2024年中考英语二轮复习-书面表达：应用文类作文
1．（23-24九年级下·浙江杭州·阶段练习）假定你是学生李平，你的英国交换生Adam在回国后给你写了一封邮件，请你用英语进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi Li Ping, I hope you’re doing well. Since returning to the UK, I become more interested in learning Chinese. However, I’m facing some difficulties. How can I write Chinese well How can I use four main tones (声调) correctly when I speak Chinese Could you offer me some advice to improve these skills Your help would mean a lot. I hope to hear from you soon! Best, Adam
Hi Adam,
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Best regards,
Li Ping
【答案】例文：
Hi Adam,
I’m glad to hear from you! It’s great that you start learning Chinese and it’s common to have some challenges.
I think it is necessary for you to practice regularly to improve writing skills. Using language apps can also help a lot. For mastering tones, you can listen to native speakers actively and repeat after them. Having conversations with them will also improve your spoken skills.
Feel free to ask me any time if needed. Your progress is impressive, and I’m here to offer support.
Best regards,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：分析来信可知，写作重点是对于“如何把中文书写得更好”和“说中文时的正确运用声调”两方面给出自己的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明学中文遇到问题很正常；
第二步，从“书写”和“声调”两方面给出自己的建议；
第三步，评价并支持对方学中文。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from 收到来信
②practice regularly 经常练习
③have conversations with 与某人对话
[高分句型]
①It’s great that you start learning Chinese and it’s common to have some challenges.（it作形式主语）
②Feel free to ask me any time if needed.（if引导条件状语从句）
2．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假如你是李华，收到加拿大笔友Mike的邮件，请阅读邮件并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
To: lihua@
From: mike2010@
Subject: My Life in Junior High School
Dear Li Hua， How’s it going I hope everything is OK with you. I hear that your junior high school life is coming to an end. How have you changed since you started junior high Do you have any special memories How do you like your teachers and classmates Looking forward to your reply!Mike
To: mike2010@
From: lihua@
Subject: My Life in Junior High School
Dear Mike, I’m glad to hear from you. _ ________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. My life in junior high is colorful and I’ve changed a lot. First, I have become better at solving problems. Besides, I have become more confident. I was worried that I couldn’t do well in my lessons. However, with the help of my teachers and classmates. I’ve made great progress.
The past three years has also left me warm memories. I remember falling down in a running race in Grade 8. My friend helped me stand up and encouraged me to finish the race.
I value my life in junior high!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：根据邮件问题所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的近况；
第二步，介绍上初中以来的变化和特别的记忆；
第三步，书写小结。
[亮点词汇]
① be worried that担心
② with the help of在……帮助下
③ encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
I was worried that I couldn’t do well in my lessons.（宾语从句）
3．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Michael即将结束在中国的交换生课程。他打算为家人和好友准备一些中国礼物。请你写一封电子邮件，向他推荐三件有特色的礼物并说明推荐的理由(礼物可以从下表中选择或自行确定)。
Presents Reasons
a silk scarf soft and comfortable; some Chinese paintings on it
Chinese tea paper cuts pieces of Chinese clay art …
Chinese fans toy pandas …
注意：
(1)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(2)词数：90-140。
Dear Michael,
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Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Michael,
There are many choices for you to choose wonderful Chinese presents.
For your mother, I think a silk scarf from Hangzhou is a nice present. It’s soft and comfortable. There are usually beautiful Chinese paintings on it. And you can give your father some Chinese tea. It’s a kind of healthy drink with a long history. Paper cutting is a traditional Chinese art. Chinese artists cut the paper into different shapes, such as flowers or buildings. I believe your friends will like paper cuts.
I hope these can help you.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可参考表格中给出的礼物来推荐三件有特色的礼物。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，推荐礼物；
第二步，具体推荐三种有特色的礼物；
第三步，收尾，希望能帮到对方。
[亮点词汇]
①give sb. sth. 给某人某物
②traditional Chinese art 传统中国艺术
③such as 例如
[高分句型]
①There are many choices for you to choose wonderful Chinese presents.（There be句型）
②I believe your friends will like paper cuts.（省略that的宾语从句）
4．（2024·浙江湖州·一模）假如你是李华，交换生Peter即将来你校学习，他对你校的社团活动很感兴趣。请根据以下信息，用英文写一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个你参加过的社团。
提示词语: take part in , improve, benefit
提示问题: What club did you join
What did you do in the club
Why do you recommend the club
注意：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(2) 内容须包含以上内容，可适当发挥；
(3) 词数：80-100词。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school!
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version 1:
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school! I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. I, as a basketball lover, highly recommend you join the “BasketballClub”. This club provides a platform for us students to improve their basketball skills and build up our bodies. With various matches every term, we have not only received professional training there, but also developed organization abilities, which are beneficial for my personal growth.
Looking forward to seeing you at our club and I will actively take part in the activities together with you during your stay. Wish you a pleasant stay at our school!
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear the exciting news recently that you will be coming to our school as an exchange student! As an experienced student who took part in various activities, I would like to recommend the “Science Club” to you.
We can learn science knowledge through various lectures here. We also have the chance to work on several
exciting projects, which can not only enrich our learning experience but also develop our team work and leadership skills.
Looking forward to your arrival and I'm sure you’ll find it both educational and fun. If you have any questions or need more information, feel free to ask.
Best regards,
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】范文一：
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者向Peter推荐的社团；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。作者讲述参加社团的收获及推荐该社团的原因；
第三步，书写结语。作者表达了希望Peter来参加他们的俱乐部并一起参加活动的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in 对……感兴趣
②provide sth. for sb. 为某人提供某物
③not only…but also 不仅……而且
④take part in 参加(活动)
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. (宾语从句)；
②With various matches every term, we have not only received professional training there, but also developed organization abilities, which are beneficial for my personal growth. (介词短语；定语从句)
5．（23-24九年级上·浙江金华·期末）假设你是李平，请你对澳大利亚朋友Peter的邮件进行回复，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
To: Li Ping@ Subject: Hi, waiting for your advice! Hi Li Ping, I am feeling worried these days because of my 6-year-old brother. He is always sitting or lying on sofa, eating unhealthy food and watching cartoons with loud TV sound. I have tried some ways to stop him, but failed. What should I do Can you give me three or four pieces of advice
Peter
注意：1. 邮件中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；
2. 邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数80-100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To: Peter From: Li Ping Hi Peter, I totally understand your feelings these days. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope all the advice above can help you in some way. Best wishes. Li Ping
【答案】例文
To: Peter
From: Li Ping
Hi Peter,
I totally understand your feelings these days. Don’t worry. I am glad to give you some suggestions.
Though your brother is only six years old, he should know some rules. He is always sitting or lying on sofa, eating unhealthy food and watching cartoons with loud TV sound. I think it’s not good for him to do so. In my opinion, he may be lonely and he doesn’t have a partner to play with. So I think you should spend more playing games with him. In this way, he may not watch cartoons with loud TV sound. Next, I think your parents should not buy any unhealthy food. Your brother can eat some fruits and drink milk. So next time, stop him from eating unhealthy food. Finally, why not let him join a sports club What about a soccer club Maybe he will be interested in playing soccer. Doing sports can make him stronger and healthier.
I hope all the advice above can help you in some way.
Best wishes.
Li Ping
【详解】
[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括邮件中的三个要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山，愿意提供建议；
第二步，针对邮件中所列问题，分别给出合理的建议；
第三步，书写总结，表达祝愿。
［亮点词汇］
① stop sb. from doing sth. 阻止某人去做某事
② be interested in 对……感兴趣
［高分句型］
① Though your brother is only six years old, he should know some rules. (though引导让步状语从句)
② Doing sports can make him stronger and healthier. (动名词作主语)
6．（23-24九年级下·浙江湖州·阶段练习）假如你是李华，你所在的村庄有幸荣获“中国美丽休闲乡村”的荣誉。为更好地服务游客，正在招募志愿者担任导游。请你根据以下提示，用英语给负责人赵先生写一封自荐信，报名成为一名志愿者导游。
写作要求：1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流；
3.100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mr. Zhao,
I’m glad to hear that some volunteer guides are wanted in our village.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Zhao,
I’m glad to hear that some volunteer guides are wanted in our village. I am writing to apply for this position.
I’m a Junior 3 student, who was born in the village. I believe I am fit for the position. I’m polite and outgoing. So I am confident that I can show the visitors around our village and introduce it to them patiently. Besides, I speak
good English and I have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. What’s more, as a local villager, I am sure my knowledge will prove helpful when I introduce it to foreign guests.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意要介绍自己的性格和特长，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明你想报名成为一名志愿者导游；
第二步，具体介绍自己的所在年级、性格、特长等；
第三步，书写结语。感谢对方的考虑。
[亮点词汇]
①fit合适的
②confident自信的
③besides此外
④what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①I’m a Junior 3 student, who was born in the village.（who引导的定语从句）
②I believe I am fit for the position.（省略that的宾语从句）
③I am sure my knowledge will prove helpful when I introduce it to foreign guests.（省略that的宾语从句，when引导的时间状语从句）
7．（22-23九年级上·浙江金华·期末）假如你是李华，最近收到国外好友Andrew的电子邮件，请你根据该邮件内容给Andrew回复。
Dear Li Hua, My grades are not very good, and my parents are angry with me. I told them that I worked hard at school. The problem is, I am just not good at schoolwork. But they think I spend too much time playing basketball when I should be studying. So I argued with them last night. It is true that I play a lot of basketball because I think basketball is something great. I am in the school team and I am proud of that. I want to be in the national team someday. My uncle has offered to help me train too, but how can I get my parents to agree Andrew
注意：
1. 回信必须围绕来信的中主要信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数100词左右；
4. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Andrew,
How is it going I’m so glad to hear from you.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Andrew,
How is it going I’m so glad to hear from you. I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now. It’s common to have such problems at your age. Cheer up and here is my advice．
First of all, playing basketball is your hobby and can also make you healthier. I think it is good. Maybe your parents will worry about these things. In order to understand each other, I suggest you talk with them about how to balance learning and playing basketball. You should tell them that you will study hard. If you encounter any problems, you can ask your teachers and classmates for help. You can also use your spare time to practice playing basketball, because this is your dream. I believe they will understand and support you.
I hope things will get better soon．
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：回信必须围绕邮件中的主要信息，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点“针对来信的问题提出建议”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，概述自己对这个问题的看法。。
第二步，提出自己的建议。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① be in trouble 陷入困境
② first of all 首先
③ in order to 为了
[高分句型]
① It’s common to have such problems at your age. (it作形式主语)
② I think it is good. Maybe your parents will worry about these things. (省略that的宾语从句)
8．（22-23九年级上·浙江台州·期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友James现在正在学习汉语，他来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据表格提示用英语写一封回信，为他提供一些学习建议。
Skills Ways to learn Chinese Examples or reasons
Listening &Speaking * watch Chinese movies; * have conversations with friends in Chinese; * watch movies like Mu Lan that…; * improve speaking skills;
Reading &Writing * read classic (经典) books; * keep diaries in Chinese; * The more you read, … * Practice makes perfect.
注意：
（1）短文必须包含表格中的所有信息，并可适当发挥。
（2）短文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
（3）词数：80-100。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear James,
I am so glad to hear from you.
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Why don’t you have a try and write to me in Chinese next time
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear James,
I am so glad to hear from you. Here is some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Firstly, I suggest that you can watch some Chinese movies like Mu Lan that have interesting stories. Listening to something interesting is the secret to language learning. More importantly, try to have conversations with your friends as much as possible to improve your speaking skills. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Besides, it’s also helpful for you to read classic Chinese books. Then you can learn how words are used. The more you read, the faster you will be. Finally, I think keeping a diary in Chinese is surely a good way to improve your writing. As you
know, practice makes perfect.
It is normal to have difficulties in learning Chinese. As long as you you keep trying, you will be a successful Chinese learner.
Why don’t you have a try and write to me in Chinese next time
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍学习汉语的建议；
第三步，鼓励对方。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……来信
②have conversations with与……交谈
③a good way to do sth做某事的好方法
[高分句型]
①Here is some advice on how to learn Chinese well.（倒装句）
②Firstly, I suggest that you can watch some Chinese movies like Mu Lan that have interesting stories.（宾语从句）
③The more you read, the faster you will be.（the+比较级，the+比较级）
9．（22-23九年级上·浙江宁波·期末）近年来，国家日益重视对中学生劳动能力的培养，要求各校对学生进行热爱劳动的教育。假如你是李华，你的朋友林涛来信向你求助，请根据来信内容用英文写一封回信，提出合理建议，帮助解决问题。
Dear Li Hua,
I hear that our government now pays much attention to education on the hard-working spirit among students in China.
As a Grade Nine student, I spend so much time on my study that I seldom do any housework at home or voluntary work in society. I want to be an excellent student to develop the hard-working spirit. Can you tell me what I can do both in and out of the school
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lin Tao
注意 ：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（2）短文需紧扣主题，包括所有要点，可适当发挥；
（3）词数：80—100。
参考词汇：education on the hard-working spirit 劳动教育
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【答案】例文
Dear Lin Tao,
I’m glad that you work so hard in your study. However, as a student, we should also learn to do something meaningful for our school, family and our country. First of all, in order to have a good place to learn knowledge, we should keep our classroom as well as other parts of the school clean and tidy. When attending courses in the youth centre, we can make full use of the good chances and learn more skills which can’t be learned from textbooks. As for our family, our parents are getting older now and it’s time for us to do something for them. Why not cook dinners for them when they are busy and spend more time communicating with them when they are free. There are also many things we can do for ourselves like washing our shoes and clothes. Last but not the least, we must learn to do some voluntary work for society. For example, we can visit the home for the elderly and donate something to the children in poor areas. Respecting people from different careers for their hard work is also necessary because every job is important. I hope you think my advice is worth taking.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：对方求助内容已给出，考生应注意就“来信”中“如何去实践生活劳动”提出建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作时从学校、家庭和社会的角度，分点提出具体建议；
第二步，书写结语，希望建议有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②attend courses上课
③As for关于
④Last but not the least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①When attending courses in the youth centre, we can make full use of the good chances and learn more skills which can’t be learned from textbooks.（when引导的时间状语从句，which引导的定语从句）
②Respecting people from different careers for their hard work is also necessary because every job is important.（because引导的原因状语从句）
10．（23-24九年级上·浙江衢州·期中）假如你是Lihua，你的美国笔友Jim最近感到很烦恼，给你发了一份邮件求助。请你针对他提出的问题写一封回信，并提出合理的建议。
要求：
（1）短文中内容可适当增加；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数：80-100；
Dear Lihua, Last week I had to stay at home alone because my parents went out on business. I played computer games until midnight, so the next day I was late for school and couldn’t hand in my homework. When my parents came back, they felt very angry and I had a big quarrel (争吵) with them. But now I feel sorry and don’t know what to do. Can you give me some advice Yours, Jim
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to hear that. And I can truly understand your feelings! Here are some suggestions for you.
First of all, open and honest communication is key. Instead of letting frustrations build up, it is important to
express our thoughts and feelings in a respectful manner. Choose a suitable time and place to have a calm conversation with your parents. Second, it’s very important to understand each other. So you should think about why your parents are angry with you. Most of parents hope that the kids can grow as person better. In addition, I advise you to find the reasons why you did wrong things and then make a promise to your parents. You should learn how to arrange the time and look after yourself when your parents are not with you.
I hope everything goes well with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏来信中涉及的关键问题，根据来信进行回复。
【写作步骤】第一步，开门见山，表达自己的观点；
第二步，详细的建议；
第三步，表达期望，收尾。
【亮点词汇】①Instead of 代替
②grow as person better更好地成长
③In addition另外
【高分句型】①it’s very important to understand each other. So you should think about why your parents are angry with you. (连词so连接并列句)
②You should learn how to arrange the time and look after yourself when your parents are not with you. (疑问词+动词不定式)
③ Choose a suitable time and place to have a calm conversation with your parents. (祈使句)
11．（2023·浙江丽水·一模）你校本学期开展了丰富多彩的社团活动。假设你是李华，请向你的笔友Alan介绍你校举办的社团活动及目的，并分享你参加社团活动的经历及感受。
What Why
Music club (sing songs...) Sports club (play basketball…) … to improve singing skills, to make life colorful… to keep healthy… …
注意：（1）内容必须包含表格中的信息，并适当发挥；
（2）词数：80~100；开头已给出，仅供选择，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear Alan,
I’d like to introduce the colorful clubs in my school this term to you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Alan,
I’d like to introduce the colorful clubs in my school this term to you.
We have a music club, a sports club and a drawing club this term. In the music club, you can sing songs to improve your singing skills. In the sports club, you can play basketball, play ping-pong and so on. I’m sure you will keep healthy. In the drawing club, you can learn to draw to make life colorful.
I join the sports club. By doing sports, I am much stronger than before. What clubs do you have You can write to tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇信件，向笔友介绍学校开展的社团活动及目的。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”
③提示：题目要求根据提示向笔友介绍学校开展的社团活动及开展目的，并分享自己参加社团活动的经历及感受。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，开篇点题。（已给出）
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍学校开展的社团及目的。
第三步，最后介绍自己参加社团活动的经历及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①singing skill歌唱技能
②and so on等等
③write to sb.给某人写信
[高分句型]
①In the music club, you can sing songs to improve your singing skills.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I’m sure you will keep healthy.（省略that的宾语从句）
12．（2023·浙江金华·三模）假如你是Li Hua，请针对你澳大利亚的朋友Ben来信中的问题写一封回信，提出你的建议并说说理由。
要点 参考词汇
Ben’s Problem Your Suggestions and Reasons
have few friends join clubs/talk with… ask…for help/become easy-going/…
注意:
1. 短文必须包括要点内容：参考词汇可自行增删。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 短文首句已给，不计入总词数。词数：100左右。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble at school in China.
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Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Ben,
I am to that are trouble school China. In your letter you said that you have few friends and feel lonely at school. I think you can join school clubs to meet more new friends. People in the same club may have the same interest. Another way to solve this problem is to be ready to help others when they are in trouble. People will be thankful and glad to make friends with you. Besides, when you come across some difficulty, you can also ask others for help. What’s more, you’d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. In that way, you will become more easy-going and make more friends in the end.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封回信，属于书信作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接信件开头，表示得知其在学校遇到的交友问题；
第二步，根据提示内容，针对交友问题，提出相应的建议，可列举具体的做法；
第三步，表示祝愿并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to help others乐于助人
②in trouble陷入困境中
③come across some difficulty遇到困难
④in return作为回报
[高分句型]
①I think you can join school clubs to meet more new friends.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
②Another way to solve this problem is to be ready to help others when they are in trouble.（when引导的时间状语从句）
13．（2023·浙江绍兴·一模）假如你叫刘明， 你英国同学David想参加你们当地医院做志愿者的活动， 请你结合下表内容写一封邮件，向他介绍一下此次活动的计划。同时，给予一些合理建议。
Plans Suggestions
●give direction to... ●help to register... ●tell stories... ●… ●be patient ●…
注意：
1)文中必须包括表格中全部内容，可适当发挥；
2)你的建议至少两条；
3)词数：80-100：
4)邮件格式已提供，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：挂号register v. registration n.
Dear David,
Glad to hear that you’ll join the volunteer activity at the local hospital.
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Yours,
Liu Ming
【答案】例文
Dear David,
Glad to hear that you will join the volunteer activity at the local hospital. It will be a meaningful voluntary
activity. In the morning, we will work in the hall of the hospital. Some of us will give direction to the patients who can’t find the way. And others can help to register if necessary. In the afternoon, we plan to visit some sick kids to cheer them up. We are going to tell them stories and send them some toys, which may help them feel less lonely. To be a good volunteer, we need to be patient and warm-hearted. More importantly, we are expected to do the work with love and care. It will surely be an excellent experience.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lui Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出。学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍David想参加当地医院做志愿者的活动来引出话题；
第二步，介绍此次志愿者活动的计划；
第三步，给出一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①help to do sth帮忙做某事
②plan to do sth计划做某事
③need to do sth需要做某事
④be expected to do sth被期望做某事
[高分句型]
①We are going to tell them stories and send them some toys, which may help them feel less lonely.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
14．（2023·浙江嘉兴·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike来信询问你的暑期夏令营参与情况，以下是你校关于暑期劳动体验和体育锻炼两项夏令营活动的宣传单。请你用英语给Mike写一封信，告诉他你想参加哪一项活动，并结合具体的活动内容，谈谈你选择此项活动的理由。
Summer Camp
Living skill training● on a farm ● cook meals by yourself ● feed animals ● … Sports training● in a training centre ● live with team members ● play ball games ● …
注意：
(1)短文必须包含一项活动的所有信息，并适当发挥。
(2)对你所选择的活动说明理由。
(3)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数：80～100。短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to tell you something about my summer camp.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文1
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to tell you something about my summer camp. I’d like to join in living skill training. The living skill training will be on a farm. I’m curious about the way of work on a farm. And I also want to enjoy the fresh air and beautiful views there. Besides, I can take part in activities on the farm such as feeding animals and picking fruit. What makes me interested the most is that I can cook by myself. I hope to help my mom to cook meals after learning it. All the living skills I will get through the process will be of great value to my later life. I’m looking forward to the camp.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文2
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to tell you something about my summer camp. I’m looking forward to sport training because I’m crazy about sports. This camp is in a training centre. There I can live with my team members. I will be able to communicate with our team members. And that will be a good way for me to make new friends. What makes me interested the most is that I can play many ball games. I believe I can make great progress during the process. Sounds great, right I can’t wait to join in it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应先选择其中一项活动，然后进行介绍并补充选择的理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，告诉对方你想参加哪项夏令营活动；
第二步，具体介绍关于活动的相关情况，包括地点，活动内容等，并说明选择的理由；
第三步，表达对活动的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be curious about对……好奇
②take part in参加
③be of great value to...对……很有价值
[高分句型]
①What makes me interested the most is that I can cook by myself.（what引导主语从句；that引导表语从句）
②All the living skills I will get through the process will be of great value to my later life.（省略关系代词的定语从句）2024年中考英语二轮复习-书面表达：应用文类作文
1．（23-24九年级下·浙江杭州·阶段练习）假定你是学生李平，你的英国交换生Adam在回国后给你写了一封邮件，请你用英语进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi Li Ping, I hope you’re doing well. Since returning to the UK, I become more interested in learning Chinese. However, I’m facing some difficulties. How can I write Chinese well How can I use four main tones (声调) correctly when I speak Chinese Could you offer me some advice to improve these skills Your help would mean a lot. I hope to hear from you soon! Best, Adam
Hi Adam,
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Best regards,
Li Ping
2．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假如你是李华，收到加拿大笔友Mike的邮件，请阅读邮件并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
To: lihua@
From: mike2010@
Subject: My Life in Junior High School
Dear Li Hua， How’s it going I hope everything is OK with you. I hear that your junior high school life is coming to an end. How have you changed since you started junior high Do you have any special memories How do you like your teachers and classmates
Looking forward to your reply!Mike
To: mike2010@
From: lihua@
Subject: My Life in Junior High School
Dear Mike, I’m glad to hear from you. _ ________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua
3．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Michael即将结束在中国的交换生课程。他打算为家人和好友准备一些中国礼物。请你写一封电子邮件，向他推荐三件有特色的礼物并说明推荐的理由(礼物可以从下表中选择或自行确定)。
Presents Reasons
a silk scarf soft and comfortable; some Chinese paintings on it
Chinese tea paper cuts pieces of Chinese clay art Chinese fans toy pandas … …
注意：
(1)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(2)词数：90-140。
Dear Michael,
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Li Hua
4．（2024·浙江湖州·一模）假如你是李华，交换生Peter即将来你校学习，他对你校的社团活动很感兴趣。请根据以下信息，用英文写一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个你参加过的社团。
提示词语: take part in , improve, benefit
提示问题: What club did you join
What did you do in the club
Why do you recommend the club
注意：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(2) 内容须包含以上内容，可适当发挥；
(3) 词数：80-100词。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school!
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（23-24九年级上·浙江金华·期末）假设你是李平，请你对澳大利亚朋友Peter的邮件进行回复，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
To: Li Ping@ Subject: Hi, waiting for your advice! Hi Li Ping, I am feeling worried these days because of my 6-year-old brother. He is always sitting or lying on sofa, eating unhealthy food and watching cartoons with loud TV sound. I have tried some ways to stop him, but failed. What should I do Can you give me three or four pieces of advice Peter
注意：1. 邮件中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；
2. 邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数80-100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To: Peter From: Li Ping
Hi Peter, I totally understand your feelings these days. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope all the advice above can help you in some way. Best wishes. Li Ping
6．（23-24九年级下·浙江湖州·阶段练习）假如你是李华，你所在的村庄有幸荣获“中国美丽休闲乡村”的荣誉。为更好地服务游客，正在招募志愿者担任导游。请你根据以下提示，用英语给负责人赵先生写一封自荐信，报名成为一名志愿者导游。
写作要求：1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流；
3.100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mr. Zhao,
I’m glad to hear that some volunteer guides are wanted in our village.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．（22-23九年级上·浙江金华·期末）假如你是李华，最近收到国外好友Andrew的电子邮件，请你根据该邮件内容给Andrew回复。
Dear Li Hua, My grades are not very good, and my parents are angry with me. I told them that I worked hard at school. The problem is, I am just not good at schoolwork. But they think I spend too much time playing basketball when I
should be studying. So I argued with them last night. It is true that I play a lot of basketball because I think basketball is something great. I am in the school team and I am proud of that. I want to be in the national team someday. My uncle has offered to help me train too, but how can I get my parents to agree Andrew
注意：
1. 回信必须围绕来信的中主要信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数100词左右；
4. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Andrew,
How is it going I’m so glad to hear from you.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
8．（22-23九年级上·浙江台州·期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友James现在正在学习汉语，他来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据表格提示用英语写一封回信，为他提供一些学习建议。
Skills Ways to learn Chinese Examples or reasons
Listening &Speaking * watch Chinese movies; * have conversations with friends in Chinese; * watch movies like Mu Lan that…; * improve speaking skills;
Reading &Writing * read classic (经典) books; * keep diaries in Chinese; * The more you read, … * Practice makes perfect.
注意：
（1）短文必须包含表格中的所有信息，并可适当发挥。
（2）短文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
（3）词数：80-100。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear James,
I am so glad to hear from you.
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Why don’t you have a try and write to me in Chinese next time
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
9．（22-23九年级上·浙江宁波·期末）近年来，国家日益重视对中学生劳动能力的培养，要求各校对学生进行热爱劳动的教育。假如你是李华，你的朋友林涛来信向你求助，请根据来信内容用英文写一封回信，提出合理建议，帮助解决问题。
Dear Li Hua,
I hear that our government now pays much attention to education on the hard-working spirit among students in China.
As a Grade Nine student, I spend so much time on my study that I seldom do any housework at home or voluntary work in society. I want to be an excellent student to develop the hard-working spirit. Can you tell me what I can do both in and out of the school
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lin Tao
注意 ：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（2）短文需紧扣主题，包括所有要点，可适当发挥；
（3）词数：80—100。
参考词汇：education on the hard-working spirit 劳动教育
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10．（23-24九年级上·浙江衢州·期中）假如你是Lihua，你的美国笔友Jim最近感到很烦恼，给你发了一份邮件求助。请你针对他提出的问题写一封回信，并提出合理的建议。
要求：
（1）短文中内容可适当增加；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数：80-100；
Dear Lihua, Last week I had to stay at home alone because my parents went out on business. I played computer games until midnight, so the next day I was late for school and couldn’t hand in my homework. When my parents came back, they felt very angry and I had a big quarrel (争吵) with them. But now I feel sorry and don’t know what to do. Can you give me some advice Yours, Jim
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．（2023·浙江丽水·一模）你校本学期开展了丰富多彩的社团活动。假设你是李华，请向你的笔友Alan介绍你校举办的社团活动及目的，并分享你参加社团活动的经历及感受。
What Why
Music club (sing songs...) Sports club (play basketball…) … to improve singing skills, to make life colorful… to keep healthy… …
注意：（1）内容必须包含表格中的信息，并适当发挥；
（2）词数：80~100；开头已给出，仅供选择，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear Alan,
I’d like to introduce the colorful clubs in my school this term to you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
Yours,
Li Hua
12．（2023·浙江金华·三模）假如你是Li Hua，请针对你澳大利亚的朋友Ben来信中的问题写一封回信，提出你的建议并说说理由。
要点 参考词汇
Ben’s Problem Your Suggestions and Reasons
have few friends join clubs/talk with… ask…for help/become easy-going/…
注意:
1. 短文必须包括要点内容：参考词汇可自行增删。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3. 短文首句已给，不计入总词数。词数：100左右。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble at school in China.
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Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
13．（2023·浙江绍兴·一模）假如你叫刘明， 你英国同学David想参加你们当地医院做志愿者的活动， 请你结合下表内容写一封邮件，向他介绍一下此次活动的计划。同时，给予一些合理建议。
Plans Suggestions
●give direction to... ●help to register... ●tell stories... ●… ●be patient ●…
注意：
1)文中必须包括表格中全部内容，可适当发挥；
2)你的建议至少两条；
3)词数：80-100：
4)邮件格式已提供，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：挂号register v. registration n.
Dear David,
Glad to hear that you’ll join the volunteer activity at the local hospital.
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Yours,
Liu Ming
14．（2023·浙江嘉兴·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike来信询问你的暑期夏令营参与情况，以下是你校关于暑期劳动体验和体育锻炼两项夏令营活动的宣传单。请你用英语给Mike写一封信，告诉他你想参加哪一项活动，并结合具体的活动内容，谈谈你选择此项活动的理由。
Summer Camp
Living skill training● on a farm ● cook meals by yourself ● feed animals ● … Sports training● in a training centre ● live with team members ● play ball games ● …
注意：
(1)短文必须包含一项活动的所有信息，并适当发挥。
(2)对你所选择的活动说明理由。
(3)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数：80～100。短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to tell you something about my summer camp.
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Yours,
