2024届浙江省91高中联盟3月英语读后续写小超级英雄Tommy讲义
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背景：It was a cold, snowy evening.
Tommy有个梦想---拥有一个漫威超人小雕像。
Tommy给邻居遛狗挣到足够的钱。
Tommy去店里的路上差点被一个一个街头流浪的女子绊倒了。
Tommy在店里，遇到了一个老者，告诉汤姆超级英雄就在身边。
原文：
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a cold, snowy evening. Tommy was running as fast as he could, focused on nothing but his destination— the shop on the street corner. Two weeks ago, he saw figurines of Marvel superheroes on the shelves and felt he had to have one. He's been walking the neighbor's dog ever since then to earn money to realize his little dream. He was so excited and hardly noticing the world around him. Maybe that's why he tripped over the legs of a homeless woman, who was sitting on the sidewalk, her back against the wall. He murmured(低语) “sorry” and moved on to his destination.
Once he entered the shop, he went straight to the shelves with figurines. Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and many more— all of his admired heroes. With his heart pounding like crazy he reached for Spiderman.
“You like these, true believer ”
Tommy turned around. An old man was standing behind him with a wide smile on his face. “Y-yes ... Yes, they're awesome!” answered Tommy. “They're strong and fast and help other people a lot...” the boy looked at figurines in admiration. “I wish I could be a superhero too.”
“Then become one!” said the old man.
“How ” Tommy asked in surprise. “I don't have any superpowers.”
“And why would you need them ” the old man smiled. Seeing the confusion on the boy's face, he squatted(蹲下) and put his hands on Tommy's arms. “Did you know, that shopkeeper lady over there has a disabled husband She's been working hard and taking care of him for years. I've never heard a word of complaint from her. And this person—” he pointed at a redhead man, who just entered the shop. “He's a firefighter; he's saved countless lives. He never gives up, no matter how dangerous the situation seems to be.”
The old man looked Tommy in the eyes and smiled. “You don't need a superpower to be a hero for someone else. The path of a superhero starts not in the mind, not in the muscles, but in the heart.”
第一段：Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.
第二段：The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time.
文本分析：
文本简析主题语境：人与社会之个人成长
本文的聚焦于三个方面：
1.Tommy有个梦想---拥有一个漫威超人小雕像。
2.如何实现梦想？---通过给邻居遛狗挣到足够的钱。
3. 去店里的路上差点绊倒了，因为一个街头流浪的女子。（这个女子的价值在于成就Tommy 的超级英雄梦）
4. 在店里，遇到了一个睿智的老者，告诉汤姆超级英雄就在身边，如店老板娘以及消防员，激发Tommy 向他们学习，成就自己的英雄梦。
主要内容：
所给文章共七段：分成三部分
Part 1: （Para1）汤米在夜晚去商店买超人小雕像，路上差点因为一个流浪街头的女子而绊倒。
那是一个寒冷的、下着雪的夜晚。汤米拼命地跑着，一心只想着他的目的地——街角的那家商店。两周前，他在货架上看到了漫威超级英雄的雕像，觉得自己必须要一个。从那时起，他就一直在帮邻居遛狗，赚钱来实现他的小梦想。他太兴奋了，几乎没有注意到周围的世界。也许这就是他被一个无家可归的女人的腿绊倒的原因，那个女人坐在人行道上，背靠着墙。他喃喃地说 “对不起”，然后继续他的目的地。
Part2: (Para2-7) 在店里老人阐述了他的英雄观
他一进商店，就径直走向摆满小雕像的架子。绿巨人、雷神、美国队长、钢铁侠等等，都是他崇拜的英雄。他的心狂跳着，伸手去摸蜘蛛侠。
“你喜欢这些吗，忠实的信徒 ”
汤米转过身来。一位老人站在他身后，脸上挂着灿烂的笑容。“是…是的，它们太棒了!”汤米回答。“他们又壮又快，还能帮别人很多忙……”男孩钦佩地看着小雕像。“我希望我也能成为超级英雄。”
“那就变成一个吧!”老人说。
“如何 ”汤米惊讶地问。“我没有任何超能力。”
“你为什么需要它们呢 ”老人微笑着说。看到男孩脸上的困惑，他蹲下来，把手放在汤米的胳膊上。“你知道吗，那边那位女店主有个残疾丈夫 多年来，她一直努力工作，照顾他。我从未听到她说过一句抱怨的话。还有这个人，”他指着一个刚走进店里的红头发男人。“他是一名消防员;他拯救了无数人的生命。不管情况看起来有多危险，他从不放弃。”
Part3: (Para8) 超级英雄从心开始。
老人看着汤米的眼睛，笑了。“你不需要有超级能力才能成为别人心目中的英雄。超级英雄的道路不是从头脑开始，不是从肌肉开始，而是从内心开始。
文本特点
情节真实：
情节一：老人的离开无声无息，Tommy的寻觅
“So I am supposed to ...” he stopped mid-sentence when he realized that he was alone. He turned his head left and right, but the old man was nowhere to be seen.
这个场景有些学生觉得突兀，不可理解，老人怎么就突然消失了，但请还原自己的生活场景：你在超市里买东西，遇到一个人和你说两句结束了，然后他会等你继续回应吗？不会，他会转身就走了，本来就是买东西的，随便和你搭两句而已。换成我自己也这样，毕竟你我就是路人甲。
情节二：帮助流浪者的默默无声，对方简单的感谢回应
Tommy came closer and carefully gave the woman his buys. Her eyes opened wide in surprise, then filled with tears. “Thank you,” she whispered. Tommy bowed his head, turned around and went back home.
很多学生写小男孩去给流浪汉时，写大量的对话。而实际上，在我们的现实生活中，我们基本就是把东西放在对方手中或碗中，然后就走了，根本就不说一句话，对方会点头表示感激，偶尔会说：谢谢。
情感真实：
情感一：依依不舍的纠结，下定决心的割爱
Tommy sighed heavily -he already had an idea of what he should do. He looked at figurines for the last time and moved towards the counter. “Two sandwiches and a cup of tea please," he said.
我问学生，能不能写他看也不看漫威的玩具就买东西给老夫人？这样不是更加凸显人物的高大吗？学生说，不如这个真实。
这就对了！小孩子在把自己喜欢的玩具给别人，你要知道有多难？这才是儿童的本性啊。任何人在做出不利于自己的选择前，都要经过一番纠结的。
情感二：激动地跑，大口地呼吸，幸福地微笑
He was moving faster and faster and finally he started to run. Strange energy filling his body made him feel like he could fly. When he finally stopped, he was breathing heavily, but he didn't feel tired. He smiled happily - it was a wonderful feeling. And nothing could stop it.
小男孩，给一个流浪的老夫人买了东西送给她后，会说很多话吗？老夫人会说很多感谢话吗？如果你的答案是肯定的，那只有一个可能：你真的很少做过这种善事。实际上，多是把东西放下，然后默默走开。具体到个例，转身后，会大步走开，因为这是他第一次做好事，反而很紧张，还有一些尴尬，于是加快脚步，到了一个无人的地方停下来，回想刚才的一幕，开心地笑了。毕竟，迈开了做好事地第一步。做好事是很不容易的，需要克服很多心理障碍的，尤其对于内向的人来说。
官方范文：
Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely. Finally, he raised his head. “So I am supposed to ...” he stopped mid-sentence when he realized that he was alone. He turned his head left and right, but the old man was nowhere to be seen. Tommy sighed heavily -he already had an idea of what he should do. He looked at figurines for the last time and moved towards the counter. “Two sandwiches and a cup of tea please," he said.
The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time. Tommy came closer and carefully gave the woman his buys. Her eyes opened wide in surprise, then filled with tears. “Thank you,” she whispered. Tommy bowed his head, turned around and went back home. He was moving faster and faster and finally he started to run. Strange energy filling his body made him feel like he could fly. When he finally stopped, he was breathing heavily, but he didn't feel tired. He smiled happily - it was a wonderful feeling. And nothing could stop it.
Tommy有个梦想---拥有一个漫威超人小雕像。
Tommy给邻居遛狗挣到足够的钱。
Tommy去店里的路上差点被一个一个街头流浪的女子绊倒了。
Tommy在店里，遇到了一个老者，告诉汤姆超级英雄就在身边。
原文：
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a cold, snowy evening. Tommy was running as fast as he could, focused on nothing but his destination— the shop on the street corner. Two weeks ago, he saw figurines of Marvel superheroes on the shelves and felt he had to have one. He's been walking the neighbor's dog ever since then to earn money to realize his little dream. He was so excited and hardly noticing the world around him. Maybe that's why he tripped over the legs of a homeless woman, who was sitting on the sidewalk, her back against the wall. He murmured(低语) “sorry” and moved on to his destination.
Once he entered the shop, he went straight to the shelves with figurines. Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and many more— all of his admired heroes. With his heart pounding like crazy he reached for Spiderman.
“You like these, true believer ”
Tommy turned around. An old man was standing behind him with a wide smile on his face. “Y-yes ... Yes, they're awesome!” answered Tommy. “They're strong and fast and help other people a lot...” the boy looked at figurines in admiration. “I wish I could be a superhero too.”
“Then become one!” said the old man.
“How ” Tommy asked in surprise. “I don't have any superpowers.”
“And why would you need them ” the old man smiled. Seeing the confusion on the boy's face, he squatted(蹲下) and put his hands on Tommy's arms. “Did you know, that shopkeeper lady over there has a disabled husband She's been working hard and taking care of him for years. I've never heard a word of complaint from her. And this person—” he pointed at a redhead man, who just entered the shop. “He's a firefighter; he's saved countless lives. He never gives up, no matter how dangerous the situation seems to be.”
The old man looked Tommy in the eyes and smiled. “You don't need a superpower to be a hero for someone else. The path of a superhero starts not in the mind, not in the muscles, but in the heart.”
第一段：Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.
第二段：The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time.
文本分析：
文本简析主题语境：人与社会之个人成长
本文的聚焦于三个方面：
1.Tommy有个梦想---拥有一个漫威超人小雕像。
2.如何实现梦想？---通过给邻居遛狗挣到足够的钱。
3. 去店里的路上差点绊倒了，因为一个街头流浪的女子。（这个女子的价值在于成就Tommy 的超级英雄梦）
4. 在店里，遇到了一个睿智的老者，告诉汤姆超级英雄就在身边，如店老板娘以及消防员，激发Tommy 向他们学习，成就自己的英雄梦。
主要内容：
所给文章共七段：分成三部分
Part 1: （Para1）汤米在夜晚去商店买超人小雕像，路上差点因为一个流浪街头的女子而绊倒。
那是一个寒冷的、下着雪的夜晚。汤米拼命地跑着，一心只想着他的目的地——街角的那家商店。两周前，他在货架上看到了漫威超级英雄的雕像，觉得自己必须要一个。从那时起，他就一直在帮邻居遛狗，赚钱来实现他的小梦想。他太兴奋了，几乎没有注意到周围的世界。也许这就是他被一个无家可归的女人的腿绊倒的原因，那个女人坐在人行道上，背靠着墙。他喃喃地说 “对不起”，然后继续他的目的地。
Part2: (Para2-7) 在店里老人阐述了他的英雄观
他一进商店，就径直走向摆满小雕像的架子。绿巨人、雷神、美国队长、钢铁侠等等，都是他崇拜的英雄。他的心狂跳着，伸手去摸蜘蛛侠。
“你喜欢这些吗，忠实的信徒 ”
汤米转过身来。一位老人站在他身后，脸上挂着灿烂的笑容。“是…是的，它们太棒了!”汤米回答。“他们又壮又快，还能帮别人很多忙……”男孩钦佩地看着小雕像。“我希望我也能成为超级英雄。”
“那就变成一个吧!”老人说。
“如何 ”汤米惊讶地问。“我没有任何超能力。”
“你为什么需要它们呢 ”老人微笑着说。看到男孩脸上的困惑，他蹲下来，把手放在汤米的胳膊上。“你知道吗，那边那位女店主有个残疾丈夫 多年来，她一直努力工作，照顾他。我从未听到她说过一句抱怨的话。还有这个人，”他指着一个刚走进店里的红头发男人。“他是一名消防员;他拯救了无数人的生命。不管情况看起来有多危险，他从不放弃。”
Part3: (Para8) 超级英雄从心开始。
老人看着汤米的眼睛，笑了。“你不需要有超级能力才能成为别人心目中的英雄。超级英雄的道路不是从头脑开始，不是从肌肉开始，而是从内心开始。
文本特点
情节真实：
情节一：老人的离开无声无息，Tommy的寻觅
“So I am supposed to ...” he stopped mid-sentence when he realized that he was alone. He turned his head left and right, but the old man was nowhere to be seen.
这个场景有些学生觉得突兀，不可理解，老人怎么就突然消失了，但请还原自己的生活场景：你在超市里买东西，遇到一个人和你说两句结束了，然后他会等你继续回应吗？不会，他会转身就走了，本来就是买东西的，随便和你搭两句而已。换成我自己也这样，毕竟你我就是路人甲。
情节二：帮助流浪者的默默无声，对方简单的感谢回应
Tommy came closer and carefully gave the woman his buys. Her eyes opened wide in surprise, then filled with tears. “Thank you,” she whispered. Tommy bowed his head, turned around and went back home.
很多学生写小男孩去给流浪汉时，写大量的对话。而实际上，在我们的现实生活中，我们基本就是把东西放在对方手中或碗中，然后就走了，根本就不说一句话，对方会点头表示感激，偶尔会说：谢谢。
情感真实：
情感一：依依不舍的纠结，下定决心的割爱
Tommy sighed heavily -he already had an idea of what he should do. He looked at figurines for the last time and moved towards the counter. “Two sandwiches and a cup of tea please," he said.
我问学生，能不能写他看也不看漫威的玩具就买东西给老夫人？这样不是更加凸显人物的高大吗？学生说，不如这个真实。
这就对了！小孩子在把自己喜欢的玩具给别人，你要知道有多难？这才是儿童的本性啊。任何人在做出不利于自己的选择前，都要经过一番纠结的。
情感二：激动地跑，大口地呼吸，幸福地微笑
He was moving faster and faster and finally he started to run. Strange energy filling his body made him feel like he could fly. When he finally stopped, he was breathing heavily, but he didn't feel tired. He smiled happily - it was a wonderful feeling. And nothing could stop it.
小男孩，给一个流浪的老夫人买了东西送给她后，会说很多话吗？老夫人会说很多感谢话吗？如果你的答案是肯定的，那只有一个可能：你真的很少做过这种善事。实际上，多是把东西放下，然后默默走开。具体到个例，转身后，会大步走开，因为这是他第一次做好事，反而很紧张，还有一些尴尬，于是加快脚步，到了一个无人的地方停下来，回想刚才的一幕，开心地笑了。毕竟，迈开了做好事地第一步。做好事是很不容易的，需要克服很多心理障碍的，尤其对于内向的人来说。
官方范文：
Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely. Finally, he raised his head. “So I am supposed to ...” he stopped mid-sentence when he realized that he was alone. He turned his head left and right, but the old man was nowhere to be seen. Tommy sighed heavily -he already had an idea of what he should do. He looked at figurines for the last time and moved towards the counter. “Two sandwiches and a cup of tea please," he said.
The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time. Tommy came closer and carefully gave the woman his buys. Her eyes opened wide in surprise, then filled with tears. “Thank you,” she whispered. Tommy bowed his head, turned around and went back home. He was moving faster and faster and finally he started to run. Strange energy filling his body made him feel like he could fly. When he finally stopped, he was breathing heavily, but he didn't feel tired. He smiled happily - it was a wonderful feeling. And nothing could stop it.