-2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写：探秘奶奶残缺的笔记 课件(共23张PPT)
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高中英语读后续写：
探秘奶奶残缺的笔记
As long as she could remember,Mary had been fascinated by her grandmother's notebooks.They wover flowing with stories and recipes from every corner of the globe,gathered during her wanderings Those notebooks were like a time machine,taking her back to the days when her grandmother was yoloflife. She felt as if she could almost taste the flavors of the dishes her grandmother had cooked back t………The notebooks were more than just pages of paper and ink.They were a reflection of her grandmother's life, are cord of her experiences and learning.Each recipe was a memory,each story a lesson learned.And now, thosenotebooks were about to pass into Mary's keeping.Her grandmother had promised to pass them down to her whenshe was old enough to appreciate them.
Mary couldn't wait to dive into those notebooks and discover more about her grandmother's world.She was surethat they would be a rich source of knowledge and inspiration,and she was determined to honor her grandmother's legacy(遗产)by preserving and cherishing those priceless notebooks.
One day,while searching through her grandmother's attic(阁楼),Mary came across a pile of unfamiliar notebooks.As she turned the pages of one of them,she realized they were filled with intricate(错综复杂的)details of hergrandmother's life.However,some pages were missing.Mary was puzzled.She wondered what could have happened to those missing pages and what secrets they might have held.She was determined to discover the truthbehind the note books and fill in the missing pieces of her grandmother's life.
With her heart pounding in her chest,Mary wildly searched the attic for those missing pages,but still couldn't find them.Then,suddenly,she recalled her grandmother mentioning something about hiding things in plain sight. Alight bulb went off in her head--the missing pages must be somewhere in the house!She knew she had to findthem before they were lost forever.
P1:With renewed determination,Mary began her search.
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement.
Fast-reading:找要素
前文 续写提示部分
Who,Key item Mary,grandmother, grandmother's notebooks Mary
the envelope
Where grandmother's attic grandmother's attic,……
when One day,while searching through her grandmother's attic
What However,some pages were missing. She wondered what could have happened to those missing pages and what secrets they might have held. began her search.
Conflict of dramaturgy Missingpages
情节搭建和衔接
PP1:With renewed determination,Mary began her search. 衔接句1 故事拓展 +过渡 衔接句2 1 How did Mary do 如何避免：语言惨 白，无表现力，无 细节 3 Mary found a envelope. P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement. 衔接句3 故事拓展 +过渡 结尾+立意 What was inside 过渡句搭建，提示 立意 2
问题版本：语言惨白，无表现力，无细节，流水账
P1:With renewed determination,Mary began her search.
Driven by a newfound sense of purpose,Mary embarked on hersearch with unwavering determination.Her eyes scanned everynook and cranny,her fingers grazed over every surface,as if hergrandmother's words were hidden within the very fibers of theroom.And then,in a dusty corner,her gaze landed upon a small,forgotten envelope.
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement.
Her heart pounded in her chest as she realized that the pages she hadbeen searching for so desperately were finally within reach.Shecould hardly contain her anticipation as she opened the envelope andwithdrew the yellowed papers,each one a precious connection to hergrandmother's past.
讲个好故事
细节拓展5技巧
1延长时间线
空间线在第一段和第二段首句限定的时间内拓展时间，空间线
P1:With renewed determination,Mary began her search.
她搜索阁楼的每一寸空间，从布满蜘蛛网的角落到发霉的盒子。她的手指抚摸着布满灰尘的架子，她的眼睛扫视着每一个角落和缝隙，寻找着丢失的书页的任何迹象。当她向阁楼深处钻去时，时间似乎静止了，她的心随着时间的流逝而怦怦直跳。但是，尽管她尽了最大的努力，那些书页仍然是难以捉摸的。几小时变成了几天，吗丽的搜索范围扩大到了阁楼之外。她搜查了整个房子，她的眼睛搜寻着任何可能导致她找到丢失的书页的线索。她在客厅里搜索，在厨房里搜索，甚至在花园里搜索，但仍然一无所获。就在她准备放奔时，玛丽的目光落在了一个抽屉里藏着的一个小信封上。
She scoured every inch of the attic, from the cobwebbed corners to the musty boxes.Her fingers traced the dust-covered shelves,her eyes scanning every nook andcranny for any sign of the missing pages.Time seemed to stand still as she delveddeeper into the attic,her heart pounding with each passing moment.But despite herbest efforts,the pages remained elusive.Hours turned into days,and Mary's searchexpanded beyond the attic.She combed through the entire house,her eyes peeledfor any clue that might lead her to the missing pages.She searched in the livingroom,the kitchen,and even the garden,but still,nothing.Just as she was about togive up,Mary's gaze fell upon a small envelope tucked away in a drawer.
2场景特写(环境衬托人物情感)
P1:With renewed determination,Mary started her search once again.
房间里灯光昏暗，阴影在墙上跳跃，厚厚的灰尘覆盖了所有的表面，空气中弥漫着旧家具的霉味，玛丽的眼睛扫视着房间，她的目光从一个物体转移到另一个物体，她紧张地检查着每一个角落和缝隙。
The room was dimly lit,casting eerie shadows thatdanced along the walls.A thick layer of dust coveredevery surface,and the musty scent of old furniturefilled the air.Mary's eyes seanned the room,her gazeshifting from one object to another as she examinedevery nook and cranny with intensity.
3细节刻画--神态，动作，情绪
P1:With renewed determination,Mary started her search once again.
她用力地挪动家具，手指抓住沉重的家具的边缘，把它们拉到一边。家具在硬木地板上刮的每一次刮擦都使空气颤抖，增加了悬疑的气氛。她向书架后面看时，眼睛在昏暗的灯光下眯缝着，寻找着丢失的书页的任何迹象。
She moved furniture with a quiet determination,her fingersgripping the edges of the heavy pieces and pulling them aside.Each scrape of the furniture against the hardwood floor sent ashiver through the air,adding to the suspenseful atmosphere.As she looked behind shelves,her eyes strained in the dimlight,searching for any signs of the missing pages.
细节：人物神态，
动作，情绪
3细节刻画---对话描写
P1:With renewed determination,Mary started her search once again.
玛丽低声对自己说：“不找到丢失的书页，我决不放弃。”她全神贯注，眼睛扫视着房间的每一寸，仿佛答案就藏在她呼吸的空气。
Mary whispered to herself,"I won't give up until I find those missing pages."Hermind was focused,her eyes scanning every inch of the room,as if the answers layhidden in the very air she breathe.
4利用变化，对比(人物心理活动，情绪的起伏变化)
P1:With renewed determination,Mary started her search once again.
玛丽的心怦怦直跳，焦虑和希望交织在一起，她再次踏上了寻找的旅程。她走的每一步都充满了紧迫感，仿佛时间过得比她所能跟上的还要快。
With renewed determination,Mary's heart pounded with a mix of anxiety and hope as sheembarked on her search once again.Each step she took was filled with a sense of urgency,asif time was slipping away faster than she could keep up.
随着时间的流逝，玛丽越来越沮丧。她责备自己没有更有条理，没有更好地保管祖母的物品。但她拒绝放弃，把那些威胁要吞噬她的消极想法抛在一边。就在所有希望似乎都破灭的时候，玛丽的目光落在了书桌角落里藏着的一个小信封上。
As the hours passed,Mary's frustration grew.She scolded herself for not being moreorganized,for not keeping better track of her grandmother's belongings.But she refused togive up,pushing aside the negative thoughts that threatened to consume her.
1搭建第二段衔接句
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement
当她手里祖母的失踪的笔记时，她不禁想起祖母在那些笔记本上倾注心血的所有时间.
As she held the notes in her hands,she couldn't helpbut think of all the hours her grandmother had spentpouring her heart and soul into those notebooks.
5利用前文伏笔(加强文章的协同性)
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement.
伏笔1:The notebooks were more than just pages of paper and ink.They were a reflection of hergrandmother's life,a record of her experiences and learning.
As she held the envelope in her hands,she couldn't help but think of all the hours her grandmother had spent pouring her heart and soul into those notebooks.They weren't just pages of paper and ink;they were a reflection of her grandmother's life,a record of her experiences and learning.
As Mary opened the envelope and withdrew the yellowed papers inside,she feltas though she was transported back in time.She could almost see hergrandmother sitting at the desk,pen in hand,writing down her thoughts andrecipes.Each word was a window into her grandmother's world,a glimpse intothe past that Mary had been longing to reconnect with.
5利用前文伏笔(加强文章的协同性)
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope ,trembling with excitement.
伏笔2:She was sure that they would be a rich source of knowledge and inspiration,
每翻一页，玛丽都为祖母的奉献和热情感到骄傲和钦佩。这些笔记本不仅仅是食谱的集合；它们是一种遗产，是她祖母的记忆代代相传的一种方式。
With each page she turned,Mary felt a sense of pride and admiration for hergrandmother's dedication and passion.These notebooks weren't just a collection ofrecipes;they were a legacy,a way for her grandmother's memory to live on through thegenerations.
As Mary placed the notebooks back on the shelf,she felt a renewed sense of purpose.Sheknew that she had to continue her grandmother's tradition,to keep the recipes alive andshare them with others.And with the missing pages now found,she felt more determinedthan ever to do just that.
5利用前文伏笔(加强文章的协同性)
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement.
伏笔2:However,some pages were missing.Mary was puzzled.She wondered what couldhave happened to those missing pages and what secrets they might have held.
她的祖母写了她生命中最美好的时刻，那些她感到真正活着和快乐的时刻。
但当玛丽继续读下去时，她也感到一种悲伤。她的祖母提到了一个一直困扰着她的遗憾——决定离开家乡搬到城市。她一直想念乡村的朴素和美丽，夕阳将天空染成仿佛直接从画中来的色彩。
Her grandmother had written about the most beautiful moments of her life,the timeswhen she felt truly alive and happy.But as Mary read on,she also felt a sense of sadness.Her grandmother had mentioned the one regret that had always haunted her -thedecision to leave her hometown and move to the city.She had always missed thesimplicity and beauty of the countryside,the way the sunsets painted the sky with colorsthat seemed to come straight from a painting.
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement.
当玛丽把笔记本放回书架时，她感到一种新的使命感。她知道她必须继续她祖母的传统，保持食谱的活力,并与他人分享。现在找到了丢失的那几页，她比以往任何时候都更坚定了要这么做的决心。
As Mary placed the notebooks back on the shelf,shefelt a renewed sense of purpose.She knew that shehad to continue her grandmother's tradition,to keepthe recipes alive and share them with others.Andwith the missing pages now found,she felt moredetermined than ever to do just that.
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement.
她觉得自己好像又一次走过了祖母的一生，经历了高潮和低谷，经历了冒险和不幸。这是一次情感上的过山车，但与此同时，这也是一次自我发现的美丽旅程.
She felt like she was walking through her grandmother's life again,experiencing the highs and lows,the adventures and misadventures.Itwas an emotional rollercoaster ride,but at the same time,it was abeautiful journey of self-discovery.
高中英语读后续写：
探秘奶奶残缺的笔记
As long as she could remember,Mary had been fascinated by her grandmother's notebooks.They wover flowing with stories and recipes from every corner of the globe,gathered during her wanderings Those notebooks were like a time machine,taking her back to the days when her grandmother was yoloflife. She felt as if she could almost taste the flavors of the dishes her grandmother had cooked back t………The notebooks were more than just pages of paper and ink.They were a reflection of her grandmother's life, are cord of her experiences and learning.Each recipe was a memory,each story a lesson learned.And now, thosenotebooks were about to pass into Mary's keeping.Her grandmother had promised to pass them down to her whenshe was old enough to appreciate them.
Mary couldn't wait to dive into those notebooks and discover more about her grandmother's world.She was surethat they would be a rich source of knowledge and inspiration,and she was determined to honor her grandmother's legacy(遗产)by preserving and cherishing those priceless notebooks.
One day,while searching through her grandmother's attic(阁楼),Mary came across a pile of unfamiliar notebooks.As she turned the pages of one of them,she realized they were filled with intricate(错综复杂的)details of hergrandmother's life.However,some pages were missing.Mary was puzzled.She wondered what could have happened to those missing pages and what secrets they might have held.She was determined to discover the truthbehind the note books and fill in the missing pieces of her grandmother's life.
With her heart pounding in her chest,Mary wildly searched the attic for those missing pages,but still couldn't find them.Then,suddenly,she recalled her grandmother mentioning something about hiding things in plain sight. Alight bulb went off in her head--the missing pages must be somewhere in the house!She knew she had to findthem before they were lost forever.
P1:With renewed determination,Mary began her search.
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement.
Fast-reading:找要素
前文 续写提示部分
Who,Key item Mary,grandmother, grandmother's notebooks Mary
the envelope
Where grandmother's attic grandmother's attic,……
when One day,while searching through her grandmother's attic
What However,some pages were missing. She wondered what could have happened to those missing pages and what secrets they might have held. began her search.
Conflict of dramaturgy Missingpages
情节搭建和衔接
PP1:With renewed determination,Mary began her search. 衔接句1 故事拓展 +过渡 衔接句2 1 How did Mary do 如何避免：语言惨 白，无表现力，无 细节 3 Mary found a envelope. P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement. 衔接句3 故事拓展 +过渡 结尾+立意 What was inside 过渡句搭建，提示 立意 2
问题版本：语言惨白，无表现力，无细节，流水账
P1:With renewed determination,Mary began her search.
Driven by a newfound sense of purpose,Mary embarked on hersearch with unwavering determination.Her eyes scanned everynook and cranny,her fingers grazed over every surface,as if hergrandmother's words were hidden within the very fibers of theroom.And then,in a dusty corner,her gaze landed upon a small,forgotten envelope.
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement.
Her heart pounded in her chest as she realized that the pages she hadbeen searching for so desperately were finally within reach.Shecould hardly contain her anticipation as she opened the envelope andwithdrew the yellowed papers,each one a precious connection to hergrandmother's past.
讲个好故事
细节拓展5技巧
1延长时间线
空间线在第一段和第二段首句限定的时间内拓展时间，空间线
P1:With renewed determination,Mary began her search.
她搜索阁楼的每一寸空间，从布满蜘蛛网的角落到发霉的盒子。她的手指抚摸着布满灰尘的架子，她的眼睛扫视着每一个角落和缝隙，寻找着丢失的书页的任何迹象。当她向阁楼深处钻去时，时间似乎静止了，她的心随着时间的流逝而怦怦直跳。但是，尽管她尽了最大的努力，那些书页仍然是难以捉摸的。几小时变成了几天，吗丽的搜索范围扩大到了阁楼之外。她搜查了整个房子，她的眼睛搜寻着任何可能导致她找到丢失的书页的线索。她在客厅里搜索，在厨房里搜索，甚至在花园里搜索，但仍然一无所获。就在她准备放奔时，玛丽的目光落在了一个抽屉里藏着的一个小信封上。
She scoured every inch of the attic, from the cobwebbed corners to the musty boxes.Her fingers traced the dust-covered shelves,her eyes scanning every nook andcranny for any sign of the missing pages.Time seemed to stand still as she delveddeeper into the attic,her heart pounding with each passing moment.But despite herbest efforts,the pages remained elusive.Hours turned into days,and Mary's searchexpanded beyond the attic.She combed through the entire house,her eyes peeledfor any clue that might lead her to the missing pages.She searched in the livingroom,the kitchen,and even the garden,but still,nothing.Just as she was about togive up,Mary's gaze fell upon a small envelope tucked away in a drawer.
2场景特写(环境衬托人物情感)
P1:With renewed determination,Mary started her search once again.
房间里灯光昏暗，阴影在墙上跳跃，厚厚的灰尘覆盖了所有的表面，空气中弥漫着旧家具的霉味，玛丽的眼睛扫视着房间，她的目光从一个物体转移到另一个物体，她紧张地检查着每一个角落和缝隙。
The room was dimly lit,casting eerie shadows thatdanced along the walls.A thick layer of dust coveredevery surface,and the musty scent of old furniturefilled the air.Mary's eyes seanned the room,her gazeshifting from one object to another as she examinedevery nook and cranny with intensity.
3细节刻画--神态，动作，情绪
P1:With renewed determination,Mary started her search once again.
她用力地挪动家具，手指抓住沉重的家具的边缘，把它们拉到一边。家具在硬木地板上刮的每一次刮擦都使空气颤抖，增加了悬疑的气氛。她向书架后面看时，眼睛在昏暗的灯光下眯缝着，寻找着丢失的书页的任何迹象。
She moved furniture with a quiet determination,her fingersgripping the edges of the heavy pieces and pulling them aside.Each scrape of the furniture against the hardwood floor sent ashiver through the air,adding to the suspenseful atmosphere.As she looked behind shelves,her eyes strained in the dimlight,searching for any signs of the missing pages.
细节：人物神态，
动作，情绪
3细节刻画---对话描写
P1:With renewed determination,Mary started her search once again.
玛丽低声对自己说：“不找到丢失的书页，我决不放弃。”她全神贯注，眼睛扫视着房间的每一寸，仿佛答案就藏在她呼吸的空气。
Mary whispered to herself,"I won't give up until I find those missing pages."Hermind was focused,her eyes scanning every inch of the room,as if the answers layhidden in the very air she breathe.
4利用变化，对比(人物心理活动，情绪的起伏变化)
P1:With renewed determination,Mary started her search once again.
玛丽的心怦怦直跳，焦虑和希望交织在一起，她再次踏上了寻找的旅程。她走的每一步都充满了紧迫感，仿佛时间过得比她所能跟上的还要快。
With renewed determination,Mary's heart pounded with a mix of anxiety and hope as sheembarked on her search once again.Each step she took was filled with a sense of urgency,asif time was slipping away faster than she could keep up.
随着时间的流逝，玛丽越来越沮丧。她责备自己没有更有条理，没有更好地保管祖母的物品。但她拒绝放弃，把那些威胁要吞噬她的消极想法抛在一边。就在所有希望似乎都破灭的时候，玛丽的目光落在了书桌角落里藏着的一个小信封上。
As the hours passed,Mary's frustration grew.She scolded herself for not being moreorganized,for not keeping better track of her grandmother's belongings.But she refused togive up,pushing aside the negative thoughts that threatened to consume her.
1搭建第二段衔接句
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement
当她手里祖母的失踪的笔记时，她不禁想起祖母在那些笔记本上倾注心血的所有时间.
As she held the notes in her hands,she couldn't helpbut think of all the hours her grandmother had spentpouring her heart and soul into those notebooks.
5利用前文伏笔(加强文章的协同性)
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement.
伏笔1:The notebooks were more than just pages of paper and ink.They were a reflection of hergrandmother's life,a record of her experiences and learning.
As she held the envelope in her hands,she couldn't help but think of all the hours her grandmother had spent pouring her heart and soul into those notebooks.They weren't just pages of paper and ink;they were a reflection of her grandmother's life,a record of her experiences and learning.
As Mary opened the envelope and withdrew the yellowed papers inside,she feltas though she was transported back in time.She could almost see hergrandmother sitting at the desk,pen in hand,writing down her thoughts andrecipes.Each word was a window into her grandmother's world,a glimpse intothe past that Mary had been longing to reconnect with.
5利用前文伏笔(加强文章的协同性)
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope ,trembling with excitement.
伏笔2:She was sure that they would be a rich source of knowledge and inspiration,
每翻一页，玛丽都为祖母的奉献和热情感到骄傲和钦佩。这些笔记本不仅仅是食谱的集合；它们是一种遗产，是她祖母的记忆代代相传的一种方式。
With each page she turned,Mary felt a sense of pride and admiration for hergrandmother's dedication and passion.These notebooks weren't just a collection ofrecipes;they were a legacy,a way for her grandmother's memory to live on through thegenerations.
As Mary placed the notebooks back on the shelf,she felt a renewed sense of purpose.Sheknew that she had to continue her grandmother's tradition,to keep the recipes alive andshare them with others.And with the missing pages now found,she felt more determinedthan ever to do just that.
5利用前文伏笔(加强文章的协同性)
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement.
伏笔2:However,some pages were missing.Mary was puzzled.She wondered what couldhave happened to those missing pages and what secrets they might have held.
她的祖母写了她生命中最美好的时刻，那些她感到真正活着和快乐的时刻。
但当玛丽继续读下去时，她也感到一种悲伤。她的祖母提到了一个一直困扰着她的遗憾——决定离开家乡搬到城市。她一直想念乡村的朴素和美丽，夕阳将天空染成仿佛直接从画中来的色彩。
Her grandmother had written about the most beautiful moments of her life,the timeswhen she felt truly alive and happy.But as Mary read on,she also felt a sense of sadness.Her grandmother had mentioned the one regret that had always haunted her -thedecision to leave her hometown and move to the city.She had always missed thesimplicity and beauty of the countryside,the way the sunsets painted the sky with colorsthat seemed to come straight from a painting.
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement.
当玛丽把笔记本放回书架时，她感到一种新的使命感。她知道她必须继续她祖母的传统，保持食谱的活力,并与他人分享。现在找到了丢失的那几页，她比以往任何时候都更坚定了要这么做的决心。
As Mary placed the notebooks back on the shelf,shefelt a renewed sense of purpose.She knew that shehad to continue her grandmother's tradition,to keepthe recipes alive and share them with others.Andwith the missing pages now found,she felt moredetermined than ever to do just that.
P2:Mary carefully removed the envelope,trembling with excitement.
她觉得自己好像又一次走过了祖母的一生，经历了高潮和低谷，经历了冒险和不幸。这是一次情感上的过山车，但与此同时，这也是一次自我发现的美丽旅程.
She felt like she was walking through her grandmother's life again,experiencing the highs and lows,the adventures and misadventures.Itwas an emotional rollercoaster ride,but at the same time,it was abeautiful journey of self-discovery.