2024年中考英语二轮复习突破 -书面表达（上海专用）（含解析）

书面表达17篇
1．（2024·上海杨浦·二模）Write a paragraph in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情境，写一段不少于60个单词的文字)
近日，由于电动自行车引发的火灾屡屡发生。今年2月23日，南京市雨花区一处住宅小区因电动自行车引发整栋楼大火，造成15人遇难。2月26日至3月4日，上海接连发生因造规停放电动自行车和在非指定地点充电引发的火灾，3名车主被拘留。 你是玫瑰花园小区 (Rose Garden Estate) 的居民张磊 (Zhang Lei)。你的小区有不少外国友人租住，他们中也有不少人是电动自行车的使用者。小区物业请你协助参与对这些外国友人的安宣传工作。任务1：撰写一份演讲稿，对他们进行安全宣传和教育。 任务2：设计一份告居民书，张贴在电梯中，起到警示告诫的作用。 请选其中的一项任务完成。
提示：
① 参考词汇： electric scooter电动自行车， non-motor vehicle park非机动车停车场，charge the battery给电瓶充电。
② 若选择任务一，请在答题纸写作部分的首行书写 Dear friends；若选择任务二，请在写作部分答题纸的首行书写To all electric scooter owners。以上内容不计入总词数。
③ 写作内容中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息。
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【答案】参考范文：
Dear Friends,
I’m Zhang Lei who lives in the Rose Garden estate. Due to the severe fires caused by inappropriate charging
and illegal parking of the electric bicycles in Nanjing and Shanghai recently, I would like to recommend you a couple of measures that can be taken to avoid the recurrence of similar events. First and foremost, parking your e-bikes in the corridor is definitely not allowed, which means that you should park them in the designated places. In addition, charging the battery of e-bikes at home is likely to result in uncontrollable fires, which is why you can only do it in the open-air areas. Moreover, it is illegal behavior for people to use the elevators with their e-bikes. If there is a fire in an elevator, people will have no chance to escape from it. Therefore, when you see people riding e-bikes into the elevator, it is necessary for you to warn them about the potential consequences. Hopefully, we can create a safe living environment.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述演讲稿的目的。
第二步，提出需要注意的内容。
第三步，最后结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
①due to因为，由于
②recommend推荐，提醒
③potential潜在的
[高分句型]
① I would like to recommend you a couple of measures that can be taken to avoid the recurrence of similar events.（that引导的定语从句，动词不定式用作目的状语）
②Therefore, when you see people riding e-bikes into the elevator, it is necessary for you to warn them about the potential consequences. （it is+adj.+to do 句型）
2．（2024·上海奉贤·二模）Write a passage in at least 60 words according to the following situation. (根据以下情境，请补全标题“ will make my summer holiday meaningful”后，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号
不占格)
中考结束后的暑假，你有机会去参加各类社会实践活动。如去当一回社区志愿者，奉献一份爱心；如来一场 citywalk，感受城市的脉搏，又如去找一份part-time job，积累工作的经验，又如…… 你最想参加哪一类社会实践活动？请陈述你的理由。

注意：
1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
Volunteering will make my summer holiday meaningful
Summer holiday is coming and I plan to do some volunteer work.
I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good. It’s also a good chance for me to improve myself. I can do many things. For example, I can help clean up the city parks. I am good at singing, so I can sing lots of songs and tell some stories for the old people at the Old People’s Home. At the same time, I can help the elderly wash their clothes. I can also hand out leaflets and put up notices.
I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要介绍自己暑期打算做什么社会实践活动，注意要点衔接自然顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍想成为志愿者的原因，具体能做的工作；
第三步，表达希望。
［亮点词汇］
①at the same time同时
②the elderly老人
③hand out分发
［高分句型］
①I am good at singing, so I can sing lots of songs and tell some stories for the old people at the Old People’s Home. （含有so的并列句）
②I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful.（宾语从句）
3．（2024·上海青浦·二模）Write at least 60 words on the given topic “Actions speak louder than words”. (根据所给题目“行动胜于空谈”写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
常言道“行动胜于空谈”，一个行动往往胜过千言万语，我们在生活与学习中需要牢记这一点。请结合你的经历或是所见所闻，谈谈你的心得感悟。
写作要点：
(1) 围绕“行动胜于空谈”的主题，讲述一则你生活中的小故事。
(2) 谈谈你对这件事的心得感悟。
注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
Actions Speak Louder than Words
As an old saying goes, actions speak louder than words. The saying shows that taking action is of great important. Here is a thing happened in my life.
When I was a middle school student, I always aspired to achieve better grades and made many plans, but never took action, so I missed the opportunity to enter a good high school. Then I gradually realized that taking action to develop a plan and putting it into practice is very important for me. It not only helps me achieve better grades, but also benefits me in my daily life.
In short, I firmly believe that setting detailed goals for the future and taking action to achieve them one by one is very important.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明行动胜于空谈的重要性，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，围绕“行动胜于空谈”的主题，讲述一则你生活中的小故事。
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①As an old saying goes正如老话所说
②is of great important……是非常重要的
③take action to do sth.采取行动做某事
④Not only…but also…不仅……而且……
⑤In short总之
[高分句型]
①The saying shows that taking action is of great important. (that引导的宾语从句)
②When I was a middle school student, I always aspired to achieve better grades and made many plans, but never took action, so I missed the opportunity to enter a good high school. (when引导的时间状语从句)
4．（2024·上海松江·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given information. (根据以下信息写一篇
不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。)
短文中的主人公Luke用日复一日的苦练和不言放弃的信念战胜了先天性疾病引发的障碍，取得了看似不可能的成功，体验到克服困难之后的喜悦。
你在生活或学习中遭遇过什么困难，请结合自身经历，谈谈你是如何克服困难，并取得了何种收获或成功。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
I used to be really shy and was afraid of speaking in public. I was always a listener every time when there was a speech contest in our school. I admired others’ confidence and was ashamed of my shyness.
To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud at home, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. My parents encouraged me and often worked as the listeners, which gave me great hope. I became more confident than I used to be. With my parents’ encouragement, I took part in an English speech contest. Imagining there was a mirror in front of me, I finished my speech fluently. With exciting tears in my eyes, I hugged my parents tightly. Teachers and other students also cheered me on.
Practice makes perfect. Believe ourselves and don’t give up, and we will win.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，开门见山说出自己曾经遇到的困难；
第二步，具体阐述为此做出的努力和改变；
第三步，表达自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去常常
②took part in参加
③give up放弃
④deal with解决
⑤practice makes perfect熟能生巧
[高分句型]
①To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud at home, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②My parents encouraged me and often worked as the listeners, which gave me great hope. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5．（2024·上海闵行·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
今年“青少年心理健康周” (Teenagers’ Mental Health Week) 活动期间，校园英文电台就同学们眼中“最合适的倾诉对象”进行了问卷调查，下图为调查结果的饼状图 (the pie chart)。请阅读下图，谈谈你对此结果的看法，并结合自身实际，说说你眼中最合适的倾诉对象及理由。
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【答案】例文：
During the “Teenagers’ Mental Health Week”, our English Radio did a questionnaire survey on the “the most suitable person to talk to” among students. The result shows that about half of the students would rather talk to friends than parents and teachers when they have problems. I think for most students, friends know them better.
However, as for me, parents are the most suitable persons to talk to. For example, when I feel stressed about my lessons and exams, I often communicate with my parents. They can give me some advice through their experiences. They can make me relaxed and have confidence in myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点包括对问卷调查结果的看法，以及结合自身实际，说明最合适的倾诉对象及理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍调查结果和对此的看法；
第二步，结合自身实际，说明最合适的倾诉对象及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①would rather ... than ... 比起……更愿意……
②as for me 至于我
③communicate with sb 和某人交谈
④through their experiences 通过他们的经历
⑤have confidence in myself 相信自己
[高分句型]
①I think for most students, friends know them better.（宾语从句）
②For example, when I feel stressed about my lessons and exams, I often communicate with my parents.（when引导时间状语从句）
6．（2024·上海虹口·二模）你所在学校的英语校报正在举行公开竞选。假如你是学生李华，请阅读竞选
职位和要求，参与其中一个职位的竞选，并完成竞选演讲稿。
演讲稿须包含以下内容：
（1）你想要参与校报工作的原因；
（2）你想竞选哪个职位，并说明理由。
Job What to do
reporter write news articles/conduct interviews
photographer take photos
editor take charge of a section
secretary arrange meetings/take notes
注意：
1.演讲稿中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
Hello, teachers and classmates! My name is Li Hua. I’m excited to share with you why I want to be a part of our school newspaper and why I want to be a reporter.
First, I love writing news articles. I think it’s fun to put my thoughts and ideas into words. Working on the
school newspaper will give me a chance to write news stories and share them with everyone.
Also, I want to be a reporter because I enjoy interviewing people and learning about their stories. As a reporter, I can talk to different students and teachers, find out interesting things, and then write about them in the newspaper.
I believe I have the skills to be a good reporter. I’m good at observing and listening, and I can ask good questions. I hope you’ll support me and give me a chance to show what I can do. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，打招呼并表明演讲目的；
第二步，讲述想要参与校报工作和竞选记者职位的原因；
第三步，介绍自己的优势，并表达想要成为记者的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
②find out找出
[高分句型]
①I’m excited to share with you why I want to be a part of our school newspaper and why I want to be a reporter.（why引导的宾语从句）
②I think it’s fun to put my thoughts and ideas into words.（省略that的宾语从句；it作形式主语）
③I want to be a reporter because I enjoy interviewing people and learning about their stories.（because引导的原因状语从句）
7．（2024·上海徐汇·二模）初中的学习即将结束。你所在的学校正在筹备毕业典礼(graduation ceremony)，部分学生将有机会在毕业典礼上演讲，演讲的主题是“我和我的校园”。假如你是Joe，请从“课程、校园文化、场馆设施”等中选择一项内容，结合自己的经历，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的感受，给出你的建议。演讲稿开头已经写好。
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【答案】例文
My dear teachers and classmates,
I’m very glad to make a speech on the graduation ceremony. It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful schoool. The school life is full of happiness and sadness, which is a precious treasure in my life.
I still remember when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. Here I want to say, thank you, my best teacher. Finally, I hope that all the students will have a good future and our school will become better and better.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很荣幸在毕业典礼上发言”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——从“课程、校园文化、场馆设施”等选一项内容、结合经历、谈感受、给建议等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达感谢您的聆听”的谢意。
[亮点词汇]
①make a speech做演讲
②Little by little一点一点地
③a precious treasure一个珍贵的财富
[高分句型]
①The school life is full of happiness and sadness, which is a precious treasure in my life. (定语从句）
②I hope that all the students will have a good future and our school will become better and better. (宾语从句)
8．（2024·上海普陀·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
你校计划举办主题为“发现城市之美（Discover the beauty of the city）”的活动，现就活动方案征求大家意见。假设你是本校学生张明，请阅读以下活动方案，写一封邮件给该活动负责人李老师，邮件须包含以下内容：
（1）你是否会参加此活动，并简述理由；
（2）针对方案中的至少一项内容，提出修改建议。
活动方案
活动对象（participant） 本校六至八年级学生
活动形式 徒步+观光（Hiking & sightseeing）
活动时间 5月2日7点30分
集合地点 学校操场
目的地 外滩陈毅广场
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
Dear Mr Li,
I am very happy to learn that our school will have an activity called “Discover the beauty of the city”. I want
to take part in this activity because we can enjoy the beauty of our city.
Students from Grade six to eight can take part in this activity. They can go hiking and sightseeing. It says the activity begins at 7:30 a.m on 2 May, and we will meet on the school playground. I think we can begin earlier so that we can have enough time to play at Chen Yi Bund Plaza.
I am looking forward to that day.
Zhang Ming
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：要求根据提示内容进行写作。
［写作步骤］
第一步，简述是否会参加活动并给出理由；
第二步，针对一项给出建议。
［亮点词汇］
① take part in 参加
② so that 为了
［高分句型］
① I want to take part in this activity because we can enjoy the beauty of our city.（原因状语从句）
② I think we can begin earlier so that we can have enough time to play at Chen Yi Bund Plaza.（目的状语从句）
9．（2024·上海浦东新·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
学校呼吁师生共建美好校园。学生会 (the student union) 收到来自同学们的众多提议(proposal)。请代表学生会选取以下一项提议写一份倡议书。谈一谈提出该倡议的理由并给出具体实施建议。
Recycling wastepaper 废纸回收 Volunteering in the canteen 食堂志愿工作 Daily jogging 每日慢跑 Weekly talent show 每周才艺秀
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【答案】参考范文：
The student union has received many proposals on how to make our school better. Among them, recycling wastepaper caught our eye, and we appeal all students to recycle it. Every day, the school prints hundreds of papers which are made from trees. We cut down millions of trees every year and replace hardly any of them. To save paper, you can write on both sides of a draft paper and make sure there are few blanks before dropping it. You can also take waste papers to the school recycling centre to reuse them. By making a few small changes daily, you can have a huge impact on the amount of paper that gets used.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作主题；
第二步，具体介绍如何使我们学校变得更好。
[亮点词汇]
①caught our eye引起我们的注意
②hundreds of几百
③make sure确保
④have a huge impact on有巨大影响
[高分句型]
①Every day, the school prints hundreds of papers which are made from trees.（which引导的定语从句）
②To save paper, you can write on both sides of a draft paper and make sure there are few blanks before dropping it.（省略that的宾语从句）
10．（2024·上海黄浦·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
“世界地球日”即将来临，学校将举办公益宣传活动，具体活动安排如下表格所示。请你为校园网站写一篇通知，邀请同学们踊跃参与，通知内容包括活动主题、目的，以及具体活动安排等。
Time Events
8:00-8:30 Check in
9:00-10:00 Drawing competition
10:00-11:00 Tree planting activity
12:00-13:00 Lunch break
13:30-14:30 Science experiment
15:00-15:30 Photo show
You can begin like this:
It’s time to celebrate Earth Day. You are welcome to join us!
注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
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It’s time to celebrate Earth Day. Welcome to join us!
On the occasion of World Earth Day, our school will be hosting a series of public welfare activities to raise awareness about environmental protection. The theme of this event is “Love the Earth, Protect Our Home”. We hope to inspire our students to take action and contribute to the preservation of our planet.
The event will start checking in from 8:00 am to 8:30 am. All participants are required to register upon arrival. From 9:00 to 10:00 am, there will be a drawing competition, providing students with the opportunity to showcase their artistic talents while expressing their love for nature. Following that, from 10:00 to 11:00 am, we will organize a tree planting activity. After a lunch break from 12:00 to 1:00 pm, a science experiment session will take place from 1:30 to 2:30 pm. To conclude the day, a photo show will be held from 3:00 to 3:30 pm, showcasing photographs taken by students that capture the beauty of nature.
Thank you for your attention and we look forward to your active participation!
School Administration
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇通知；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，点出“世界地球日”的主题和目的。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，阐述具体活动安排。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①preservation保持，维护
②showcase展示优点
③contribute to为……做贡献
[高分句型]
①From 9:00 to 10:00 am, there will be a drawing competition, providing students with the opportunity to showcase their artistic talents while expressing their love for nature. （there be句型）
②To conclude the day, a photo show will be held from 3:00 to 3:30 pm, showcasing photographs taken by students that capture the beauty of nature.（定语从句）
11．（2024·上海徐汇·一模）假如你是Joe，你所在学校将在学期结束前举办开放日，邀请家长了解校园文化生活。下面是一份活动安排。请给校方写一封邮件，针对方案中的一项你认为需要修改或完善的内容，谈谈你的想法和建议。
Open Day Program
Parents arrive; look at notice board 2:00 p.m.
Visit classroom and observe one lesson 2:20 p.m.
Watch art performance 3:00 p.m.
Meet the teachers 3: 30 p.m.
Look at display board for high schools 4:00 p.m.
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【答案】例文：
Dear School,
I’m Joe. I think the Open Day is great for parents to see our school. But I have a small suggestion. The part where parents look at the display board for high schools could be better.
Instead of just looking, we can have a small talk or game about high school. That way, parents will learn more
and have fun too! Or we can invite some high school students to come and talk about their school life.
I think this would make the Open Day even more exciting for everyone. Thank you for listening!
Best regards,
Joe
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：活动安排已给出，针对其中一项给出修改或完善的想法和建议，需适当补充细节，并注意邮件的格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的——对开放日的安排有建议，并指出需要修改或完善之处；
第二步，具体阐述至少两点需要修改或完善的建议；
第三步，总结自己建议的好处，并表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of而不是，代替
②invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事
③talk about谈论
[高分句型]
①The part where parents look at the display board for high schools could be better.（where引导的定语从句）
②I think this would make the Open Day even more exciting for everyone.（省略that的宾语从句）
12．（23-24九年级上·上海杨浦·期末）Write a paragraph in at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情境，写一段不少于60个单词的文字）
学校的漫画社（Cartoon Club）、信息技术社（IT Club）、茶艺社（Tea-making Club）和阅读社（Reading Club）正在招募社长（club secretary）。假设你是吴磊，结合你的特长与爱好，给负责社团工作的王老师（Mr Wang）写一份自我介绍，参与其中一个社团社长的竞选。
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【答案】例文：
Hello, my name is Wu Lei.
My hobby is reading. Since I was a child, I’ve been reading. And that’s the reason why I choose to be the leader of Reading Club. In addition, because I have many years of reading experience and love reading, I believe that under my leadership, Reading Club will become even better.
I really hope that I can get the chance to be the leader. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为竞选文稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏材料内容，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。结合特长与爱好，写出竞选理由；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① choose to do选择做
② in addition另外
③ get the chance to do得到做某事的机会
[高分句型]
① Since I was a child, I’ve been reading.（since引导的时间状语从句）
② And that’s the reason why I choose to be the leader of Reading Club.（why引导的定语从句）
③ In addition, because I have many years of reading experience and love reading, I believe that under my leadership, Reading Club will become even better.（because引导的原因状语从句；that引导的宾语从句）
13．（2024·上海松江·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
玫瑰花园学校校报“知心信箱”专栏收到了一封来自李明同学的求助信。信中提及上周末他未经哥哥同意使用他的电脑，导致电脑出故障，耽误了哥哥的工作。李明没有告知实情，也不知道该怎么办。
假设你是该报专栏编辑张华，请写封回信给李明，指出他行为上的不当之处，并提出可行的解决办法。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
Dear Li Ming,
I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter, you told me you used your brother’s computer without his permission. The computer broke down and as a result, your brother’s work was delayed. You didn’t tell him the truth and you didn’t know what to do. Now let me give you some advice.
First of all, it was wrong of you to use the computer without your brother’s permission.
Next, you should tell your brother the truth. Don’t be afraid of your brother. I am sure that your brother really loves you and won’t be angry with you. He will forgive you for what you did.
Then, you should promise your bother that you will never use his computer unless you are allowed to.
Finally, get on well with your brother.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you. With best wishes.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封回信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括两个方面的内容：指出问题和提供建议，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍来信提到的内容，从而引出话题：提供建议；
第二步，针对问题，具体介绍你的建议；
第三步，总结并祝愿。
［亮点词汇］
① as a result 结果是
② tell sb. the truth 告诉某人真相
③ be angry with sb. 生某人的气
［高分句型］
① First of all, it was wrong of you to use the computer without your brother’s permission. (it作形式主语)
② I am sure that your brother really loves you and won’t be angry with you. (宾语从句)
14．（2024·上海奉贤·一模）Write a letter to Rebecca in at least 60 words according to the following situation. (根据以下情境给Rebecca写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。)
生活中，总有一些人在我们遇到困难、困惑的时候给我们提供帮助或者建议。Rebecca也遇到了成长的烦恼，她父母希望她把更多的时间和精力放在学习上，让她放弃弹钢琴的兴趣爱好。 她不知道该怎么办？假设你是她的朋友David，请你针对她的烦恼，给她写一封不少于60词的信，帮助她。
注意：1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
Dear Rebecca,
I heard that you’re going through a tough time with your parents wanting you to focus more on your studies and give up your passion for playing the piano. I understand how difficult this must be, but I want you to know that I’m here for you and I have some advice that might help.
Firstly, have a conversation with your parents about how important music is to you and how it helps you relax. Remember to express yourself in a polite way.
Secondly, try to find a compromise that involves both studying and playing the piano. For example, you could make a time-table for practicing piano and stick to a strict study schedule during the rest of the day.
Remember, it’s always good to have a hobby that you enjoy, and it can actually make you more energetic in your studies. So don’t give up on your passion, and keep working hard to achieve your goals.
Best regards,
David
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表述已明白对方的问题；
第二步，给出对应的建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① go through 经历
② focus more on 更专注
③ stick to坚持
[高分句型]
① I understand how difficult this must be.（宾语从句）
② Secondly, try to find a compromise that involves both studying and playing the piano.（定语从句）
15．（2024·上海嘉定·一模）你觉得学校组织的心理讲座（lectures on mental health）是否有助于缓解压力（reduce pressure）？为什么？你还希望学校开展一个什么活动来有效缓解压力？说说你的理由，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。
（注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分）
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【答案】例文：
I think lectures on mental health can help reduce pressure. Because we do not quite understand some psychology. Through this discussion, we can better understand ourselves. I suggest that schools should start more extracurricular activities to help us relax ourselves, such as basketball games, singing competitions, etc. Schools should also provide us with fixed time and teachers to help us solve psychological problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明学校组织的心理讲座有助于缓解压力，并说明原因。
第二步，介绍希望学校开展一个什么活动来有效缓解压力并说出理由。
[亮点词汇]
①Through this discussion通过这次讨论
② help us relax ourselves帮助我们放松自己
[高分句型]
①I think lectures on mental health can help reduce pressure. (省略that的宾语从句)
16．（2024·上海崇明·一模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Take it easy ” according to the given situation (根据以下情境，以“放轻松”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
你的好朋友 Sandy 正在准备一场关于传统文化的演讲比赛，尽管她每天练习至少半小时，但仍然无法记住整份演讲稿。此外，Sandy 因为太紧张，晚上无法入睡。请你写一封信给 Sandy，鼓励她，让她放轻松。信中至少给她二个建议，并给出合适理由，同时注意信件格式。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
Take it easy
Dear Sandy,
I know that you are preparing for a contest about traditional culture and you can’t remember the whole content of the speech though you have practiced it at least half an hour every day. And I also know that you can’t fall asleep because of the nervousness. So, I have two advice for you. First, divide the content into several parts and recite every part carefully. Second, do not force yourself to recite anything if you feel very nervous. Find a proper time to do it. Hope you can do it.
Yours,
Amy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍好朋友最近的状态；
第二步，给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare for为......做准备
②at least至少
③fall asleep入睡
④divide...into...把......分成......
[高分句型]
①I know that you are preparing for a contest about traditional culture and you can’t remember the whole content of the speech though you practiced it at least half an hour every day. (that引导的宾语从句)
②Second, do not force yourself to recite anything if you feel very nervous.(if引导的条件状语从句)
17．（2024·上海宝山·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于 60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
最近你学校的英语老师 Johnson 准备开设初三英语拓展课程。该课程有以下三个板块组成：“实境英语听说”、“英语报刊阅读”和“英语国家文化与风俗”。现在他正在征求同学们对英语拓展课程的意见。
假如你是初三学生李华，请你阅读以下课程方案后给Johnson 老师写一份邮件。邮件须包含以下内容：你是否愿意参加该课程，简述你的理由；针对课程方案中的学习主题、活动安排或课时数量提出1—2 条改进建议，并说明理由。
注意：
1. 信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。
Johnson 老师的英语拓展课程
学习主题 Learning Theme 活动安排 Activity Schedule 课时数量 Number of Lessons
实境英语听说 Real-life English Listening and Speaking 听写句子，口头交际 5
英语报刊阅读 Newspaper and Magazine Reading in English 阅读报刊，完成练习 3
英语国家文化与风俗 Culture and Customs of English-speaking Countries 观看视频，书面介绍 1
Dear Johnson,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Johnson,
I’m glad that you will have this extended course. Of course, I want to attend it. I’m sure this course will arouse my interest in culture and customs of English-speaking countries and improve my listening, speaking and reading skills.
As for Real-life English Listening and Speaking, would you please play some English movies and let us dub the movies I think we can improve our spoken English by dubbing English movies. In my opinion, it’s not a good idea to dictate some sentences in class. At home, our parents can dictate some sentences for us. Can we spend more time practicing our spoken English Why not give us topics and then let us make some conversations and show in front of the class By the way, five lessons for this part aren’t enough. Six will be fine.
As for Newspaper and Magazine Reading in English, I think one lesson is enough. Because we can read
English newspapers and magazines at home. Why not read them in class
As for Culture and Customs of English-speaking Countries, there is only one lesson. What a pity! We’d better have two lessons. Could you please tell us some table manners in English-speaking countries I will be in an exchange program next term. I really want to behave well in my host family.
I’m sure your extended course will be helpful in improving my English. I’m looking forward to it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括两个方面的内容，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明你的态度：愿意参加该拓展课程，并陈述理由；
第二步，分别就拓展课堂的三个主题板块提出自己的改进意见以及理由；
第三步，总结与期待。
［亮点词汇］
① arouse one’s interest 引起某人的兴趣
② dub English movies 给英语电影配音
③ by the way 顺便说一下
［高分句型］
① I think we can improve our spoken English by dubbing English movies. (宾语从句)
② In my opinion, it’s not a good idea to dictate some sentences in class. (it作形式主语)