2024.温二模续写《机器人替社恐主人演讲》学案
Para1:The much-anticipated presentation started.①Tom在后台通过电脑操作机器人②状态动作+演讲中没有任何口头禅③观众印象深刻+掌声④机器人邀请Tom上台⑤观众困惑
Para2: Tom walked onto the stage, looking exactly the same as the presenter.⑥自信,Tom解惑⑦观众很震惊
⑧Tom收尾,感谢团队⑨同事鼓掌,老板赞赏10 Tom成长
Para1:The much-anticipated presentation started. 第一段:备受期待的演讲开始了。 【场景1: + 】 ①Rolling up his sleeves, Tom threw himself heart and soul in controlling his new invention— a man-like robot—to deliver the speech on his behalf. 汤姆卷起袖子,全身心地投入到控制他新发明的机器人——一个类似人类机器人——代表他发表演讲。 ②The presenter, _____ its lifelike gestures and calm and gentle movement/ demeanor/ manner/ behavior, introduced the innovative/groundbreaking work undertaken by Reality Robotics Company. 主讲人用栩栩如生的手势和平静温柔的动作/举止/态度/行为,介绍了Reality Robotics公司所做的创新/突破性工作。 ③Gone was /There was no uttering of “what I really meant to say was”. 不再有“我真正想说的是”这样的言辞。 【场景2: 】 ④_____ had its voice faded away _____ enormous applause erupted from the deeply impressed audience.它的声音还没散去,听众们就发出了热烈的掌声。 ⑤“Now, I invite my creator, Tom, to join me on stage.” “CREATOR ” Confused and puzzled, the audience scanned the stage and beyond, as if looking for the truth.“现在,我邀请我的创造者汤姆和我一起上台。”“创造者 ”出于困惑和不解,观众们扫视着舞台内外,仿佛在寻找真相。 Para2: Tom walked onto the stage, looking exactly the same as the presenter. 第二段:汤姆走上了舞台,看起来和演讲者一模一样。 【场景3: 】⑥Fueled/Inspired by the intense reaction, Tom gathered his courage to speak, his voice tinged with increasing confidence/ brimming with confidence, “Ladies and gentlemen, what you have just witnessed is the demonstration/embodiment of our company’s most advanced technology — a man-like robot capable of flawless communication.”受到强烈反响的鼓舞,汤姆鼓起勇气说话了,他的声音里充满了自信:“女士们,先生们,你们刚才看到的是我们公司最先进技术的展示——一个能完美沟通的人形机器人。” 【场景2: 】⑦Hearing the stunning truth, the audience was consumed by noise and astonishment. 听到这惊人的真相,听众被喧闹声和惊愕淹没了。 【场景4: 】⑧Tom continued, “And I want to thank my teammates for tireless efforts and supports, without _____ I couldn’t achieve anything.” 汤姆继续说道:“我要感谢我的队友们不懈的努力和支持,没有他们,我不可能取得任何成就。” 【场景5: 】⑨His boss, beaming with pride, offered a nod of approval from the front row. 他的老板骄傲地微笑着,在前排点头表示赞同。 【主题升华/ 类】10 _____ we literally regard as a scary challenges, if faced bravely, will turn to be an unexpected opportunities for growth and success.我们认为可怕的挑战,如果勇敢地面对,就会变成意想不到的成长和成功的机会。 #Speech语言描写 没有说___________________ 声音里充满了自信_______ ____________________________ #Thought心理描写 困惑和不解_________________ 被…鼓舞__________________ 鼓起勇气做_________________ 听众被喧闹声和惊愕淹没了 ____________________________________________________________ 骄傲地微笑着______________ #Environment场景描写 创新/突破性工作______________ 惊人的真相______________ 不懈的努力和支持______________ ____________________________ #Action动作描写 卷起袖子____________________ 全身心地投入到______________ 发表演讲_____________________ 代表他_____________________ 温柔的动作/举止/态度/行为 ____________________________________________________________________ 扫视着舞台内外______________ ____________________________ 点头表示赞同__________________ ____________________________ #Liftup主题升华(同最后一句)
温二模续写《机器人替社恐主人演讲》教师版
Para1:The much-anticipated presentation started.①Tom在后台通过电脑操作机器人②状态动作+演讲中没有任何口头禅③观众印象深刻+掌声④机器人邀请Tom上台⑤观众困惑
Para2: Tom walked onto the stage, looking exactly the same as the presenter.⑥自信,Tom解惑⑦观众很震惊
⑧Tom收尾,感谢团队⑨同事鼓掌,老板赞赏10 Tom成长
Para1:The much-anticipated presentation started. 第一段:备受期待的演讲开始了。 【场景1:认真做事+完美舞台表演】 ①Rolling up his sleeves, Tom threw himself heart and soul in controlling his new invention— a man-like robot—to deliver the speech on his behalf. 汤姆卷起袖子,全身心地投入到控制他新发明的机器人——一个类似人类机器人——代表他发表演讲。 ②The presenter, with its lifelike gestures and calm and gentle movement/ demeanor/ manner/ behavior, introduced the innovative/groundbreaking work undertaken by Reality Robotics Company. 主讲人用栩栩如生的手势和平静温柔的动作/举止/态度/行为,介绍了Reality Robotics公司所做的创新/突破性工作。 ③Gone was /There was no uttering of “what I really meant to say was”. 不再有“我真正想说的是”这样的言辞。 【场景2:观众反响很好/观众困惑】 ④Hardly had its voice faded away when enormous applause erupted from the deeply impressed audience.它的声音还没散去,听众们就发出了热烈的掌声。 ⑤“Now, I invite my creator, Tom, to join me on stage.” “CREATOR ” Confused and puzzled, the audience scanned the stage and beyond, as if looking for the truth.“现在,我邀请我的创造者汤姆和我一起上台。”“创造者 ”出于困惑和不解,观众们扫视着舞台内外,仿佛在寻找真相。 Para2: Tom walked onto the stage, looking exactly the same as the presenter. 第二段:汤姆走上了舞台,看起来和演讲者一模一样。 【场景3:自信表演】⑥Fueled/Inspired by the intense reaction, Tom gathered his courage to speak, his voice tinged with increasing confidence/ brimming with confidence, “Ladies and gentlemen, what you have just witnessed is the demonstration/embodiment of our company’s most advanced technology — a man-like robot capable of flawless communication.”受到强烈反响的鼓舞,汤姆鼓起勇气说话了,他的声音里充满了自信:“女士们,先生们,你们刚才看到的是我们公司最先进技术的展示——一个能完美沟通的人形机器人。” 【场景2:观众反响震惊】⑦Hearing the stunning truth, the audience was consumed by noise and astonishment. 听到这惊人的真相,听众被喧闹声和惊愕淹没了。 【场景4:感恩】⑧Tom continued, “And I want to thank my teammates for tireless efforts and supports, without which I couldn’t achieve anything.” 汤姆继续说道:“我要感谢我的队友们不懈的努力和支持,没有他们,我不可能取得任何成就。” 【场景5:他人满意赞赏】⑨His boss, beaming with pride, offered a nod of approval from the front row. 他的老板骄傲地微笑着,在前排点头表示赞同。 【主题升华/转变类】⑩ What we literally regard as a scary challenges, if faced bravely, will turn to be an unexpected opportunities for growth and success.我们认为可怕的挑战,如果勇敢地面对,就会变成意想不到的成长和成功的机会。 #Speech语言描写 没有说There was no uttering of.. 声音里充满了自信his voice tinged with increasing confidence/ brimming with confidence #Thought心理描写 困惑和不解confused and puzzled 被…鼓舞be fueled/inspired by 鼓起勇气做gathered his courage to 听众被喧闹声和惊愕淹没了the audience was consumed by noise and astonishment. 骄傲地微笑着beaming with pride #Environment场景描写 创新/突破性工作the innovative/ groundbreaking work 惊人的真相the stunning truth 不懈的努力和支持tireless efforts and supports #Action动作描写 卷起袖子Rolling up his sleeves 全身心地投入到threw himself heart and soul in 发表演讲deliver the speech 代表他on his behalf 温柔的动作/举止/态度/行为gentle movement/ demeanor/ manner/ behavior 扫视着舞台内外scanned the stage and beyond 点头表示赞同offered a nod of approval #Liftup主题升华(同最后一句)