2024届高考英语读后续写如何描写情绪讲义

continuation writing
How to express emotion
Learning objectives :
1. To learn the skills of how to give a detailed description in continuation writing.
2. To master the advanced sentence patterns we've learned in this class and to apply them to writing.
Sentence pattern 1
To+情绪名词, + 句子
令我们非常兴奋的是，她夺冠了.
To our great excitement, she won the championship.
使他大大松了一口气的是，他的儿子安然无恙地回家了。
To his great relief, his son arrived home safe and sound.
令我惊讶的是，这个衣衫褴褛的人是个百万富翁。
To my astonishment, the man in rags was a millionaire.
Sentence pattern 2
So +adj. + be +主语 + that+句子
So + adv. + 助词(do/did/does/can...+主语…+that+句子
我太兴奋了以至于无法入睡。
I was so excited that I couldn't fall asleep.
===So excited was I that I couldn't fall asleep
Tom太紧张了，脑子一片空白。
So anxious was Tom that his mind went blank.
我妈妈如此激动以至于说不出话来。
So thrilled was my mother that she couldn't utter a single word.
=So thrilled was my mother that words failed her.
He ran so fast that we couldn’t catch up with him.
=So fast did he run that we couldn’t catch up with him.
Sentence pattern 3
感叹句:多以what\how来引导。
其结构：
How +形容词/副词+主语+谓语！
How +形容词 it is to do sth!
How +形容词 +a/an +单数可数名词+主语+谓语！
=What +a/an +形容词+单数可数名词+主语+谓语！
What +形容词+可数复数名词/不可数名词+主语+谓语！
他多么开心地看到他的努力有了回报。
How happy he was to see his efforts paid off.
他多么希望有一个地缝，他能钻进去。
How he wished the ground to open up and swallow him!
多么难忘的经历啊!事实证明，只要我们不放弃我们的希望，任何困境都有出路。
What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any plight as long as we never give up our hope.
练习：
1._________ happy the children were when they were playing games!
2. How necessary _______ is to get rid of the bad habits!
3. __________ exciting a day for Tom it was!
4. What he said made me realize ________ a foolish mistake I had made.
5. _________ great contributions he made to agriculture!
Sentence pattern 4
情绪名词 + 动词 + sb + when sb do sth
情绪名词：
delight\excitement\annoyance\sorrow\fright\disappointment\frustration\guilt
despair\astonishment\anger\relief…
动词常是：
seize 抓住\get the better of 战胜\tear…into pieces把…撕碎\ envelop 笼罩
flash across 掠过\take hold of 控制\wash over 让人感到\ swallow吞没
sweep/flood over 涌上/包overwhelm 使难以承受\choke使哽咽
当我得知我写作获得了第一名时,我感到兴奋和欣慰。【2023全国Ⅰ卷】
Excitement and relief came over me when I was told I won the first prize.
Sentence pattern 5
情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2, sb do sth , doing sth.
(感到)自信和力量,他走上舞台,开始激情地发表演讲。
Confident and powerful, he stepped onto the stage, starting to deliver his speech passionately.
感到坚定和激情,男孩举起右手，将国旗抛向空中。
Determined and passionate, the boy raised his right hand, throwing the national flag into the air.
Sentence pattern 6
身体相关部位名词 +非谓语动词, sb do sth.
Tears welling up in his eyes, sb do sth...（泪水涌出眼睛...)
Eyes filled with regretful tears, sb do sth...（眼里满含着...)
Eyes glittering with relief/joy, sb do sth...（眼里闪着...)
Face gleaming with delight, sb do sth...（脸上洋溢着喜悦)
Heart beating with nervousness, sb do sth...（心脏因紧张而怦怦直跳）
Arms \legs shaking, sb do sth. (胳膊/腿在抖动）
大卫自信而坚定，继续奔跑，汗水顺着他的脸流下来【2022全国Ⅰ卷】
Confident and determined, David kept on running, sweating streaming down his face.
地震后这位爸爸左手紧握着女儿，不愿离开这片废墟。
His left hand holding his daughter firmly, the father refused to leave the ruins after the earthquake.
Sentence pattern 7
让步状语从句:
形容词/副词/ 无冠词的名词 + as + 主语+谓语动词，主句.
Disabled as he is, he tries his best to make a living by himself.
Child as he is, he can stand on his own feet.
Hard as I tried, I couldn’t make her change her mind.
Heavily as it rained, they didn’t cancel the football match.
Practice:
紧张，Peter 走向舞台，双手颤抖。
参考答案：
Nervousness enveloped him as Peter walked towards the stage，his hands shaking slightly.
Walking towards the stage，Peter was overwhelmed by nervousness, his hands shaking slightly.
Nervous as he was, Peter walked towards the stage, his hands shaking slightly.
表示尴尬、羞愧
feel like sitting on pins and needles/ act as a rat on the hot brick
如坐针毡/如热锅上的蚂蚁
droop down/ lower down one’s head with embarrassment/ shame:
尴尬/羞愧地低下了头
one’s face flushed/burned/ blushed with embarrassment/ shame
His palms were sweating/ sweaty：手心出汗
His knees weakened/ got weak：膝盖发软
His throat tightened：喉咙发紧
5.Sb was overwhelmed/ overcome/ seized/ burdened/wild with shame：
羞愧极了
6. To my shame, I never thanked him for his kindness.
Hearing the words, he hung down his head for shame.
I feel quite ashamed that I have not fulfilled the task.
I was ashamed to tell him that I had failed.
She was covered with shame at her failure.
7. She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning.
她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。
So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rushing to her face.
她感到羞愧极了，血液涌上脸颊。
So ashamed did she feel that she was close to tears/ she was on the verge of tears.
她羞愧到快哭了。
10. Standing there, I became increasingly embarrassed and could feel my heart beating wildly, my face burning badly.
站在那里，我越来越尴尬，能听见自己心跳加速的声音，脸烧得厉害。
11. Her face turned pale, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
她的脸煞白，感觉如坐针毡。
12.Exposed to the truth, so firmly did embarrassment take hold of(控制) him that his palms were sweating and his knees got weak.
暴露在真相面前，他是如此地尴尬以至于手心出汗，膝盖发软。
表示紧张、害怕
with uneasiness不安地=restless and uneasy（形容词做状语）
be burdened/ be consumed/seized with anxiety 焦虑不安
pound/beat/race/ thump/ hammer wildly/ violently / loudly/ hard/
心怦怦直跳得厉害
I was nervous/anxious.-----
I was burdened/seized with nervousness/anxiety
.my heart beat widely/violently心跳得厉害
3. I shook/ trembled with nervousness紧张得发抖
4. My heart flew into my mouth.心提到嗓子眼儿
5. With the performance beginning, I had butterflies in my stomach
My stomach was full of butterflies.心里发慌
6. Uneasy and restless. I dragged my feet with a sinking heart.
我心生不安、步履沉重,心情沮丧
7. Extremely frightened，I felt my legs were trembling and my palms were sweating.
惊恐之下，我觉得我两腿发抖，手心冒汗。
8.一阵恐惧涌上她的心头。她喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。
　A wave of fear welled up in/swept over her. Her throat tightened　and her knees felt weak.
9.恐惧使她浑身发抖。她的手指蜷曲成拳头，指甲抠进手掌。
Fear flooded over her，making her shaking all over. Her fingers were curled into a fist，nails digging into her palm.
10. The idea of being left alone in the dark big house 　made her hair stand on end　.
一想到要独自留在那所黑暗的大房子里，她就毛骨悚然。
11.Beside me was my wife，who was standing still，frozen with fear. /Her heart was racing with fear　我的妻子站在我旁边，她被吓呆了，一动不动。
12.当叫到我的名字时，我感觉我的心跳到嗓子眼了。
　I could feel my heart in my mouth when my name was called. (夸张的修辞手法)
13. While I was walking onto the stage，I could feel my palms sweating，heartbeat racing. (身体语言) 我往舞台上走的时候，感觉手心冒汗，心跳加速。
14. My heart beat wildly and my legs trembled. With butterflies in my stomach，I breathed deeply. 我的心狂跳，双腿发抖。我深吸一口气，心里七上八下。
15. I stood there so nervously that I felt my throat tight，wondering what to do next.
我紧张地站在那里，喉咙发紧，不知道下一步怎么办。
语基自筑
动词
fear 害怕;畏惧 scare 惊吓;使害怕 shake 颤抖;发抖
frighten 使惊吓;使惊恐 terrify使恐惧;使十分害怕 cry 哭泣;喊叫
panic (使)惊慌 freeze 吓呆 tremble 颤抖
形容词
afraid 害怕的;担心的 frightened 受惊的;害怕的
frightening 令人恐惧的;可怕的 scared 恐惧的;担心的
scary 恐怖的;吓人的 horrible 可怕的
terrified 非常害怕的,恐惧的 terrible 可怕的;令人恐惧的
nervous 紧张的;害怕的 uneasy 不安的;忧虑的
anxious 焦虑的;担心的
名词
fear 害怕;惧怕;担忧 horror 震惊;恐惧 scare 恐慌;恐惧
terror 惊恐;恐惧 panic 惊慌;恐慌 fright 惊吓;恐怖
shake 颤抖;哆嗦 tension 紧张
anxiety 担心;忧虑;害怕 nightmare 噩梦;梦魇
短语
in fear / horror / fright / panic / terror惊恐地
be filled with / be full of fear / horror充满恐惧
shake / tremble with fear吓得发抖/战战兢兢
be frozen with fear 吓得呆住
cry out in fright 吓得大声叫喊
be anxious / nervous about对……感到焦虑/紧张
be scared /frightened of 害怕/恐惧……
be afraid of 害怕……;担心……
be scared to death 吓得要死
stress out 焦虑不安
be filled with anxiety忧心忡忡
with butterflies in one's stomach忐忑不安
hold one's breath屏住呼吸
take a deep breath / breathe deeply 深呼吸
scare the life out of sb把某人吓得魂不附体
be on edge 紧张不安的
句子
1. I was so frightened that I just froze. 我吓呆了。
2.The ship shook violently and the men looked at each other in horror.
船体猛烈摇晃,人们都惊恐地望着对方。
3. She was a bit on edge till she heard he was safe.
她听到他安然无恙才放下心来.
4. Karen held her breath as her daughter I ran toward the finishing line.
当女儿跑向终点线时，凯伦屏住了呼吸。
段落
1.With butterflies in my stomach, I breathed deeply.“Hi, I'm Meng Hao. Everyone started laughing.I looked at them in panic.“Nice to know we share the same name,"said my new teacher. I had been too nervous to pay attention when he introduced himself!
我心里七上八下、紧张万分。我深吸了一口气说:“大家好,我叫孟浩。”大家一下子哄笑起来,我惊慌失措地盯着他们。“很高兴我们同名啊。”我的新老师说。我刚才太紧张了,竟然没有仔细听老师的自我介绍!
As she spoke, Zhang Yue put her hands behind her back to hide that they were shaking. She couldn't, however, hide the line of sweat running down her forehead, which was caused partly by the heat of the television studio, but more by fear of the four people seated in front of her. They stared back, their blank faces giving no clue as to what they would say next. Feeling dizzy,Zhang Yue took a deep breath as she struggled to finish her presentation.
发言时,张悦把手藏在背后,以掩饰双手的颤抖。但她无法掩饰从额头淌下的一行汗水。这一部分是由于电视演播室里有些热，但更多的则是由于她害怕坐在她面前的四个人。他们面无表情地凝视着她,让人根本看不出他们接下来会说什么。张悦感到一阵眩晕，做了个深呼吸,然后努力完成她的陈述。
练一练
I.根据所给汉语完成下列句子(每空一词)。
1.进入茂密的森林后,她开始充满恐惧,担心迷路或遇到危险的野生动物.
As she enters the thick forest, she begins to be_______ ________ _______，worried about getting lost or coming across dangerous wildlife.
2.蒂姆一个人看完恐怖电影后,吓得要死,那天晚上怎么也睡不着。
After watching the horror movie alone, Tim was ______ ______ ______ and had trouble falling asleep that night.
3.昨天下午的工作面试让我既兴奋又紧张。
I was both excited and________ about the job interview of yesterday afternoon.
4.小男孩吓得浑身发抖,于是他闭上眼睛,紧紧抱住他的妈妈。
The little boy was ______ ______ ______ so he closed his eyes and hugged his mother tightly.
Ⅱ.选用方框内合适的选项完成下面短文(每项限用一次)。
My legs started shaking
I turned around and froze
C. I recovered from the shock
D.My most frightening experience was captured(捕捉)
Last spring in Yellowstone, I followed a path that took me through a dark forest. When I finally stepped out of the trees, the view was breathtaking there.While I was concentrating on photographing this amazing scene, I suddenly had a feeling that I was being watched. Slowly, and with the camera still held to my eye, 1._____ .Only metres away from me was a bear. With water falling off its thick, brown hair, the bear stared back at me. Time stood still as the bear and I both waited to see who would move first. 2.______ .Somehow, I forced my finger to press the button. A second later, the bear turned and ran back into the forest.When3._____ , I looked at my camera.
4._____ forever in a single image.
答案：
Ⅰ
1. filled with / full of fear / horror
2. scared to death
3.nervous
4. shaking / trembling with fear
II.1-4 BACD
表示伤心、难过
不同的哭：cry 哭(泛指哭出声)/ sob呜咽、啜泣/
weep无声抹泪/ wail嚎啕大哭
2. 词组：burst into tears=burst out crying 放声大哭
fight/ hold back tears 抑制住泪水
be close to tears / be on the verge of tears 快要哭了
be in tears 含泪
Her eyes were misty/wet/ brimmed with tears 他的眼里泪水盈盈。
3. 例句：
1). He sighed deeply with disappointment.他失望地重重叹了口气。
. He struggled to fight back his tears. 他试图控制住自己的泪水。
. His eyes were brimmed with tears of sorrow. 他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。
. He stood silently, tears of grief/ grievance rolling/ streaming down/ welling up in his cheeks.
他静静地站着，悲伤/委屈的眼泪流下他的脸颊。
5). I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness/ I was blanketed with a heavy cloud of gloom. 我感觉自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋里/ 被阴云笼罩。
. I saw an old lady wailing with her fist beating the chest in the street corner.
我看到一个老奶奶在街角捶胸痛哭。
. When he embraced me with his arms open wide, I felt my throat choked with sob. 当他张开双臂拥抱我时，我觉得自己喉头哽咽。
8). Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst/ surge/ wave/ flood/ ripple of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.
一听到这个坏消息，她就被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣。
9. 　An air of sorrow and loneliness settled over her. 悲伤和孤独的气氛笼罩着她。
10.她把自己锁在房间里，沉浸在悲痛之中。
She locked herself in her room，abandoning herself to great sadness　.
11. She felt so sad that she found herself crying unconsciously，unable to hold back her tears. 她很伤心，不知不觉哭了，眼泪止不住。
12.听到她没获奖的消息，她心都沉了下去。
When she heard the news that she failed to win a prize，her heart sank.
13.她一头倒在床上，情不自禁地痛苦地哭起来。
　She threw herself down onto the bed，and couldn't help crying bitterly. 　
表示开心、快乐
chuckle/ giggle loudly/ softly 大声/ 轻声地咯咯笑
burst into laughter =burst out laughing突然笑出声来
be overwhelmed/ overcome/ wild/ burdened/ seized with happiness/joy/pleasure（开心极了）
much to his delight/joy/happiness/pleasure=to his great delight/joy/happiness/pleasure
使他非常高兴的是，
Her eyes shone/glittered/sparkled/twinkled/gleamed/with joy/ delight/excitement/.
他的双眼因开心而闪闪发光。
Her face lit up/ brightened up/ glowed with pleasure.（容光焕发）
Pleasure/delight took hold of him.(极度开心)-
She was overflowing/ brimmed with happiness/joy.(幸福洋溢)
A glimmer of smile flashed/ swept/ crept over his face. （一丝微笑在他脸上一闪而过。）
He grinned from ear to ear with delight when he caught sight of us.
当他看到我们，咧开嘴开心地笑了。
The smile on her face shone like a sparkling diamond. 她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪耀。
Knowing what had happened，his mother shed tears of joy and gratitude.
了解事情的经过后他的母亲流下喜悦和感激的泪水。
He cast a quick glance at us, with his face blooming/ blossoming/ wearing a broad/bright/ sweet/ warm smile. 他快速扫了我们一眼，面带灿烂/温暖的笑容。
When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on the top of the world/ over the moon.当妈妈亲吻他的脸颊时，小婴儿开心极了。
On the journey to the lake，　a wide excitement took hold of Mom /Mom could hardly contain her excitement. 在去往湖边的途中，母亲兴奋得不能自已。
Mom insisted that we go camping in the next village，her eyes glittering/twinkling with excitement.母亲坚决要求我们在下一个村庄露营，她的眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
Learning the children's idea，she was so cheerful/overjoyed that she smiled brightly.
得知孩子们的主意，她非常高兴，笑得很灿烂。
Hearing what they said，he was so delighted/ pleased that he almost jumped up，with tears filling his eyes. 听到他们的话，他高兴地几乎跳了起来，热泪盈眶。
At the sight of the basket of popcorn，his parents were also seized with happiness/wild with joy.看到那篮子爆米花，他的父母也欣喜若狂。
Enormous joy welled up in every corner of the yard. Stars appeared in the sky，twinkling their eyes at them with happiness. 整个院子喜气洋洋。天空开始出现闪闪的繁星，高兴地向他们眨眼睛。(拟人的修辞手法)
表示愤怒、生气
fly into a rage 勃然大怒
lose one’s temper发脾气
shake one’s fist at sb with anger：气得朝...挥舞拳头
feel anger boiling up inside sb: 内心怒火中烧
sb be angry/ annoyed/ irritated/ furious/ upset/ mad at/ about...
某人对...很生气/恼怒/激怒/狂怒/不高兴/发怒
One’s voice trembled with anger/rage:气得声音发抖
sb glared at... with anger burning in one’s eyes. 怒视着...，眼里充满怒火。
sb be filled with anger/ fury：心里充满怒气
anger/ annoyance took hold of sb：某人生气/恼怒极了
sb boil/ burn with rage/ fury: 怒火中烧
A burst of fury erupted, flooding sb in waves/ flooding sb over
一阵愤怒喷薄而出，淹没某人
Words choked sb in the throat with fury
=Sb got speechless with fury气得说不出话来
Filled with anger/fury, Tom was unable to utter a single word.-
So firmly did anger/ fury take hole of Tom that he couldn’t utter a singer word. Tom气得一句话也说不出。
Boiling with rage, Tom shook his fist at me. Tom怒火中烧，对我挥舞拳头。
Tom's recent behavior would always make Mr. Smith burst into anger/ explode with anger. 汤姆最近的行为总能让史密斯老师火冒三丈。
Tom hung his head and said nothing，which made him frown. He pulled a long face in anger. 汤姆垂头不语，这使他皱起眉头，气得拉长了脸。
Unable to contain his anger，he stormed out of the room，slamming the door furiously behind him. 他无法控制自己的愤怒，气得冲出房间，狠狠地摔上门。
The reply of her father again fueled Jenny's anger，and she stamped her feet in anger. 　她父亲的回答犹如火上浇油，气得詹妮直跺脚。
Her parents left for work. Anger poured through her and her cheeks flamed with anger. 她的父母离开家去上班，她满腔怒火，气得两颊通红。