Unit 7 The Birthday Party 单元满分范文必背（含解析）

Unit 7 The Birthday Party
单元话题满分范文必背
1．假设你是Bob，上个星期天是你的生日，你6:30在家举行了生日聚会。你的一些朋友参加了你的生日聚会。请根据图片提示写一篇60字左右的短文记录当时的情景。
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【答案】例文
I am Bob. Yesterday was Sunday. It was my birthday. I had a birthday party at home. Some of my friends came to my party. They brought me some flowers and some other things. My mother bought a big cake for me. The party began at 6:30. At the party, Ann played the piano. Jenny danced. Kate sang a Chinese song. Tony performed Chinese Kungfu. We had a good time at the party.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”。
③提示：文章为“第一人称”和“第三人称”，介绍自己的生日及朋友们在生日聚会上做的事情，图片描述清楚，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，自我介绍，并生日聚会的时间、地点、人物；
第二步，具体介绍图片中的人物在聚会上做的事情；
第三步，总结大家都很开心。
[亮点词汇]
① buy sth. for sb.给某人买某物
② play the piano弹钢琴
③ perform表演
④ have a good time玩得高兴
[高分句型]
They brought me some flowers and some other things.（并列句）
2．某英文网站正在面向全国中学生开展以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动，请你根据下面的思维导图，用英文以“On My mother’s/father’s Birthday”为题目写一篇 70 词左右的记叙文投稿，内容为某次你为爸爸或妈妈庆祝生日的经历。
注意事项：1. 必须包含所提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
On My ________ Birthday
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【答案】例文
On My Mother’s Birthday
We had a birthday party for my mother at home on May 1, 2022. Some of my friends, my uncle and aunt
came to the party. Everyone bought her a birthday present. My father made a big birthday cake and cooked some delicious food. My friends helped to put the candles on the big cake. We all sat around the table. Then we began the party. I asked my mother to blow out the candles and make a wish. After that, we sang the birthday song and danced together. Then my father performed a magic trick. He turned a handkerchief into a rose and gave it to my mother. In the afternoon we watched an interesting movie with my mother. Everyone had a good time that day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍派对的时间和地点；
第二步，讲述派对上所做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①help to do sth帮助做某事
②blow out吹灭
③make a wish许愿
④turn…into把……变成……
[高分句型]
My friends helped to put the candles on the big cake.（动词不定式作宾语）
3．6月18日星期六，Bob在家举办了生日聚会，请根据表格信息，写一篇日记介绍昨天你参加生日聚会的情况。
How to go 乘13路公交车到达幸福路(Happy Road)， 沿着幸福路走到底，Bob家就在路的左侧
What to give 生日礼物、亲手制作的生日卡
What to do 1 Maria跳芭蕾舞 2 做游戏 3……
How to feel 1 …… 2 ……
写作要求：
词数70左右，日记格式已给出，不计入总词数； 内容完整、语句流畅、需适当发挥；
文中不能透露个人真实信息。
June 19th
Sunny
Yesterday was June 18th. Bob had a birthday party at home. I __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
June19th Sunny
Yesterday was June 18th. Bob had a birthday party at home. I went to Bob’s home for his birthday party. First I took Bus No.13 to Happy Road. Then I went along Happy Road to the end. Bob’s home is on the left.
I was happy to see Bob and his parents. I gave Bob a present and a birthday card. I made the card by hand. At the party, Maria performed ballet for us. We also played interesting games. At last we sang the birthday song and ate the birthday cake.
We had a wonderful party. The music was nice and the food was delicious. Everyone had a good time.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求写一篇日记介绍昨天你参加Bob 的生日聚会的情况。结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主，作文可以分为三段，第一段介绍Bob家的位置以及自己怎样去的；第二段介绍在聚会上做了什么以及你送给Bob了什么；第三段介绍自己的感受。要求语言连贯，无语法以及拼写错误。
4．今天是星期天，是你的好朋友李明的12岁生日。你给他买了本书作为生日礼物，他的妈妈为你们做了一桌丰盛的晚餐。在晚会上，你们唱歌跳舞，过得很愉快。请根据以上提示写一篇不少于60词的短文。
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【答案】例文：
Today is Sunday. It’s my best friend Li Ming’s 12th birthday. I went to his birthday party tonight and I bought him a book as his birthday present. He loved it very much. His mother cooked a big dinner for us. The food was very delicious. At the party, we had a good time singing and dancing. What a lovely day it is!
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求根据题目的提示内容写一篇不少于60词的短文，内容是你去朋友生日聚会上的经历。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称进行写作，时态主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时；本文可在提示内容的基础上进行自我发挥，以丰富文章内容和达成字数要求；写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
5．你的同学Ann上周六过生日，她邀请了你及其他一些朋友参加的生日聚会。在聚会上，你们表演了很多精彩的节目，玩得都很高兴。请你由此展开想象，写一篇60词左右的短文。
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【答案】例文
Ann is my classmate. Last Saturday was her twelfth birthday. I came to her birthday party with her other friends. Her parents bought lots of food and drinks. Her mother made a big cake. We brought many presents for her. She was very happy to get so many presents. At the party, Mary played the guitar and Lily played the piano. Wang Tao danced to disco and Bob performed ballet. I performed Chinese kung fu. Ann sang some English songs. We all had a wonderful time.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求写一篇短文来描述生日聚会，可自行展开想象。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态用一般过去时；人称混合使用；可直接采用1段落格式，注意要描述在聚会上做了什么以及心情如何。不要出现语法和单词拼写错误。
6．假设你是李华，你的15岁生日就要到了，你的美国网友John给你发来邮件，提前祝你生日快乐，并询问你每年如何过生日。请你根据下面的要点提示，给John回一封70词左右的邮件，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1.妈妈会给你买一个蛋糕并准备丰盛的午餐；
2.你邀请几个好朋友来庆祝；他们为你唱歌并送你礼物；
3.饭后你们一起去看电影或者玩游戏。
4.……
要求：注意语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整。
Dear John,
I’m happy to get your emai1.Thanks for your best wishes.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文:
Dear John,
I’m happy to get your email. Thanks for your best wishes.
On my birthdays, my mother usually buys me a big birthday cake. She also makes a big lunch for me. We have a party at home. I usually ask some of my good friends to come to my party. At the party, they sing the song Happy Birthday for me. They give me nice presents. After lunch, we usually go to the movies or play games. We have a good time every year.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以李华的身份给美国网友John写一封电子邮件，告诉他你每年是如何过生日的。题目中列出了文章中应包含的要点，学生们应以此为提纲，组织语言，用英语表达出来。学生们可以适当发挥，补充更多的细节信息，使文章内容更充实、完整。
写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态、第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述。写作时应将题目中给出的内容都包括在内，不要遗漏要点。应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，注意英语句子结构特点，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他句式。同时注意上下文的衔接，使文意流畅、连贯。
7．假如你是珍妮，下面是海伦发给你的邀请函。请你根据以下要点提示给海伦发一封电子邮件回复该邀请函。
Dear Jenny,
I’d like to invite you and your sister Mary to my birthday party this Sunday. It will start at 7 p. m. Will you be free I would be very glad if you could come. Please let me know if you are coming by Friday.
Helen
提示：
1.你的妹妹玛丽能去；
2. 你不能去，原因是……
要求：70词左右，可适当发挥。电子邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Helen,
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Yours,
Jenny
【答案】例文
Dear Helen,
Thank you for inviting us to your birthday party on Sunday. Mary is available and she is glad to accept your invitation. I wish I could be there, but I’m sorry I can’t. I have to go to the music club to practice the piano. As you know, our school will have a concert to celebrate the opening of the new library next Monday. But I’ll make a chocolate cake for you as a gift. Happy birthday!
Yours,
Jenny
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文。为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：仔细审读题目，尤其是要点提示，内容全面，逻辑清晰，并且恰当使用表示并列或转折的连接词，丰富句式结构。
[写作步骤]
第一步：首先感谢对方的邀请。
第二步：表示自己无法参加，并陈述原因。
第三步：即使自己无法参加派对，也为对方做了一些事情，来表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①thank sb for doing sth因某事感谢某人
②be available有空
③as you know正如你所知道的
[亮点句型]
①Mary is available and she is glad to accept your invitation.（and连接的并列句）
②As you know, our school will have a concert to celebrate the opening of the new library next Monday.（to do不定式做目的状语）
8．在我们的成长过程中，总有一个生日给我们留下了难忘的回忆。请根据以下写作要点和要求，以“My birthday”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你难忘的生日。
要点：
1. 你的生日是什么时候；
2. 这次生日为什么让你印象深刻；
3. 你的感受如何。
要求：
1. 补全题目，如用happy，wonderful，unforgettable ...
2. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、语法正确；
3. 80词左右。
My ________ birthday
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【答案】[例文]
My unforgettable birthday
I am Li Jia. My birthday is on May 15th. My parents work in the city and they seldom have time to come back home to celebrate my birthday. But I had a happy birthday last year.
On that day, when I got to school, my teacher and classmates all said “Happy birthday!” to me. And they had a birthday party for me. My teacher bought a birthday cake with candles for me. My classmates sang some songs and danced to music. My best friend bought a present for me. I was so happy. I will never forget it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题为话题作文；
②时态：对过去发生的经历进行叙述时应用过去时，其他部分应用现在时；
③提示：学生应先用形容词补全文章标题，再围绕这一标题对自己的一次生日经历进行叙述，叙述思路按照题目所给提示展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇自我介绍，自己的生日是何时，最令自己难忘的生日是哪一次；
第二步，叙述自己那一次生日的经过，并解释为何那一次生日令你印象深刻；
第三步，谈谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①buy sth. for sb.给某人买某物
[高分句型]
①My parents work in the city and they seldom have time to come back home to celebrate my birthday.（and连接的并列句）
②On that day, when I got to school, my teacher and classmates all said “Happy birthday!” to me.（when引导的时间状语从句）
9．上个星期天是Mrs. King的生日。当她下班回家后，她惊喜地发现桌上摆满了丰盛的晚餐。她的两个孩子还为她准备了一个大生日蛋糕。请根据提示及图片内容发挥想象，写一篇短文。
写作要求：1.短文内容必须符合图意；
2.注意各图之间的相互衔接；
3.70个词左右。
提示词汇：open(打开), food, give…to…, sing, birthday, happy, enjoy
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【答案】例文
Last Sunday was Mrs. King’s birthday. Mrs. King came home from work very late. When she opened the door, she found many kinds of delicious food on the table. Her daughter, Jenny and her son, Tom gave a big birthday cake to her. Mrs. King put the cake on the table. Jenny and Tom sang Happy Birthday to her. Mrs. King was very happy. And she enjoyed the delicious cake with them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：考生应根据文字和图片提示围绕“Mrs. King的生日”写一篇文章，注意语意连贯，不要遗漏信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍庆祝生日的时间和地点；
第二步，讲述哪些人如何为Mrs. King庆祝生日；
第三步，总结全文，表达人物感受。
[亮点词汇]
①many kinds of各种各样的
②give sth. to sb.给某人某物
[高分句型]
When she opened the door, she found many kinds of delicious food on the table.（when引导的时间状语从句）
10．假设你是Sam，下周五是你的生日，你打算举办一个生日派对。请你根据下面的提示信息，给你的好朋友Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加你的生日派对。要求：不少于70词，可适当发挥。
时间：下周五
地点：自己家里
参加人员：一些同学
其他：请Jim在下周二之前回复此邀请函
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【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
I’m going to have a birthday party next Friday at my house. Can you come to my birthday party My house is behind my school and it’s next to a bookstore. You’ll find it easily. The party will be a lot of fun. Some of my classmates are coming. They are friendly and funny, and you’ll like them. And my mother will make your favorite chocolate popcorn in the party.
Please reply to this invitation by next Tuesday.
I look forward to your coming.
Yours,
Sam
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己打算下周五在家举办一个生日派对；
第二步，介绍参加人员并适当发挥；
第三步，最后请Jim在下周二之前回复此邀请函。
[亮点词汇]
①next to旁边
②a lot of大量的
③reply to答复
[高分句型]
My house is behind my school and it’s next to a bookstore.（and连接两个并列结构）