-2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写短文故事 讲义
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2024年高中英语写作续写短文故事的作文
阅读下面材料根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.
So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail His reply: " Because I love your stories. If you're willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this. " Encouraged by his words , I agreed to give it a try.
I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith ( 银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming My story would come straight from the horse's mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny ; and unlikely to be anyone else's choice.
What did the horse think, as he sped through the night Did he get tired Have doubts Did he want to quit I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But , like Revere's horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, " Great. Now,write it again. " I wrote it again , and again and again. When I finally finished it , the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn't win , I wouldn't care.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news._____________________________________________________
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation.
范文一
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest there came the news.
I received the news that I had won the first prize! I was so overwhelmed with joy and surprise that I almost jumped up and down. As the day progressed, finally it was time to attend the award ceremony. Stepping onto the stage, I felt extremely proud and relieved, for my persistent efforts had finally paid off. As I was awarded the prize, a person who meant a lot to me naturally came into my mind.
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation.
Seeing the prize in my hand, he congratulated me, saying, "You have won the first place! You definitely deserved it." A sense of gratitude welled up in me as I heard his uplifting words. He patted me gently on the shoulder and continued in a tender voice, "Keep on writing and you will make it." From that day on, I threw myself into writing and was determined to keep challenging myself.
范文二
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest there came the news.
I was about to forget its existence, news arrived that I had emerged victorious, claiming the top spot. Overcome with an overwhelming sense of joy and disbelief, I nearly leaped for joy. As the eagerly awaited day of the award ceremony drew near, I could barely contain my excitement. Taking center stage, a deep sense of pride and fulfillment washed over me, knowing that my unwavering dedication had culminated in this moment of triumph.
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. Upon seeing my accomplishment, his face lit up with pride as he offered his heartfelt congratulations: "You've truly earned this victory. Your hard work and dedication have paid off." His words filled me with warmth and gratitude. With a gentle pat on the shoulder and encouraging words, he implored me to continue writing, assuring me that greater successes awaited. From that moment on, I was more determined than ever to pour my heart into my writing and continually push my boundaries.
比赛过去了几周，就在我差点忘记它的存在时，传来消息说我获胜了，夺得了第一名。我被一种巨大的喜悦和怀疑所淹没，几乎跳了起来。随着期待已久的颁奖典礼日益临近，我几乎无法抑制自己的兴奋。站在舞台中央，一种深深的自豪和成就感涌上心头，因为我知道我坚定不移的奉献终于在这一刻达到了顶峰。
颁奖仪式结束后，我拿着奖品走向老师的办公室。看到我的成就，他的脸上洋溢着骄傲的光芒，向我表示衷心的祝贺：“你真的赢得了这场胜利。你的努力和奉献得到了回报。”他的话让我感到温暖和感激。他轻轻拍了拍我的肩膀，用鼓励的话语恳求我继续写作，向我保证更大的成功在等着我。从那一刻起，我更加坚定地全身心投入写作，不断突破自己的界限。
范文一与范文二：优化改写理由供参考
1.“ I was about to forget its existence”不仅传达了时间的流逝，还体现了作者的情感变化，从期待到几乎遗忘，为后文的惊喜做了铺垫。
2.用“emerged victorious”代替“won the first prize”，前者更具文学色彩，后者则较为普通。“overcome with an overwhelming sense of joy and disbelief”比“so overwhelmed with joy and surprise”更具体地描述了作者的情感状态，同时增加了不相信自己获胜的心理描写。
3.将“As day progressed, finally it was time to attend the award ceremony”调整为“As the eagerly awaited day of the award ceremony drew near”，使句子更符合英语表达习惯，同时强调了作者对颁奖典礼的期待。
4.“Taking center stage, a deep sense of pride and fulfillment washed over me”将主语放在句首，突出了作者的感受，使句子更加有力。
5.“His face lit up with pride”增加了对老师表情的描写，使读者能够更直观地感受到老师的喜悦和自豪。
6.“With a gentle pat on the shoulder and encouraging words”通过具体的动作和语言描写，展现了老师对学生的鼓励和支持。
7.“From that moment on, I was more determined than ever to pour my heart into my writing and continually push my boundaries”不仅总结了作者的决心，还呼应了文章开头的努力，使整篇文章结构完整，主题突出。
阅读下面材料根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.
So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail His reply: " Because I love your stories. If you're willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this. " Encouraged by his words , I agreed to give it a try.
I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith ( 银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming My story would come straight from the horse's mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny ; and unlikely to be anyone else's choice.
What did the horse think, as he sped through the night Did he get tired Have doubts Did he want to quit I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But , like Revere's horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, " Great. Now,write it again. " I wrote it again , and again and again. When I finally finished it , the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn't win , I wouldn't care.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news._____________________________________________________
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation.
范文一
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest there came the news.
I received the news that I had won the first prize! I was so overwhelmed with joy and surprise that I almost jumped up and down. As the day progressed, finally it was time to attend the award ceremony. Stepping onto the stage, I felt extremely proud and relieved, for my persistent efforts had finally paid off. As I was awarded the prize, a person who meant a lot to me naturally came into my mind.
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation.
Seeing the prize in my hand, he congratulated me, saying, "You have won the first place! You definitely deserved it." A sense of gratitude welled up in me as I heard his uplifting words. He patted me gently on the shoulder and continued in a tender voice, "Keep on writing and you will make it." From that day on, I threw myself into writing and was determined to keep challenging myself.
范文二
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest there came the news.
I was about to forget its existence, news arrived that I had emerged victorious, claiming the top spot. Overcome with an overwhelming sense of joy and disbelief, I nearly leaped for joy. As the eagerly awaited day of the award ceremony drew near, I could barely contain my excitement. Taking center stage, a deep sense of pride and fulfillment washed over me, knowing that my unwavering dedication had culminated in this moment of triumph.
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. Upon seeing my accomplishment, his face lit up with pride as he offered his heartfelt congratulations: "You've truly earned this victory. Your hard work and dedication have paid off." His words filled me with warmth and gratitude. With a gentle pat on the shoulder and encouraging words, he implored me to continue writing, assuring me that greater successes awaited. From that moment on, I was more determined than ever to pour my heart into my writing and continually push my boundaries.
比赛过去了几周，就在我差点忘记它的存在时，传来消息说我获胜了，夺得了第一名。我被一种巨大的喜悦和怀疑所淹没，几乎跳了起来。随着期待已久的颁奖典礼日益临近，我几乎无法抑制自己的兴奋。站在舞台中央，一种深深的自豪和成就感涌上心头，因为我知道我坚定不移的奉献终于在这一刻达到了顶峰。
颁奖仪式结束后，我拿着奖品走向老师的办公室。看到我的成就，他的脸上洋溢着骄傲的光芒，向我表示衷心的祝贺：“你真的赢得了这场胜利。你的努力和奉献得到了回报。”他的话让我感到温暖和感激。他轻轻拍了拍我的肩膀，用鼓励的话语恳求我继续写作，向我保证更大的成功在等着我。从那一刻起，我更加坚定地全身心投入写作，不断突破自己的界限。
范文一与范文二：优化改写理由供参考
1.“ I was about to forget its existence”不仅传达了时间的流逝，还体现了作者的情感变化，从期待到几乎遗忘，为后文的惊喜做了铺垫。
2.用“emerged victorious”代替“won the first prize”，前者更具文学色彩，后者则较为普通。“overcome with an overwhelming sense of joy and disbelief”比“so overwhelmed with joy and surprise”更具体地描述了作者的情感状态，同时增加了不相信自己获胜的心理描写。
3.将“As day progressed, finally it was time to attend the award ceremony”调整为“As the eagerly awaited day of the award ceremony drew near”，使句子更符合英语表达习惯，同时强调了作者对颁奖典礼的期待。
4.“Taking center stage, a deep sense of pride and fulfillment washed over me”将主语放在句首，突出了作者的感受，使句子更加有力。
5.“His face lit up with pride”增加了对老师表情的描写，使读者能够更直观地感受到老师的喜悦和自豪。
6.“With a gentle pat on the shoulder and encouraging words”通过具体的动作和语言描写，展现了老师对学生的鼓励和支持。
7.“From that moment on, I was more determined than ever to pour my heart into my writing and continually push my boundaries”不仅总结了作者的决心，还呼应了文章开头的努力，使整篇文章结构完整，主题突出。