山西省太原市2023-2024学年高二下学期期中小作文解读与示范讲义

24太原高二下期中小作文解读与示范
第四部分 写作(共两节，满分25分)
第一节(满分10分)
你校英文报将开设专栏，向同学们推荐有关“工匠精神”的纪录片。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.推荐纪录片《我在故宫修文物》(Masters in the Forbidden City)；
2.说明推荐理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Documentary Recommendation: Masters in the Forbidden City
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分析与示范：
战略：方向——人与自我（校园话题——校报专栏“推荐节目”）
战术：内容——1.题设+推荐；2.理由（角度1：精湛的技艺；角度2：文化自信）
Documentary Recommendation: Masters in the Forbidden City
In response to the activity held by our English Newspaper, I fail to hesitate to recommend the classic documentary, Masters in the Forbidden City, to each of us, which will greatly enlarge our horizons and make us get a glimpse of the prosperity of ancient China.
Firstly, by watching this documentary, we will be provided with a key stage to witness how excellent skills our craftsmen possess in protecting the prize national antiques exhibited in the Forbidden city for hundreds of years. Secondly, the program serves as a door to us, through which all of us can have a better understanding of our splendid ancient civilization created by our ancestors and become more confident in our culture.
So never miss the chance to enjoy it.（4句）
锦言妙语：
1.介词短语做状语——In response to
2.非谓语做定语——activity held by our English Newspaper；stage to witness；antiques exhibited in the Forbidden city；civilization created by our ancestors；chance to enjoy it
3.定语从句——, which will greatly enlarge our horizons and make us get a glimpse of the prosperity of ancient China.；through which all of us can have a better understanding of our splendid ancient civilization created by our ancestors and become more confident in our culture.
4.宾语从句——witness how excellent skills our craftsmen possess in protecting the prize national antiques exhibited in the Forbidden city for hundreds of years
5.祈使句——never miss the chance to enjoy it
点评：
本次高二下期中测试的小作文，从文章命题与选材层面颇有深意，选择了热点流行节目作为背景材料的同时，还兼顾了写作的任务与目的。而且内容要点清晰，结构分明。
同时，本次命题的要求和新课标高考的要求一致，所以时一次不错的练兵实战的良机，值得考生重视与反思。
作文亮点：
In response to the activity held by our English Newspaper, I fail to hesitate to recommend the classic documentary, Masters in the Forbidden City, to each of us, which will greatly enlarge our horizons and make us get a glimpse of the prosperity of ancient China.
运用了非限制性定语从句。
Firstly, by watching this documentary, we will be provided with a key stage to witness how excellent skills our craftsmen possess in protecting the prize national antiques exhibited in the Forbidden city for hundreds of years.
运用了方式状语以及宾语从句。
Secondly, the program serves as a door to us, through which all of us can have a better understanding of our splendid ancient civilization created by our ancestors and become more confident in our culture.
运用了介词加关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句以及分词短语作定语。
So never miss the chance to enjoy it.
运用了祈使句。