Module 3 Natural elements Unit 5 Water满分范文必背（含答案）2023-2024学年七年级英语下册（牛津深圳版）

Unit 5 Water
单元话题满分范文必背
1．请根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文，可适当发挥。词数为80词左右。
水对我们很重要，我们的生活不能没有水。地球上大量的水是海水，海水里含有太多盐，不能直接饮用；只有少量的水是淡水。因此，节约用水非常重要。
节约用水的方法：
（1）不使用水龙头时，记得关掉；
（2）淋浴代替盆浴；
（3）（请你补充）
总结：水是非常宝贵的。我们不能浪费或污染水。
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【答案】例文：
As is known to all, more than 70 percent of the earth is covered with water, but 3 percent is fresh water, of which only 0.5 percent is potable water. So saving water is very important.
Water taps are often used in our daily life. Remember to turn them off when we are not using them. It’s better to use a shower than a tub, because you need to put a lot of water in it before you use it. Then, we can recycle water. For example, after we wash our faces, we can use the water to flush the toilet, or clean the house. What a clever idea, isn’t it Finally, as fresh water is rare, we should stop throwing things in rivers or lakes.
In a word, water is valuable and we should not waste it or pollute it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，提出水的稀缺性和节约用水的重要性；
第二步，详细描述如何采取行动来节约用水；
第三步，总结，再次强调节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①As is known to all众所周知
②is covered with被……覆盖
③potable可饮用的
④turn off关闭
⑤recycle循环
⑥rare稀有的
⑦stop doing停止做某事
⑧in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①As is known to all, more than 70 percent of the earth is covered with water, but 3 percent is fresh water, of which only 0.5 percent is potable water.（状语从句：由but引导转折状语从句；定语从句：由which引导宾语从句）
②Remember to turn them off when we are not using them.（状语从句：由when引导时间状语从句）
③It’s better to use a shower than a tub, because you need to put a lot of water in it before you use it.（比较级：better than；状语从句：由because引导原因状语从句）
④For example, after we wash our faces, we can use the water to flush the toilet, or clean the house.（状语从句：由after引导时间状语从句）
⑤What a clever idea, isn’t it （感叹句：what修饰名词；反意疑问句：谓语动词为be动词，前肯后否）
2．假设你叫Frank，你学校每年都在世界水日(World Water Day)开展丰富多彩的活动，宣传节约用水，你的笔友Andy所在的学校也要开展类似活动。请你写信向他介绍你们的活动情况(活动内容见下表)。
活动时间 3月22日
参加人员 全校师生
活动形式 1.表演短剧2.演讲比赛 3.制作海报4.……
活动目的 告诉人们水的重要性、浪费水的危害、节约用水的方法……
活动感受 ……
提示词：活动activity；表演短剧put on short plays；演讲比赛speech competition；海报poster
要求：
1. 60个词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内。
2. 必须包括以上全部要点，可以适当发挥。
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
Dear Andy,
Nice hearing from you. Let me tell you what we often do on World Water Day. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Frank
【答案】参考范文：
Dear Andy,
Nice hearing from you. Let me tell you what we often do on World Water Day.
On 22 March every year, all the teachers and students of our school take part in different activities. Lots of students put on short plays. Some plays are funny, and they show us wasting water is bad for humans. Many students take part in the speech competition. They tell us what we should do to save water. Some teachers and students make posters and put them up in the school and neighbourhood. In this way, more people know World Water Day and join us.
All these activities are helpful. More and more people know the importance of water and begin to save it. Maybe you can do the same.
Yours,
Frank
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示向笔友Andy介绍我校的世界水日活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题。表明要介绍我校的世界水日活动；
第二步，具体说明活动时间，参加人员，活动形式及活动目的；
第三步，谈谈自己对世界水日活动感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加
②put on 上演
③be bad for 有害于
[高分句型]
①They tell us what we should do to save water.（what引导的宾语从句）
3．请以“How to protect the water”为题写一篇短文，词数80左右。应包括以下信息点：
1. 水对人类很重要，我们的生活离不开水。
2. 目前水污染严重，可饮用水正在减少。
3. 我们应如何保护水资源？（1）不要浪费水；（2）循环利用水。
【点拨】
谋篇布局
1. 人称：第一、三人称
2. 时态：一般现在时、现在进行时
好词
1. waste a lot of water浪费很多水
2. care about关注
3. pour dirty water into rivers and lakes把脏水倒入河水和湖水中
4. have/take a shower淋浴
5. have a bath洗澡
6. as we all know众所周知
好句
1. People can’t live without water.人们离开水是无法生存的。
2. There is less and less drinkable water on Earth.地球上的可饮用水越来越少。
3. Water pollution is getting more and more serious.水污染越来越严重。
牛刀小试
How to protect the water
As we all know, water is very important in our daily life.
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【答案】例文
How to protect the water
As we all know, water is very important in our daily life. We use water to wash things, cook food and make machines. People can’t live without water.
But some people don’t seem to care about it. Therefore, water pollution is getting more and more serious. There is less and less drinkable water on Earth.
So we should do something to protect water. First, don’t leave the tap running when we don’t need to use water. Second, try to reuse water. When we finish washing the clothes, we can use the water to clean the floor. Third, we can have a shower instead of a bath.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何保护水资源，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍水对人类的重要性；
第二步，介绍目前的水污染情况；
第三步，介绍我们应如何保护水资源。
[亮点词汇]
①care about关心
②have a shower淋浴
③instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①There is less and less drinkable water on Earth. (There be句型)
②When we finish washing the clothes, we can use the water to clean the floor. (when引导的时间状语从句)
4．请根据图片和提示，以“Water is useful”为题，写一篇60词左右的文章。
Water is useful
Water is very valuable. We use much water in our daily life.
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【答案】例文：
Water is useful
Water is very valuable. We use much water in our daily life. We can’t live without water. At home, we use water to brush our teeth, wash clothes and do the dishes. At work, people use water to put out fire, grow vegetables and make things in factories.
However, there isn’t much water on the earth. We must save it. If we waste too much water, one day in the future, the last drop of water on the planet will be our tear.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：题干中没有给出明确的写作要点，考生要结合图片提示，列出写作方向，并进行恰当的发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，结合图片，介绍水资源的用途；
第二步，谈谈水资源的现状，并号召大家一起节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
① brush one’s teeth 刷牙
② do the dishes 洗餐具
③ put out 熄灭
[高分句型]
① However, there isn’t much water on the earth. （there be句型）
② If we waste too much water, one day in the future, the last drop of water on the planet will be our tear.（if引导的条件状语从句）
5．请根据内容提示，以“How to save water at home”为题，写一篇80词左右的文章。
1. take a shower, instead of, less water
2. stop...from, pour(倒入)
3. leave the tap on, waste water
4. water plants with used water, make full use of(充分利用)
How to save water at home
Water is very valuable. It is important for us to save water.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
How to save water at home
Water is very valuable. It is important for us to save water. How to save water at home
First of all, we should take a shower instead of a bath, because it uses less water. After that, we should stop pouring waste water into rivers. Dirty water may pollute rivers. Then don’t leave the tap on when we brush the
teeth. In this way we can save a lot of water. In the end, remember to water plants with used water. It can make full use of water.
Let’s try our best to save water.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求中已给出的单词，考生应充分利用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，表达节约用水的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从淋浴，阻止废水排入江河，刷牙关闭水龙头，用用过的水给植物浇水等方面介绍节约用水的方法；
第三步，书写结语。提出倡议，呼吁大家节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②pour sth. into sth.把某物倒入某物
③in the end最后
[高分句型]
①First of all, we should take a shower instead of a bath, because it uses less water.（because引导原因状语从句）
②Then don’t leave the tap on when we brush the teeth.（when引导时间状语从句）
6．假如你是李华，请给你的美国网友写一封邮件，探讨一下现在面临的水资源问题以及如何节约用水。100词左右。
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【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
I am writing to tell you something about water.
Everyone knows that water is important to all living things. However, much water is wasted every day. What’s worse, there are many people in the world that can’t have clean water to drink.
As for how to save water, here is some advice from my classmates. First, we should do something small in our daily life. Fox example, we should turn off the tap as soon as we finish using it. Second, we can recycle water. Third, everyone should know the importance of water. Only when all the people work together can more water be saved.
Let’s work together to save water.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作内容包括：现在面临的水资源问题、如何节约用水，重点是如何节约用水。注意电子邮件格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍水资源面临的问题；
第二步，重点描写如何节约用水；
第三步，呼吁节约水用水。
[亮点词汇]
① What’s worse 更糟糕的是
② As for how to save water 至于如何节约水
③ as soon as 一……就……
④ know the importance of wate 了解水的重要性
[高分句型]
① What’s worse, there are many people in the world that can’t have clean water to drink.（定语从句）
② Only when all the people work together can more water be saved.（倒装句）
7．假如你是Jack，你留意到学校旁边的那条河流污染很严重，打算写一封信给市长，反映该河流污染问题，并呼吁大家保护该河流。可适当发挥，词数60词左右。
内容要点：
1. 很多人把垃圾扔进河里。
2. 一些工厂把废水排进河里。
3. 河水很脏，河里几乎没什么鱼。
4. 对我们来说，保护这条河流是很重要的。
5. 请大家停止污染这条河流。
6. 你的观点。
要求
1. 短文要包括所给的提示信息，可适当发挥。
2. 短文开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear mayor,
I want to talk to you about the river close to our school.
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Best wishes,
Jack
【答案】例文
Dear mayor,
I want to talk to you about the river close to our school.
The river is very dirty now. Many people throw rubbish into the river. Also, some factories pour waste water into it. As a result, it becomes very dirty. I know there were lots of fish in the river before. The dirty water killed most of the fish and there are few in it now. If there is no clean river, the fish will all die one day.
I think it is very important for us to protect our environment. We can’t live without the fresh air and water. Let’s stop polluting the river. I hope that everyone will take some measures to protect our home.
Best wishes,
Jack
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”与“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容要点”中的提示内容，适当添加细节，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。以“我想和你谈谈我们学校附近的那条河”来引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述被污染的河流的现状；
第三步，书写结语。表明自己的观点，表达“希望大家停止污染、一起保护环境”的美好愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①waste water废水
②As a result结果
③take some measures采取一些措施
[高分句型]
①If there is no clean river, the fish will all die one day.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I think it is very important for us to protect our environment.（省略that的宾语从句；“it is+adj.+for sb. to do sth.”句型）
8．深圳是一个缺水的城市。缺水，让人们的生产、生活受到影响。为了保护水资源，我们应该马上采取行动。请根据下面表格中所给的要点提示，以“Saving Water”为题写一篇短文。70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
水的重要性 所有生物都需要水，没有水，地球上就没有生命存在
存在的问题 工厂废水、生活污水等导致淡水稀少
改进的措施 停止浪费水、不要污染水
联系自己的生活实际提出几条合理的建议（至少2条）
Saving water
Water is important to us.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s save water together!
【答案】例文
Saving water
Water is important to us. All living things need water. Without water, there would be no life on earth. The drinking water on Earth is very limited. Fresh water is becoming scarce because of factory wastewater and domestic sewage. There are still some people wasting water.
Then what should we do to save water We should start with small things and make good use of each drop of water. And we should try to protect water resources and never pollute lakes or rivers. It’s not easy to save water. So we should do our best.
Let’s save water together!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是材料作文， 根据所给材料，以“Saving Water”为题写一篇短文。 要从水的重要性、存在的问题及改进的措施等三个方面叙述。
2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时，叙述“水”的重要性和存在的问题时以第三人称为主，叙述改进的措
施时，应用到第一人称。在谈论改进的措施时用到表示建议的句型（例如，we should.../had better等）。写作的内容可按照表格内容的提示以三段式来写：第一段谈论水的重要性，引出话题；第二段介绍存在的问题；最后一段提出合理的建议并呼吁大家节约用水。写作时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，保证条理清晰，内容连贯，语法正确。最后认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写和语法错误等。
9．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Water around us”.
Suggested questions:
◆ How much do you know about water
◆ What’s the use of water
◆ What are the threats to the water
◆ What should we do to deal with the water pollution
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【答案】例文
Water around us
As we all know, water is very important in our daily life. For example, we drink water every day. And in our daily life, we use water to wash vegetables and cook. We cannot live without water.
However, there is less and less clean water on the Earth. Many factories directly put polluted water into the river and people may throw litter into the water, which makes the water be polluted seriously. All in all, water is very important to us. We should try our best to protect water..
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍水的重要性以及用途；
第二步，介绍现在水被污染的现状；
第三步，呼吁人们保护水源。
[亮点词汇]
①less and less越来越少
②all in all总而言之
③try one’s best to do竭尽全力做某事
[高分句型]
Many factories directly put polluted water into the river and people may throw litter into the water, which makes the water be polluted seriously.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）