2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写之亲情类专项训练及素材积累（含答案）

2022.04 台州二模 父亲的生日惊喜
首段：It was a cold yet sunny Saturday morning in February. Dad’s New Year’s resolution had been to get fit. Mum pushed him out of bed and told him to go jogging by the river. Later, after a nice lie-in, she went downstairs in her dressing gown and found the kids watching TV She turned it off and said she was going to do something really special for Dad’s birthday. If they overheard anything, just promised to keep it secret.
沮丧的妈妈给奶奶打了个电话。（Frustrated, Mum did...）感觉到妈妈的悲伤，奶奶安慰她，并且建议她。(Sensing...., grandma did sth. and did sth.)
被妈妈的新计划惊醒（Awaken by..., the two kids both.....），两个孩子都发出震耳欲聋的欢呼声(deafening cheers)，跳来跳去。他们一起构思(brainstormed)了一系列想法，突然珍妮突然喃喃地(murmured)说：“爸爸的新年决心(resolution)是什么？”
突然，一切都成功了，他们愉快地(merrily)达成协议(reached an agreement to do)，计划一次秘密的徒步旅行(a secret hiking)去他们曾经经常去的山，并在山顶进行家庭野餐。
4、一路上，两个孩子蹦蹦跳跳(bounced around), ，笑着聊着。(Ving and Ving）。爸爸和妈妈一起回忆（recalled）了他们年轻时的许多美好回忆。一到山顶(Upon arriving...)，三人就非常高兴地去野餐。在凉爽的微风中(with the cool breeze)，爸爸沉思地(reflectively)盯着他们，突然意识到和家人的爱一起庆祝生日不再令人不安了(it’s no longer disturbing to do....)。
20220317金丽衢十二校、七彩阳光联盟： 我和父亲的一次通信
首段：It’s hard to talk to dads sometimes. The roles we often expect our fathers to play-protector，provider-can make them seem impenetrable(不可理解的). That’s how it was with my dad. He came to Canada at the age of ten and settled in an immigrant community. He was never much of a talker. He rarely drank, so we didn't get to see him loosen up after a few beers. He didn't tell stories about himself at the dinner table or when we went for walks in the park. He was a private person and seemed to want to stay that way.
两周后，他的回复出现（show up）在了我的电子邮箱里，一份三页的扫描文件(a scanned three-page document)。显然(apparently)，我爸爸仔细考虑了我的信息，回忆了一下(reached back into his memory)，并起草了(crafted)一个回应。
在信中，他分享了自己在生活中的爱、渴望(desire)、自我怀疑(self-doubt)、恐惧(fear)和挣扎(struggle)的过去。他还给我提供了一些实用的关于如何处理我的关系和事业的建议(some practical suggestions on...)。在面对困难时，他所表现出的巨大毅力(great perseverance)也让我印象深刻(be impressed by)。
我关闭了电子邮件，开始哭了起来。我哭了，因为在我自己的挣扎中，他的信立刻使我放心了(put me at ease)。从那以后，我们进行了很多交流(exchanges)。我的问题并没有得到神奇的解决(be magically solved)，但是得到更好地了解我的父亲以及学会更爱他——让艰难的事情变得更容易管理(make the difficult thing more manageable)，生活更甜蜜。
2022.03届潍坊高三一模验收 读后续写 爷爷的拐杖
首段： A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming. Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
1、柏林方面认为这是个好主意。他们立即开始给爷爷做一根手杖（cane）。
他们一选择一棵中等大小的小树（a young tree of moderate size），就把它砍下来，然后用刀取下树枝（branch）和树皮(skin)。
在顶部系着一根小木头作为把手（With a small wood fastened on the top as a handle），一根时尚的手杖出现（come into being）了。
为了让把手感觉舒服，他们在上面裹了一块软布(wrapped a soft cloth)。
柏林，充满了创新的想法，在拐杖上雕刻”献给爷爷”。多么酷的甘蔗啊！（what a...!）
杰克和柏林把拐杖递给了爷爷。爷爷看着那根奇特的手杖，感到很高兴，脸上的微笑像钻石一样闪闪发光。（with smiles on his face shining like a diamond）
他满怀爱意地(with affection)感谢孙子们的礼物，“你们兄弟真的是伟大的创造者(creator)！”爷爷拄着拐杖( supporting him with the cane, grandpa did...)，控制不住自己，一步一步地走到森林里去了(动作链)。看着周围的树木和草，他激动地(emotionally)说他会永远珍惜(cherish)他们在森林里的美好时光(fond memories)。
常州市2021-2022届高三年级第一学期期中考试 生日惊喜
首段：That December, with Christmas approaching, my mother was out at work when I let myself into her bedroom one afternoon in search of a safety pin. I took the key hidden under the carpet, unlocked the door stepped in. Standing against the wall was a big, black bicycle with balloon tires. I recognized it instantly. It was the same second-hand bike I'd been admiring in a Baltimore Street shop window. Somehow my mother must have scraped together enough for a down payment and meant to surprise me with the bicycle on Christmas morning.
心跳加速。我从卧室里出来了。（Heartbeat racing, I ....）
令我失望的是(to my disappointment)，圣诞树下只有几个包裹着色彩鲜艳的小包裹(a few small brightly wrapped packages)。没有自行车。我的心沉(sank)了下来，好像被冷水泼(be splashed)到了一样。
我慢慢地打开包裹，却看到(only to see)里面躺着一件衬衫。我感到了一种痛苦的不满(a bitter displeasure)。我的自行车怎么了？我不禁想到，我妈妈觉得这辆自行车太贵了，最后就把它寄了回去。当我握紧衬衫时，我能感觉到泪水涌了出来(feel tears welling up )。
我正要穿着衬衫沮丧地（disappointedly）走进我的房间，这时我妈妈在我身后喊道：“等等！我的卧室里有什么东西让我全忘了。”她回到了自己的房间，一会儿又推着那辆黑色大自行车回来了。(came back with...)
当自行车进入我的视线时，我不必假装感到兴奋和惊讶。我伸出双臂搂住我妈妈(threw my arms around)，亲吻她。”谢谢妈妈！这是我收到过的最好的圣诞礼物了！”我妈妈紧紧地抱着我，脸上露出了灿烂的笑容（a brilliant grin bloomed on her face）。
2022.04 台州二模 父亲的生日惊喜答案：
Frustrated, Mum made a call to grandma. Sensing Mum’s sorrow, grandma comforted and advised.Slapped awaken by Mum’s new plan, the two kids both burst into deafening cheers and skipped round and round. Together, they brainstormed a list of ideas when suddenly Jenny murmured, “What’s Dad’s resolution for the new year ” Suddenly, it all clicked and they merrily reached an agreement to plan a secret hiking trip to the hill they once frequented and a family picnic at the top.
All the way, the two kids bounced around, laughing and chatting. He along with Mum, recalled a lot of sweet memories in their youth. Upon arriving at the top, the three just pitched into the picnic in sheer pleasure. With the cool breeze, Dad gazed at them reflectively and suddenly realized that it’s no longer disturbing to celebrate birthday with the love of family.
20220317金丽衢十二校、七彩阳光联盟： 我和父亲的一次通信答案：
Para 1: Two weeks later, his response showed up in my email box. It was a scanned three-page document. Apparently, my dad had carefully considered my message, reached back into his memory and crafted a response. In the letter, he shared his history of love, longing, self-doubt, fears and struggles in life. He also offered me some practical suggestions on how to handle my relationship and career. While reading, I got the sense that it must have been really tough for my dad to settle down in a new country at an early age. I was also impressed by the great perseverance he showed in the face of difficulty.
Para 2: I closed the email and started to cry. I cried because I wished I had opened up earlier but was grateful it wasn’t too late. I cried because in the midst of my own struggles, his letter instantly put me at ease. And I cried because in the end, it was so simple: I just had to hit “Send”. We’ve since had many exchanges. My problems haven’t been magically solved, but getting to know my dad better – and learning to love him more – has made the tough stuff more manageable and life sweeter. It’s hard to talk to dads sometimes, but I’m glad that I found a way to talk to mine.
2022.03届潍坊高三一模验收 读后续写 爷爷的拐杖答案Berlin thought it was a good idea. They set about making a cane for Grandpa immediately.
The moment they chose a young tree of moderate size, they cut it down and then removed the branches and skins with a knife. With a small wood fastened on the top as a handle, a fashionable cane came into being（with复合结构表伴随）. To make the handle feel comfortable, they wrapped a soft cloth around it. Berlin, full of innovative ideas, carved （制作拐杖的动作链）words Gift To Grandpa on the cane. What a cool cane!
Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. Staring at the fancy cane, Grandpa was so happy with smiles on his face shining like a diamond（高兴的心理描写）. He thanked his grandsons for the wonderful gift with affection, "You brothers are really great creators!" Supporting himself with the cane, Grandpa couldn't contain himself and went to the forest step by step.（拐杖发挥作用，爷爷来到森林） Watching the trees and grass around, he emotionally said he would forever cherish the fond moments they were together in the forest（场景复现，共同回忆甜蜜时刻） .
常州市2021-2022届高三年级第一学期期中考试 生日惊喜答案
Heartbeat racing. I came out of my bedroom. To my disappointment, only a few small brightly wrapped packages were lying under the Christmas tree. No bicycle. My heart sank as if being splashed by cold water. Slowly I opened my package, only to see a shirt lying inside. What I felt was bitter displeasure. What happened to my bicycle I couldn't help thinking my mom had found the bike just too expensive and eventually sent it back. I could feel tears welling up in my eyes as ] clenched the shirt.
I was about to go into my room disappointedly with the shirt when my mom cried behind me, "Wait! There's something in my bedroom I forgot all about." She went to her room, and a moment later came back wheeling the big black bicycle with balloon tires. I didn't have to pretend the excitement and surprise as the bicycle came into my sight. I threw my arms around my mom and kissed her spontaneously. "Thank you mom! This is the best Christmas gift I've ever had!" A brilliant grin bloomed on my mom's face as she held me tightly.