②(结合申请信、询问信的结尾)
期待①Hopefully, I could be given the golden opportunity to get involved in your program and enrich my experience.
期待②I’m grateful for your attention and looking forward to your prompt reply.
范例I’m Li Hua, a student studying in London during the summer vacation. Attracted by the volunteer recruitment information posted by your community online, I’m writing to inquire about some relevant details.
The reason why I enrol in local volunteer activities is that they will deeply immerse myself in British culture and help me connect with like-minded individuals. What’s more, with a strong sense of responsibility to give back, volunteering in your community provides me with a platform where I can demonstrate solidarity and support for local communities. For guaranteeing appropriate preparations for the work in advance, I would like to know more regarding the application process, types and tasks of volunteer activities and the detailed schedule.
Hopefully, I could be given the golden opportunity to get involved in your program.I’m grateful for your attention and looking forward to your prompt reply.
高三下写作语料清单5答案版
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习。你对当地一个社区在网上发布的志愿者招募信息十分感兴趣,于是给该社区写信。内容包括:1. 说明报名原因;2. 询问相关情况;3. 表达你的期待。
【解题步骤】
①谋篇布局 ②内容要点 ③嵌套文体
开头+目的 写信报名与询问信息 【申请信/询问信开头】
正文 说明报名原因+询问相关情况 【why意义/申请原因】+【询问内容】
结尾 表达你的期待 【邀请信/申请信/询问信结尾】
Who 我+社区负责人,需自我介绍 What 说明报名原因+询问相关情况
When 一般现在时、一般将来时 Why 报名的理由/意义,为什么询问
Where 邮件,语气正式 How 如何参与
【基础词块】
报名参加 参加 志愿者活动 志愿者其他方面 询问
sign up for apply for enrol in join in participate in engage in get involved in volunteer work/program/ activities community service youth/cultural volunteering(具体) volunteer recruitment volunteer opportunities volunteer training ask about inquire about make inquiries about get/request information on wonder about express curiosity about
combining studying with volunteering in the UK volunteering
【要点拓展】
要点1【自我介绍+写作目的】【将题干关键词进行串联翻译】
I’m Li Hua, a student studying in London during the summer vacation. Fascinated by/ Interested in/ Attracted by the volunteer recruitment information posted by your community online, I’m writing to inquire about some relevant details. (复杂版——I’m writing to extend my fervent anticipation to participate and enquire about some relevant information.)
要点2【报名原因/理由】【组合“暑假学习、志愿者、社区”展开思考为什么要报名?】
作用/理由套句:enables me to/// allows me to/// provide me with a platform where...///provides an excellent/exceptional opportunity to+表格个别词块
内部 德 gives me a profound sense of fulfillment and purpose 给了我一种深刻的成就感和使命感
德 yearn for blending into local society 渴望融入当地社会
德 connect with like-minded individuals 与志同道合的人联系
德 expand my social network in a meaningful way 以有意义的方式扩大我的社交网络
智 practice and improve my English language skills through real-life interactions and communications. 通过现实生活中的互动和交流,锻炼和提高自己的英语语言能力。
智 enhance/develop my interpersonal skills and leadership capabilities 提高/发展我的人际交往技巧和领导能力
美 immerse myself in British culture 让我沉浸在英国文化中
美 broaden my international horizon 开阔我的国际视野
美 enables me to explore the country 使我能够探索这个国家
劳 extend my abilities and gain practical experience that can be valuable in my professional career 拓展能力并获得对我的职业生涯有价值的实践经验
外部 社会 contribute to/help to promote the betterment of our community by addressing local issues and supporting community development projects. 通过解决本地问题和支持社区发展项目,贡献/帮助促进社区的改善。
社会 feel a strong sense of social responsibility to give back and help those in need 有强烈的社会责任感,回馈社会,帮助有需要的人
社会 play a role in improving public welfare 发挥公益改善作用
社会 demonstrate solidarity and support for local communities, fostering cross-cultural understanding. 展示对当地社区的团结和支持,促进跨文化理解。
社会 promotes social integration by bringing together people from diverse backgrounds to work towards common goals. 通过将不同背景的人聚集在一起,为共同的目标而努力,促进社会融合。
要点3【过渡】【思考为什么询问?个人满意+提早准备】
选择一:这项工作完全符合我的期望this work exactly caters to my expectations
选择二:为确保提前做好工作准备For guaranteeing appropriate preparations for the work in advance.
要点4【询问相关情况】①怎么询问?组合“志愿者活动、报名”展开思考询问什么方面?
①怎么询问
好奇地问 I am wondering(想知道) if it is possible to... I am curious to (对…好奇)learn more about... I am interested in(对…感兴趣) finding out... I would like to(想要) know more regarding(关于)... I would like to get a better understanding of(更好理解 I would like to inquire about I am looking for(寻求) insights into...(对…的洞见) I am seeking guidance on..(求指导). 感激地问 I would appreciate it(感激) if you could offer details about... 迫切地问 I am in (urgent) need of(急切需要) information regarding... 礼貌地问 It would help me greatly if you could explain... Could you clarify(阐明).../Could you walk me through(引导我理解)... Could you please provide me with information on... Would you be so kind as to inform me about...
粗放角度: 过程process 步骤steps 建议advice/ suggestion/ recommendation/ proposal 指导guidance 想法thoughts 资源resources 可用性availability可能性possibility ②询问什么
报名流程 申请程序the application process 截止日期deadlines
报名要求 要求requirements
报名要求 年龄限制age restrictions
报名要求 特定技能 specific skills 资格qualifications
活动准备 为志愿者提供培训/演练/指导/支持training/drilling /guidance/ support provided for volunteers
活动准备 准备工作preparation
安全保障 安全举措safety measures 保险insurance coverage
活动时间 日常安排the schedule
活动时间 频次How often/ frequency
活动地点 提供交通工具transportation to volunteer sites provided
活动地点 活动进行Where do ... take place
活动内容 活动类型types of volunteer activities
活动内容 活动任务tasks involved in the volunteer roles
要点5【表达期待】期待①(参考要点2表格);期待②(结合申请信、询问信的结尾)
期待①Hopefully, I could be given the golden opportunity to get involved in your program and enrich my experience.
期待②I’m grateful for your attention and looking forward to your prompt reply.
范例I’m Li Hua, a student studying in London during the summer vacation. Attracted by the volunteer recruitment information posted by your community online, I’m writing to inquire about some relevant details.
The reason why I enrol in local volunteer activities is that they will deeply immerse myself in British culture and help me connect with like-minded individuals. What’s more, with a strong sense of responsibility to give back, volunteering in your community provides me with a platform where I can demonstrate solidarity and support for local communities. For guaranteeing appropriate preparations for the work in advance, I would like to know more regarding the application process, types and tasks of volunteer activities and the detailed schedule.
Hopefully, I could be given the golden opportunity to get involved in your program.I’m grateful for your attention and looking forward to your prompt reply.