2024届高考英语二轮复习应用文写作指导：感谢信 讲义

二轮复习应用文写作指导----感谢信
写作架构
感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信，有感谢和表扬双重意思。通常写作结构为：
第一段：点明写信目的，表达感谢；
第二段：描述事件经过；
第三段：再次表示感谢，表达回报的决心。
Useful expressions:
Para 1 写信背景或目的:
（1） I am writing to express/convey/extend my sincere/heartfelt gratitude/appreciation to you for your generous help during…
（2） I'm extremely grateful for your generous help and all the amazing memories that you have brought me.
（3） With the deepest gratitude for your... （e.g comfortable accommodation, delicious meals and your friendly family members… ） when I…
（4） I'd like to take this opportunity to express my great thanks for your timely help and support.
Para 2 具体阐述对方的帮助:
（1） You never hesitate to lend me a hand whenever I…
（2） It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to…
（3） Due to/Thanks to your…, I …
（4） Thanks to your generous/selfless help,without which I couldn't have made such great progress.
（5） Thank you very much for your kind hospitality you showed me during my visit…
（6） It was your … that left me ever-lasting memories/It was you who… （强调句）
（7） Your warmth and tender has made my brief stay in… pleasant and memorable.
（8） No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Para3再次感谢:
（1） Thank you for everything you have done for me.
（2） Please accept my sincere thanks again!
（3） Thanks again for your generous help, I appreciate it more than I can say.
（4） My gratitude is beyond description. Please accept my… /Wish you…
（5） I’ll be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness.
Part 2 Practice makes perfect!
练习一
假定你是学生会主席李华,学生会举办的英语演讲比赛（English Speech Contest）得到了外教 Pam 的大力帮助.活动已圆满结束,请你给她写一封感谢信.内容包括:
1.表达感谢;
2.外教的帮助:
3.同学们的收获。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Pam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
练习二（2024届湖南省雅礼中学高三月考试卷四）假如你是李华，你在口语课上回答错误，引得全班哄堂大笑。外教Julia及时救场，你想写封信表达你的感谢。内容包括：1.当时的情况；2.外教的做法；3.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Julia, Yours, Li Hua
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般过去时。
2.写作思路：三段论。第一段交代写信目的——表达感谢；第二段介绍当时的情况（要点1）和外教的做法（要点2）以及李华的感受（要点3）；第三段再次表达谢意。
下水作文原创版
Dear Julia,
I hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for helping me out of embarrassment in the oral English class.
Memories of your help came flooding back to me. In the class yesterday when I was required to introduce Hu’nan specialties, I had intended to say that Hu’nan has a lot of delicious snacks. However, the word “snacks" was mispronounced as “snakes”, causing laughter from the whole class. So awkward was I that I didn't know where to put myself. It was at that moment that you distracted my classmates' focus by asking them to talk about the legends of snakes, which saved me from embarrassment and strengthened my determination to learn spoken English well. After all, no method is better than more practice.
Many thanks for your kindness! Best wishes! (137 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
中文翻译
亲爱的茱莉娅老师：
见信好。我写信想要表达您在口语课上帮我摆脱尴尬的感激之情。
到现在，您帮助我的回忆一直让我记忆犹新。在昨天的口语课上，我在介绍湖南特产时本想要表达湖南有很多可口的零食，却错说成了很多蛇，引起全班同学的哄堂大笑。正在我尴尬地想找个地缝钻进去的时候，您顺着“蛇”这个话题向同学们提问，转移了大家的注意力。这让我免除了难堪窘态，也坚定了我要学好英语口语的决心。毕竟熟能生巧是不二法则。
再次对您表示感谢！祝好！
李华
1.应用文写作三步法：
（1）仔细审题，确定本文为感谢信；
（2）因对方是外教老师，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）根据写作要求，本文主体部分为感谢对方帮助自己摆脱口语课犯错被同学嘲笑的尴尬，确定本文时态主基调为一般过去时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）I hope this letter finds you well无灵主语结构；
（2）express one's gratitude to sb for sth因某事向某人表达谢意；
（3）Memories of your help came flooding back to me分词短语做状语；
（4）had intended to do sth本来打算做某事；
（5）So awkward was ...so+形容词置于句首产生部分倒装结构；
（6）... didn't know where to put myself无地自容，尴尬地想钻地洞；
（7）It was at that moment that强调句型；
（8）save sb from使某人免除某事；
（9）no method is better than ...某事是不二法门。