-2024年高考英语考前45天写作备考特辑（全国通用）专题02 20类应用文写作模板(二) （含答案）

专题02 20类应用文写作模板(二)
11祝贺信
【教考衔接】
第一段：表达写信目的“祝贺对方事由”
第二段：表达对其成功进行积极的评价
第三段：再次表达祝贺以及对未来的祝福
【技巧指导】
Dear _______ ,
(首段祝贺) Congratulations on your _______ . It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ . I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your ___________.
(评论事件) I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. Now you prove to me a mature and well-rounded（全面的）________in every respect.
(展望未来，再次祝愿) Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________ . Again, I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!
Yours，
___________
【范文点评】
2021新高考I&II卷
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；
2. 喜爱的栏目；
3. 期望和祝福。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Dear Editor-in-Chief，
Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of Youth.
I have been a devoted reader since I subscribed to the newspaper. Obsessed with it, I read each issue from cover to cover. It boasts a variety of columns, of which Chinese culture is my favorite. The series of contents not only introduces abundant cultural knowledge but also values the inheritance of brilliant culture and strengthens our cultural confidence.
As a fan of Youth. I recommend that it will be better if it carries some articles about the life of foreign teens and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：found→establish
沮丧的：depressed→upset
此外：besides→what’s more
得到：receive→obtain
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【素材运用】
(2023届湖南省长沙市湖南师范大学附属中学高三下学期模拟试卷)
假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛”(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.回顾他的付出和努力；3.期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。
注意：
写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Congratulations on your winning the first prize of the foreign contestant group in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest, which came as no surprise.
In order to prepare for the contest, on the one hand, you gave up your rest time and buried yourself in the library to get a deeper insight into the types and characteristics of Chinese traditional culture to enrich your
knowledge reserve. On the other hand, you immersed yourself in the question bank provided by the contest organizer to make perfect, so perfect that many Chinese students are no match for you. Now, your hard work has finally paid off.
Looking forward to your making greater contributions to the promotion of Chinese culture!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为祝贺信；
（2）因两人是朋友关系，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为说明Peter成功的付出与努力，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）... came as no surprise毫不奇怪；
（2）On the one hand, ... On the other hand, ...一方面，...；另一方面，...
（3）bury oneself in埋头于；
（4）get a deeper insight into深入了解；
（5）immerse oneself in沉浸于...；
（6）no match for sb不是某人的对手；
（7）pay off得到回报。
12慰问信
【教考衔接】
第一段：知悉困境，表示同情
第二段：表示理解与同情，给予安慰和劝导
第三段：表达期望、祝愿
【技巧指导】
Dear ___人名____,
I’m shocked/ sorry to hear that you__________________（对方遇到的不好的事情）. I quite understand how you feel now. / It's understandable that you sink into sadness. （表示能理解对方处境）
My suggestions are as follows: First and foremost, we should _________________（建议1）. In
addition, _____________（建议2）. Only in this way can we ________________（解决问题并且取得成功）. / Therefore , if your dream endeavors to rise above the disadvantage, you will win sooner or later.
I hope that you______________________（祝愿对方）. Let’s go all out together to turn our dreams into reality. / If you need any help, please don't hesitate to contact me. We shall be happy when you are back.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文点评】
2021·天津卷
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾巳给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian 'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案与解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
1.词汇积累
照顾：take care of→look after
另外，此外：in addition→besides→what’s more
雇佣：employ→hire
既然：now that→since
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
拓展句：As the Internet industry develops rapidly，the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
【素材运用】
2022·浙江卷
假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 回忆活动经历；2. 分享个人收获；3. 希望保持联系。
注意：
1 . 词数80左右；
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
How are you doing these days It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s far more important is that we became good friends then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown.
I hope we can keep in touch often.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案与解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。
1.词汇积累
返回：come back to → return to
思念：miss→ yearn
分享：share → exchange
玩得开心：enjoy oneself→ have a good time → have fun
开心的：pleased→ happy →delight→ content
过着快乐的生活：lead a happy life→ live a happy life
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much.
拓展句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland and I miss you so much.
13道歉信
【教考衔接】
第一段：开门鉴赏，说明写信目的，真诚道歉
第二段：说明道歉的合理原因并提出弥补措施或解决办法
第三段：再次表示道歉，请求谅解
【技巧指导】
Dear ×××,
I am writing to make an apology to you for___提出要道歉的事情___. I am so sorry that __给对方造成的后果_____.
The reason why I break the appointment is that ___提出没有赴约的理由__. If it’s convenient for you, 向对方提出2到3个补救措施_. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.
I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness. Please forgive me for any inconvenience caused. / Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.（再次表达歉意，希望对方原谅）
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文点评】
2021·北京·高考真题
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案与解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。
1.词汇积累
通知：tell→inform
麻烦：problem→trouble
怎么样：what about→how about
适合：fit→suit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I should be available anytime next weekend.
拓展句：I should be available anytime next weekend so that I can go out with you and have a good time.
【素材运用】
2016年全国卷III
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to
attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：题目要求写一封道歉信，就不能如约一起去书向Bob道歉，使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。
亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。
范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；
目的状语从句so that we’ll have more time to read and select books；条件句If it’s convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合，使内容更加丰富。
14投诉信
【教考衔接】
第一段：表达写信目的：投诉
第二段：陈述要投诉的问题以及希望对方进行补救
第三段：希望对方能尽快解决上面提出的问题
【技巧指导】
Dear manager,
I am Tom, one of your customers. (自我介绍) I am writing to lodge a complaint about
______. (表达写作目的) / I am Li Hua, a senior high school student. I am extremely sorry to disturb you, but I have to write a letter to convey my complaint and dissatisfaction. / I am a middle school student. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction and disappointment about the unpleasant experience which happened a few days ago. (投诉原因)
For one thing, ___________________ (投诉原因一) For another, _________________. (投诉原因二)
It is required that I should get a replacement, or I should receive a full refund. / I do hope you can deal with
this problem. I want to exchange it for another or have my money back. (提出解决问题的办法或者要求) Thank you for your attention and I am looking forward to your prompt reply. / I'd appreciate it if you can cope with it as early as you can. / I would be grateful if you could take my opinion into consideration. (期待回复)
Yours sincerely ,
Tom
【范文点评】
2023年全国新高考I卷
假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan要举办口语培训班，让练习口语的所有的学生两人一组练习，随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，说说原因和提建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Dear Rhan,
I'm Li Hua, a student from your class. I am writing to discuss the grouping of the oral practice class.
Your method of asking us to practice in pairs will undoubtedly improve our oral English faster. However, your decision on randomly selecting two to form a group, in my opinion, is improper. For one thing, the two students may be strangers to each other, which will greatly reduce the effect of our oral practice. For another, The two students with different English levels and interests will make it challengeing to practice our oral English. Therefore, it is preferable for us to choose our own teammates, from which we willget twice the result with half the effort.
I hope you will give my advice your full consideration. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定本文约等于投诉信类文体；
（2）因对方是外教，故李华身份要交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为随机分组不妥的原因和自己的建议，本文总体时态定调为一般现在时和一般将来时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）undoubtedly无疑；
（2）For one thing, ... For another, ...一方面，...另一方面，...；
（3）be strangers to对...不熟悉；
（4）make it challenging to do sth运用it形式宾语的结构，其中challenging = difficult；
（5）it is preferable for sb to do sth对某事而言做某事是更好的；
（6）get twice the result with half the effort事半功倍。
【素材运用】
(2022年江苏省高三模拟)
假定你是李华，你邻居的女儿每天中午都在家弹钢琴，给你的网课学习和生活带来了很大的困扰。请你给邻居Mrs. Li写一封投诉信，内容要点包括:
1.说明困扰你的问题:2.投诉的原因;3.解决问题的建议。
注意:
1.词数80 字左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs. Li,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】
I'm Li Hua. a neighbor living next to your house. I'm writing to express my dissatisfaction about the noise your daughter has been making recently.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is that it is at noon every day that your daughter practices playing the piano, which greatly affects both my life and online study. For one thing, as a high school senior, I'm engaged in making preparations for College Entrance Examination. Therefore, the noise makes it hard for me to concentrate on my study. For another, although occasionally the music your daughter plays sounds wonderful it disturbs me and 1 find it difficult to get enough sleep.
I sincerely hope that your daughter can adjust the time and place of practicing. I would appreciate it if you could solve the problem as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
[详解]本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给邻居Mrs.Li写一封投诉信，说明说明困扰自己的问题、投诉的原因以及解决问题的建议。
第一步:词汇积累
影响:affect→influence
忙于做某事:be engaged in doing sth.=be occupied with
集中注意力:concentrate on=focus on困难的:difficult→hard
第二步:句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句:I'm Li Hua, a neighbor living next to your house.
拓展句:I'm Li Hua, a neighbor who lives next to your house.
第三步:高分句式
[高分句型1]The reason for my dissatisfaction is that it is at noon every day that your daughter practices playing the piano, which greatly affects both my life and online study.(第一个that引导表语从句:it is...that...引导强调句:which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]For another, although occasionally the music your daughter plays sounds wonderful it disturbs me and I find it difficult to get enough sleep.(although引导让步状语从句)
15倡议书
【教考衔接】
第一段：表明背景和目的
第二段：倡议的内容、理由、意义
第三段：倡议的决心和希望
【技巧指导】
Dear classmates / fellow students,
_某某活动或者节日即将来 is around the corner. To show our great concern about____为了响应号召______, the ___组织名称___will organize an activity with the theme “___活动主题 ____”.
/ On behalf of the Students’ Union, I am writing to call on everyone to take part in an activity named活动名称 .
On that day / In the activity, we will_________介绍组织的哪些活动内容________.
With your help, ________________________will be better and richer. In addition, help and love will make the world a nicer place! / Only by doing this will you enjoy a healthy and happy life. / It's high time that we should join up to educate people around us and raise their awareness of ________提高人们某方面的意识________./Your participation will be highly appreciated. / Finally, I propose that we all take action to participate in the activity and contribute our own strength to ___________. / Only with joint efforts can_________ go smoothly. Join us and take action right now!（呼吁大家一起参与）/ Looking forward to your participation.（期待加入）
The Students’ Union
【范文点评】
湖北省宜荆荆恩2023-2024学年高三12月试题
假如你是学生会主席李华，请你围绕“保护环境，低碳生活”为主题，写一封英语倡议书，旨在号召大家积极采取行动，践行低碳生活。内容包括:
1.保护环境的重要性;
2.如何低碳生活;
3.发出倡议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
With the development of modern industry, the environment is becoming increasingly worse. It's high time that we should take measures, or we would have nowhere to live. We students can protect our environment by living a low-carbon life.
Firstly, do turn off lights and other switches when not using them to save electricity. What's more, if we go out, we should walk, ride or take public transport instead of driving. Finally, reusing paper and bottles in our daily life is also highly recommended.
Let's make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment. I strongly believe that a better world
owes to the commitment and dedication of everyone.
[导语]本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生围绕保护环境，低碳生活”的主题用英文写一封倡议书，号召大家积极采取行动，践行低碳生活。内容包括:1.保护环境的重要性;2.如何低碳生活;3.发出倡议。
[详解]1.词汇积累措施:measure→+step保护:protect→preserve
此外:what's more→besides/in addition/additionally/furthermore/moreover坚决地:strongly→firmly
2.句式拓展同义句转换
原句:I strongly believe that a better world owes to the commitment and dedication of everyone.
拓展句:I hold the firm belief that everyone's commitment and dedication contribute to making a better world.
【点睛]
【高分句型1] It's high time that we should take measures, or we would have nowhere to live.(运用了虚拟语气的
句型
[高分句型2] What's more, if we go out, we should walk, ride or take public transport instead of driving.(运用了f引导的条件状语从句)
【素材运用】
(2022年广西高三统考一模)
假设你是高三学生李华。进入高三以来，很多同学晚上熬夜学习，上课打瞌睡。请你写一封以“规律作息，冲刺高三”为主题的倡议书。内容包括:
1.倡议的原因和目的;
2.具体做法及号召。
注意:1.写作词数应为100左右:
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.文章开头和结尾已经写好。
Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua, a senior three student of our school.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear fellow students.
I am Li Hua, a senior three student of our school. There exists a very common phenomenon among us that many students stay up late to study and fall asleep in class. Now, I am calling for everyone's attention to this matter.
What should be stressed is that health comes first in the long journey to success. As far as I am concerned, we
should take the following steps to prepare for Gaokao.First, we should focus on what the teachers say in class. In addition, we'd better make the most of the free time to finish the homework. Last but not least, we should try to form a good habit of going to bed early.
I firmly believe that we will make great progress by balancing our study and rest. So let's take action now!
Li Hua
[导语]本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是高三学生李华。进入高三以来，很多同学晚上熬夜学习，上课打瞌睡。请你写一封以“规律作息，冲刺高三”为主题的倡议书。
第一步:词汇积累
集中:focus on→concentrate on
强调:stress→emphasize普遍的:common→universal此外:in addition→besides
第二步:句式拓展同义句转换
原句:There exists a very common phenomenon among us that many students stay up late to study and fall asleep in class.拓展句:It is a very common phenomenon among us that many students stay up late to study and fall asleep in class.
第三步:高分句式
[高分句型1]There exists a very common phenomenon among us that many students stay up late to study and fall asleep in class.(运用了that引导同位语从句)
[高分句型 2]First, we should focus on what the teachers say in class.(运用了what引导宾语从句)
16回复信
【教考衔接】
第一段：开门见山说明写作目的
第二段：针对问题给出答复或提出具体准确的建议，并列出相应的原因
第三段：提出期望或祝愿
【技巧指导】
Dear_________,
Learning your keen interest in ____对方关心的问题___, I'm writing to introduce something detailed to you as follows.（表明写信目的）
As you know, ________________. How to solve this problem I think _____________ is a good way of
dealing with it. By doing so, not only can it _________, but it also can ______________. （提出具体的解决对方问题的方法）
Hope that it can be of help to you. / Hope what I mentioned above could be helpful for you and you problem will be solved effectively. （希望以上提到的介绍或者建议对对方解决当前的问题有所帮助）
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文点评】
2021·天津卷
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾巳给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
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Yours,
Li Jin
One possible version：
Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian 'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案与解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
1.词汇积累
照顾：take care of→look after
另外，此外：in addition→besides→what’s more
雇佣：employ→hire
既然：now that→since
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
拓展句：As the Internet industry develops rapidly，the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
【素材运用】
2020年，天津卷，第二次高考
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括:
(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；
(2)对活动的感受；
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony
新冠脑炎 COVID-F9
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Jin
One possible version:
Dear Chris,
I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.
Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work.
Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】
第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris 很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2. 对活动的感受。3. 对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulate sb on sth., be faced with, heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devote oneself to doing sth.；
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.
第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that, besides, however.
第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
17宣传稿
【教考衔接】
第一段：简要介绍活动/事件的时间、地点
第二段：陈述活动/事件过程
第三段：评价/推荐活动/事件
【技巧指导】
Our school held__(活动内容) on__(活动时间) at___(活动地点), which attracted_(活动人员).
The activity covered a wide range of __(活动简单介绍). During the activity, all the participants actively
达L(活动过程).
At the end of the activity,__(活动结果). There is no denying that the activity is meaningful to us students. Not only did it _(活动意义1),it also___ __(活动意义2). I heartily recommend this activity to everyone, because____(推荐理由).
【范文点评】
2021·全国卷
昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传，内容包括：
1. 展览时间、地点；
2. 观展感受；
3. 推荐观展。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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One possible version：
ln order to enrich students’ after-school life ,an exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school , which sparks a growing love for traditional art .The exhibition is held on the first floor of the school litrary.Most of the students think highly of this exhibition，which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.
Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures, but also enable you understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better. The exhibition will last for two weeks,every student is welcome to visit.
【答案与解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇关于学校举办的学生国画作品展的宣传稿。
1. 词汇积累
绘画：drawing→ painting
激发：spirit→spark
欣赏：appreciate→admire
欢迎：greet→welcome
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
The exhibition will last for two weeks,every student is welcome to visit.
合并句：
The exhibition will last for two weeks,during which every student is welcome to visit.
【素材运用】
2019年3月，天津卷
假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动，你校英语社团的微信 公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会，从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：
（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；
（2）推荐的理由。 参考词汇：
科幻小说 science fiction
侦探小说 detective novel
魔幻小说 fantasy
传记文学 biography
科普读物 popular science
注意：
（1）词数不少于 100；
（2）所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围；
（3）内容充实、行文连贯；
（4）题目已给出，不计入总词数。
March 22, 2019
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One possible version:
March 22, 2019
Today I'd like to introduce a book to you which I like much——The Five Thousand Years History, which belongs to history books.
The author selects important and famous figures and events in the history of China, which he organizes and cuts them according to historical materials, and writes in modern language to make them easy to understand.
This book opens a history gate to me and I feel more confident about my own country. I am proud that I am a Chinese and I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant.
I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience. I do hope you'll like it !Enjoy reading !
By Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇英语征文。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇英语征文；假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会，从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应包括：（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；（2）推荐的理由。人称应使用第一、三人称，时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：introduce a book to you（给你推荐一本书），belong to（属于），author（作者）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
18告知信
【教考衔接】
第一段：简要说明写信目的
第二段：具体告知的具体事项，合包括时间、地点、前期准备和活动内容
第三段：作总结，询问对方是否还还有其他想了解的信息
【技巧指导】
Dear________,
I’m glad to learn that __________________(了解到的情况）. I’m writing to express the warm welcome from me and my family. Now I want to tell you something about the plans(写信目的）. The details are as follows（告知细节）. In the morning, _________________________(活动安排）. In the afternoon, we will _____________. In the evening, not only will we ____________, but also we will _______________（按照时间顺序活动安排）. I’m sure we will ______________________（表达感受）. If you have any other questions, please let me know. I’m looking forward to your coming.(期望表达）.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文点评】
(2024届11月广东省佛山市顺德区普通高中高三教学质量检测试卷一)
假设你是校学生会主席李华，来自英国的一群交换生将在你校进行为期一周的交流学习，请你写信给他们的负责人Alex，告知他们这一周的主要活动安排。
内容包括：1. 欢迎到访；2. 活动内容。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Alex,
I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union. On behalf of our school, I would like to extend my sincere welcome to you and your exchange students, and I’m writing to keep you informed of our main activities for the week.
A short welcome ceremony will be held in the lecture hall, followed by the three-day experience of our featured courses, ranging from table tennis and performances Chinese classical music, to calligraphy practice. In the next two days comes a cultural study tour, in which you will have a deep insight into the history and culture of our city and have a good taste of the local specialties. On the last day, we are scheduled to hold a party, exchanging the different cultures.
This exchange, we believe, is more of a cultural journey, which will be unforgettable and impressive for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为告知信；
（2）因对方是交换生团队负责人，故李华身份要交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为介绍即将来临的交换生文化交流活动，故本文总体时态定调为一般将来时和一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）extend my sincere welcome to向某人表达诚挚的欢迎；
（2）keep sb informed of sth告知某人某事；
（3）followed by ...紧随其后的是...；
（4）ranging from ... and ... to ...表示列举时的表达；
（5）In the next two days comes ...运用完全倒装结构；
（6）have a deep insight into深入理解某事。
【素材运用】
(2022-2023学年第二学期高一年级四校联考)
假如你是李华，下周你将陪同美国教师Peter带领的学生访问团到杭州体验中国文化。最近Peter来信
想提前了解活动的大致安排，请你写一封回信告知其相关情况，内容包括：1.活动安排；2.期待来临。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Dear Peter,
Learning that you’d like to know the Chinese cultural tour in advance, I’m writing to keep you informed of it.
Since Hangzhou is a city with heavy traffic, the best way to get around is to take the subway, which provides direct access to most of the famous attractions in Hangzhou. In the morning next Saturday, we begin with the picturesque West Lake as the first stop. Then in the afternoon comes the visit to Lingyin Temple and Leifeng Pagoda famous for their unique architectural style and beautiful historical stories. During the tour, we can also feast ourselves on Hangzhou's special food along the way. This cultural tour is sure to immerse you in the charm of traditional Chinese culture!
Your early arrival is highly expected!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为告知信；
（2）根据原文本信息提示两人应该认识，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为介绍行程安排，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）Learning that得知；
（2）keep sb informed of sth告知某人某事；
（3）provide direct access to提供去...的直达服务；
（4）picturesque风景如画的；
（5）Then in the afternoon comes ...运用完全倒装结构；
（6）feast oneself on大饱口福，遍尝（美食）；
（7）immerse sb in sth使某人沉浸式体验某事；
（8）... is highly expected某事是值得期待的。
19邀请信
【教考衔接】
第一段：表达写作目的“想推荐某人或自己或者某物”
第二段：介绍被推荐人的优势情况
第三段：重申被推荐人或物值得考虑和采纳
【技巧指导】
Dear 人名 / 组织名称_,
I’m writing on behalf of my friend, Li Hua, who I think would be a_____推荐的岗位____. （推荐认识的人从事什么工作） / I'm more than delighted to learn that ____被推荐人想要做的事情_____. So I am writing to recommend ____想要推荐对方的事物_____to you.
First of all, ______被推荐人的优势一______. Also, ____被推荐人的优势二____. Above all, ___被推荐人的优势三____.
You would be lucky to have him as part of your team. / I do hope my recommendation can be of some help to you. Wish you good luck. / If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【范文点评】
(2023届黑龙江哈尔滨师范大学附属中学高三七模英语试题)
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Caroline来信说她打算参加所在学校举办的文化节活动并介绍中国文化，想请你从下列主题中推荐一项：1.传统节日；2.文字发展。请你给她回信，内容包括：1.你的建议；2.推荐理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Caroline,
Learning that you are scheduled to participate in your school’s cultural festival and introduce Chinese culture, and that you are at a loss which theme to choose, I believe traditional festivals are my top recommendation.
For one thing, traditional festivals are an important part of Chinese traditional culture, which plays a significant role in China as well as in the world. For another, traditional festivals, such as the Spring Festival, the Dragon Boat Festival, the Double Ninth Festival, and the like, carry an abundance of historical and cultural heritage, since China has a history of more than 5,000 years.
The introduction of Chinese traditional festivals, will definitely bring British students a cultural feast. I wish your presentation a great success!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为推荐信；
（2）因二人是朋友关系，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分说明推荐理由，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）learning that分词短语作状语用，意为“听说”；
（2）be scheldued to do计划做某事；
（3）at a loss对...困惑不知所措；
（4）top recommendation首选推荐；
（5）For one thing, ... For another, ...一方面，...，另一方面，...；
（6）as well as=not only ..., but also ...；
（7）and the like诸如此类的（事）；
（8）definitely的确。
【素材运用】
(重庆一中2023届高三2月月考)
假定你是李华，你校交换生Chelsea回英国前向你咨询给亲友带什么中国特色礼物。请你写信回复她。要点如下：1.推荐礼物；2.推荐原因；3.表达祝福。
注意：1.写作词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chelsea,
Learning that you are going to return to Britain, and are at a loss about what kind of gifts with Chinese characteristics to take to your relatives and friends, I’d like to recommend some for you.
Chinese knot, with a mix of interest, temperament and wisdom, is my top priority. As a kind of unique Chinese handwoven handicraft, the Chinese knot is not only beautiful in shape, but also rich in meaning, symbolizing unity, happiness and good wishes for the future. Paper cutting is also preferable. Known as the world-class intangible cultural heritage, it has a variety of shapes and colors and will definitely be loved by your relatives and friends.
I hope my advice is of some help to you. Wish you a pleasant journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.应用文写作前三步骤：
（1）审题判定文体为推荐信；
（2）因两人相熟，故李华身份不必交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为推荐，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点：
（1）Learning that听说；
（2）at a loss对...不知所措；
（3）with a mix of集...于一体，在句中作后置定语；
（4）top priority首选；
（5）is also preferable也是可去的（值得推荐的）；
（6）Known as以...而知名；
（7）definitely无疑，确定；
（8）be of some help有所帮助。
20邀请信
【教考衔接】
第一段：点出主题，导入正文
第二段：描述故事的经过和结果
第三段：对此事件的感想
【技巧指导】
(月、日、年、星期、天气)
(标题)
Today/Yesterday, I/we .(事件)
In the morning, we ______________; then ______________;after that______________ . By the time we had a good time. Finally . I’ll never forget the memorable day! ______________________________________ (事件经过)
From this activity, I have learned that/I think .______________ (事件意义和自己的感想)
【范文点评】
2020天津卷
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动。你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况，内容包括：（1）成人礼活动内容（成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等）；（2）对活动的感受；（3）对自己未来的展望。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节,使内容充实，行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremony新冠肺炎COVID-19
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One possible version:
Dear Chris,
I'm very glad to hear from you. I am writing to you to introduce the following adult ceremony activities organized by our school on June 8.The coming-of-age ceremony, usually at the age of 18 for boys and girls, symbolizes the march towards adulthood. In the ceremony, usually in parts of China, Han clothing, the worship of Confucius and other customs are popular among us.We knelt on our knees on the ground to express our gratitude to our parents to their upbringing. The Rite is designed to our make us understand maturity and a sense of responsibility. During the event, we watched the videos of former students against COVID-19 epidemic, deeply moved.As new generation of teenagers, I must be motivated to study hard and grow up to be a useful person for our country.
Yours,
Li Jin
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulate sb on sth., be faced with, heal the wounded and rescue the dying,
devote oneself to doing sth.；
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:
that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced.
that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.
时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.
第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that, besides, however.
第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【素材运用】
2020全国卷 II
上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文。介绍这次活动，内容包括：1. 农场情况；2. 采摘过程；3. 个人感受。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。题目：My Weekend
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One possible version：
My Weekend
Last weekend，we took part in a picking activity. We drove from the school, and the farm was about 2 kilometers away from our school. When we arrived at the farm, there are all kinds of animals, green fresh vegetables and fruit trees on the farm. We were divided into two groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits, and the other packed up the fruits. Time flying quickly, the activity was over. But it was a meaningful day, when we learn a lot form it. Through this activity, we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure the food planted by the farmers.