Module 3 Natural elements Unit 6 Electricity满分范文必背（含答案）2023-2024学年七年级英语下册（牛津深圳版）

Unit 6 Electricity
单元话题满分范文必背
1．每年都有很多人在交通事故中受伤或失去生命，因此确保交通安全极为重要。请根据图示，写一篇短文，介绍如何确保交通安全。词数80左右。
注意事项：1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Every year many people get hurt or lose their lives in traffic accidents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Every year many people get hurt or lose their lives in traffic accidents. It’s very important to keep safe on the street. Here’s some advice.
First, we must obey traffic rules. We should wear helmets when riding bikes. Don’t cross the street when traffic light is red. Second, we must never play on the street or we may have an accident. Third, it’s good to help children and old people cross the street. Last, in case of an accident, we should know how to give first aid.
In short, the best way to be safe is to be careful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何确保交通安全，可适当发挥，注意条理清晰，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，通过表达在街上保持安全是很重要的来引出确保交通安全的建议；
第二步，具体介绍确保交通安全的建议；
第三步，书写结语，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①in case of以防
②in short简言之
③first aid急救
[高分句型]
①It’s very important to keep safe on the street. (it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语)
②Don’t cross the street when traffic light is red. (when引导时间状语从句)
2．请以“Home rules to save electricity”为题写一篇短文，词数80左右。应包括以下信息点：
1. 举例说明电对人们的日常生活很重要；
2. 尽量使用节能灯泡（energy saving bulb）；
3. 夏天开空调的时候不要忘记关窗；
4. 人离开的时候不要让灯一直亮着。
【点拨】
谋篇布局
1. 人称：第一、三人称
2. 时态：一般现在时
好词
1. for example例如
2. free sb. from sth.从某事中解放某人
3. if possible如果可能的话
4. in the long run从长远看
5 not only…but also…不仅……而且……
好句
1. It is necessary for us to save electricity.对我们来说，节约用电是重要的。
2. Don’t leave the lights on all the time.不要让灯一直亮着。
3. If we can do as I mentioned, …如果我们能像我提到的这样做，……
牛刀小试
Home rules to save electricity
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【答案】例文
Home rules to save electricity
Electricity is very useful and important in our daily lives. It makes our life more convenient. For example, washing machines free us from hard work. Air conditioners can keep us cool in hot days. But without electricity, these machines can’t work. So it is necessary for us to save electricity. Here are some rules to save electricity at home.
We should try to use energy-saving bulbs instead. In this way, we can save electricity. Also, remember to close the windows when the air conditioners are on, or it will waste the energy. Don’t leave the lights on when nobody is at home. Turn all the lights off before we leave. When we are watching TV, try to turn the lights off if possible.
If we can do the things above, we can save a lot of electricity in the long run. It is not only good for our daily lives but also helpful for our environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍节约用电的家庭规则，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，举例说明电对人们的日常生活很重要；
第二步，详细介绍节约用电的家庭规则；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②try to do sth.尽力做某事
③turn off关闭
[高分句型]
①Also, remember to close the windows when the air conditioners are on, or it will waste the energy. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②If we can do the things above, we can save a lot of electricity in the long run. (if引导的条件状语从句)
3．假设你是李华，学校英语俱乐部要开展以“Keep Safe, Start with Me”为主题的英语征文活动。请根据下列提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求：
（1）结构完整、条理清晰、语言通畅。
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Keep Safe, Start with Me
Do you know how to keep safe in our daily life
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【答案】例文：
Keep Safe, Start with Me
Do you know how to keep safe in our daily life Today I’d like to tell you some ways to keep safe.
First, always play in a safe place. We mustn’t play on the street. A park is a safe place because there are no cars or buses in it. Second, follow the traffic rules. Before crossing a road, stop and look both ways. Never put your head out of a running car. Many people get hurt by doing so. Third, don’t talk to a stranger or go with him or her. Fourth, we had better know how to give first aid in case of an accident.
That’s what I want to say. Start with me now, let’s keep safe in our daily life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据思维导图内容进行描述并适当拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍保持安全的方法；
第二步，具体介绍保持安全的方法；
第三步，倡导大家从自己做起，在日常生活中保证自己的安全。
[亮点词汇]
①tell sb. sth. 告诉某人某事
②follow the traffic rules 遵守交通规则
③give first aid 进行急救
[高分句型]
①First, always play in a safe place.（祈使句的肯定形式）
②A park is a safe place because there are no cars or buses in it.（because引导原因状语从句；there be句型）
4．为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，学校开展了 以“How to keep us safe from danger”为主题的英语演讲比赛请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。
注意事项：
1.词数：100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名，校名等信息；
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
How to keep us safe from danger
Road safety Fire safety Food safety ...
watch the traffic lights carefully... not play with fire... not eat the food that has gone bad... ...
How to keep us safe from danger
Hello, everyone. To us, safety is very important. We should know how to keep us safe from danger.
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【答案】例文
How to keep us safe from danger
Hello, everyone. To us, safety is very important. We should know how to keep us safe from danger.
When walking or riding on the road, we should obey the traffic rules. It’s important to watch the traffic lights carefully and walk or ride on the right of the road.
We eat food every day, so we should pay attention to food safety. We mustn’t eat the food that has gone bad. And we mustn’t eat the food that can’t reach the required standard, either.
Moreover, we shouldn’t play with fire. If our house is on fire, we should know how to escape and save ourselves. We should also be careful when we go swimming in summer. We shouldn’t swim alone or swim in deep rivers. We’d better go with our parents or friends who swim very well and swim in the indoor swimming pool.
We should learn to keep us safe from danger. After all, life safety is the most important.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意文章要包含道路安全、消防安全和食品安全，缺一不可，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于开头已给出，故接下来具体阐述如何让我们远离危险；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“道路安全、消防安全、食品安全”等方面阐述如何远离危险；
第三步，书写结语。说明生命安全最为重要。
[亮点词汇]
①obey遵守
②pay attention to注意
③moreover而且
④after all毕竟
[高分句型]
①We mustn’t eat the food that has gone bad. And we mustn’t eat the food that can’t reach the required standard, either.（that引导的定语从句）
②If our house is on fire, we should know how to escape and save ourselves.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③We should also be careful when we go swimming in summer.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．我们都知道电在日常生活中是非常重要的。它帮助我们带动很多电器，但是同时在使用它的过程中还存在一定的危险，请根据下面的提示写一篇安全用电指引。
电的重要性及危险性 电器使得人们的生活更方便。但是如果不安全用电，有可能会带来危险，有可能伤害人或是引起火灾。
安全用电的注意事项 ●我们手湿时，不允许触碰电器； ●当我们清洁或者修理电器时，一定要先关掉电源； 自行补充至少两点……
总结呼吁 ……
要求：
1.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数内）；
2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：电源power supply；修理repair
Electricity is very important in our daily life,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
Electricity is very important in our daily life, but sometimes it is also very dangerous. So when we use the electrical appliances, we must be careful with them.
First, if our hands are wet, we mustn’t touch them. Second, when we clean or repair the electrical appliances, we must switch off the power supply. Third, we mustn’t let children touch some of the electrical appliances. Last, the electrical appliances can’t work too long and we should make them stop to have a rest.
In a word, we must use electricity safely.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，确保语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明电的重要性及危险性；
第二步，具体阐述安全用电的注意事项；
第三步，最后总结呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
① be careful with小心
② switch off关掉
③ in a word总之
[高分句型]
① So when we use the electrical appliances, we must be careful with them.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② First, if our hands are wet, we mustn’t touch them.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．电在我们生活中占据着非常重要的位置。如果你是班级的班长，这周五下午，你将要作为代表在班会上发言，为同学们讲解有关电的知识。请根据下面的提示，写一篇60词左右的讲稿吧。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
1.电是什么
2.为什么要节约用电
3.怎么样节约用电
Hello, everyone. I’m happy to stand here to tell you something about electricity.
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【答案】例文：
Hello, everyone. I’m happy to stand here to tell you something about electricity.
Electricity is very important for in our daily life. People can’t live without it. Electricity comes from power station, people produce electricity mostly by burning coal, oil and natural gas. But some ways about producing electricity is harmful to the environment. So, we should save electricity, which means protect our environment.
There are a lot of things we can do to save electricity. Firstly, when we leave a room, we should turn off all the lights and other machines. Secondly, decide what we want before we open a fridge, so it won’t waste electricity. Thirdly, we can put enough clothes into a washing machine at a time.
Let’s start small and save electricity as possible as we can.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文写作要点已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，以“我很高兴站在这里告诉你们一些关于电的事情”引出下文；
第二步，按照要点提示，介绍电是什么，接着介绍我们为什么要节约用电，可从保护环境的角度出发，然后介绍节约用电的方式，可列举生活中我们可以做的事情，注意语法的正确；
第三步，结尾总结，呼吁人们要从小事做起来节约用电。
[亮点词汇]
①power station发电站
②be harmful to对某物有害
③turn off关掉
④as possible as we can尽我们可能
[高分句型]
①When we leave a room, we should turn off all the lights and other machines. （when引导的时间状语从句）
②Let’s start small and save electricity as possible as we can.（祈使句表示建议和呼吁）
7．请根据下面的内容提示，写一篇关于电的作用和如何节约用电的短文（60词左右）。
内容要点：1. 电的用途很广；
2. 现在的电力仍然不足；
3. 我们不能浪费电，应该节约用电；
4. 我们应该如何节约用电？
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【答案】例文：
Electricity is very useful. With the help of electricity, we can turn on lights when it is dark, we can watch TV, and so on. Unluckily, we are facing the shortage of electricity today. A large part of it is being wasted as well. So we must try to save it.
First, we should turn off the lights in time if we don’t need them. Second, cut off the electricity before going out. Third, try to use energy-saving appliances as much as possible.
Actions speak louder than words. Let’s save electricity together to make our earth greener.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表述电的用途很广；
第二步，表述目前面临电力不足的问题；
第三步，介绍我们应该如何节约用电；
第四步，号召大家一起节约用电，并对文章做出总结。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of 在……的帮助下
②turn on/off 打开/关掉
③in time 及时
[高分句型]
①we should turn off the lights in time if we don’t need them.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②Actions speak louder than words.（习语）
8．Write a passage in at least 50 words about the topic “Electricity”.（以“电”为题，写一篇不少于50个词的短文）
Suggested questions:
Do you think electricity is important in our daily life
What’s the importance of electricity
What should we do to save electricity
Electricity
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【答案】例文：
Electricity
Almost everyone today uses electricity in one way or another. Electricity is very important to us.
Electricity lights streets and buildings. It also warms people and animals. We use electricity in many different ways. We use electricity to heat food in cookers, and we use electricity for cooling food in refrigerators. Without electricity, our life will be boring and uncomfortable. It is hard to imagine what life in our cities would be like without it.
So we should save electricity. We must turn off all the lights before we leave the home. We must close the windows when the air conditioner is on. How useful the electricity is! Let us save electricity together!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体表明电对我们很重要；
第二步，具体介绍电在生活中不同方面的应用；
第三步，最后提出建议应该节约用电并指出具体的做法。
[亮点词汇]
① be important to对……很重要
② turn off关掉
③ be like像
[高分句型]
① We must turn off all the lights before we leave the home.（before引导的时间状语从句）
② How useful the electricity is!（感叹句）
9．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Use electricity safely”. （你发现你身边的亲朋好友经常有不安全用电的行为，有很大的危险隐患。请以“安全用电”为题写一篇 60—120 词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a guide: （写作必须包含以下内容）
1. How do some people use electricity
2. Why should we use electricity safely
3. What’s your suggestion on using electricity safely
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【答案】例文
Use electricity safely
Using electricity safely is a very important topic in our daily lives.
First, ensure any electrical items are approved standard when purchasing and keep them correctly maintained. Second, unplug electrical items that are not in regular use and
ensure that you unplug and switch off electrical items when you are away from the house for any length of time . Third, don’t use any electrical items in the bathroom unless specifically
designed for use there, such as shavers and electric toothbrushes. But when you use them, make sure not to get them wet and avoid plugging and unplugging with wet hands. The last, always turn
the electrics off at the mains if carrying out any electrical repairs and only attempt repairs if you know what you are doing.
We should use electricity carefully because items left plugged in can be a fire risk and waste energy if left on standby.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“应该如何用电；安全用电的原因以及安全用电的建议”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“安全用电是我们日常生活中非常重要的话题。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“如何安全用电以及安全用电的建议”重点介绍安全用电的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我们应该谨慎用电，因为插上电源的物品如果处于待机状态，则可能会引发火灾，并浪费能源。”
[亮点词汇]
① switch off关上
② make sure not to do sth确保不做某事
[高分句型]
① Third, don’t use any electrical items in the bathroom unless specifically designed for use there, such as shavers and electric toothbrushes.（don’t...祈使句的否定形式，表劝告）
② We should use electricity carefully because items left plugged in can be a fire risk and waste energy if left on standby.（because引导的原因状语从句，if引导的条件状语从句）
10．每年的12月2日是全国交通安全日，假如你是Helen，班主任邀请你在班会课上进行关于交通安全的宣传演讲，以下是Helen拟的思维导图，请根据这份导图写出一份演讲稿：
1.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
2.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
3.不少于70词。演讲稿的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone, I am Helen. Today I will give you a talk about how to keep safe when we are on the street.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Thank you for listening.
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone, I am Helen. Today I will give you a talk about how to keep safe when we are on the street.
When crossing the road, we should obey the traffic rules and pay attention to the traffic lights. Stop at the red light and go at the green light. We should avoid looking at the mobile phone while we are walking on the road. Ride and walk without distraction. It’s dangerous for us to play with our friends on the road. We should look left and right before we cross the road.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求根据提示内容，分享关于交通安全的问题，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段给出关于交通安全的建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。