2024年中考英语二轮复习专题- 书面表达（浙江专用）（解析版）

2024年中考英语二轮复习专题- 书面表达（浙江专用）
1.（2024·浙江省初中名校发展共同体·中考模拟）假如你是李华，你的学校成立了“青春劳动社(the Youth Labor Club)”。请你就此阐述该社团设立的意义，提供相关活动建议以及理由，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
Activities Reasons
●offer classes. ●organize competitions. ●... learn by doing colorful ...
注意：
(1)短文中至少包含两个活动，以上表格中的活动仅供参考。
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
(3)词数：100词左右：开头已给出，不计人总词数。
As we all know, Labor Education has been included in the education of middle and primary schools in China._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
As we all know, Labor Education has been included in the education of middle and primary schools in China. Our school has set up the Youth Labor Club, which I think is of great importance. We can learn some life skills and how to work together. Also, we will realize it is not easy to do labor work.
As for how to organize it well, I have some ideas. The school can offer classes, such as a cooking class and a paper-cutting class. Besides, the school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. Such activities make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
I strongly believe we’ll learn a lot from the club.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图借用“学校成立青春劳动社”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，指出劳动社的意义、提供活动建议及理由；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①set up成立
②of great importance很重要
③as for至于
[高分句型]
①Our school has set up the Youth Labor Club, which I think is of great importance. (which引导的定语从句)
②Also, we will realize it is not easy to do labor work. (省略that的宾语从句)
2.（2024·浙江省杭州观成教育集团·中考一模）初中三年即将过去，回顾这段时光，你是否有许多难忘的回忆，也有很多感慨？假定你是李华，你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件，题为“写给自己的一封信”，请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
A Letter to Myself 内容要点 参考词汇
Memories Sweet: make progress…have a great time… Bitter: make mistakes…have trouble…
Feelings positive: take pride in…thankful…
Negative: regretful…
注意：
（1）文中必须包含两项内容要点，可适当发挥（参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考）；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数：80~100，稿件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
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Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. You had trouble asking your teachers about your study. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you have made progress and become more confident and outgoing. You did have a great time in school. You took pride in yourself and were grateful to the people who helped you.
Do you remember the mistake of fighting with your best friend You felt regretful. Sometimes silence can lead to misunderstandings.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般过去时与一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给提示内容写给自己一封信。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己三年来难忘的回忆；
第二步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①had trouble doing有困难做
②with the help of在……帮助下
③took pride in以……为骄傲
[高分句型]
It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person. (强调句)
3.（2024·浙江省杭州市紫金港中学·中考一模）当前中小学生近视率居高不下，对于中小学生的近视问题，你有何看法和建议？请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，说明近视的原因并告诉大家如何保护视力。
要求：
1.包含提示中的所有要点，语言表达准确，语句通顺，可适当发挥；
2.词数80—100；
3.请勿在文中出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。

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【答案】例文
How to Protect Our Eyesight
As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight
First, it’s necessary for us to eat healthy food. A healthy diet that is rich in vitamins and minerals can help to protect our eyes. We should also avoid eating too much junk food and sugary snacks. Secondly, remember to develop good habits of using eyes. Don’t read in the sun or in a poor light. Don’t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye exercises every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. Finally, we should reduce the amount of time we spend looking at screens.
If you obey the rules above, I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.
【总体分析】① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，可对要点进行适当补充。
【写作步骤】第一步，引出要点；
第二步，给出建议，并说明原因；
第三步，表明自己观点：如果对方遵守，就不会近视。
【亮点词汇】①eyesight实力
②protect保护
③diet饮食
④avoid避免
【高分句型】So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. (it is+形容词+for sb. to do sth.)
4.（2024·浙江省湖州市·中考模拟）在人生漫漫旅途中，总会有这样一些人，他们或令你感动，或让你崇敬，或使你难忘……他们牵动我们的思维，占据内心深处的的记忆。某英文报社正在开展以“我难忘的人”为主题的征文活动。请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你难忘的人。
*Who is the person you will never forget
*What did he/she do
*What can you learn from him/her
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要求：1.征文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
3.词数：80—100 词。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
In our lives, we may meet different people The person I will never forget is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
In our lives, we may meet different people. The person I will never forget is Mr. Li, an English teacher. He’s a
tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He’s humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He’s kind but is strict with us.
About two years ago, Mr. Li noticed that I was worried about my poor pronunciation. So he offered me many suggestions to improve it, and he also gave me every chance possible to speak in class. With his help, my pronunciation has greatly improved.
I will always remember his kindness and I can learn that the key to success is to be brave when facing difficulties.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明谁是你永远不会忘记的人；
第二步，具体阐述他/她做了什么；
第三步，最后介绍你能从他/她身上学到什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with sb对某人严厉
②be worried about担忧
③with one’s help在某人的帮助下
[高分句型]
①Mr. Li noticed that I was worried about my poor pronunciation. （that引导的宾语从句）
②I will always remember his kindness and I can learn that the key to success is to be brave when facing difficulties.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5.（2024·浙江省湖州市·中考一模）假如你是李华，交换生Peter即将来你校学习，他对你校的社团活动很感兴趣。请根据以下信息，用英文写一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个你参加过的社团。
提示词语: take part in , improve, benefit
提示问题: What club did you join
What did you do in the club
Why do you recommend the club
注意：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(2) 内容须包含以上内容，可适当发挥；
(3) 词数：80-100词。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school!
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version 1:
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school! I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. I, as a basketball lover, highly recommend you join the “BasketballClub”. This club provides a platform for us students to improve their basketball skills and build up our bodies. With various matches every term, we have not only received professional training there, but also developed organization abilities, which are beneficial for my personal growth.
Looking forward to seeing you at our club and I will actively take part in the activities together with you during your stay. Wish you a pleasant stay at our school!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear the exciting news recently that you will be coming to our school as an exchange student! As an experienced student who took part in various activities, I would like to recommend the “Science Club” to you.
We can learn science knowledge through various lectures here. We also have the chance to work on several exciting projects, which can not only enrich our learning experience but also develop our team work and leadership skills.
Looking forward to your arrival and I'm sure you’ll find it both educational and fun. If you have any questions or need more information, feel free to ask.
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】范文一：
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者向Peter推荐的社团；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。作者讲述参加社团的收获及推荐该社团的原因；
第三步，书写结语。作者表达了希望Peter来参加他们的俱乐部并一起参加活动的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in 对……感兴趣
②provide sth. for sb. 为某人提供某物
③not only…but also 不仅……而且
④take part in 参加(活动)
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. (宾语从句)；
②With various matches every term, we have not only received professional training there, but also developed organization abilities, which are beneficial for my personal growth. (介词短语；定语从句)
6.（2024·浙江省金华市·中考一模）龙承载着勇气、智慧等美好寓意，中华儿女一直以龙的传人(the descendants
of Loong)而自豪。发生在你自己或他人身上的哪件事，让你瞬间觉得我们就是龙的传人？恰逢龙年，请你以“The Spirit of Loong”为题，根据表格信息，写一篇英语短文向学校英文期刊投稿。
内容要点 写作参考
About Loong What do Chinese people think of Loong
A story What you do or see that makes you believe you are the descendants of Loong
Your understanding Which spirit of Loong does the story show Why
注意：
（1）文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；写作参考仅提供思路；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数80~100。
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【答案】例文
Loong is seen as a symbol of courage in China. As descendants of Loong, we’re proud of ourselves. Here comes my story.
Last year, we lost in the final school basketball match. It disappointed us because we trained hard. However, our captain cheered us and we decided to train better as a team. We practiced more carefully every day, even during holidays. Finally, our hard work paid off. We were the winner this year.
In my opinion, those who never give up are true descendants of Loong. Keep the spirit in mind and we can get
through all difficulties.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍关于龙的信息以及发生在你自己或他人身上的哪件事，让你瞬间觉得我们就是龙的传人。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍中国人对龙的看法；
第二步，介绍发生在你自己身上的事情；
第三步，介绍龙的精神。
[亮点词汇]
①a symbol of……的象征
②be proud of为……感到自豪
③pay off成功
④keep...in mind记住
[高分句型]
①It disappointed us because we trained hard. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②In my opinion, those who never give up are true descendants of Loong. (who引导的定语从句)
7.（2024·浙江省丽水市青田县第二中学鹤城校区·中考一模）假设你是李华，请仔细阅读你的澳大利亚笔友James的邮件，并按照要求进行回复。
注意：(1)词数80-100词左右；
文中不得出现真实的人名和班级名；
(3)短文首句和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
James Roul Feb 23, 2024, 10: 56 AM
Hey Li Hua,
Greeting from Australia! I hope everything is going well on your side.
My parents will be sent to work in China for several years and I’m going with them. Now I’m excited but a bit nervous too. My father has told me about what China was like in 2012 when he visited it. What is life in China like now How can I get on well with my classmates and teachers Can you tell me
Thanks!
James
参考词汇：Ali-pay (支付宝); Didi taxi; environment; colorful; friendly; busy
Dear James,
I’m excited to know you’ll move to China. Life here is convenient and colorful.
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I hope the information can be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear James,
I’m excited to know you’ll move to China. Life here is convenient and colorful.
Life in China nowadays is vibrant. People enjoy a high level of convenience with advanced technology. Education and healthcare are improving and people’s living standards are rising. In short, life in China is full of opportunities. In order to get on well with Chinese, you should learn the language first. Reading some novels and magazines in Chinese can help you. Chinese people are very enthusiastic. You don’t have to worry too much. Being friendly is enough.
I hope the information can be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作内容就James的顾虑作出回复，不得遗漏。
[写作步骤]
第一步，概括说明在中国生活的特点；
第二步，详细阐述中国现在的发展情况，以及如何学好中文，如何与同学相处等；
第三步，借用材料已给内容简单结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①vibrant 生气勃勃的；充满活力的
②in short 简而言之
③be full of 充满
④get on well with 与……相处融洽
[高分句型]
①Education and healthcare are improving and people’s living standards are rising. （并列复合句）
②I hope the information can be helpful.（宾语从句）
8.（2024·浙江省宁波市南三县·中考一模）初中生活即将结束，你一定参加过各种伴随着你成长的社团，如篮球队、合唱团等。请以“My Favorite Club at School”为题，写一篇英文短文，向校刊的School Life栏目投稿，介绍你最喜欢的社团。
注意：(1) 短文必须包括思维导图中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3) 词数：100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in.
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in. There are the Robot Club, the Solar Power Club, the Singing Club and so on. All of them are fun and interesting. My favorite club is the Photography Club because I love taking photos very much.
In the club, the teacher told us how to take photos better. We often went out to practise our skills. And we showed our photos in the club. I made lots of friends in the club and I also became better at taking photos. It is interesting and exciting.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给内容介绍我最喜欢的俱乐部，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍参加的俱乐部以及最喜欢的俱乐部；
第二步，具体介绍自己经常做的活动；
第三步，介绍从俱乐部学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①take photos拍照
②make lots of friends交许多朋友
[高分句型]
①My favorite club is the Photography Club because I love taking photos very much. （because引导的原因状语从句）
②In the club, the teacher told us how to take photos better. （“疑问词+动词不定式”作宾语）
9.（2024·浙江省宁波市山海联盟·中考模拟）中国人一直为古代的四大发明感到骄傲。如今，新的四大发明——高铁、电子支付、共享单车、网上购物再次影响着人们的生活，请你写一篇英语短文，向外国友人介绍其中一项你认为最重要的新四大发明并说明理由，帮助外国友人更好地了解中国。
注意：(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等；
(2)词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Now China has once again shown its ability to change the world with its “four great new inventions”.
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【答案】例文：
Now China has once again shown its ability to change the world with its “four great new inventions”. They are high-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping. I think the most important innovation is high-speed railways. Here are my reasons:
Firstly, high-speed railways are safe. They use electronic information to monitor the on-going driving so that they can avoid some terrible things even in case of bad weather. Secondly, the services are wonderful. They use advanced technology to make passengers feel comfortable. Thirdly, they are nearly as fast as planes. The most important thing is that you don’t have to stay at the station for a long time because high-speed railways are always
on time. With high-speed railway, you can go anywhere in China now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中的要求，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“新四大发明”来引出下文中对高铁的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“更安全、服务好、速度快和准时”四方面入手，重点介绍高铁；
③第三步，书写结语。高铁有利出行。
[亮点词汇]
①so that 以便
②in case of 以防
③on time 准时
[高分句型]
①I think the most important innovation is high-speed railways.（宾语从句）
②They use electronic information to monitor the on-going driving so that they can avoid some terrible things even in case of bad weather.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
③The most important thing is that you don’t have to stay at the station for a long time because high-speed railways are always on time.（that引导的表语从句+because引导的原因状语从句）
10.（2024·浙江省宁波市山海联盟·中考一模）假定你是校英文报记者李平。你校以“Fly My English Dream”为主题的英语节在昨天结束。请你写一篇英语短文对此次活动进行报道。
内容包括：
(1)时间和地点；
(2)主要活动；
(3)同学们的反响。
注意：
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
(2)词数：80—100；标题已给出，不计入总词数。
The English Festival Takes Off at Our School
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【答案】例文
The English Festival Takes Off at Our School
Yesterday afternoon, the English festival themed “Fly My English Dream” was held in the school hall.
The English festival was mainly made up of three parts. It began with a wonderful opening. Next, great performances like singing English songs, lively dancing, gifted instruments playing won the praise and laughter again and again. At last, a fantastic English speech contest was held. Their excellent spoken English and amazing performances set good examples to all of us.
Through the English festival, all of students had a great time. At the same time, it lit the interests and passions of learning English. They promised to make great efforts to learn English better in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动时间和地点；
第二步，介绍主要活动内容；
第三步，分享同学们的反响。
[亮点词汇]
①be made up of由……组成
②set examples to sb为某人树立了榜样
[高分句型]
At the same time, it lit the interests and passions of learning English.（并列结构）
11.（2024·浙江省宁波市·中考一模）良好的时间管理能力能够帮助我们更好地规划生活，使我们的时间得到充分利用，提高学习效率。但现在很多同学无法高效管理时间以致影响了学习。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈自己的看法。内容提示：
Manage your time well
A task that you failed to finish
Reasons and results
Your suggestions: 1) keep away from... 2)...
注意：(1)短文必须包含思维导图中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3)词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, many students can’t make good use of their time, and this has a bad influence on their studies.
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【答案】例文
Nowadays, many students can’t make good use of their time, and this has a bad influence on their studies.
Last summer vacation, my Chinese teacher asked us to read some classics. I planned to read one book every week. However, I spent too much time chatting with my classmates on WeChat. Then, I had to stay up late to do the task on the last day. But I couldn’t finish it and was punished by the teacher.
I learned my lesson that day and spent the whole night thinking about it. To manage my time well, I should keep away from my phone so that I can put all my efforts into my tasks. I should also make a good study plan and
follow it strictly.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作内容包括：自己未能管理好时间的经历和从中学到的教训；经历部分时态是一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，叙述自己时间管理失败的经历；
第二步，表达学到的教训，提出具体建议。
[亮点词汇]
① spend time doing sth花时间做某事
② stay up late熬夜
③ keep away from远离
[高分句型]
① But I couldn’t finish it and was punished by the teacher.（被动语态）
② I should keep away from my phone so that I can put all my efforts into my tasks. （so that引导的结果状语从句）
12.（2024·浙江省台州市·中考一模）假设你是李华，寒假期间参与了班级组织的社会实践活动。请你写一篇英语短文，向校英语报投稿，分享此次活动的经历和感受。文章包括以下内容要点：
When Saturday, February 3rd
Where Taizhou Library
What I did help organize books, make bookmarks…
How I felt a sense of pride…
注意：
（1）短文必须包括表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息；
（3）词数：80～100。标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A Day at the Library
During the winter break, I had a great time joining in a special social practice activity.
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【答案】例文
A Day at the Library
During the winter break, I had a great time joining in a special social practice activity. Our class organized a visit to Taizhou Library on Saturday, February 3rd, and it was an unforgettable experience!
First, we worked together to organize books on the library shelves. It was like solving a big puzzle, and I enjoyed every moment of it. After that, we made colorful bookmarks which would encourage people to read more books. But the most amazing part was reading stories to young kids. I could see in their eyes that they were going on a different journey with each new book.
This experience gave me a great sense of pride. Our small efforts made a big difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍寒假期间班级组织的社会实践活动，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍活动的具体内容；
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
②a great sense of pride极大的自豪感
[高分句型]
①After that, we made colorful bookmarks which would encourage people to read more books. (which引导的定语从句)
②I could see in their eyes that they were going on a different journey with each new book. (that引导的宾语从句)
13.（2024·浙江省温州外国语学校·中考一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Sam 正在调查中学生参加志愿者活动的情况，请你根据以下调查表内容，给他回复一封邮件，谈谈你做志愿者服务的一次经历以及你的收获。
◇Where did you do your volunteer work □ at the old people’s house □ in the school library □_____ ◇What did you do □help the people there □ help do the cleaning □_____ ◇What do you learn from the experience ______
注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
2. 词数：110词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
I’m happy to tell you my volunteer experience. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sam,
I’m happy to tell you my volunteer experience. Last summer, I got an opportunity to volunteer at a Children’s Home in the community. My main duty was to take care of children aged five to seven years old. They were very friendly. They showed me big smiles when they saw a bag of gifts I brought for them. I did lots of things with them. I told stories, sang songs, and taught them something I was good at. It was a wonderful day. I was happy to be able to do something for little kids.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章为第一人称，向别人介绍自己的志愿服务经历和收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出地点：在哪里做的志愿服务；
第二步，具体介绍自己做了哪些事情；
第三步，谈谈自己的感受和收获。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②be good at擅长
③be able to能够
[高分句型]
①They showed me big smiles when they saw a bag of gifts I brought for them.（时间状语从句）
②My main duty was to take care of children aged five to seven years old.（动词不定式作表语）
③I told stories, sang songs, and taught them something I was good at.（省略that的定语从句）2024年中考英语二轮复习专题- 书面表达（浙江专用）
1.（2024·浙江省初中名校发展共同体·中考模拟）假如你是李华，你的学校成立了“青春劳动社(the Youth Labor Club)”。请你就此阐述该社团设立的意义，提供相关活动建议以及理由，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
Activities Reasons
●offer classes. ●organize competitions. ●... learn by doing colorful ...
注意：
(1)短文中至少包含两个活动，以上表格中的活动仅供参考。
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
(3)词数：100词左右：开头已给出，不计人总词数。
As we all know, Labor Education has been included in the education of middle and primary schools in China._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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2.（2024·浙江省杭州观成教育集团·中考一模）初中三年即将过去，回顾这段时光，你是否有许多难忘的回忆，也有很多感慨？假定你是李华，你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件，题为“写给自己的一封信”，请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
A Letter to Myself 内容要点 参考词汇
Memories Sweet: make progress…have a great time… Bitter: make mistakes…have trouble…
Feelings positive: take pride in…thankful… Negative: regretful…
注意：
（1）文中必须包含两项内容要点，可适当发挥（参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考）；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数：80~100，稿件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
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Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
3.（2024·浙江省杭州市紫金港中学·中考一模）当前中小学生近视率居高不下，对于中小学生的近视问题，你有何看法和建议？请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，说明近视的原因并告诉大家如何保护视力。
要求：
1.包含提示中的所有要点，语言表达准确，语句通顺，可适当发挥；
2.词数80—100；
3.请勿在文中出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。

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4.（2024·浙江省湖州市·中考模拟）在人生漫漫旅途中，总会有这样一些人，他们或令你感动，或让你崇敬，或使你难忘……他们牵动我们的思维，占据内心深处的的记忆。某英文报社正在开展以“我难忘的人”为主题的征文活动。请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你难忘的人。
*Who is the person you will never forget
*What did he/she do
*What can you learn from him/her
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要求：1.征文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
3.词数：80—100 词。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
In our lives, we may meet different people The person I will never forget is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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5.（2024·浙江省湖州市·中考一模）假如你是李华，交换生Peter即将来你校学习，他对你校的社团活动很感兴趣。请根据以下信息，用英文写一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个你参加过的社团。
提示词语: take part in , improve, benefit
提示问题: What club did you join
What did you do in the club
Why do you recommend the club
注意：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(2) 内容须包含以上内容，可适当发挥；
(3) 词数：80-100词。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school!
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.（2024·浙江省金华市·中考一模）龙承载着勇气、智慧等美好寓意，中华儿女一直以龙的传人(the descendants
of Loong)而自豪。发生在你自己或他人身上的哪件事，让你瞬间觉得我们就是龙的传人？恰逢龙年，请你以“The Spirit of Loong”为题，根据表格信息，写一篇英语短文向学校英文期刊投稿。
内容要点 写作参考
About Loong What do Chinese people think of Loong
A story What you do or see that makes you believe you are the descendants of Loong
Your understanding Which spirit of Loong does the story show Why
注意：
（1）文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；写作参考仅提供思路；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数80~100。
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7.（2024·浙江省丽水市青田县第二中学鹤城校区·中考一模）假设你是李华，请仔细阅读你的澳大利亚笔友James的邮件，并按照要求进行回复。
注意：(1)词数80-100词左右；
文中不得出现真实的人名和班级名；
(3)短文首句和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
James Roul Feb 23, 2024, 10: 56 AM
Hey Li Hua,
Greeting from Australia! I hope everything is going well on your side.
My parents will be sent to work in China for several years and I’m going with them. Now I’m excited but a bit nervous too. My father has told me about what China was like in 2012 when he visited it. What is life in China like now How can I get on well with my classmates and teachers Can you tell me
Thanks!
James
参考词汇：Ali-pay (支付宝); Didi taxi; environment; colorful; friendly; busy
Dear James,
I’m excited to know you’ll move to China. Life here is convenient and colorful.
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I hope the information can be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
8.（2024·浙江省宁波市南三县·中考一模）初中生活即将结束，你一定参加过各种伴随着你成长的社团，如篮球队、合唱团等。请以“My Favorite Club at School”为题，写一篇英文短文，向校刊的School Life栏目投稿，介绍你最喜欢的社团。
注意：(1) 短文必须包括思维导图中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3) 词数：100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in.
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9.（2024·浙江省宁波市山海联盟·中考模拟）中国人一直为古代的四大发明感到骄傲。如今，新的四大发明——高铁、电子支付、共享单车、网上购物再次影响着人们的生活，请你写一篇英语短文，向外国友人介绍其中一项你认为最重要的新四大发明并说明理由，帮助外国友人更好地了解中国。
注意：(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等；
(2)词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Now China has once again shown its ability to change the world with its “four great new inventions”.
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10.（2024·浙江省宁波市山海联盟·中考一模）假定你是校英文报记者李平。你校以“Fly My English Dream”为主题的英语节在昨天结束。请你写一篇英语短文对此次活动进行报道。
内容包括：
(1)时间和地点；
(2)主要活动；
(3)同学们的反响。
注意：
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
(2)词数：80—100；标题已给出，不计入总词数。
The English Festival Takes Off at Our School
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11.（2024·浙江省宁波市·中考一模）良好的时间管理能力能够帮助我们更好地规划生活，使我们的时间得到充分利用，提高学习效率。但现在很多同学无法高效管理时间以致影响了学习。请你就此写一篇短文谈谈自己的看法。内容提示：
Manage your time well
A task that you failed to finish
Reasons and results
Your suggestions: 1) keep away from... 2)...
注意：(1)短文必须包含思维导图中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3)词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, many students can’t make good use of their time, and this has a bad influence on their studies.
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12.（2024·浙江省台州市·中考一模）假设你是李华，寒假期间参与了班级组织的社会实践活动。请你写一篇英语短文，向校英语报投稿，分享此次活动的经历和感受。文章包括以下内容要点：
When Saturday, February 3rd
Where Taizhou Library
What I did help organize books, make bookmarks…
How I felt a sense of pride…
注意：
（1）短文必须包括表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息；
（3）词数：80～100。标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A Day at the Library
During the winter break, I had a great time joining in a special social practice activity.
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13.（2024·浙江省温州外国语学校·中考一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Sam 正在调查中学生参加志愿者活动的情况，请你根据以下调查表内容，给他回复一封邮件，谈谈你做志愿者服务的一次经历以及你的收获。
◇Where did you do your volunteer work □ at the old people’s house □ in the school library □_____ ◇What did you do □help the people there □ help do the cleaning □_____ ◇What do you learn from the experience ______
注意： 1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
2. 词数：110词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
I’m happy to tell you my volunteer experience. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua