2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写讲评讲义
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
"Catch it!" My husband and I shouted, but saw the ball hit the grass near our four-year-old's feet while he continued kicking at the dirt. It was mid-season, yet he showed no interest in the ball game. We called his name and told him to pick up the ball, but he just stared blankly before going back to kicking the dirt.
As the games went on, it was clear that the coach didn't want our son to play. We practiced with him, showing him how to hold the bat and throw the ball, but he never understood running the bases or other things we tried to teach.
At the end of the season, our son once again received the “Most Improved” medal, which he had received in other sports before. My husband and I looked at each other and I said, "Well, at least he's improving," though it reminded me of other sympathetic gestures from coaches or teachers. I was used to the feeling of our son being different and unable to fit into ball games.
The same year, his preschool teacher told me, “He's not paying attention." This was not what any parent wanted to hear, but I knew it was true. As a stay-at-home mom, I was tired of having to repeat instructions to him. Initially, I wasn't sure how much of it was normal, as he was our first child. We decided to have him assessed, but it was a guessing game until he turned six, when a professional evaluation determined that he had Asperger syndrome (幼儿孤独症).
My husband always believes our son will be a good boy. Fortunately, he is blessed with good looks, intelligence, and an ability to face the future. There are no obvious signs that he has Asperger's, apart from frequent lack of eye contact.
A friend invited our son to her son's birthday party after his diagnosis (诊断), but I turned it down because it was a dirt-bike party and our six-year-old couldn't ride a regular bike.
注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We didn't go to the party, but at least it inspired us to get our son to try cycling.
The attempt was not a success, so we decided to expose him to swimming lessons.
①We didn't go to the party, but at least it inspired us to get our son to try cycling. Despite our best efforts, mastering the art of cycling proved to be a daunting task for him. His lack of coordination and difficulty in maintaining balance made it clear that traditional sports might not be his forte. However, undeterred by setbacks, we continued our quest to find an activity that would not only engage him but also nurture his talents and abilities.
The attempt was not a success, so we decided to expose him to swimming lessons. Initially, I was apprehensive about how he would fare in a new environment, given his challenges with coordination and social interaction. However, to our delight, our son took to swimming like a fish to water. His natural affinity for the sport soon became evident as he effortlessly glided through the water, displaying a grace and finesse that belied his previous struggles on land. As we watched him revel in the joy of swimming, it dawned on us that we had finally found an outlet where he could thrive and excel on his own terms.
补充：We enrolled him in swimming lessons, hoping it would be a better fit for him. Initially, he struggled to adjust to the water and follow the instructor’s directions. However, with patience and encouragement, he gradually began to improve. Unlike team sports, swimming allowed him to focus on his own progress without the pressure of competition or the need for social interaction.
As he became more comfortable in the water, we noticed a transformation in his confidence and coordination. He started to enjoy the sensation of gliding through the water and eagerly looked forward to his lessons. The repetitive nature of swimming strokes seemed to suit his temperament, and he thrived in the structured environment of the pool.（对游泳的态度转变过程）
Over time, his dedication and perseverance paid off, and he made remarkable progress in his swimming abilities. His achievements in the pool became a source of pride for both him and us, his parents. While he may not excel in traditional team sports, swimming has become his outlet for physical activity and personal growth. It’s a reminder that every child has their own strengths and interests, and it’s our job as parents to nurture and support them in discovering their passions.（升华主题，亲情通用）
翻译：随着时间的推移，他的奉献和毅力得到了回报，他在游泳能力上取得了显著的进步。他在泳池中的成就成为了他和我们作为父母的骄傲。虽然他可能不擅长传统的团队运动，但游泳已经成为他进行体育活动和个人成长的出口。这是一个提醒，每个孩子都有自己的优势和兴趣，作为父母，我们的任务是培养和支持他们发现他们的热情所在。
好词
dedication: 奉献，指对某事的投入和忠诚。
perseverance: 毅力，指面对困难时的坚持和不放弃。
remarkable: 显著的，非凡的，用来形容进步的程度。
abilities: 能力，这里特指游泳技能。
achievements: 成就，指在游泳方面取得的成绩。
source of pride: 骄傲的来源，表示游泳成为了孩子和父母自豪的事情。
excel: 擅长，表示在某个领域表现出色。
traditional: 传统的，这里指传统的团队运动。
outlet: 出口，这里比喻为表达或发泄的途径。
personal growth: 个人成长，指通过游泳获得的个人发展。
reminder: 提醒，这里用作比喻，指游泳对孩子和父母的意义。
strengths: 优势，指每个孩子各自的长处。
interests: 兴趣，指孩子个人的爱好。
nurture: 培养，指父母对孩子兴趣和长处的培养和支持。
好句
Over time, his dedication and perseverance paid off...
he made remarkable progress in his XXX abilities
His achievements in the XXX became a source of pride for both him and us, his parents
While he may not excel in traditional team sports, XXX has become his outlet for XXX and personal growth.
It’s a reminder that every child has their own strengths and interests, and it’s our job as parents to nurture and support them in discovering their passions
②(多语言描写）We decided to forgo the party, but it sparked an idea: cycling. “Let’s give it a shot,” my husband suggested optimistically. Armed with training wheels, we watched our son wobble and teeter on the bike. “You got this, champ!” I cheered, hoping to instill confidence. Despite a few spills and scraped knees, he persisted, his face a mix of concentration and determination.
Mastering cycling, however, proved to be a daunting task. “I can’t do it!” he exclaimed, frustration evident in his voice. “It’s okay, buddy, we’ll figure it out together,” my husband reassured him, patting his back. We adjusted the seat, tightened the training wheels, and tried again and again, but progress was slow, almost imperceptible.
Undeterred by our failed attempt, we turned to swimming lessons next. “Maybe water will be his element,” I mused hopefully. At the pool, our son’s eyes lit up with excitement, his eagerness palpable. With each lesson, his confidence soared as he conquered new swimming strokes and techniques. “Look at me, Mom! I’m a shark!” he exclaimed proudly, his laughter echoing through the pool.
Through the ups and downs, we learned an invaluable lesson: success comes in many forms. As our son splashed and swam with newfound confidence, we marveled at his resilience and determination. And in that moment, surrounded by the echoes of laughter and the shimmering blue of the pool, I knew that our son’s journey was just beginning, filled with endless possibilities and boundless potential.
③
We didn't go to the party, but at least it inspired us to get our son to try cycling. We believed that finding an activity he could excel in would boost his confidence and perhaps help him connect better with his peers. We bought him a small, sturdy bike and took him to a nearby park. With the sun shining and a gentle breeze in our faces, we encouraged him to pedal. At first, he was hesitant, gripping the handlebars tightly as he wobbled uncertainly. But with each turn of the wheel, he grew a little more comfortable, and by the end of the day, he was beaming with pride at his newfound skill.
The attempt was not a success, so we decided to expose him to swimming lessons. We were aware that water activities could be therapeutic and potentially beneficial for children with Asperger's. The local community center offered a program for children with special needs, and we signed him up without much optimism but with open hearts. To our surprise, he took to the water like a fish, his movements smooth and effortless. The rhythmic nature of swimming seemed to resonate with him, and he showed an immediate affinity for it. Over time, his dedication and perseverance paid off, and he made remarkable progress in his swimming abilities. His achievements in the pool became a source of pride for both him and us, his parents. While he may not excel in traditional team sports, swimming has become his outlet for physical activity and personal growth. It’s a reminder that every child has their own strengths and interests, and it’s our job as parents to nurture and support them in discovering their passions.
好词好句：
inspired: 激励，鼓舞。
excel: 擅长，超越。
confidence: 自信。
peers: 同龄人。
sturdy: 结实的，坚固的。
wobbled: 摇摆不定。
hesitant: 犹豫的。
the therapeutic: 治疗性的。
resonate: 共鸣。
affinity: 亲近感，吸引力。
perseverance: 毅力。
achievements: 成就。
outlet: 出口，途径。
personal growth: 个人成长。
strengths: 优势。
interests: 兴趣。
nurture: 培养。
"We believed that finding an activity he could excel in would boost his confidence...": 这句话表达了父母对孩子自信心的关心和支持。
"...and by the end of the day, he was beaming with pride at his newfound skill.": 使用了现在分词作状语，描述了孩子学会新技能后的自豪感。
"The rhythmic nature of swimming seemed to resonate with him...": 使用了"seemed to resonate"来形象地描述游泳对孩子有特别的吸引力。
"Over time, his dedication and perseverance paid off...": 这句话强调了时间的流逝和孩子的坚持最终带来了成果。
"His achievements in the pool became a source of pride for both him and us, his parents.": 使用了"became a source of pride"来表达游泳成就对孩子和父母的重要性。
"While he may not excel in traditional team sports, swimming has become his outlet for physical activity and personal growth.": 使用了"while"来对比孩子在团队运动和游泳方面的差异，同时强调了游泳对他个人成长的重要性。
"It’s a reminder that every child has their own strengths and interests...": 使用了"It’s a reminder"来总结前文，强调每个孩子都是独一无二的，并提出了父母的角色和责任。
"Catch it!" My husband and I shouted, but saw the ball hit the grass near our four-year-old's feet while he continued kicking at the dirt. It was mid-season, yet he showed no interest in the ball game. We called his name and told him to pick up the ball, but he just stared blankly before going back to kicking the dirt.
As the games went on, it was clear that the coach didn't want our son to play. We practiced with him, showing him how to hold the bat and throw the ball, but he never understood running the bases or other things we tried to teach.
At the end of the season, our son once again received the “Most Improved” medal, which he had received in other sports before. My husband and I looked at each other and I said, "Well, at least he's improving," though it reminded me of other sympathetic gestures from coaches or teachers. I was used to the feeling of our son being different and unable to fit into ball games.
The same year, his preschool teacher told me, “He's not paying attention." This was not what any parent wanted to hear, but I knew it was true. As a stay-at-home mom, I was tired of having to repeat instructions to him. Initially, I wasn't sure how much of it was normal, as he was our first child. We decided to have him assessed, but it was a guessing game until he turned six, when a professional evaluation determined that he had Asperger syndrome (幼儿孤独症).
My husband always believes our son will be a good boy. Fortunately, he is blessed with good looks, intelligence, and an ability to face the future. There are no obvious signs that he has Asperger's, apart from frequent lack of eye contact.
A friend invited our son to her son's birthday party after his diagnosis (诊断), but I turned it down because it was a dirt-bike party and our six-year-old couldn't ride a regular bike.
注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We didn't go to the party, but at least it inspired us to get our son to try cycling.
The attempt was not a success, so we decided to expose him to swimming lessons.
①We didn't go to the party, but at least it inspired us to get our son to try cycling. Despite our best efforts, mastering the art of cycling proved to be a daunting task for him. His lack of coordination and difficulty in maintaining balance made it clear that traditional sports might not be his forte. However, undeterred by setbacks, we continued our quest to find an activity that would not only engage him but also nurture his talents and abilities.
The attempt was not a success, so we decided to expose him to swimming lessons. Initially, I was apprehensive about how he would fare in a new environment, given his challenges with coordination and social interaction. However, to our delight, our son took to swimming like a fish to water. His natural affinity for the sport soon became evident as he effortlessly glided through the water, displaying a grace and finesse that belied his previous struggles on land. As we watched him revel in the joy of swimming, it dawned on us that we had finally found an outlet where he could thrive and excel on his own terms.
补充：We enrolled him in swimming lessons, hoping it would be a better fit for him. Initially, he struggled to adjust to the water and follow the instructor’s directions. However, with patience and encouragement, he gradually began to improve. Unlike team sports, swimming allowed him to focus on his own progress without the pressure of competition or the need for social interaction.
As he became more comfortable in the water, we noticed a transformation in his confidence and coordination. He started to enjoy the sensation of gliding through the water and eagerly looked forward to his lessons. The repetitive nature of swimming strokes seemed to suit his temperament, and he thrived in the structured environment of the pool.（对游泳的态度转变过程）
Over time, his dedication and perseverance paid off, and he made remarkable progress in his swimming abilities. His achievements in the pool became a source of pride for both him and us, his parents. While he may not excel in traditional team sports, swimming has become his outlet for physical activity and personal growth. It’s a reminder that every child has their own strengths and interests, and it’s our job as parents to nurture and support them in discovering their passions.（升华主题，亲情通用）
翻译：随着时间的推移，他的奉献和毅力得到了回报，他在游泳能力上取得了显著的进步。他在泳池中的成就成为了他和我们作为父母的骄傲。虽然他可能不擅长传统的团队运动，但游泳已经成为他进行体育活动和个人成长的出口。这是一个提醒，每个孩子都有自己的优势和兴趣，作为父母，我们的任务是培养和支持他们发现他们的热情所在。
好词
dedication: 奉献，指对某事的投入和忠诚。
perseverance: 毅力，指面对困难时的坚持和不放弃。
remarkable: 显著的，非凡的，用来形容进步的程度。
abilities: 能力，这里特指游泳技能。
achievements: 成就，指在游泳方面取得的成绩。
source of pride: 骄傲的来源，表示游泳成为了孩子和父母自豪的事情。
excel: 擅长，表示在某个领域表现出色。
traditional: 传统的，这里指传统的团队运动。
outlet: 出口，这里比喻为表达或发泄的途径。
personal growth: 个人成长，指通过游泳获得的个人发展。
reminder: 提醒，这里用作比喻，指游泳对孩子和父母的意义。
strengths: 优势，指每个孩子各自的长处。
interests: 兴趣，指孩子个人的爱好。
nurture: 培养，指父母对孩子兴趣和长处的培养和支持。
好句
Over time, his dedication and perseverance paid off...
he made remarkable progress in his XXX abilities
His achievements in the XXX became a source of pride for both him and us, his parents
While he may not excel in traditional team sports, XXX has become his outlet for XXX and personal growth.
It’s a reminder that every child has their own strengths and interests, and it’s our job as parents to nurture and support them in discovering their passions
②(多语言描写）We decided to forgo the party, but it sparked an idea: cycling. “Let’s give it a shot,” my husband suggested optimistically. Armed with training wheels, we watched our son wobble and teeter on the bike. “You got this, champ!” I cheered, hoping to instill confidence. Despite a few spills and scraped knees, he persisted, his face a mix of concentration and determination.
Mastering cycling, however, proved to be a daunting task. “I can’t do it!” he exclaimed, frustration evident in his voice. “It’s okay, buddy, we’ll figure it out together,” my husband reassured him, patting his back. We adjusted the seat, tightened the training wheels, and tried again and again, but progress was slow, almost imperceptible.
Undeterred by our failed attempt, we turned to swimming lessons next. “Maybe water will be his element,” I mused hopefully. At the pool, our son’s eyes lit up with excitement, his eagerness palpable. With each lesson, his confidence soared as he conquered new swimming strokes and techniques. “Look at me, Mom! I’m a shark!” he exclaimed proudly, his laughter echoing through the pool.
Through the ups and downs, we learned an invaluable lesson: success comes in many forms. As our son splashed and swam with newfound confidence, we marveled at his resilience and determination. And in that moment, surrounded by the echoes of laughter and the shimmering blue of the pool, I knew that our son’s journey was just beginning, filled with endless possibilities and boundless potential.
③
We didn't go to the party, but at least it inspired us to get our son to try cycling. We believed that finding an activity he could excel in would boost his confidence and perhaps help him connect better with his peers. We bought him a small, sturdy bike and took him to a nearby park. With the sun shining and a gentle breeze in our faces, we encouraged him to pedal. At first, he was hesitant, gripping the handlebars tightly as he wobbled uncertainly. But with each turn of the wheel, he grew a little more comfortable, and by the end of the day, he was beaming with pride at his newfound skill.
The attempt was not a success, so we decided to expose him to swimming lessons. We were aware that water activities could be therapeutic and potentially beneficial for children with Asperger's. The local community center offered a program for children with special needs, and we signed him up without much optimism but with open hearts. To our surprise, he took to the water like a fish, his movements smooth and effortless. The rhythmic nature of swimming seemed to resonate with him, and he showed an immediate affinity for it. Over time, his dedication and perseverance paid off, and he made remarkable progress in his swimming abilities. His achievements in the pool became a source of pride for both him and us, his parents. While he may not excel in traditional team sports, swimming has become his outlet for physical activity and personal growth. It’s a reminder that every child has their own strengths and interests, and it’s our job as parents to nurture and support them in discovering their passions.
好词好句：
inspired: 激励，鼓舞。
excel: 擅长，超越。
confidence: 自信。
peers: 同龄人。
sturdy: 结实的，坚固的。
wobbled: 摇摆不定。
hesitant: 犹豫的。
the therapeutic: 治疗性的。
resonate: 共鸣。
affinity: 亲近感，吸引力。
perseverance: 毅力。
achievements: 成就。
outlet: 出口，途径。
personal growth: 个人成长。
strengths: 优势。
interests: 兴趣。
nurture: 培养。
"We believed that finding an activity he could excel in would boost his confidence...": 这句话表达了父母对孩子自信心的关心和支持。
"...and by the end of the day, he was beaming with pride at his newfound skill.": 使用了现在分词作状语，描述了孩子学会新技能后的自豪感。
"The rhythmic nature of swimming seemed to resonate with him...": 使用了"seemed to resonate"来形象地描述游泳对孩子有特别的吸引力。
"Over time, his dedication and perseverance paid off...": 这句话强调了时间的流逝和孩子的坚持最终带来了成果。
"His achievements in the pool became a source of pride for both him and us, his parents.": 使用了"became a source of pride"来表达游泳成就对孩子和父母的重要性。
"While he may not excel in traditional team sports, swimming has become his outlet for physical activity and personal growth.": 使用了"while"来对比孩子在团队运动和游泳方面的差异，同时强调了游泳对他个人成长的重要性。
"It’s a reminder that every child has their own strengths and interests...": 使用了"It’s a reminder"来总结前文，强调每个孩子都是独一无二的，并提出了父母的角色和责任。