2024届浙江省宁波“十校”续写《流浪神狗求收养》学案（含答案）

2024.3宁十校二模续写《流浪神狗求收养》学案
Para1:Rufus ran down Kumquat Street to look for Janie.①狗找主人②没找到③被嘲笑④继续叫着找⑤找到了
Para2:At the sight of Janie and Rufus, Mr:Johnson ran up.⑥父亲责备⑦女儿解释⑧父亲道歉⑨狗回应10和睦同居
Para1:Rufus ran down Kumquat Street to look for Janie. Rufus沿着街跑去找Janie。 【场景1： 】（“顺”狗狗神技能） ①He _ up his ears for the familiar sounds of Janie's skates. He _ /_ the air for her special scent. He the playgrounds for her red helmet and bright clothes. 他竖起耳朵倾听Janie溜冰鞋发出的熟悉的声音。他用鼻子嗅着空气中她特有的气味。他扫视着操场，寻找她的红色头盔和鲜艳的衣服。 ②But he didn’t hear, see, or smell her anywhere. Rufus started barking as loud as he could. “Wob-wow! Wob-wow! Fra-fra-fra! Krab-krab!”但他既没有听到，也没有看到，也没有闻到她的气味。Rufus开始尽可能大声地叫。 【场景2： 】（“顺”叫声被群嘲） ③A squirrel chattered/ giggled in a tree, “I can’t stand the weird/ peculiar noise anymore!” “You don't even sound like a dog!”, annoyedly meowed a cat. 一只松鼠在树上咯咯地笑着说:“我再也受不了这种奇怪的声音了!“你的声音根本不像狗!”一只猫烦躁地叫道。 ④Rusfus ignored them all and kept on barking, his voice _ through the neighborhood/ the neighborhood brimming with his anxious barking. Rufus不理睬他们，继续吠叫，他的声音在邻居中回荡，充满了焦虑的吠声。 【场景3： 】(围绕核心矛盾，解决Janie迷路问题) ⑤Suddenly, as if by magic, Janie skated into view. “Oh, Rufus! I knew I'd find my way by your bark!” exclaimed Janie.突然，像变魔术一样，Janie滑进了人们的视野。“哦,Rufus!我知道我会在你的叫声中找到方向!Janie叫道。 Para2:At the sight of Janie and Rufus, Mr:Johnson ran up.看到Janie和Rufus，Mr. Johnson跑了上来。【场景4： 】（“顺”父亲担忧女儿，“反”坏叫声为好叫声，解决叫声的问题1——证明叫声的好处） ⑥“Janie,” he called out, the voice tinged with slight complaint and relief/carrying a note of both warning and relief. “Where on earth have you been (We were about to start supper without you.)” 他叫道，“Janie，"声音里带着轻微的抱怨和宽慰，带着警告和宽慰的语气。“你到底到哪儿去了 ”(我们正准备不等你就开始吃晚饭呢。)” ⑦Janie, slightly out of breath / _ for breath, explained, “I took wrong turn and got lost, Daddy! All of a sudden, I heard Rufus's exceptional bark. Following his unique sound led me right back home.” Janie有点上气不接下气地解释说:“爸爸，我拐错了弯，迷路了!突然，我听到了Rufus与众不同的吠叫。跟着他独特的声音，我径直回到了家。” 【场景5： 】（“反”父亲自大与坏脾气，解决叫声的问题2——父亲道歉） ⑧Mr. Johnson, the bad-tempered man, the true value of Rufus's unusual bark, knelt down and extended his hand towards the dog. “Rufus, I owe you an apology,” he said. “We Johnsons didn’t get where we are today by not admitting when we’re wrong. I’d like to shake your paw and invite you to come live with us.” 坏脾气的Mr. Johnson，意识到Rufus不同寻常的吠叫的真正价值，跪下来，向狗伸出手。我应该向你道歉，”他说。“我们约翰逊家之所以能走到今天，是因为我们不承认自己的错误。我想摇一摇你的爪子，邀请你来和我们一起住。”⑨Rufus happily gave Mr. Johnson his paw and affectionately licked his cheek. “Rufus，Rufus高兴地伸出爪子，亲切地舔着Mr. Johnson的脸颊。 【场景6： 】（“顺”狗狗心愿，解决叫声的问题3——全家接纳） 10From that day on, Rufus became a beloved member of the household, catch in their yard and peacefully at the foot of Janie every day, his unique bark now of their family's story.从那天起，Rufus成为了这个家庭的一个可爱的成员，每天在他们的院子里玩接球游戏，在Janie的脚下安静地睡觉，他独特的叫声现在是他们家庭故事中珍贵的一部分。 #Speech语言描写 △咯咯地笑_ △吱吱叫_ △猫烦躁地叫道_ _ _ _ _ △他的声音在邻居中回荡，充满了焦虑的吠声（独立主格，随主句发生）_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ △Janie叫道_ _ △叫到_ _ △声音里带着轻微的抱怨和宽慰/带着警告和宽慰的语气_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ △道歉_ _ #Thought心理描写 #Environment场景描写 △奇怪的_ _ △突然，像变魔术一样， _ _ _ △解释_ _ △独特_ _ _ #Action动作描写 △竖起耳朵倾听_ _ _ _ △用鼻子嗅着空气中特有气味_ _ _ _ _ _ △扫视着操场寻找_ _ _ _ △有点上气不接下气地_ _ _ _ △爪子_ △亲切地舔着他的脸颊_ _ _ _ #Liftup主题升华 △意识到...的真正价值 _ _ _ △珍贵的一部分_ _ _ _
2024.3宁十校二模续写《流浪神狗求收养》 教师版
Para1:Rufus ran down Kumquat Street to look for Janie.①狗找主人②没找到③被嘲笑④继续叫着找⑤找到了
Para2:At the sight of Janie and Rufus, Mr:Johnson ran up.⑥父亲责备⑦女儿解释⑧父亲道歉⑨狗回应10和睦同居
Para1:Rufus ran down Kumquat Street to look for Janie. Rufus沿着街跑去找Janie。 【场景1：狗狗找主人】（“顺”狗狗神技能） ①He pricked up his ears for the familiar sounds of Janie's skates. He nosed/sniffed the air for her special scent. He scanned the playgrounds for her red helmet and bright clothes. 他竖起耳朵倾听Janie溜冰鞋发出的熟悉的声音。他用鼻子嗅着空气中她特有的气味。他扫视着操场，寻找她的红色头盔和鲜艳的衣服。 ②But he didn’t hear, see, or smell her anywhere. Rufus started barking as loud as he could. “Wob-wow! Wob-wow! Fra-fra-fra! Krab-krab!”但他既没有听到，也没有看到，也没有闻到她的气味。Rufus开始尽可能大声地叫。 【场景2：被人嘲笑】（“顺”叫声被群嘲） ③A squirrel chattered/ giggled in a tree, “I can’t stand the weird/ peculiar noise anymore!” “You don't even sound like a dog!”, annoyedly meowed a cat. 一只松鼠在树上咯咯地笑着说:“我再也受不了这种奇怪的声音了!“你的声音根本不像狗!”一只猫烦躁地叫道。 ④Rusfus ignored them all and kept on barking, his voice echoing through the neighborhood/ the neighborhood brimming with his anxious barking. Rufus不理睬他们，继续吠叫，他的声音在邻居中回荡，充满了焦虑的吠声。 【场景3：闪亮登场】(围绕核心矛盾，解决Janie迷路问题) ⑤Suddenly, as if by magic, Janie skated into view. “Oh, Rufus! I knew I'd find my way by your bark!” exclaimed Janie.突然，像变魔术一样，Janie滑进了人们的视野。“哦,Rufus!我知道我会在你的叫声中找到方向!Janie叫道。 Para2:At the sight of Janie and Rufus, Mr:Johnson ran up.看到Janie和Rufus，Mr. Johnson跑了上来。【场景4：责备与解释】（“顺”父亲担忧女儿，“反”坏叫声为好叫声，解决叫声的问题1——证明叫声的好处） ⑥“Janie,” he called out, the voice tinged with slight complaint and relief/carrying a note of both warning and relief. “Where on earth have you been (We were about to start supper without you.)” 他叫道，“Janie，"声音里带着轻微的抱怨和宽慰，带着警告和宽慰的语气。“你到底到哪儿去了 ”(我们正准备不等你就开始吃晚饭呢。)” ⑦Janie, slightly out of breath / puffing for breath, explained, “I took wrong turn and got lost, Daddy! All of a sudden, I heard Rufus's exceptional bark. Following his unique sound led me right back home.” Janie有点上气不接下气地解释说:“爸爸，我拐错了弯，迷路了!突然，我听到了Rufus与众不同的吠叫。跟着他独特的声音，我径直回到了家。” 【场景5：认错并接纳】（“反”父亲自大与坏脾气，解决叫声的问题2——父亲道歉） ⑧Mr. Johnson, the bad-tempered man, realizing the true value of Rufus's unusual bark, knelt down and extended his hand towards the dog. “Rufus, I owe you an apology,” he said. “We Johnsons didn’t get where we are today by not admitting when we’re wrong. I’d like to shake your paw and invite you to come live with us.” 坏脾气的Mr. Johnson，意识到Rufus不同寻常的吠叫的真正价值，跪下来，向狗伸出手。我应该向你道歉，”他说。“我们约翰逊家之所以能走到今天，是因为我们不承认自己的错误。我想摇一摇你的爪子，邀请你来和我们一起住。”⑨Rufus happily gave Mr. Johnson his paw and affectionately licked his cheek. “Rufus，Rufus高兴地伸出爪子，亲切地舔着Mr. Johnson的脸颊。 【场景6：狗狗融入家庭】（“顺”狗狗心愿，解决叫声的问题3——全家接纳） 10From that day on, Rufus became a beloved member of the household, playing catch in their yard and sleeping peacefully at the foot of Janie every day, his unique bark now a cherished part of their family's story.从那天起，Rufus成为了这个家庭的一个可爱的成员，每天在他们的院子里玩接球游戏，在Janie的脚下安静地睡觉，他独特的叫声现在是他们家庭故事中珍贵的一部分。 #Speech语言描写 △咯咯地笑giggled △吱吱叫chattered △猫烦躁地叫道annoyedly meowed a cat △他的声音在邻居中回荡，充满了焦虑的吠声（独立主格，随主句发生）his voice echoing through the neighborhood/ the neighborhood brimming with his anxious barking. △Janie叫道exclaimed Janie △叫到called out △声音里带着轻微的抱怨和宽慰/带着警告和宽慰的语气the voice tinged with slight complaint and relief/carrying a note of both warning and relief. △道歉I owe you an apology #Thought心理描写 #Environment场景描写 △奇怪的weird/ peculiar △突然，像变魔术一样，Suddenly, as if by magic, △解释explain △独特exceptional,unique,unusual #Action动作描写 △竖起耳朵倾听pricked up his ears for △用鼻子嗅着空气中特有气味nosed/sniffed the air for her special scent △扫视着操场寻找scanned the playgrounds for △有点上气不接下气地slightly out of breath / puffing for breath △爪子paw △亲切地舔着他的脸颊affectionately licked his cheek #Liftup主题升华 △意识到...的真正价值realizing the true value of △珍贵的一部分a cherished part