2024年高考英语考前45天写作备考特辑（全国通用）专题01 20类应用文写作模板(含答案 ）

专题01 20类应用文写作模板(一)
01邀请信
【教考衔接】
第一段：开门见山表明写信目的，邀请对方参与某项活动；
中间段：详述活动的具体内容；
最后一段：再次表达诚挚的邀请。
【技巧指导】
Dear，
Knowing that you have a passion for, I’m writing to invite you to take part in it. We would be honored to have you there with us.（得知你喜欢________, 我写信来邀请你参加这个活动。）
Some details about this activity are as follows. First of all, it is scheduled to be held at school hall from 3 pm to 6 pm on next Sunday(活动地点和时间）. What’s more, (活动内容1). last but not least,(活动内容2). It is obvious that this is a golden opportunity to show__________. Not only can it help you__________, but also it can enrich your experience.(活动的意义) If interested, register for it by this Friday. Don’t miss the deadline.
I would very appreciate if you could receive our invitation. Eagerly looking forward to your early replay.
Yous,
Li hua
【范文点评】
(2023年天津市大港一中期中检测)
假定你是李华，为了提高大家学习英语的兴趣，你所在的英语协会将组织一次主题为“美丽英文”的活动。请你用英语给你的好友Lucy写一封邀请信，请她参加活动。内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.活动安排。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.信件的开头和结尾已经给出，但是不计入总词数。 Dear Lucy,
How are you getting on these days
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Lucy,
How are you getting on these days An activity called “Beautiful English” will be held in our school this week. Could I ask you to join in the activity
The activity will be held at 7:00 this Saturday evening in Room 203.In the activity, a variety of popular English songs will first be played for us to appreciate. Then we will have a discussion on how to enrich our English vocabulary. After that, there will be time for us when we can communicate with each other about methods of English study. Finally, we will have a series of interesting English games. You're sure to have a unique experience here.
I would appreciate it if you can come for the activity. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[导语]这篇书面表达是一个邀请信。要求考生以李华的身份，给好友 Lucy写一封邀请信，请她参加英语协会将组织“美丽英文”的活动。
第一步:词汇积累:
参加:join in→take part in 各种各样的:a variety of→various欣赏:appreciate→enjoy方法:method→approach
第二步:句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:An activity called “Beautiful English" will be held in our school this week.
拓展句:An activity whose name is“Beautiful English” will be held in our school this week.
第三步:高分句型:
[高分句型1]
After that, there will be time for us when we can communicate with each other about methods of English study.(运用了when引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型 2]
I would appreciate it if you can come for the activity.(运用了I would appreciate it if 的特殊句式，其中if引导宾语从句)
【素材运用】
2022年新高考I卷
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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One possible version：
Dear Caroline,
I am Li Hua, in charge of the English program “Talk and Talk” in the school radio station.I am writing this
email to invite you for an interview.
“Talk and Talk” is an English program which provides students with a variety of topics to broaden their horizons. A new interview on the theme of English literature is projected, with the intention of arousing students’ interest in learning English classics. You are definitely the one we are looking for, for not only is English literature what you are expert at, but also you enjoy great popularity for skillful teaching. The interview is scheduled to be held at 3 p.m. on Friday in the school radio station and will last about one hour.
If you can spare your time, please reply to me soon.I’d appreciate it if you accepted my invitation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
02申请信
【教考衔接】
第一段：自我介绍+写信目的
第二段：申请理由（主题句+拓展句+总结句）
第三段：表达感谢及祝福（Best wishes）
【技巧指导】
Dear_________,
I am___(自我介绍). I have learned from_____________(报纸等信息来源)that you need/are recruiting___(信息具体内容).I’m really interested in it.
I'm the right person who can meet your job descriptions perfectly. First of all,________________(原因1). Besides,____________(原因2). Last but not least,______________(原因 3).
Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
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【范文点评】
（浙江省杭州市四校联考2023-2024学年高一上学期10月月考英语试题）
假如你是李华，你校的英语阅读社团（English Reading Club）正在招募新成员，你非常渴望加入，请你用英语写一封申请信，内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.喜欢阅读的书籍类型；3、加入英语阅读社团的原因。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路：三段论。
第一段开门见山介绍写信目的：申请成为社团一员；
第二段介绍自我介绍（要点1）+喜欢的书籍类型（要点2）+加入社团的原因（要点3）；
第三段希望获准。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a freshman in our school. Learning that the English Reading Club is recruiting new members, I am writing to apply to be one of them.
As an outgoing and sociable boy, I am a reading enthusiast. I read a wealth of books, among which western literary works are my favorite. (The spellbinding classics give me a deep insight into foreign history and culture, broaden my horizons, and bring me extraordinary enjoyment and endless thinking as well.) The English Reading Club, therefore, becomes what I’m eager to join. For one thing, challenging to read books in the original will definitely improve my English level. For another, I can make more like-minded friends.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your early reply.
Li Hua
【参考范文解析】
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为申请信；
（2）李华身份根据文本要求需要交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为自我介绍+喜欢书籍类型+加入社团原因，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）Learning that听说；
（2）enthusiast热衷爱好者；
（3）a wealth of一大堆；
（4）spellbinding引人入胜的；
（5）give me a deep insigt into sth让我深入了解了某事；
（6）broaden one's horizons开阔视野；
（7）as well也；
（8）therefore意为“因此”，用作插入语；
（9）For one thing, ... For another, ...一方面，另一方面；
（10）like-minded志同道合的；
（11）I would appreciate it if you could ...如果...我将不胜感激。
【素材运用】
2019全国I
假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.个人优势；
3.能做的事情。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir,
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version：
Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua, a student studying in London, who is more than thrilled to be informed of the message that there will be an exhibition of Chinese paintings in your local art gallery. I am writing to apply for being a volunteer.
As a student from China, I have been keen on Chinese paintings. As you know, China has a growing influence on today's world. In the meanwhile, more attention is paid to the study of the traditional culture in Chinese high schools. So I have got the hang of the knowledge of Chinese paintings. By the way, I can also do well in communicating with others in oral English.
I would extremely appreciate it if I had a chance to receive your approval.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
03投稿
【教考衔接】
第1段:投稿约稿目的
第2段:介绍稿件的具体内容
第3段:期望祝福
【技巧指导】
Dear _____________，
I'd like to ask/invite you to write an article for某媒体某栏目， which provides a nice platform for某媒
体受众to do sth. It carries articles written by XXX concerning Chinese cultures.
Would you please write something about XXX You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.
结尾1:If you are interested, you are supposed to subscribe your article by Sep.10.
结尾2:Could we have your article before Sep.10 I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文点评】
2023 全国甲卷
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
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【答案】
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to
countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of
Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even
today,his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of
knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of
the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写
一篇短文投稿。
【详解】
词汇积累
著名的：well-known → famous
人物：figure → person
强调：emphasize → stress
基础：foundation → basis
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.
拓展句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, which fostered respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.
【素材运用】
2023 全国乙卷
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案】
When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I had watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginners. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.
Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会：opportunity → chance
使沮丧：demoralize → discourage
满意的：satisfied → content
空闲的：leisure → spare
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.
拓展句：The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.
04求助信
【教考衔接】
第一段:自我介绍(收信人非熟人)，交代求助的背景及写信的目的;
第二段:详细描述求助的具体内容，告知联系方式(必要时);
第三段:表达希望得到对方的帮助并致谢。
【技巧指导】
Dear _____________，
I am Li Hua, a student from ×××school. (正式一些的求助信需要进行自我介绍) / How are you doing these days (求助熟悉的人需要寒暄问候一下) I’m writing to you in the hope of seeking for help. (说明写信目的) / I wonder whether I could ask you to do me a favor. (正式一点的求助）
Faced with so many problems, I have to turn to you for help. First, I have trouble in ________遇到的困难1_________. What’s more, _____遇到的困难2______ is also very difficult for me to do. (中间段具体说明困难) Would you like to introduce to me some good ways to_________so that I can ________more easily I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.
I would be greatly grateful to you if you could lend me a helping hand. I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.（表达谢意，期待来信）
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文点评】
(辽宁省丹东市五校协作体2023-2024学年高12月试题)
假设你是某中学高三学生李华。近期你校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写的讲座。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括
1.表达感谢并简述你的收获;
2.说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
参考词汇:读后续写continuation writing
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Steve,
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Yours,
Li hua
【答案】
Dear Steve,
I'm writing to express my thanks for the wonderful lecture you delivered on continuation writing. I've leared really a lot. However, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in it.
For instance, I find it hard to grasp the theme of the passage. Besides, I also feel it hard to continue when confronted with new words. What can I do Would you please give me some advice
I would be really grateful if you could help me out. Thank you very much again. Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
[导语]本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于近期校外教 Steve 做了一场关于读后续写的讲座这一情况，用英文给他写一封电子邮件，表达感谢并简述收获，说明自己在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
[详解]1.词汇积累
困惑的:puzzled→confused
此外:Besides→What's more建议: advice→ suggestion感激的:grateful→ thankful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I've learned really a lot. However, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in it.拓展句:ThoughI've learned really a lot, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in it.
【点睛]
【高分句型1]Besides, I also feel it hard to continue when confronted with new words.(运用了连词 when 引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]I would be really grateful if you could help me out.(运用了连词f引导的条件状语从句)
【素材运用】
2020全国III卷
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：
1.剧情简介；
2.指导内容；
3.商定时间地点。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.结束语已为你写好。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going these days I am Li Hua. I, together with my classmates, have adapted a short play
from the text The Necklace, but we meet with some trouble. Now, I am writing to ask you to give us some guidance.
As we all know, in the story Mathilde Loisel dreamed of a wealthy lifestyle but her vain obsession ended up with her lifetime of misery and despair, ruining her life. However, we find it extremely tough to use proper tones to speak the lines, which has vexed us for quite a long time. Hopefully you would be so kind as to give us some help with this problem.
If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 8:30 on Sunday morning in the school theatre. We would appreciate it if you could do us a favor.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
05咨询信
【教考衔接】
第一段:说明写信目的;
第二段:咨询具体事宜;
第三段:表示感谢并期盼回复。
【技巧指导】
Dear _____________，
I'm_(自我介绍). I'm writing to inquire(总述咨询的内容).
To start with, I'd like to_(具体内容1).If convenient, could you please offer me some detailed information about_(具体内容2) What's more, I would be obliged if you_(具体内容 3).
I'm expecting to receive your early reply. Thank you in advance for your assistance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文点评】
（南京、盐城2024高三英语一模）
假定你是李华，一个月前你给校英文报专栏Interpersonal Relationships投稿，但尚未收到回复。请你写一封邮件问询，内容包括：
1．简述稿件内容；
2．询问稿件情况。
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【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I contributed to your “Interpersonal Relationships” column a month ago. Not having received any response yet, I am writing to inquire about it.
Titled “Strangers under the Same Roof”,my article explores various practical strategies for us teenagers to maintain a harmonious parent-child relationship.Does it ring a bell with you I'm eager to know if my contribution has been selected for publication or if any further modifications are needed.
Thank you for your attention. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
介绍稿件内容的句式：
1. My manuscript mainly explores...我的稿件主要探讨了……
2. This manuscript focuses on...该稿件聚焦于……
3. The content of the article revolves around...文章内容围绕……展开
4. This paper aims to analyze/introduce...本文旨在分析/介绍……”
5. I emphasize the importance of...in the manuscript.我在稿件中强调了…的重要性
6. The core idea of the manuscript is...稿件的核心观点是……
询问是否收到稿件的句式
1. I want to confirm whether you have received my manuscript.
我想确认您是否已经收到我的稿件。
2. I wonder if you have received the article I submitted.
不知您是否已经收到我投稿的文章。
3. Could you please let me know if my manuscript has been delivered 能否告知我的稿件是否已送达？
4. I would like to know if my submission has been accepted.
想了解我的投稿是否已经被接收。
5.Please inform me whether the manuscript has been received.
请告知我是否收到了稿件。
6. If my manuscript is rejected, will it be returned 如果我的稿件被拒绝了，是否会退回？
表达对回复的期待
1.I look forward to your prompt reply.
我期待您的尽快回复。
2.I hope to receive your reply soon.
我希望能早日收到您的答复。
3.I am expecting your response at your earliest convenience.
我盼望您能在方便的时候给我回复。
4.Thank you for taking the time to reply to my email.
感谢您抽出时间回复我的邮件。
5.I anticipate your feedback.
我期待您的反馈。
【素材运用】
2021全国甲卷
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1.阐明写信事由；
2.征求建议；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
I am writing to ask some advice from you on what kind of Chinese traditional culture attracts the foreigners
most.Next week, a class meeting is scheduled to be held with the theme of Chinese traditional culture, which will be displayed on the English website later. As you know, Chinese culture is broad and profound. For instance, there are various kinds of traditional festivals, calligraphy arts, and painting arts in China. In addition, the traditional delicious food is well worth introducing. What interests you and your friends most
I would appreciate it if you could tell me more information about the meeting. Looking forward to your early
reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
06发言稿
【教考衔接】
1. 称呼，自我介绍，概括性地提出发言稿的主题
2. 具体说明∶①表明观点，列举理由，举例子.
②展开需要介绍或推广的细节内容
对全文作简明扼要的总结，谈自己的感想、看法或期望
【技巧指导】
Good morning, everyone, / Ladies and gentlemen,
It's my great honor to speak here as a student Now. I have much to share with you. / I feel greatly honored to share my topic “_______介绍演讲的主题_____” with you.
Firstly,______有关演讲主题的内容之一______. What’ s more, _____有关演讲主题的内容之二____. Finally, I hope more students will ____提出希望大家一起做的事情___and everyone here will have a wonderful time today. (祝福在座的各位生活愉快）
That's all. Thank you.
【范文点评】
（广东省2024届普通高中毕业班第一次调研考试）
假定你是李华。近期，你班英语课堂上进行了主题为“Whether frequency repetition plays a key role in learning English ”的讨论，请你代表小组作简要发言，内容包括：1.讨论的主题；2.简要概括；3.对你的启发。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear classmates,
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Thanks for listening!
【答案】
Dear classmates,
As we all know, opinions vary on whether frequency repetition plays a key role in learning English, about which our class had a heated discussion today.
Some students hold the view that no method is better than frequency repetition in learning a language, with no exception for English learning. Other students, however, argue that frequency repetition is boring. They insist that they will be turned off by such method, ending up getting half the result with twice the effort.
The discussion gives me a real insight into the fact that learning English requires patience, perseverance as well as the right method.
Thanks for listening!
【参考范文解析】
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为发言稿；
（2）因文本是发言，故李华的身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为介绍死记硬背是否对英语学习有帮助，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）as we all know众所周知，as引导定语从句；
（2）opinions vary on ...对于某事众说纷纭；
（3）hold the view that认为...；
（4）no method is better than否定词+比较级=肯定意义的最高级；
（5）with no exception for...也不例外；
（6）however用作插入语；
（7）argue持反对意见的人发表观点时的表达；
（8）be turned off对...失去了兴趣；
（9）end up doing最终做某事；
（10）get half the result with twice the effort事倍功半；
（11）give sb a real insight into让某人真正理解。
【素材运用】
2021年1月浙江卷
假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 介绍活动安排；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Distinguished guests:
On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum,
which contains the splendid history of our school. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and Western teaching methods. After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students.
As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming. May you have an unforgettable experience.
07报道
【教考衔接】
第一段:简要介绍活动/事件的时间、地点;
第二段:陈述活动/事件过程;
第三段:评价/推荐活动/事件。
【技巧指导】
活动名称 Successfully Held
时间witnessed a/an 形容词activity titled “题目” held by 主办方+地点, which involved 参与人, with the intention of目的（动词用doing）.
As scheduled, the activity started with 活动1, which活动1意义. Then, under the guidance of指导人, a series of fascinating activities were organized, ranging from活动2 to活动3. Undoubtedly, There were many moments when we were amazed at the excellent performances of 参与人. However, what impressed me most was that 精彩瞬间（完整句子表述）
The activity benefited us a lot, through which not only did we 感受1(动词原形）, but we also 感受2(动词过去式）.
【范文点评】
（2023·新疆·校联考二模）
假定你是校英语报的记者，上周末你校举办了“校园十佳歌手”大赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。
内容包括：1.活动主题及参加人员；
2.活动详情；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Campus Top Ten Singers Competition, whose theme was to enrich school life and give full play to youth as well as their positive outlook, was launched last weekend. We students and all teaching staff gave an active response as well as a big applause to this event.
Those who are enthusiastic about singing participated in the competition, which was full of climax and splendor. The contestants’ singing styles are diverse, expressing their love for music and their declaration of youth. After fierce competition, the top ten singers came out in public. It not only opens a grand event for teachers and students but also attracts students to speak out for their dreams. We students will continue to follow the beat of youth and feel the life of culture and art.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道，要求考生为校英文报写一篇关于学校举办的“校园十佳歌手”大赛的报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
主题：theme→subject
反应：response→reaction
充满：be full of→be filled with
各种各样的：diverse→varied
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句：After fierce competition, the top ten singers came out in public.
拓展句：It was after fierce competition that the top ten singers came out in public.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Campus Top Ten Singers Competition, whose theme was to enrich school life and give full play to youth as well as their positive outlook, was launched last weekend. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The contestants’ singing styles are diverse, expressing their love for music and their declaration of youth. (运用了现在分词作状语)
【素材运用】
2023浙江1月卷
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道,内容包括：
1.活动的过程；
2.收获与感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按以下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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【答案】
Last weekend, I participated in the "Getting to Know the Plants Around Us" event organized by the school student union.
The event commenced with a lecture on the significance of plants in our daily lives, followed by a guided tour
of the school garden.During the tour, we learned about different types of plants, their characteristics, and their uses. We also had the opportunity to touch and smell the plants, which helped us to better understand their unique
features.The highlight of the event was the hands-on activity where we were given the chance to plant our own seedlings.
Overall, the event was a great success. It not only provided us with valuable knowledge about plants, but also allowed us to appreciate the beauty and importance of nature. It was a great reminder that we should all do our part in protecting and preserving our environment.
08通知
【教考衔接】
第一段:通知缘由;
第二段:通知事项;
第三段:表示欢迎和期待。
【技巧指导】
NOTICE
To enrich our school life and arouse students’ enthusiasm for ______(活动主旨) , ______(活动)is going to be held at ______(活动地点) on ______(活动时间).
Contestants are required to ______(活动要求). All entries must be submitted to ______(报名地点) by ______(截止时间) . All the ______(参赛内容) will be graded carefully by our foreign teachers. Winners of the contest will be awarded with ______(颁发奖品).
Those who show their keen interests in the activity will be highly appreciated. Keenly anticipate your participation.
Student Union
【范文点评】
（九省联考卷·2024年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试）
你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的作文比赛，请你写一则活动通知，内容包括：1.介绍活动目的；2.说明参赛要求。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school is scheduled to organize an English writing competition themed with "Joint Efforts to Save Food", with the purpose of enhancing the students' awareness to cherish food and put an end to waste, so that they learn thrift as a habit by heart and bear it in mind.
The article is required to be focused on the theme, with the sharing of the students' practices and opinions of saying no to food waste as well as the specific measures to promote the "Clean Plate Campaign". Each and every article may as well be limited to no more than 500 words, attached with the class and name of the author.
Your active participation is highly expected, and please keep those around you informed.
The English Newspaper
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为通知；
（2）因本文是一则通知，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分写活动的目的参赛要求，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）be scheduled to计划做某事；
（2）themed with以...为主题，用作后置定语；
（3）with the purpose of目的是...；
（4）put an end to结束；
（5）learn ... by heart and bear it in mind使...入脑入心；
（6）say no to拒绝；
（7）each and every每一个；
（8）may as well还是...的好；
（9）is highly expected某事是很期待的；
（10）keep sb informed使某人知晓。
【素材运用】
2019全国II卷
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括：
1.比赛信息；
2.赛前准备；
3.表达期待。
注意：
1.词数 100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
I am very pleased to inform you that we will have a friendly match with the volleyball team of Guangming Middle School next Monday. It will fall at 2 pm in our gymnasium, where about 1,000 students from the two schools will come to watch.
In order to provide the students with a fantastic match, we need to have enough training. So we plan to practice together in the gym this Wednesday and Thursday, lasting from 4 pm to 6 pm. I would appreciate it much if you could participate in it on time.
This is a friendly game, so we should keep in mind the principle of friendship first. Of course, we are looking forward to winning the game. I am sure we can realize it with our effort together.
Yours,
Li Hua
09感谢信
【教考衔接】
第一段:表达感谢之情，并说明感谢的事由;
第二段:具体叙述对方给予的帮助;
第三段:再次表达谢意或回报意愿。
【技巧指导】
Dear __×××__ ,
How is everything going （用于比较熟悉的人之间简单打招呼）/ I'm Li Hua, a student from ××× Middle School.（用于正式的感谢信中自我介绍） ①I am writing to extend/express/show my sincere/heartfelt gratitude for ______(开头说明感谢对方的原因).
②But for your assistance in ______(对方给予的具体帮助), I would not have ______(运用虚拟语气句式表达没有对方帮助时会产生的后果).
③You have given me so much help that I will never forget. Last month, ______(回忆感谢对方做出的细节1-2点).
④Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. （结尾再次表达感谢之意）/ Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life! （也可以表达自己对另一方的祝福）/ If there is a chance, welcome to China, I am looking forward to your coming. / I am looking forward to meeting you one day to express my heartfelt thanks for your generous help face to face.（还可以邀请对方来中国参观）
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【范文点评】
.(2024届湖南省雅礼中学高三月考试卷四)
假如你是李华，你在口语课上回答错误，引得全班哄堂大笑。外教Julia及时救场，你想写封信表达你的感谢。内容包括：1.当时的情况；2.外教的做法；3.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Julia,
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Yours,
Li hua
【答案】
Dear Julia,
I hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for helping me out of embarrassment in the oral English class.
Memories of your help came flooding back to me. In the class yesterday when I was required to introduce Hu’nan specialties, I had intended to say that Hu’nan has a lot of delicious snacks. However, the word “snacks" was mispronounced as “snakes”, causing laughter from the whole class. So awkward was I that I didn't know where to put myself. It was at that moment that you distracted my classmates' focus by asking them to talk about the legends of snakes, which saved me from embarrassment and strengthened my determination to learn spoken English well. After all, no method is better than more practice.
Many thanks for your kindness! Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作三步法：
（1）仔细审题，确定本文为感谢信；
（2）因对方是外教老师，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）根据写作要求，本文主体部分为感谢对方帮助自己摆脱口语课犯错被同学嘲笑的尴尬，确定本文时态主基调为一般过去时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）I hope this letter finds you well无灵主语结构；
（2）express one's gratitude to sb for sth因某事向某人表达谢意；
（3）Memories of your help came flooding back to me分词短语做状语；
（4）had intended to do sth本来打算做某事；
（5）So awkward was ...so+形容词置于句首产生部分倒装结构；
（6）... didn't know where to put myself无地自容，尴尬地想钻地洞；
（7）It was at that moment that强调句型；
（8）save sb from使某人免除某事；
（9）no method is better than ...某事是不二法门。
【素材运用】
2019年6月浙江卷
假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Alex,
It’s really a pity that you will leave us and go back to your country. On the occasion of parting, I would like to
express my deep gratitude to you. Thank you very much for your help with my English study over the months.
For various reasons, my English was not very good. But your timely help made a difference. With your patient and effective help, my English has improved a lot. What’s more, thanks to your help, I now have confidence in my English study and have effective learning strategies.
Parting is inevitable, but I believe our friendship will last forever. Wish you all the best and a good journey back home.
Yours,
Li Hua
10建议信
【教考衔接】
第一段：写信原因+写信目的
第二段：给出具体的建议及理由
第三段：希望采纳建议+表达美好祝愿
【技巧指导】
Dear ________,
I was glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on _________(别人求助内容). Here are my suggestions. / You have asked me for my advice with regard to__________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
To get started, you had better _________(建议一). Besides, it’s a good idea to _________(建议二). Last but not least, I think the most efficient way is to _________(建议三).
With all the factors taken into consideration, I’m sure you will _________(成功解决问题). / I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your__________(祝愿)
Best wishes,
Li Jin
【范文点评】
2023 新高考I&II卷
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little
room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with
or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）
【素材运用】
2023 安徽省、云南省、吉林省、黑龙江省四省联考卷
你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容
包括：
1. 音乐会特点；
2. 观看感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
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【答案】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection.
I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for us Chinese students and our international friends to learn about and from each other.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会，在线上留言板上写一则评论。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确定无疑地：undoubtedly→without doubt
尤其地：particularly→ especially
感动：touch→ move
希望：hope→ expect
2.句式拓展
原句：Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
拓展句：There is no doubt that their performances are of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different
from a live one.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）