2024年中考英语二轮复习突破-书面表达 （重庆专用）（含解析）

书面表达17篇
1．（23-24九年级上·重庆北碚·期末）为深入领会和践行习近平总书记提出的“要向世界阐释推介更多具有中国特色、体现中国精神、蕴藏中国智慧的优秀文化”的重要讲话精神，将爱国主义教育与学科教育进行深度融合，各地各校相继开展“用英语讲好中国故事”的活动。为此，你校英语广播站正在举办以“Tell China’s Stories in English”为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文参赛。
参考信息：1.用英语讲好中国故事的意义；
2. 你将如何践行；
3. ……
要求：1. 80—120词；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
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【答案】
例文
As a teenager, it is important and meaningful for us to tell China’s stories, which can develop the excellent traditional culture of our nation and enhance the national cohesion and pride.
As for me, I will try my best to learn English well first. Having a high level of English is the first step to tell China’s stories better. Second, I will learn more Chinese traditional cultures. If I have a chance to introduce our culture in the future, I will spare no effort to tell the foreigners what I have learned.
Telling China’s stories in English is a way to spread Chinese culture, which allows the world to understand China better. And we all hope that China will go further in the international arena. Therefore, more teenagers should take part in the activities to tell China’s stories better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，为应用文；
②时态：主要是“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，至少两个方面，写好意义和自己如何践行。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明用英语讲好中国故事的意义和重要性；
第二步，从个人出发，写明自己将如何践行用英语讲好中国故事；
第三步，呼吁更多人参与其中。
[亮点词汇]
①national pride民族骄傲
②try my best to learn English well尽我最大的努力学好英语
③spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力做某事
④spread Chinese culture传播中国文化
[高分句型]
①Telling China’s stories in English is a way to spread Chinese culture, which allows the world to understand China better. （非限制性定语从句）
②If I have a chance to introduce our culture in the future, I will spare no effort to tell the foreigners what I have learned.（If引导的条件句）
2．（2024·重庆大渡口·二模）初中三年，白驹过隙，转眼毕业在即。假设你是九年级A 班的李华，你所在的班级计划举办一场告别初中的晚会 (a farewell party)。请你撰写一份发言稿，谈谈三年来你的成长和收获，你对未来的期待，以及你对同学或老师们的祝福。
要求：
1.80—120词，开头已给出， 不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
Dear teachers and classmates,
As we are going to say goodbye to junior high school days, I am filled with a mix of feelings—joy for the happy days we’ve spent together and excitement for the journey that lies ahead._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear teachers and classmates,
As we are going to say goodbye to junior high school days, I am filled with a mix of feelings—joy for the happy days we’ve spent together and excitement for the journey that lies ahead.
I still remember the first day of Grade 7 like it was yesterday. I used to be afraid of speaking in public. I thought I would never learn English well. But now, I realize that I was just being silly. Since then, I have tried to speak English in public many times and made so much progress. Now I am more and more confident. Even though I am sad that junior high will be over, I am looking forward to new experiences in senior high school. I’ve made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, “no pains, no gains.” At last, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included.
Thank you all!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是发言稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“即将告别初中时代，我感慨万千”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——你的进步、你的期望、你对同学、老师们的祝福等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“表达我对所有人的感谢”的谢意。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid of害怕
②even though尽管
③made so much progress取得大的进步
[高分句型]
①I thought I would never learn English well. (宾语从句）
②Even though I am sad that junior high will be over, I am looking forward to new experiences in senior high school.（让步状语从句）
3．（2022·重庆·一模）人生在世，总有许多东西值得我们珍惜：时间、友谊、亲情、健康、生活中每一个快乐的日子……回首过往，在众多值得珍惜的事物中，你最珍惜什么呢
新世纪英语报正在开展以“珍惜”为话题的征文比赛。假如你是李乐，请你用英语写一篇短文参赛，分享你所珍惜的事物及理由，并谈一谈你在日常生活中是如何做的。
要求：
1. 80~120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
1. 珍惜的事物（时间、友谊、亲情……）：
2. 珍惜的理由（提升自己、温暖他人……）；
3. 具体做法（言语、行动……）；
4. ……
In our daily life, there are many things that we should value. ____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
In our daily life, there are many things that we should value.
Rich or poor, young or old, everyone has time. As an old saying “Time is life, time is gold.” goes, time is very important to us. As a result, we should save time.
In order to save time, I always prepare to do everything I should do. When I want to achieve a goal, I will work hard and stick to the plan. I always get up early and go to bed early to keep a good living habit. I never spend my time on the Internet games or short videos because I know I should spend my time doing something meaningful. Time is limited, so I can’t afford to waste it.
In a word, I think we should make good use of time because it’s very important to everyone.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，题干要求分享你所珍惜的事物及理由，并谈一谈你在日常生活中是如何做的，写作时按说明文格式来写。
2. 写作指导：本文采用第一人称来写，时态以一般现在时为主。写作时承接短文开头，直接说明你所珍惜的事物是什么，并说明理由；接着叙述你在日常生活中是如何做的，这一部分应详写，通过列举不同的事例来说明；最后总结强调这个事物的重要性并结尾。
4．（2024·重庆沙坪坝·一模）春天来临，万物复苏，人们纷纷来到户外感受春天的美好。学校为了缓解学生压力，也发起了周末“踏青”活动。假如你是学校英语杂志主编，请你用英文给同学们发出活动倡议，内容包括：
1.号召大家积极加入“踏青”并说明它的好处。
2.向大家推荐踏青中有意义的具体活动。
3.呼吁大家踏青时绿色出行，爱护环境，并提出可行的建议。
参考信息如下：
踏青：have a spring outing
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【答案】例文
Spring is coming, and all flowers are in full bloom. It’s the best time to have a spring outing. We can not only enjoy the beauty of nature but also breathe fresh air. At the same time, it can also relieve our study stress. So let’s go to have a spring outing.
During the trip, there are many interesting activities, such as flying a kite, going for a picnic, going camping and so on. However, we should take the trip in environmentally-friendly ways. Don’t pick the flowers on the side of the road. We should protect public facilities. We should pick up the rubbish when we see it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，号召大家加入“踏青”，并说明它的好处；
第二步，介绍踏青可进行的一些活动；
第三步，呼吁大家绿色出行，并提出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①in full bloom盛开
②at the same time同时
③and so on等等
[高分句型]
①We can not only enjoy the beauty of nature but also breathe fresh air. (not only ... but also连接的并列句)
②We should pick up the rubbish when we see it. (when引导的时间状语从句)
5．（2024·重庆九龙坡·一模）在2024年“两会”上，教育部提出要着力解决“小眼镜”、“小胖墩”和学生心理健康问题。为响应号召，某英文网站开设了“树洞倾述”专栏，并在近期收到了一些求助邮件。请你结合“两会”精神，就收集到的一至两个典型问题提出相关建议，帮助他们解决烦恼，快乐成长。
要求：
1.80-120词；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：It’s common for us to have trouble.
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【答案】例文
We have received some help emails recently. Shortsightedness is one of the typical problems. For students who are short-sighted, they shouldn’t read books or magazines for too long. They can stop for a while to let their eyes
have a rest. Then, they shouldn’t read books under strong lights or weak lights. Obesity is another typical problem. Some students are too fat. Obesity can lead to a number of serious health problems, including heart disease, diabetes, and high blood pressure. It’s important to make healthy food choices. This means eating plenty of fruits, vegetables, and whole grains, and avoiding processed and high-fat foods. In addition to making healthy food choices, it’s important to take more exercise.
It’s common for us to have trouble. I hope the above suggestions can be helpful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，就收集到的一至两个典型问题提出相关建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①shortsightedness近视
②typical典型的
③short-sighted近视的
④have a rest休息一下
⑤obesity肥胖
⑥a number of许多的
⑦in addition to除了
[高分句型]
It’s important to make healthy food choices.(it作形式主语)
6．（23-24九年级下·重庆渝中·阶段练习）随着科技的日新月异，人类对太空的不断探索，未来人们的生活可能会发生翻天覆地的变化。或许人类会在火星上居住、拥有时光机、开发出全新能源等。请根据表格内容，发挥你的想象，写一篇畅想未来生活的文章。
未来的生活
衣服 可以调节温度
食物 机器人将会生产足够的食物
房子 新材料建成，防潮（moisture-proof）、防火（fireproof），抗震（earthquake-resistant）
交通 无人驾驶汽车成为主流
要求：1．包含表格中的要点；可酌情增加内容。
2．条理清晰，行文流畅，内容积极。
3．不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
The life in the future
Our life may have great changes in the future.
In the future, we will wear clothes that can regulate the temperature according to the weather so that we don’t need to buy so many clothes. As population grows, we will need more food. The robot will produce enough food for us. The houses in the future will be different. They will be built with new materials. They are moisture-proof, fireproof and earthquake-resistant. In the future, driverless car will become popular, which makes it easier for us to travel around the world.
I hope all of these can come true in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容畅想未来的生活，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据表格内容详细介绍未来的生活；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①according to根据
②come true实现
[高分句型]
①In the future, we will wear clothes that can regulate the temperature according to the weather so that we don’t need to buy so many clothes. (so that引导的目的状语从句)
②In the future, driverless car will become popular, which makes it easier for us to travel around the world. (which引导的定语从句)
7．（23-24九年级下·重庆沙坪坝·阶段练习）近日来，校园霸凌问题备受社会关注，它严重影响着学生的身心健康和学习氛围，甚至造成了一些不可挽回的伤害。学校公众号正在开展《停止校园霸凌》英文征文活动，请根据以下提示，以“Stop Campus Bullying”为题投稿。
提示：
1. What should we do when we see campus bullying
2. What should we do to keep away from campus bullying
要求：
1.短文须包括提示的主要信息，可适当发挥；
2.要求80~120词，开头已给出，不记入总词数；
3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和班级名称。
Stop Campus Bullying
Nowadays campus bullying happens in many schools. What should we do about campus bullying ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Stop Campus Bullying
Nowadays campus bullying happens in many schools. What should we do about campus bullying
In my opinion, when we know or see any campus bullying, we should tell our teachers about it as soon as possible so that they can deal with it properly. Then, we can also advise other students to stay away from the students who are fighting. At the same time, we can try to be friendly and help the students who are being bullied.
In order to keep away from campus bullying, we should follow the school rules and try to be good students. Besides, we should not only study hard but also be kind and friendly to others. What’s more, when someone wants to hurt us, we should tell our teachers and parents instead of keeping it to ourselves.
Hope there will be no more campus bullying and everyone can be safe and happy at school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意仔细阅读所给内容，先阐述如果遇见校园霸凌应该怎么做，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故具体阐述如果遇见校园霸凌应该怎么做；
第二步，具体说明应该怎么做才能远离校园霸凌；
第三步，书写结语。表达不再有校园霸凌的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s opinion在某人看来
②as soon as possible尽快
③deal with处理
④stay away from远离
⑤not only...but also...不仅……而且……
⑥instead of代替，而不是
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, when we know or see any campus bullying, we should tell our teachers about it as soon as possible so that they can deal with it properly.（when引导的时间状语从句，so that引导的目的状语从句）
②Then, we can also advise other students to stay away from the students who are fighting. At the same time, we can try to be friendly and help the students who are being bullied.（who引导的定语从句）
8．（23-24九年级下·重庆开州·阶段练习）作为一名中学生，我们应该有一颗感恩的心。请以“Learn to Express Thanks”为话题，根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿。提示：
1．列举身边缺乏感恩的实例；
2．列举生活中我们主要的感恩对象和原因；
3．简述如何表达感恩之心。
要求：
1．语言表达准确，语意连贯；
2．词数90左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech is “Learn to Express Thanks”.
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【答案】例文
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech is “Learn to Express Thanks”. We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they show no gratitude.
I don’t think this behavior is correct. As students, we should learn to express our gratitude. Because of the society, we can have the opportunity to receive a good education. Our parents also support us in school. Our teachers have taught us a lot of knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends for their courage and support.
In the future, we should not forget our society, parents, teachers, etc. At present, we should study harder to make our country more beautiful.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”，以“Learn to Express Thanks”为题，列举身边缺乏感恩的实例，列举生活中我们主要的感恩对象和原因，并简述如何表达感恩之心。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引言，导入正文，列举身边缺乏感恩的实例；
第二步，列举生活中我们主要的感恩对象和原因；
第三步，简述如何表达感恩之心。
[亮点词汇]
①learn to do sth.学习做某事
②because of 由于
[高分句型]
①When they leave school and enter society, they show no gratitude.（使用时间状语从句）
② Our teachers have taught us a lot of knowledge, so we should thank them. （so连接的并列句）
9．（23-24九年级下·重庆长寿·阶段练习）同学们，在我们的成长过程中，既有快乐，也有烦恼。请写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 你在学校或家里曾经遇到的最大问题或烦恼。
2. 你解决问题或烦恼的过程。
3. 你的感想。
要求：
1. 80词左右。
2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
My teenage life is colorful. During the school year, not only do I have happy times, but I have many kinds of problems. My biggest problem is that
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【答案】例文
My teenage life is colorful. During the school year, not only do I have happy times, but I have many kinds of problems. My biggest problem is that I have too much homework. Homework seems endless. It always makes me stay up late and I feel very tired every day, but I know the teachers are expecting us to be better.
How can I deal with the problem On one hand, I should concentrate more on my study in class. On the other hand, I should do my homework as quickly as possible. Now, I spend less time on my homework, and I am not frustrated any more.
As we all know, practice makes plaining or waiting can’t help. Instead, we should be active to face our problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己遇到的问题以及解决问题的过程。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己遇到的最大问题；
第二步，介绍你解决问题或烦恼的过程。
第三步，介绍你的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late熬夜
②deal with处理
③on one hand...on the other hand一方面……另一方面
④concentrate on集中精力
[高分句型]
①My biggest problem is that I have too much homework. (表语从句)
②Now, I spend less time on my homework, and I am not frustrated any more. (and连接的并列句)
10．（23-24九年级下·重庆沙坪坝·阶段练习）习近平总书记在2024年新年贺词中说：“世事变迁，合作共赢始终是硬道理。”本月，凤鸣山中学英语社团正在开展以“Teamwork Makes the Dream Work(团队合作让梦想成真)”为主题的英语征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，分享一次团队合作的经历，如体育运动、小组合作学习、团队游戏等，谈谈你对团队合作的看法。参考要点：
1. 事情的起因、经过、结果；
2. 你的收获和感想。
写作要求：
1. 80~120 词，可适当发挥；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Teamwork Makes the Dream Work
As an old saying goes “Ten thousand lines can pull a boat”, with great teamwork, we can achieve remarkable results.
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【答案】例文
Teamwork Makes the Dream Work
As an old saying goes “Ten thousand lines can pull a boat”, with great teamwork, we can achieve remarkable results. It shows us how important the teamwork is. I also learn this from an unforgettable experience.
Last Friday afternoon, we had a basketball match against Class Three. At the beginning, we all tried to show each other to be the best player. We just ran around and didn’t pass the ball to others. Soon we fell behind. During the break, our coach advised us to work together as a team. “You have to learn that soccer is a team sport,” he said.
We followed his advice. In the end, we won the game and each of us felt happy.
This experience made me understand that a team sport award was not just about “me”, it was about “us”. I realize deeply that in a team, we can’t achieve success no matter how excellent each one is. The key to success is
great teamwork.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题。
第二步，详细介绍自己和团队的一次合作经历。
第三步，书写结语，写出自己的收获和感想。
[亮点词汇]
① At the beginning在开始时
②advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事
③In the end最后
[高分句型]
①It shows us how important the teamwork is.(宾语从句)
②At the beginning, we all tried to show each other to be the best player.(try to do sth 尝试做某事)
11．（23-24九年级下·重庆沙坪坝·阶段练习）假如你是二中初三学生林峰， English Learner（《英语学习者》 ）陪伴了你三年，是值得信赖的伙伴。2024年恰逢报社成立 20周年，报社向全市同学征稿。请你给报社写一封信，回顾自己从对阅读毫无兴趣到坚持阅读报纸，最近还在阅读大赛中获奖的转变经历，并表达感谢。
要求：
1. 字数：80-120，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数；
2. 详略得当，重点突出。
要点提示：
1. 表达感谢；
2. 描述转变经历；
3.……
Dear editor,
I’m a student from No.2 Secondary School.
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Lin Feng
【答案】例文
Dear editor,
I’m a student from No.2 Secondary School. English Learner has been with me for three years and it is a trustworthy partner. Thank you for publishing such good newspapers.
At first, I had no interest in reading English. Because I have very few English vocabularies and cannot understand the articles at all, my English scores are not ideal. One day a friend of mine recommended it to me. I tried my best to keep reading, and gradually I became interested in reading and my vocabulary increased. I also won a prize in a reading contest.
I hope the newspaper will become better and better.
Lin Feng
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封信；
②时态：本文时态一般过去时为主；
③提示：本文人称为第一人称，注意要详细阐述转变的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达感谢；
第二步，描述转变的经历；
第三步，结束语。
[亮点词汇]
①had no interest in对……不感兴趣；
②a friend of mine我的一个朋友
[高分句型]
①Because I have very few English vocabularies and cannot understand the articles at all, my English scores are not ideal.（原因状语从句）
②I hope the newspaper will become better and better.（宾语从句）
12．（18-19九年级上·浙江温州·期中）书面表达
“低头族”（phubber）是指长期被电子屏幕绑架的人，越来越多的人意识到低头族的危害。就这一现象学校开展了“不再低头”（No Phubbing）倡议，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍这一行为的弊端，并给出合理建议。
Harm Suggestions
Do harm to eyes Communicate less with families Be bad for study... read books… do sports… …
注意：1、必须采用表中提供内容，并写出两点自己的建议；
2、文中不能出现自己的真实姓名
3、字数110。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总字数。
These days more and more teenagers spend too much time on the electric screens.
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【答案】These days more and more teenagers spend too much time on the electric screens. It’s really bad for their health.Now it’s time to stop phubbing.
First,it has a bad influence on their eyes.It also affects their study because of playing with the electronic products.What’s worse,they communicate less with their family.
Some people think that it is necessary for teenagers to do more sports and travel in their free time.It is also a good
way to read books to open up their eyes.And schools should organize more outdoor activities to help them relax.
In my opinion,hanging out with friends is a good way to stay away from electric screens.Anyway,it’s important for us to lead a healthy life!
【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。要求就学校开展“不再低头”（No Phubbing）倡议，根据提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍这一行为的弊端，并给出合理建议。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，要注意连句成篇，层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
13．（23-24九年级下·重庆开州·阶段练习）父母时刻保护我们成长，他们关爱我们，但也会严格要求我们。我们长大的同时，难免和父母存在意见相左的时候。那父母能和我们成为亲近的朋友吗？调查结果显示60%的学生认同“能和父母做朋友”这个观点，另外40%的学生持相反意见。
请你以“Can Parents Be Our Friends ”为题，谈谈你对这个话题的看法及理由，并分享你的观点和建议。
要求：
1. 80-120词；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：
Can Parents Be Our Friends
This term our school did a survey about whether parents can be our friends. Students in our school shared different ideas.
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【答案】例文
Can Parents Be Our Friends
This term our school did a survey about whether parents can be our friends. Students in our school shared different ideas. Here is the result.
40 percent of students think it is impossible because their parents are busy, and they have no time to care about them. And sometimes they are very strict with them. 60 percent of students think they can be friends with their parents. Because their parents usually communicate with them and care about them. When they are in trouble, they usually ask their parents for help.
In my opinion, we should be friends with our parents. We should communicate with them when we meet something unhappy. Our parents can try their best to help us. We should chat more with our parents. We should help our parents do more housework when we are available. If we have any disagreements with our parents, we should communicate with them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时，一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述调查结果，不同的学生有不同的意见。
第二步，提出本人的观点，应该和父母做朋友，并列举原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with 对……要求严格
②communicate with 与……交流
③ask sb. for help 找某人寻求帮助
[高分句型]
①This term our school did a survey about whether parents can be our friends.（宾语从句）
②If we have any disagreements with our parents, we should communicate with them.（if引导的条件状语从句）
14．（23-24九年级下·重庆彭水·阶段练习）随着暑假的来临，很多同学都选择在假期学习一项技能来丰富自己的假期生活。为此，某英文杂志社正在开展以“The Skill that I Want to Learn Most”为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇征文，谈谈你最想学习的一项技能。
要求：
1. 80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
1. 分享最想学习的一项技能；
2. 介绍学习这项技能的原因及你的看法；
3. ……
The Skill that I Want to Learn Most
With the summer vacation coming, many students choose to learn a skill during the vacation.
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【答案】例文
The Skill that I Want to Learn Most
With the summer vacation coming, many students choose to learn a skill during the vacation. Learning a skill can not only help us know ourselves better, but also enrich our life.
As far as I’m concerned, the skill that I want to learn most is computer skills. Firstly, sometimes I have online classes. If I can master some computer skills, it will be more convenient for me to take notes and hand in my
homework on time. Secondly, with the development of science and technology, society is changing faster and faster and there is much more for us to learn. By using the computer and other software on it, I will get to learn more knowledge both in the textbooks and in the real world. Last but not least, learning some computer skills can also help me to find a good job when I grow up.
In a word, nowadays, society needs talented people with more skills, so I will prepare myself for the future as soon as possible.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：考生应注意分点介绍学习这项技能的原因，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，分享最想学习的一项技能；
第二步，介绍学习这项技能的原因及你的看法；
第三步，阐述在未来社会发展中需要有技能的人。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also...不仅……而且……
②as far as I’m concerned就我而言
③convenient方便的
④in a word总而言之
⑤talented有才能的
⑥as soon as possible尽快
[高分句型]
①If I can master some computer skills, it will be more convenient for me to take notes and hand in my homework on time.（条件状语从句）
②Last but not least, learning some computer skills can also help me to find a good job when I grow up.（时间状语从句）
15．（23-24九年级下·重庆渝中·阶段练习）运动安全的重要性
大多数的中学生都很喜欢做运动，即将迎来体育中考的初三孩子们更是如此。训练场上，大家都全力以赴，珍惜每一次机会认真锻炼。但是，在运动的同时，同学们也需要重视运动安全。
请同学们以“Do Sports Safely”为题，写一篇80—120字的书面表达。
参考要点：
1．运动安全的重要性（improve physical fitness and health, achieve the goals of sports, ...）
2．如何安全地运动（do enough warming-up activities, wear comfortable clothes, ...）
3．……
注意：
1．标题已给出，不计入总词数；
2．文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和班级。
Do Sports Safely
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【答案】例文：
Do Sports Safely
Doing sports safely is of great importance. It helps us not only improve physical fitness and health but also achieve the goals of sports. It also makes us full of energy.
To do sports safely, we should do enough warming-up activities to move all our body parts. Besides, we should wear comfortable clothes and shoes. What’s more, don’t do sports for too long. Don’t get too tired or hurt ourselves.
All in all, as the physical education entrance examination is coming, we should do sports harder than before. At the same time, we should do sports safely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，需要补充内容，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍运动安全的重要性；
第二步，介绍如何安全地运动；
第三步，总结，点题。
[亮点词汇]
①of great importance 非常重要的
②makes us full of energy 使我们充满活力
③all in all 总之
[高分句型]
① It helps us not only improve physical fitness and health but also achieve the goals of sports. (“not only...but also”结构)
② To do sports safely, we should do enough warming-up activities to move all our body parts. (不定式作目的状语)
16．（23-24九年级下·重庆沙坪坝·阶段练习）假设你叫李华，你的英国朋友Alex很难读懂中国诗句“山重水复疑无路，柳岸花明又一村”(For every cloud, there is a silver lining.)，来信向你寻求帮助。请你根据表格信息，并结合自身例子给他回一封e-mail，谈谈你遇到的一次困境以及如何走出困境，并分享你的收获与理解。
内容要点 写作参考
About the sentence It was written by Lu You. in English: For every cloud, there is a silver lining.
Your example Any difficult situation that you experienced, and how did you get out
Your understanding never give up, find a way out,...
注意：1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，写作参考供选择使用；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数：80~120；
4.正文首句和尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence. It’s written by Lu You and similar to “For every cloud, there is a silver lining” in English. You’re encouraged to keep trying when meeting difficulties. My example may help you better understand it.
Once, I entered our school’s photo competition but couldn’t find a proper subject. I felt worried and hopeless. One day, my friend May gave me a big smile. Suddenly, I was hit and touched, feeling something bright. An idea that I could bring the warmth to others through photos came to me. After many tries, I took the subject—A Warm Hug. Finally, I got the prize.
So no matter what difficulties we meet, as long as we never give up, we can always find a way to solve it.
I hope my reply will be helpful to you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据提示，解释“山重水复疑无路，柳岸花明又一村”的英文意思；
第二步，根据提示，介绍自己经历的困难以及如何克服的；
第三步，讲述自己的感悟心得，并鼓励对方。
[亮点词汇]
①be similar to与……相似
②keep doing保持做
③as long as只要
[高分句型]
①An idea that I could bring the warmth to others through photos came to me. (that引导定语从句)
②So no matter what difficulties we meet, as long as we never give up, we can always find a way to solve it. (no matter+特殊疑问词，as long as引导让步状语从句)
17．（23-24九年级下·重庆沙坪坝·阶段练习）人生是一场修炼。回首走过的每一段路，都是在人生中立起的一座灯塔，去指引未来前进的方向。关关难过关关过，前路漫漫亦灿灿。请你回顾自己曾面对的一道难关，分享跨越难关的经历，并讲述这段经历如何成就了今天的你。
要求：
1.80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：Although life is full of the unexpected, what doesn’t stop us makes us stronger.
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【答案】例文
Although life is full of the unexpected, what doesn’t stop us makes us stronger. Last year, I faced a difficult challenge in learning a new sport—skating. At first, I fell down many times and felt discouraged. But I didn’t give up. I watched videos, practiced regularly, and asked for help from experts. With perseverance, I gradually improved and now enjoy skating. This experience taught me that with hard work and persistence, I can overcome any obstacle. It has made me more confident and determined in pursuing my dreams.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：提示要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己遇到的困难；
第二步，介绍自己是如何解决困难的；
第三步，介绍自己从中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① give up放弃
② ask for help寻求帮助
[高分句型]
① Although life is full of the unexpected, what doesn’t stop us makes us stronger.（although引导的让步状语从句）
② This experience taught me that with hard work and persistence, I can overcome any obstacle.（that引导的宾语从句）